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First batch of the princesses~ Jedidah, Ryn, Kendie, Mira, Valkyrie, Ai (me), Junette, Althena, Shinsen, Shea, and Miyu


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Chapter 1: The Hundred Princesses

It was a rainy afternoon; a girl was in her room reading about Greek Mythology.

“I’m bored!!!! There’s nothing to do.” Said a girl with black straight hair and blue eyes and was wearing a white dress with lace on the end the dress and at the long sleeves and was wearing knee- high boots who was sitting in a desk.

Knock! Knock!

“Princess Ai, your rose tea is here.” Said a maid

“Come in.” Said Ai

In another part of the castle,

“Lalalala” A little girl with pink hair in a ponytail was wearing a cute outfit that’s color pastel pink dress which has long sleeves and raffles on the end of the dress and on the center of the blouse and was wearing knee- high socks with raffles on it and was wearing black shoes. Was drawing on the floor of her bedroom.

“Princess Mira, you shouldn’t be lying on the floor! You’ll get yourself dirty!!!” Said a maid

“Humph!!! I want to sit on the floor!!!” Said Mira who was pouting

“Well okay if you say so your highness...” Said the maid

In the archery room,

Swish! An arrow was shot and hit the bull’s-eye.

“Nice aim princess Kendie!!!” Said the butler

“Thanks!!” Said Kendie who had blonde flowing hair and black eyes while wearing a white blouse and white pants

In the green house,

“How lovely these roses are.” Said a girl that looks like Ai but with red eyes and also was wearing a white dress with a little blue on it and was crouching down in front of the rose plant

“Princess Ryn, it’s time to eat dinner.” Said the butler

“Okay if you say so, Freud.” Said Ryn

Ryn and Freud went inside the dinning hall. The first one to be there was Ai.

“Hi Ryn, so how’s the roses?” Asked Ai

“They’re alright. They bloomed lovelier than before.” Answered Ryn who sat beside Ai

The dorm slammed open revealing an irritated Jedidah and a satisfied Valkyrie

“What happened to you Jedi nee- chan?” Asked Mira who just arrived before Jedidah and Valkyrie and was sitting in front of Kendie.

“Valkyrie kept on touching my stuff even though I told her not to.” Said very angry Jedidah

Valkyrie started to giggle, “You should have seen her face!!! It was very funny!”

“Hey aren’t we missing anyone?” Asked Kendie

“Oh yeah now I remember, father, mother, Junette, Althena, Miyu, Shinsen, Shea went to visit the Snow Queen of Dakiria.” Said Valkyrie

“Heh, your also forgetful Valkyrie!!!” Said Jedidah

“What was that?!” Said Valkyrie

“Excuse me your highness but you have a visitor in the lounge.” Said Freud

“Oh.... Well let’s check who it is!!!!” Said Mira who was running to the lounge and the others ran after.

Once the princesses arrived in the lounge they were surprised to see who it is.

To be continued in part 2..........

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Posted 5/16/08
OMG I LOVE IT XD !!!!! thanks for including me in this chapter XD and one more thing....
I CANT WAIT TO CHAPTER 2 XD
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Posted 5/16/08
nice! I wonder who the guy is at the end
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Nice story big sis I like it so much and i appreciate that you made me here childish ^_____^
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haha i love lovelycrystal's pictures editing and stuff its really nice XD
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michellewjy wrote:

haha i love lovelycrystal's pictures editing and stuff its really nice XD


LovelyCrystal is my big sis and btw she says ur welcome
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HyperBlossoms wrote:


michellewjy wrote:

haha i love lovelycrystal's pictures editing and stuff its really nice XD


LovelyCrystal is my big sis and btw she says ur welcome


haha okay then .. gtg buhbyeee
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Posted 5/16/08
Dakiria....Dakiria....Snow Queen...Snow Queen....Ah!! the group Kingdom of Snow!! your planning to merge with them ai??? lol!!! nice,very nice idea indeed
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Posted 5/16/08
Nice chapter ^_^
you did a good job krozen^_^
cant wait for the next one^_^
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Posted 5/16/08 , edited 5/16/08
kendie? im jus wondering.? hehe.is dat me.? kendie or kenzie? well. nice chapter u got.!!
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Posted 5/16/08
Thats was alwesome! Thanks for having me in the chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Posted 5/16/08
I CANT WAIT EITHER! X D.............(i bet i come in like chapter 20 or something X O) anyway that was really great X D
Posted 5/16/08
waaah!!!!!!! whos the guest !! whos the guest!!!!!!! post it already!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 5/17/08
it was good but i think the chapters should be a bit longer
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Posted 5/18/08
^_^ nice is the snow queen good or bad??

if she's bad maybe she can take me hostage or something when the story progress then the hundred princesses will try to save me ^_^ you can make the story come back and forth between the castle and dakiria so we can imagine what'll happen to the scenes and the visitor can be one of the fallen prince who brain washed the queen or something like that


but if the queen's nice then maybe one of the fallen princes will attack us and then the princesses will come and save us through the visitor who came ^_^ just suggestions ^_^ though~
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