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Posted 5/19/08 , edited 5/19/08
So... just share ur ideas of a good plotline for something.....
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SORRY BUT CAN YOU READ THIS FROM BOTTOM UP I TYPED THIS INTO SOMEONE's GUESTBOOK AND I JUST COPY PASTED


ok i ran out of space... so all the people who tried to adopt him got involved in some "accident"
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and then he finally got out, and they show a little part of his life out of the organization... such as like getting money, getting food, and other survival stuff until he finally goes to school ( all the people who tried to adopt him (cont
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so him and the surviving two kids were seperated, (took him 2 weeks to get out, they were seperated a little before 1 week in because of some accident)
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ok i change my mind there weren't 3 kids.... ok wvr lets just say one of the boys that escaped w/ them died on the way....
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and then they get all genius and kill people, do other cool stuff, and they finally get out lolz this would be a BIG part of the manga
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ya... and the other two kids were hiding and shooting the "bad people".... yeah.... and then they found out that the weren't out of the organization yet....
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but one of the "bad people" cuts him in the eye, and so his dying sister told him to take her eye out, which he does, and then he sticks it into his socket lolz (kinda... got this from naruto... im trying to be original)
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and he had some power that let him make the knife into a dark hole....
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they see bodies of the other escaping children.... then they are about to get out of the place when the guards find them and kill the main character's sister... the main character goes crazy and takes the knife and kills them all with it :)
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and the siblings took this as a chance to escape with 2 other boys and another girl.... they hung one of the guards with a rope and took his 2 pistols, and his knife.... then they killed everyone they encountered w/ the gun (w/ a silencer)
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so then the siblings were sent to the organization and they were experimented on... one day one of the experiments went wrong and one of the children went on a rampage and started killing everyone and blowing things up....
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then sold him to some organization which experimented on children.... so.... oh ya i forgot he had a sister too
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yeah... so... yeah so this is his life story..... he lived a normal life until he was about 4 and a half, when his mom was killed in a car accident and his dad commited suicide.... so then someon adopted him and kept him for 2 months and
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ok... so this is the story...... theres a guy, hes like 15-16 years old, and hes an "assasin" (these days we call them hitmen) .... ok.... so he accepts jobs and only if he gets payed partially in gold
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Posted 5/19/08 , edited 5/19/08
Right...
I can read it, but really, you posted at the wrong forum.

Oh silly me, this is a duplicate of your own topic. LOL.
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Posted 5/19/08

droondood wrote:


Nakapagpabagabag wrote:

Right...
I can read it, but really, you posted at the wrong forum.

Oh silly me, this is a duplicate of your own topic. LOL.
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oh COME ON im trying to LOCK the OTHER ONE dont REPORT THIs One!!!!!


1.) You're on the wrong forum.
2.) I'm trying to be nice. *smile*
3.) Yeah, this is a duplicate of your own.
4.) I care less a bit.

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Posted 5/19/08
I'm not being mean. He just made a duplicate of his own thread. I'm just stating out the obvious <_<
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-206798/Manga-storyline-idea-.html#11140766
Posted 5/19/08
I good plot line would include suspense, mystery, lies, deceit, and some romance. o0 And someone MUST die.
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Posted 5/20/08

Nakapagpabagabag wrote:

I'm not being mean. He just made a duplicate of his own thread. I'm just stating out the obvious <_<
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-206798/Manga-storyline-idea-.html#11140766


ok... that one was locked... happy now?
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Posted 5/20/08

droondood wrote:

SORRY BUT CAN YOU READ THIS FROM BOTTOM UP I TYPED THIS INTO SOMEONE's GUESTBOOK AND I JUST COPY PASTED


ok i ran out of space... so all the people who tried to adopt him got involved in some "accident"
PM - Remove
and then he finally got out, and they show a little part of his life out of the organization... such as like getting money, getting food, and other survival stuff until he finally goes to school ( all the people who tried to adopt him (cont
PM - Remove
so him and the surviving two kids were seperated, (took him 2 weeks to get out, they were seperated a little before 1 week in because of some accident)
PM - Remove
ok i change my mind there weren't 3 kids.... ok wvr lets just say one of the boys that escaped w/ them died on the way....
PM - Remove
and then they get all genius and kill people, do other cool stuff, and they finally get out lolz this would be a BIG part of the manga
PM - Remove
ya... and the other two kids were hiding and shooting the "bad people".... yeah.... and then they found out that the weren't out of the organization yet....
PM - Remove
but one of the "bad people" cuts him in the eye, and so his dying sister told him to take her eye out, which he does, and then he sticks it into his socket lolz (kinda... got this from naruto... im trying to be original)
PM - Remove
and he had some power that let him make the knife into a dark hole....
PM - Remove
they see bodies of the other escaping children.... then they are about to get out of the place when the guards find them and kill the main character's sister... the main character goes crazy and takes the knife and kills them all with it :)
PM - Remove
and the siblings took this as a chance to escape with 2 other boys and another girl.... they hung one of the guards with a rope and took his 2 pistols, and his knife.... then they killed everyone they encountered w/ the gun (w/ a silencer)
PM - Remove
so then the siblings were sent to the organization and they were experimented on... one day one of the experiments went wrong and one of the children went on a rampage and started killing everyone and blowing things up....
PM - Remove
then sold him to some organization which experimented on children.... so.... oh ya i forgot he had a sister too
PM - Remove
yeah... so... yeah so this is his life story..... he lived a normal life until he was about 4 and a half, when his mom was killed in a car accident and his dad commited suicide.... so then someon adopted him and kept him for 2 months and
PM - Remove
ok... so this is the story...... theres a guy, hes like 15-16 years old, and hes an "assasin" (these days we call them hitmen) .... ok.... so he accepts jobs and only if he gets payed partially in gold :)



there's something else about the kid you forgot

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Posted 5/20/08

h4x0rz wrote:


droondood wrote:

SORRY BUT CAN YOU READ THIS FROM BOTTOM UP I TYPED THIS INTO SOMEONE's GUESTBOOK AND I JUST COPY PASTED


ok i ran out of space... so all the people who tried to adopt him got involved in some "accident"
PM - Remove
and then he finally got out, and they show a little part of his life out of the organization... such as like getting money, getting food, and other survival stuff until he finally goes to school ( all the people who tried to adopt him (cont
PM - Remove
so him and the surviving two kids were seperated, (took him 2 weeks to get out, they were seperated a little before 1 week in because of some accident)
PM - Remove
ok i change my mind there weren't 3 kids.... ok wvr lets just say one of the boys that escaped w/ them died on the way....
PM - Remove
and then they get all genius and kill people, do other cool stuff, and they finally get out lolz this would be a BIG part of the manga
PM - Remove
ya... and the other two kids were hiding and shooting the "bad people".... yeah.... and then they found out that the weren't out of the organization yet....
PM - Remove
but one of the "bad people" cuts him in the eye, and so his dying sister told him to take her eye out, which he does, and then he sticks it into his socket lolz (kinda... got this from naruto... im trying to be original)
PM - Remove
and he had some power that let him make the knife into a dark hole....
PM - Remove
they see bodies of the other escaping children.... then they are about to get out of the place when the guards find them and kill the main character's sister... the main character goes crazy and takes the knife and kills them all with it :)
PM - Remove
and the siblings took this as a chance to escape with 2 other boys and another girl.... they hung one of the guards with a rope and took his 2 pistols, and his knife.... then they killed everyone they encountered w/ the gun (w/ a silencer)
PM - Remove
so then the siblings were sent to the organization and they were experimented on... one day one of the experiments went wrong and one of the children went on a rampage and started killing everyone and blowing things up....
PM - Remove
then sold him to some organization which experimented on children.... so.... oh ya i forgot he had a sister too
PM - Remove
yeah... so... yeah so this is his life story..... he lived a normal life until he was about 4 and a half, when his mom was killed in a car accident and his dad commited suicide.... so then someon adopted him and kept him for 2 months and
PM - Remove
ok... so this is the story...... theres a guy, hes like 15-16 years old, and hes an "assasin" (these days we call them hitmen) .... ok.... so he accepts jobs and only if he gets payed partially in gold :)



there's something else about the kid you forgot



HOLY SH1T!!!!
Posted 6/2/08

n_n303 wrote:

whoa... O__O
i suggest you read the forum rules before creating a thread.. o.O
you keep spamming your own thread .__.
and no one can lock your thread except the mods. This might live, if you stop spamming your own thread x__x

Own stories
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-186245/own-stories.html


Couldn`t this be discussed in that thread ?
Posted 6/2/08
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