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Hope you liked it..I made that for you~

LOL I just put it didn't read your article.Even I read moment ago still I can't get it.Be straight what do you mean? Really what it was about? My ENGLISH not good you know? Is it a poem, article or what?



I just spoke my mind

Ok but I don't know what do u meant by I just spoke my mind. Did you meant you wrote is what your mind said.Ok then.

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My version of what Cain does once he discovers Riff has lied to him, but instead of Cain seeking vengeance, Mary seeks it for him.


Following the discovery of Riffs unfaithful business deals with the DELILAH group, Cain suffers a nervous breakdown.

CAIN: (thoughts as he lies curled up on his bed) I can not live. I can not sleep. I will not eat. And I will suffer.

Mary enters, she is carrying a tray of food and tea. She looks nervous, but she carries herself with dignity. She is trying to be a grown up in the situation because Cain is no longer sane enough to carry out the duty by himself.


MARY: Cain?

She sits the tray on his bed side and tries to feed him. This becomes messy and useless.

MARY: Come on, you got to eat!

Frustrated she slams down the food and huffs. Forcing herself not to cry. Cain flinches on the bed, moving only one of his eyes. The sheets are soiled and he looks horrible, as if years have aged him and his hair is wild, his clothes on backwards. He is still in thought, his eyes wide with bewilderment.

CAIN: I never learned the basic of things.

FLASHBACKS of Cain putting on his clothes backwards. Not knowing how to tie his own shoes, and ruining his breakfast or breaking dishes. In each flashback Mary is there, even though she is just a child, and she is the one helping him learn how to "live" like a normal person.


CAIN: I thought I had learned, but I did not, that this world is cold and lonely. And just how privileged and lucky I was to have found Riff.

Flashback of Cain as a child with Riff playing with him.

CAIN: But I do now.

Image of Cain. Standing in a black room in his lopsided dressing gown, looking scared and sickly.

CAIN: Now I know,

Image of Cains family life, including villains such as Jizabel and Alexis, people slowly disappearing. Fading out of his mind as if they were never there.

CAIN: What it is,

Cain sitting in a ball in the middle of the black abyss.

CAIN: To be alone

Mary sits on Cain's bed. She lightly washes his head with a towel then caresses it with her fingers. Tears form in her eyes and roll down onto Cain's depraved face.

MARY: You promised to care for me Cain,

She stops touching his face, the tears trickle off of her cheeks. The ones that have landed on his face have formed pools and began to drip like tears.

MARY: Yet I am here to cry tears, that are supposed to be yours, for myself.

She sniffles, and looks away from him. Hurt, disgust is on her face. She wipes her tears on the towel, then stands, giving Cain one last look she whispers as she kisses his cheek.

MARY: I was here for you, Cain. But were you ever here for me?

The tears have stopped as she straightens up his room a little and leaves. Cain lies on his side with his eyes wide. Lying there a tear drips from his eye and roll lifeless onto his pillow.

SCENE 2- MARY'S VENGEANCE

Preview-

Mary standing in the study, facing a large open window that overlooks the manor. Darkness is her eyes, and shadows are cast on her face. She clutches a picture in her hand of Riff the ex-butler.

MARY: Your fortune is soon to come.

AT that she tosses the picture into the night, as it fades a light smile crinkles on her face. In the distance on another tower a silhouette of a woman in a cloak is standing at attention. Her face is slightly covered only showing her eyes and head, her hair shows tussling in the wind. The moon right behind her. She sticks a hand out and from thin air pulls a tarot card, THE MOON. And something else, RIFF's photo attached to it. She drops her mask.

MOON poses with the card briefly to her face, and a devious smirk

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i took this off my fanfic account, work in progress- go

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Posted 6/19/09 , edited 6/19/09
I dnt think my poetry is as good as any of yours bt here it is

REBORN

In my heart I will die
in hope to be reborn
So I can finally spread my wings
and soar
Soar, leaving friends and family behind
Every tear I've shed for them will be gone
Every painful moment will be forgotten
And I will finally be departing this place called
MISERY



GATES OF DESPAIR


As I walk though the gates of despair
I will hold my head up high
So that the tears from my eyes won't dizzle down my neck
I'll look back on all the bad I've done
And all the good I've missed out on
I will not look to my left Nor my right
For those souls weep and beg for mercy
I will stay strong and expect my fate
In hope that god will soon give me a better path to follow
At times my heart will be weak as it is now
But I will find strength in the faith that there will be a better tomorrow




I HOPE U LIKED IT XD!!! PLZ COMMENT




i HOPE YOU U GUYS LIIKED IT!! XD plz i'm comment =]
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Poems i made up right now xD


When everything was wrong
you were there
When all I could see was dark
you were light
When nothing could be worse
you were perfact
But when I needed you the most
where were you then?

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When you don't know love you don't need it
When you know love, it's like a drug
If they kept it secret we would never exsist
But when they tell us they give us pain
Either way we'll always find out sometime
and we'll always regret that we found it

Huh, kinda emarrasing... hope you didn't hate them :'d
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Im currently writing my first ever fanfiction! It includes DBSK and Ayumi Lee~! ^o^
It's going very well so far! I'm getting a good response from my readers and often keep getting more! ^^
If you don't mind, you could try reading too? ^^"

If you do! I'LL BE VEEEEEEEERYRRRRRRRYYYYY HAPPY! ^_______^

Here's the link!

www.winglin.net/fanfic/Bani
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i usually prefer 2 write small poems. and i write stories, but i dont wanna post em. >.< here r 3 of em.

Aren’t you glad we met before?
Before you entered the heaven door?
Being in agony is a stage,
To test your patience, love, and rage.

That chain that keeps us together,
Has been lost, but not forever.
It melted down by hate,
Is it meant to stay as fate?

The darkness in my heart has been found.
The lightness in my heart has been lost.
The darkness that has been swallowing me,
Is trying to keep me from being free.

r they good enough?
Posted 7/22/09
You step out of the shower and grab a towel. You bring it up to your face and wipe across. And it tears. Little shards pull across your skin, embedding in your nose, flowing from the blood on your forehead into your eyes. As you try to wipe your eyes out, the glass just gets pushed into your retina. You drop your towel and run to your ... Read Morebed. You pick up the sheets, just to have something to get the blood out of your eyes, and...it sticks. Rather, it's caught. In your palms, your fingers, your flesh. Many fishhooks have been cleverly hidden between the sheets, and they quickly thrust into your hands at the slightest touch. Of course, you can't untangle yourself - both of your hands are caught. Suddenly, you hear a light laugh coming from the doorway. You can't see clearly, but it appears to be a lady in a frilly outfit.

"So, Louise...."

It's Siesta.

"So, Louise," she begins, "you may have heard, but I'm going on a date with Saito-san today."

You would cry for help, but you notice that she's walking towards you. Slowly.

"I figured that you'd want to know. I know you two are...close." Siesta smiles. Broadly. Her eyes aren't smiling.

Suddenly, she's behind you. With...something. A pair of panties.

"Oh, you don't need to worry about the blood on those sheets. I'll wash it off. Just like I did with the blood on these panties."

Your eyes widen. THOSE panties. From two nights ago. You begin to understand what's going on.... Read More

"HEEEEELP!!!" you cry.

Only, you don't. A pair of panties are roughly shoved down your throat. They smell. Bad. Kind of like gasoline. Or bleach. Or both. Doesn't matter. You try to struggle anyways. Then you remember the fishhooks.

"Oh, that's no good, Louise!" Siesta whispers. "A lady's hands are her pride. In fact only her hair is more important."

As if from an afterthought, Siesta grabs a lock of hair and pulls it. About half of it comes out. And then Siesta pulls up to your ear. Quietly, sweetly, she says,

"Only her hair, and...."

She grabs your crotch. It's still sore. That's nothing compared to the pain which comes next. Glass? Pottery? Knife? Who knows? Something hurts. Everything hurts.

"...her hair, and...."

The noxious fumes from the panties are making you heady, as if the blood loss wasn't enough. Dizzy, you start to sway, only to be shocked away by the force of the panties being pushed all the way back into your throat. You can see Siesta as she smiles over you, her eyes closed. You can hear her low sing-song voice, even through your failed attempts at choking.

"...and her virginity."

Then you drop.
It was only now that you realize that Siesta had been holding you up. As you fall, you see that Siesta has no underwear on. Instead, she holds a different pair of panties over your face. As you fade to unconsciousness, your death knolls take the tone of a dear friend sweetly admonishing you.

"Of course, some women don't bleed."

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Well...i hope you like it =] Its been on my Fanfiction account for a while and alot of people like it..so... Construtive Critism are welcomed =]
DeathNote Humor
Health Class Rated T may contain language.

“…and to ensure that the human species doesn’t become extinct, we reproduce by using the means of sexual intercourse, understand?” Ryuzaki drawled, staring at the class of year 7 girls that are now not-so-very-innocent.

Light sighed, feeling pity towards the girls as they give each other very awkward looks. Honestly. How did they get stuck with this job, and shouldn’t a FEMALE teacher should be here? This school sure has issues…”And now,” Ryuzaki’s voice sliced through his thoughts, “Light-sensei here will show us what a male reproductive organ, a pe…”

“Sorry I’m late, I was getting my coffee,” blabbered Ms Jones, throwing the door open, when she noticed Ryuzaki and Light attempting to teach a health class. Looking sternly at the two young men, she ordered “Get out you two, the boys are next door.” Holding the door wide open with an air of authority, as the two ‘young’ men walked out meekly.

-10 minutes later-

“…and to ensure that the human species doesn’t become extinct, we reproduce by using the means of sexual intercourse, understand?” Ryuzaki once again drawled, looking at the now familiar looks of shock from the faces of the also now-not-so-very-innocent- year 7 boys.

“Now Light-sensei here will show you what a female reproductive organ looks like, as I’m sure you all know hat a male one looks like.” And he paused, gesturing at Light, ignoring the now very red in the face year 7s. Light gave him three slow blinks in his own defence, with a look of incredulous on his face.

In an extremely fake sincere voice, Ryuzaki apologised “Ahh…sorry I forgot that, Light-sensei isn’t a female,” Earning a few laughs around the room, “in this case,” he said placing a DVD disc in the machine, “I’ll show you a video of sexual intercourse, which all of your parents have agreed to let you watch.” Sitting back on the armchair he and Light watched the beginnings of the video with the class. The boys tried hard to not become engrossed in the video, unfortunately they all failed as they watched in a horrified fascination, growing quite stiff and…aroused.

In the same moment, the two sensei concluded in one thing; there was a 60% chance that at least SOME of the members of this class, may, no WILL, become perverts in the future.

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This is a story I wrote my self, and one of my friend started to helped me, correcting my errors and help me making original sentences

you can read the story there:

www.crunchyroll.com/user/vinette/pages/Sreizer

I edit it Each time I add a good part to it on word

There will almost always be another part added to it each day... almost each day... I accept any comment that would help me get an idea about my story.
Posted 8/16/09
This is a poem I wrote a while back. I was kind of influenced by flower power (I listen to a lot of '60s music as well as '70s music) and really got inspired. I hope it shows. Lol in the end it's just about being high. I've never been, but you don't need to be to write something about it. ♥
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The Flower Stirrin' in Me

I smell the incense burnin'
And my body's turnin', turnin'
Oh I got the flower stirrin' in me

Hear the drum beats goin'
And the music's really flowin'
Oh I got the flower stirrin' in me

The trees are turning translucent
Can't remember where you went
Oh I got the flower stirrin' in me

I smell the incense burnin'
And my body's turnin' turnin'
Oh I got the flower stirrin' in me

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Spam may be fun, but its more fun if the other person realizes that they are being intimidated, instead of thinking "What the h*ll is this f*ck'n B*llsh*t?" or something like that.
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Dionysis to Diane

Lilacs pale
purple flower
(sits on path)
leaves green
in morning sun
(splendid on most days)
to befit your head as crown
(fallen from the tree)
when all is said
and done
(hiding all sweetness)


Harvest Song

dance in te clover
(sing in the rye)
wild in the wheat
(cut with the scythe)
turn to step a thousand times
in a single heart beat
(forgotten)
plant the seeds of many things
( to wither )
joy is what this harvest brings
( and die)

The Shoplifter

the meaning of randomness
(neatly pakaged)
chaos and disorder
puzzle peices not in place
(ready to buy)
landscape without border

ink blotter
well rent and coming dry
(on sale 2 for 1)
all these things I understand
( stolen)
and undertake to try
Posted 8/27/09 , edited 8/27/09
Lonely we stood there like Yin and Yang. We stood there in harmony while the birds sang. Their song was beautiful, It was unreal. But the meaning was different. That, we could both feel.
The song was about friendship and how it would break.
Destruction of harmony just for loves sake.
And there she was right next to my friend.
She held his arm and to me an ice cold look she sent.
They turned around and walked away.
And I was the only one who wanted to stay.
I stood there like Yin, Without any Yang. I stood there with no sense of harmony and no bird sang.

// Made by me about a year ago, or something like that..

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TheHeartlessCookie wrote:

Lonely we stood there like Yin and Yang. We stood there in harmony while the birds sang. Their song was beautiful, It was unreal. But the meaning was different. That, we could both feel.
The song was about friendship and how it would break.
Destruction of harmony just for loves sake.
And there she was right next to my friend.
She held his arm and to me an ice cold look she sent.
They turned around and walked away.
And I was the only one who wanted to stay.
I stood there like Yin, Without any Yang. I stood there with no sense of harmony and no bird sang.

// Made by me about a year ago, or something like that..

KARAKURA BLUE!


T_T Omg... awesum, fantastic really..
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