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Yamaki's love story
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Write a story which shows the love between Yamapi and Maki or Yamaki that is what we call them. Any story but make it as love story. A very sweet love story that you might wanna tell us.
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It's called MY LOVE, MY FRIEND.


Maki is a new girl came to a very different country. She wasn't really comfortable staying in this country but Yamapi help her to love it. Then, because of the help that she get from Yamapi she started to like the country and make lots of friends. She found a new bestfriend called Aika. They're in the same college. Aika told Maki that she loved Yamapi but Maki also find out that she loved Yamapi, but as her best friend Maki doesn't want to hurt Aika so she let her go on and tired to stop liking Yamapi. To make sure of it he stopped talking to Yamapi.
While Yamapi is actually like Maki but he was really shy to tell her the truth so he send her love letters everyday secretly. He sedn thoe letters since Maki went to college. She wasn't sure who's the sender but she think that the person is near her. Yamapi is actually sad because Maki had stopped talk to him. He thought that Maki hate him, so he gave up to send her those letters.
While Maki with her secret admirer Aika tried to impress Yamapi by help him with his job as a baseball coach. Actually, Aika doens't help him at all. Yamapi found out that she's annoying. He tried to run away from her but always got caught by Aika. Aika had no idea about what is happening. It's all because of her Maki and Yamapi couldn't be together.

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I think it's better call it as LOVE LETTERS.
This story I created it by myself. I didn't copy it anywhere. It's just a fan fiction.
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Posted 5/21/08
very cute story!! nice job!!! i will come up with one too!! i promise!! once i have time >"<
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Posted 5/21/08
,i like ur story.. nce job...
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Posted 5/25/08
i can give a couple of places to read some yamaki fanfic ^^.
if you haven't already, you should check out the probably largest yamaki forum.
http://z14.invisionfree.com/yamaki/index.php?act=SC&c=8

its every yamaki fan's dream...xD
im still living it.
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Posted 5/25/08
hahaha..nice stOry..=)
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Hey I got a story too
Here is the site:
www.winglin.net/fanfic/la_la

Gomen, I can't put it up in here cause it's too long..But enjoy reading it!
Anyways I love the story in here too..
It's very good!
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Posted 7/17/08
read hanachan14 story... waw! its awesome... it is in her multiply.. but gommen ne~ i forgot the site haha...
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Okay, I got one. Pi and Yuu are married (yes married) but while shooting a drama w/ maki, he becomes more and more attracted to her. they have an affair and yuu finds out. pi divorces yuu which causes to go to maki's house and stabs her. pi arrives seconds later and finds yuu with a knife in her hand. he rushes to maki's side and brings her to the hospital. after hours of waiting, the doctor finally comes out and tells pi that he's sorry that he couldn't save both of them. Maki not only lost her life but also her baby that she didn't know about. =( Angry and sad at the same time, Pi rushes out the door and looks for yuu. He finally finds her in a bar flirting with a group of men drinking and angrily drags her outside. Yuu just looks at pi and laughs. At this moment, pi is trying his best to not hit the stupid old bitch so he curses at her and punches the wall instead, missing yuu's head by a few centimeters. He looks at yuu and shakes her asking why did she do that and all yuu does is tell him to let go of her or she'll scream for help. Pi doesn't listen to her and continues to shake her, so she screamed for help and some gangster dudes came and beat the crap out of Pi (sorry i have a wild imagination) and he dies by accident. Then the gangsters rape Yuu and the end.

This is more like a "tragic love story based on jolie-pitt/too many soap operas" :D
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Posted 7/23/08
^Tragic is too MILD a word to describe your story!!
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Posted 8/22/08
I am going to write a fanfic for them and post it here. Just wait!
Posted 8/23/08
the story is long..
but the ending is unique,...
i will not tell the story of the first, only the ending..

pi and maki happily live together(after all the problem they have faces..), got married and have their very first kid...
pi is very excited bout their very first baby, so he makes sure maki is eating well,one day maki feels somthing..
i think its the time to got to the hospial..Thenwhile pi is seriously waiting about the results the doctor went out and said,
ur wife and the chhild is in danger its either the child or the mother live..or worst both of them will die,
unfortunately maki and their child died,pi cried and cried overnight,
he cant accept that his wife and child died both, after two weeks he visited the maki and his son's grave,
he is still crying, cant accept the truth, becos of that he run while crying,dont know where he is going just running anywhere
his feet gonna bring him.,until he got tired..he pause for a while and tak a deep breath, while catching his breath, he saw maki
holding a child on the other side of the street, he is surprise,becos of mixed emotion, happy and surprise,
he didnt thing he ran to the other side of the street, the suddenly a car bump into him, he roole over but he
continue to run and hug his wife and his child,he noticed that maki is looking at his back,he was surprise,
he saw his body lying, on the ground, hit by the car,he cant believe that he is also dead,
suddenly his friend toma ridding in motorcycle notice that traffic is not moving, he see it himself ,
to know whats the problem, when he look he saw pi, there vere shoked that pi was hit by acar, he immediately
call others to inform what happen, while dialing he saw pi and maki together with the child walking in the side street,
he was surprise becos pi is lying in ront of him,,Who was that?
after incident he told to pis parents not to worry cause he knew maki and pi are living hapily in heaven
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Posted 8/23/08 , edited 8/23/08

daichi369 wrote:

very cute story!! nice job!!! i will come up with one too!! i promise!! once i have time >"<


thank you, and I think I shoudl give a proper ending to the story.

And one day, at last Maki had graduated and she has to go back to her own village, but she still can't forget about Yamapi which she love the most. She doesn't even know what Yamapi feel about her and she kept make a distance between them which makes Yamapi think that Maki hate him. That day, Yamapi decided to confess to her but he didn't know that Maki is living. He really wants to know what does Maki think about him. Yamapi went to her apartment but Maki had already left and she already went to the train station. Yamapi asked Aika about it and then she told him that she's living, Yamapi quickly ran to the train station to catch her. Aika just watch him leaving and that time she realised that Yamapi loves Maki and she started to cry. All this time she didn't even realise it.

At the train station Maki is waiting for the train to come. Yamapi ran as fast as he could try to catch her before she live. The train already arrived and Maki almost step into it but Yamapi screamed ' Maaakii!'. Maki suprised and then turned around and saw him. She was really suprised to see Yamapi is here.

'Don't leave,' said Yamapi. 'Why?' asked Maki.
'I...I...I LOVE YOU!' he screamed. 'Eh?'said Maki. 'and, and I'm your secret admirer all this time. I sent letters to you because I'm just to shy to tell you the truth but now I'm brave enough to confess .And I also want to know about you. What is your feeling to me?' he continued. She was suprised once again. Maki's heart beating fastly, she opened her mouth slowly 'I, I love you to.' she tried to make sure that she's not looking directly to him. Maki didn't even realise that Yamapi is walking to her and then suddenly all she knows that her lips is touching his. She closed her eyes to deeply move into her dreams that comes true.
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Yui4evaH wrote:

the story is long..
but the ending is unique,...
i will not tell the story of the first, only the ending..

pi and maki happily live together(after all the problem they have faces..), got married and have their very first kid...
pi is very excited bout their very first baby, so he makes sure maki is eating well,one day maki feels somthing..
i think its the time to got to the hospial..Thenwhile pi is seriously waiting about the results the doctor went out and said,
ur wife and the chhild is in danger its either the child or the mother live..or worst both of them will die,
unfortunately maki and their child died,pi cried and cried overnight,
he cant accept that his wife and child died both, after two weeks he visited the maki and his son's grave,
he is still crying, cant accept the truth, becos of that he run while crying,dont know where he is going just running anywhere
his feet gonna bring him.,until he got tired..he pause for a while and tak a deep breath, while catching his breath, he saw maki
holding a child on the other side of the street, he is surprise,becos of mixed emotion, happy and surprise,
he didnt thing he ran to the other side of the street, the suddenly a car bump into him, he roole over but he
continue to run and hug his wife and his child,he noticed that maki is looking at his back,he was surprise,
he saw his body lying, on the ground, hit by the car,he cant believe that he is also dead,
suddenly his friend toma ridding in motorcycle notice that traffic is not moving, he see it himself ,
to know whats the problem, when he look he saw pi, there vere shoked that pi was hit by acar, he immediately
call others to inform what happen, while dialing he saw pi and maki together with the child walking in the side street,
he was surprise becos pi is lying in ront of him,,Who was that?
after incident he told to pis parents not to worry cause he knew maki and pi are living hapily in heaven


it's short but a very good story. lovely story. love it. great job.
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