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Posted 5/17/08 , edited 3/9/10
The CleaMatra

The truant of gold who never realized she had that much charm and intimidation. Cleabell Immatra will be forced to be under the tug-of-war through popularity and fandom. Many leaders and rivals will spark up her school days.

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Genre: Slice of Life, Action, Drama, Shounen, Comedy

Upcoming characters (and profiles under each picture...):

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Chapter 1: The CleaMatra (50 pages, draft with text) LINK CHANGED!



Chapter 1.5: Fun Preview (3 pages, inked and ready!) NEW!

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Posted 5/17/08
wow, really nicely done, i like it! It is just a little hard to read at parts, sorry
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I didn't experience it as hard to read anywhere. The story flowed nicely, or at least, it would have, if I hadn't read it right to left for quite a while, wondering what was going on.
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Posted 5/17/08
yeah i did that too at 1st, i just couldnt read the writing in some places,
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Posted 5/17/08 , edited 5/17/08
yea, i know. sry i should've fixed the writing. X3

edit: oh ya, and it's left to right.
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lol, it is alright, and you draw very well,
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Posted 5/18/08
8 more pages was added to the chapter. still more to come and enjoy. X3

(pages 13-20)
Posted 5/23/08 , edited 5/24/08
Oh, it's read left to right. Okay now I can enjoy. I liked how's the story going so far, realy I am. But until I read more, I chose to keep my mouth shout.
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Posted 5/26/08
10 more pages was added to the chapter. enjoy these leafs and still more to come. ^_^

(pages 21-30)
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Posted 5/27/08
it was decent but i'm not really drawn in. i'll still keep reading though.
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Posted 6/17/08
10 more pages was added to chapter one. XD

(pages 31-40)
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Posted 6/18/08
wow ... this is probably the only other comic/manga on this group that is actually drawn other than mine ...
round of applause 4 u man ... we both know how much harder it is to show a story than it is to tell it.

Outstanding use of camera angles and variety of panel shapes and sizes.
Very diverse facial expresion
and u got a good understaning of how to envoke the sence of movement ...
AND very good character consistency!

I envy ur skill
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Posted 6/18/08

Havek_Reekel wrote:

wow ... this is probably the only other comic/manga on this group that is actually drawn other than mine ...
round of applause 4 u man ... we both know how much harder it is to show a story than it is to tell it.

Outstanding use of camera angles and variety of panel shapes and sizes.
Very diverse facial expresion
and u got a good understaning of how to envoke the sence of movement ...
AND very good character consistency!

I envy ur skill


Yeah, I have to agree, I love your drawings. They r awesome as well as the story.
sry if I have not been able to leave a comment, but I have been extreamly busy with work, school and the publishing of my own manga, which is more time consuming than I thought.
I love your manga! Great work!
Posted 6/18/08
I like that charachters have uniqe personality. . Can't wait for chapter one to be finished.
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I guess that is the reason why its so easy to understand and the characters personalities go so well with the story that it makes it even better.
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