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Posted 5/17/08 , edited 5/17/08
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~The Girl Who Couldn't~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


there lived a 13 year old girl. throughout her life she has witnessed so much, been through so much pain. On many accounts this girl has even hurt herself because of these things and ended up dying an unfortunate death. It all started on October 17, 1998 when she was 7 years old. It was about a week till her birthday would come and so her party preparations began. Everything was fine and her family was very, very close. This little girl was happy with her life and thought nothing would ever happen. Yet, her parents had a horrible fight, they were throwing knives and shoes, and things they could grab at each other. One of the items came towards the girl and hit her dead in the face. Her brother got involve in the parents fight, he was 16, and began fighting with his step-dad. The father became enraged, and bunched the little girls brother in the face and broke his nose. the police came and this was the true beginning when the family grew apart. After that more and more problem arose. The boy grew mad and joined the Cripps gang. Soon her father began to tell the mother her family was no longer allowed to see her. The father in a way was abusive to the mother. So during the 8 year old girls year in 1st grade the mother left the father to go to Virginia because her niece had found a new house. The niece ended up scamming the mother, she left all the bills and rent to the mother alone. The mother went through weeks of crying and the daughter developed a weight problem because she ate her stress away. Yet, a light shone at the end on the hall way. the father and mother and family came back together and the boy quit the gang. All way happy except for the little girl because she was teased of her weight. She lived in her own shell where she stayed quiet and only let certain people in her shell. Her friends betrayed her though and made fun of her and so that girl became very violent by 3rd grade. Though she had real friends she always felt she was alone. She was manipulated and all the boys she liked turned out to be horrible people too. The little girl by then had been though so much because during the summer before 4th grade her parents separated again and her mother was arrested for digging her nails in the fathers back, yet the charges were paid the same day. The mother then began to have a men parade. Every minute she would have a new man a scam them out of money, yet the little girl still loved her mother. Even though the little girl could not sleep in her own bed because it was filled with sex juices made by her mother and the men she actually "loved" she still loved her mother. Even if the girl couldn't stay at home because her mother developed a drug and drinking problem the girl still loved he mother. It even got to the point were the mother left the girl alone at home alone at all hours, the girl still loved her mother. Eventually the mother lost her apartment she had gained and moved back in with the father. The arguing didn't stop, so the mother moved in, with the little girl's parent Susanne and her husband and son. The little girl still cried and found it hard to trust people. The only one the little girl could really depend on was her brother but he moved to Virginia but called her all the time. At school things were okay for the girl, she found good friends and finally found four girls she could really trust. They hung out together all the time and never let go of their hope for the better. After the school year ended in forth grade the little girl was now 10, and had been through so much. one of her close friends had moved away, she would still not be lonely, but 3 days after school ended she got ran over my a ford explorer but still lived and walked and spoke fine, she just couldn’t play like she used to. She was ok during fifth grade and she made the year out very happy like. That summer though hadn't been that fortunate. Her father kicked the mother out of the house while she stayed there because friend had moved. The father was also moving away from the apartment. and the mother was left alone to sleep in and empty apartment to lay on a pile of her own clothes. while the father and daughter slept in a warm apartment. The mother came to the apartment and begged to stay there but the father said no and she began to cry. She begged and begged and she had no place to go and she cried. She went into the kitchen and grabbed a butcher knife and tried to stab herself, and little girl grabbed the knife before it went to her chest and cried with her mother, the little girl yelled at her father begging him to let her stay till she got back on her feet but he said no. so the father ignored her and walked to the old apartment to got the rest of the things he left there. The mother and daughter followed. The mother still begged to stay at the house but the father said no. so the mother began to hurt herself. the mother took the fathers blood pressure pills that was full and shoved the whole thing down the her throat. the little girl ran up to her mother and tried to get the pilled out of her. the mother shove the door in the girl face and locked it. The mother flushed the toilet and the little girl scream in horror the girl scream for her father to give her his phone but he said,” GO AHEAD LET HER DIE!" the little girl screamed in agony and watched her mother rock back and forth on a chair in front of the window. The police and ambulance came and took the mother away, the police questioned the little girl because the father kept saying,” She is a B***H, SHE SHOULD JUST DIE I DON'T CARE!" Later that day the girl cried hard and she continued to be in pain. Her mother returned and the police said she didn't swallow the pills. she was diagnosed to be bipolar and sycophantic*no sure if spelled right* the mother and daughter that day stayed at their cousin's house. time went on and the mother moves to Virginia for 5 months and came back to visit the little girl. The little girl was scarred during 6th grade and wrote and drew scary things, but she found a new light in helping her new friends with those problems, like one of her friends who's father beat her but that girl began to make fun of the little girl and the little girl scream,” at least my father doesn't beat me" and the other girl screamed,” at least my mother didn't try to commit suicide!" those two girls fought that day. and hated each other very much deep in their hearts but still deal with each other only because he grand father and that little girl's dad were best friends. The little girls hearts was weaken by all this and she smile less though no one noticed. Now this girl is in seventh grade at 13 trying to live on though nothing happened listening to people's problems, listening to them talk about her and her family, watched her friends cut them self and hurt themselves...and they little girl declared she could not take it anymore. Time slowed down for this little girl and she took on last breath and said, "No more will have to keep this pain" and she walked in front of that passing train by the library and she died. Well hoped you like the story xD i worked hard on it and it wasn't that hard to think of it because . ..it was my life... anyways i am not going to kill myself i love to live to much , and my uh parents are living together again but pretend to not to see each other...um and my brother he is in V.A. with his kids.. he is like 24 now kk peeps bye and no my mom is not a sl*T and my dad is no longer abusive kk bye! you may have seen this story on the other anime story thingy

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Posted 5/17/08
yea not going to read that and since i didnt read it. whats the point of this thread??
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Posted 5/17/08
Just give the main point.... <_<;
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Posted 5/17/08 , edited 5/17/08

Cyclone003 wrote:



you sir! are my new friend foever

rejoice!
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Posted 5/17/08 , edited 5/17/08
Eh, I still can't believe I read everything. I have to say a few things though.

-One, you said it was your life, but at the end it said you walked in front of a train and killed yourself...omg your writing this

-Two, if your life was like that, how do you own a computer, and internet?

-Three, you would have been removed from that family and never been permitted to see them if that situation was true and those events were indeed occuring. Unless the laws where you live are really crappy, which is slim.

Not sayin it wasn't true or anything, just pointing out a few things.
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Posted 5/18/08
I have absolutely no idea why the first post is so long.
This sounds like some sort of chain letter, unless you really wrote it and it's about someone you know?

Anyways, there's not much discussion going on here...
and it has some people confused because it's just too long.

Restructure it maybe?
Or post in your profile?
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