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"The CleaMatra" by Halo_Capella |
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The CleaMatra
The truant of gold who never realized she had that much charm and intimidation. Cleabell Immatra will be forced to be under the tug-of-war through popularity and fandom. Many leaders and rivals will spark up her school days. =========================== Genre: Slice of Life, Action, Drama, Shounen, Comedy Upcoming characters (and profiles under each picture...): ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** ![]() ![]() Cleabell Immatra "The CleaMatra" Age: 14 (first year) Birthday: November 22 Physical colors: Golden blond hair, blue eyes with pink skin. Favorite subject: Lunchtime Known Opportunities: Peak of Praise, the boost of cheers from her fellow crowds. ![]() ![]() Gaianna Chiendent Age: 14 (first year) Birthday: May 30 Physical colors: A green-eyed redhead with orangey skin. Favorite subject: English Known Opportunities: Kennel Break, unleash the dogs from all pounds and establish her own banquet when all the canines roam the city. ![]() ![]() Ryandol Anastasius Age: 15 (second year) Birthday: August 8 Physical colors: black haired, light brown eyed with pale skin. Favorite subject: Science, Math and History. Known Opportunities: Tau Eta Qoppa, his favorite school fraternity gathers information against those who suspects them. ![]() ![]() Sylverine Immatra (Clea's sister) sometimes "The SylvnMatra" Age: 12 Birthday: February 7 Physical colors: Light blond hair, blue eyes with pink skin. Favorite subject: Recess Known Opportunities: Great Silver Caper, causes a prank so big that it turns into a mystery. ![]() ![]() Minnie Politan (Clea's Cousin) sometimes "The MiniPolitan" Age: 17 Birthday: March 23 Physical colors: Golden blond hair, blue eyes with pink skin. Favorite subject: Gym Known Opportunities: Acro Mania, reaches up to the max momentum of her athletic ability. ![]() ![]() Ms. Lois Whitesmith Age: 22 Birthday: September 10 Physical colors: Cotton-white Hair, light brown eyes with dark skin. Favorite subject: Art Known Opportunities: Motif Royale, great passion to make the place really looks nice. ![]() ![]() Mrs. Allyssia MacMasons (Principal) Age: 35 Birthday: December 2 Physical colors: Brown Hair, brown eyes with pink skin. Favorite subject: Math (Engineering) Known Opportunities: Fire Drill, sneaks in some materials during this common routine. ![]() ![]() ![]() Clea's parents, Eliza is a teacher in another school and Julius is an accountant. =============================================== Chapter 1: The CleaMatra (50 pages, draft with text) LINK CHANGED! ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** Cleabell Immatra, a delinquent who came back to school for a long while. Her regrets were grown from an attack of a dog who destroyed her jacket so she had to sneak up in the attic at home and found a new coat and baton there. She decided to bring it to school and found some unexpected results. All pages are now uploaded into DeviantArt.com, where also the next chapters will be posted: http://halocapella.deviantart.com/gallery/#The-CleaMatra ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 1.5: Fun Preview (3 pages, inked and ready!) NEW! ** Spoiler Alert!!! click to hide or show** A mini-story I made in about four hours in one day. :3 ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Yyuusei
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wow, really nicely done, i like it! It is just a little hard to read at parts, sorry
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I am on a lot now more often now, woohoo!
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I didn't experience it as hard to read anywhere. The story flowed nicely, or at least, it would have, if I hadn't read it right to left for quite a while, wondering what was going on.
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GETITOFFMEEEE!!!
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Yyuusei
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yeah i did that too at 1st, i just couldnt read the writing in some places,
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I am on a lot now more often now, woohoo!
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yea, i know. sry i should've fixed the writing. X3
edit: oh ya, and it's left to right. |
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Yyuusei
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lol, it is alright, and you draw very well,
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I am on a lot now more often now, woohoo!
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8 more pages was added to the chapter. still more to come and enjoy. X3
(pages 13-20) |
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Oh, it's read left to right. Okay now I can enjoy. I liked how's the story going so far, realy I am.
But until I read more, I chose to keep my mouth shout. |
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SCORPIO, the Scorpion, Eagle or Gray Lizard
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10 more pages was added to the chapter. enjoy these leafs and still more to come. ^_^
(pages 21-30) |
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it was decent but i'm not really drawn in. i'll still keep reading though.
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fated to forever tread that endless path.
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10 more pages was added to chapter one. XD
(pages 31-40) |
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wow ... this is probably the only other comic/manga on this group that is actually drawn other than mine ...
round of applause 4 u man ... we both know how much harder it is to show a story than it is to tell it. Outstanding use of camera angles and variety of panel shapes and sizes. Very diverse facial expresion and u got a good understaning of how to envoke the sence of movement ... AND very good character consistency! I envy ur skill |
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Havek_Reekel wrote: wow ... this is probably the only other comic/manga on this group that is actually drawn other than mine ... round of applause 4 u man ... we both know how much harder it is to show a story than it is to tell it. Outstanding use of camera angles and variety of panel shapes and sizes. Very diverse facial expresion and u got a good understaning of how to envoke the sence of movement ... AND very good character consistency! I envy ur skill Yeah, I have to agree, I love your drawings. They r awesome as well as the story. sry if I have not been able to leave a comment, but I have been extreamly busy with work, school and the publishing of my own manga, which is more time consuming than I thought. I love your manga! Great work! |
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next step wedding!
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I like that charachters have uniqe personality.
. Can't wait for chapter one to be finished. |
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SCORPIO, the Scorpion, Eagle or Gray Lizard
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I guess that is the reason why its so easy to understand and the characters personalities go so well with the story that it makes it even better.
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next step wedding!
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