Post Reply the long haired girl and the tree of death part1
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Posted 5/21/08 , edited 5/21/08
A phone call came in the early morning to detective john forest and woke him up,he lazily picked the phone and said ' yes, who is this ?"."hey!,johnny boy your new case just came in ' said the cheif ,"what is it this time chief ?",'well have you checked the news lately seems there was a murder on the day of march 29 a brutal murder of an entire family ata town called weaver creek but ,an officer I've sent will be here shortLy to give you the info on the cook family and one missing family member, her name maple cook she went missing after that night",'ok chief I'll look in to it 'said john with a cool voice. as he finished talking to the cheif a door bell rang and john answered' who's there ?",'it's the info from the chief 'said the cop on the door," just slide it under the dor " replied back,and the cop slipped the file folder under the door and it came out on the opposite side and there john opened to look in side and saw a photo of the family members,and then he saw a girl with long hair lookinhg happy and showing a lovely smile. as he looked at the info on her he saw the anme"maple cook "and said' oh that's her' and quikly closed the folder.

AS he gazed at the town below a hill top john says'oh so this,is weaver's creek?"with curiuosity.", as john was walking towards the town he came to a sudden stop and saw a short haired girl wearing stained clothes walkinhg calmly towards the woods holding a basket of food and as he passed him by she said ' hello sir good after noon "."well good after noon to you to young lady" replied john with a cheerful smile." where are you going to ' john asked."I'm going to the forest to have a picnic would you come with me if you want to of course ' she said with a sweet smile."well young lady can you tell me anything about maple cook?"said john while getting out his pen and note pad.' no I don't know anyone named like that sorry"said the short haired girl.' ok then but you'll look much cuter if you had poney tails 'said john while tying her hair.'well I'll see ya ".suddenly a cold voice came out of the girl's mouth and said " you shouldn't poke you nose in thiongs you don't understand ", and there he felt an icy chill came down his spine and as he was abot to turn around the girl was gone .
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Posted 5/21/08
part 2 will come soon after i wake up
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Posted 5/22/08
Ooooh. Much better. Keep at it!!!
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