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Posted 5/18/08 , edited 5/18/08
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Posted 5/18/08
To me my life is a charade.
Nothing you know of me is true.
But dispite all i was taught.
I did exactly what i was told not to.
I went and met good friends .
I went and met miss right.
She is the queen of my day.
She is the godess of my night.
But i have a mission to carry out.
So i have to leave all this behind.
I want to stay and care for her.
But iv already made up my mind.
Nothing can change my fate
and nothing can stop me from going.
I want to tell her so she dosent get hurt.
But the rules keep her from knowing.
Iv cried because i know the day is near.
Iv begged to change what its to late to alter.
Its the day when Leo dies and Tak is born.
Its the day when I cannot hesitate or faulter.
Now im willing to wear this mask forever.
Now im willing to live life by this lie.
Somehow iv always justified revenge.
But now iv found a reason not to try.
As long as we can just be together.
ill abandon my mission and we can run away.
So the more i get to know and love her
The more i hate the coming day .
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Posted 5/23/08
Melody of a broken heart

When people and love meet
they separate and separate to meet again
I have forgotten love and am singing this melody in memory for you
The sun is shining dazzlingly love has left me and I'm crying like this
Tears are flowing from the corners of my eyes,
but still the wind is passing by me strong and cheerfully
Why did we always joke around? Why did we always flirt even if you had no feelings for me?
Did I ever make a fool out of you?
Now when I look back I regret it so much
that we won't ever have those times together anymore
starting again, picking your feet off the ground, and singing this melody
I am tired of crying and falling down on my pillow only to fall asleep
when I wake up I don't feel like going through life
I will laugh and love again and dance and sing
someday a day like that will come again
I'm singing this melody, for me to be happy, and to be reminded of you
The day love made me cry, i believed the world ended and that my life had as well
but I sang a sad melody and surprisingly started smiling
I tried to forget it all but there were some things that reminded me of you
That's all what life's about I guess
I was sure I couldn't forget her
But she started to disappear from my mind
Until I started forgetting completely and the sun for me had rose again
What do I do with the regret of love that passed so quickly by me?
You smile and forget and leave the memory behind far, far, far away
I have forgotten love and am singing this melody for you
looking back at the times we had together
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Posted 5/26/08
A journal of a Stranger: Part 1

The fluorescent light,
a yellow lit light that shimmers a adolescent tone,
filtering the dark strip entrance,
slowly dying, slowly flying,
breaking a tender barrier,
while soliciting the brown coat ground,
giving off a lonely tone,
slowly slipping, slowly seeking,
tearing through the darkness,
while shivering from embarrassment,
since the heart had wash away,
leaving a vulnarable point,
where the souls bleeds,
and weeps from the uncertainty,
like a mans heart is his weakness point,
where,
his trigger,
his courage,
His strength,
resides to keep the soul pumping,
Through the tides of time,
a picture drifts into the middle of the fluorescent light,
showing a image of a child smiling,
postured with arms out, ready to be hug,
and ready to prowl on the camera holder
As a dark figure stands in front of the memory,
Since thats when time stopped on the him.
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