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The Hundred Princesses batch 1~


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Chapter 2: The Hundred Princesses and the Mystery Visitor part 2

A woman with long silver hair and was wearing a white kimono was sitting on the couch.

“Priestess Henmei, what are you doing here?!” Asked Ai

“Why hello your highnesses, I came here to tell you something.” Said the priestess

“Freud, can you please leave us alone for awhile.” Asked Ryn

“Of course, your highnesses I’ll make tea.” Said Freud

“I came here to warn you of great danger.” Asked Henmei

“What-“Before Jedidah continued her sentence she was interrupted by a big boom.

There was smoke everywhere. The wall of the lounge was destroyed and three boys were standing in front of the hole.

“So these are the princesses. They’re so cute. But to bad I have to destroy you!!!!!” Said a boy with reddish brown spiky hair and was wearing black head to toes with a bit of gold and was holding two swords.

“Don’t you mean “we”, Strife?” Said a tall man with spiky light brown hair wearing a sleeveless shirt, light brown pants and was also holding a long staff.

“Yeah Alfred’s right!!!” Said a boy with silver hair and was wearing a white shirt with a black heart symbol also was holding a katana.

“Where did they go?” Asked Strife

“Oh shoot!! We let them get away!!!!” Said Alfred

Outside the castle the princesses and the priestess were heading to the shrine.

“What will we do now?!” Asked Mira

“Mira just keep running, ‘til we reach the shrine.” Said Valkyrie

A wolf spirit appeared out of no where and was attacking the princesses!!!

“Kyaa Onee-ama tasukete” Screamed Mira

“Ha! We found you!” Said Kion

“It’s those creeps who destroyed my armory room!!!” Said Ai very angrily

“What armory room? I thought the armory room was on the ground floor????” Asked Ryn

“Ah, nandemo nai desu Ryn” Said Ai

“You guys will be easy to kill!!!” Said Strife

“You fallen princes are same as ever!!!” Came a voice

Two girls appeared. One had long green hair and eyes was wearing a black dress with fluffy feathers on its ends. The other one had red short hair and was wearing white shorts and long sleeved blouse with a bit of raffles on it.

“Ayaka, Hikari!!!” Said Henmei

“We’re sorry we’re late. We had a hard time detecting you guys” Said Ayaka who has green hair and eyes

“Take this!!!” Said Hikari who slashed her sword at the three boys and had red hair and brown eyes

“Gah we can’t attack now!!!” Said Alfred

“We’ll retreat for now.” Said Kion

“Who exactly are you?” Asked Mira

To be continued in Chapter 3.....

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i kind of feel like ur making fun of the fallen princes, though the story is coming along, cant wait for the next one ^_^
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PRETTY GOOD! X D this is very goodzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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nice lady ai
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fun ^_^
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cool :))
Posted 5/21/08
woh!!!!!! im soooo surprised ......my name suddenly appeared ...just right there.~!!!! woh!!!! :o...hehehe...thanks!!!!!!! .......next story!!!!!!! next story!!!!! im cravi'n for more!!!!
Posted 5/21/08
XD nice story XDDDDDD NEXT NEXTTTTTTTTT
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You guys should wait!!! I'm still makin' chappie 3.
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ahehe...your doing fine..Princess Krozen..or lady Ai..
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!
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belovedloveless wrote:

ahehe...your doing fine..Princess Krozen..or lady Ai..


Thnx your highness!!! I'm till in begginer's level but improving little by little,
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LovelyCrystal wrote:


belovedloveless wrote:

ahehe...your doing fine..Princess Krozen..or lady Ai..


Thnx your highness!!! I'm till in begginer's level but improving little by little,


*giggles..you still need a lot to learn..but don't be sad...just go with the flow..and think of other ideas..don't forget to have FUN!!
Posted 5/21/08
gambateh ai chan XD !!!!
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YAY, new chapter is very good^_^
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