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Posted 5/21/08 , edited 5/21/08
He gently put is warm hand on my cheek stroking it slowly. The cutest guy ever was there by my side touching my face! Our lips were so close; I could feel his cool breath on my face. His hand slowly made its way down to my neck and he delinquently pulled me forward. As my lips touched his, my head was spinning my blood rushing, my heart felt like it was going to burst out of my chest!

It’s a marvellous day on this March 28th the wind from the north are pushing the clouds south so today will be perfectly clear.
*SMASH* I hit my alarm clock so hard almost breaking it. God damn it! I’ve been having that dream for like a week now and I never got that far and when he was kissing me, and I wake up!
“Wake up honey! You’re eggs are ready!” my mom yelled.
That’s when remembered it was the first day of school. I rushed to my closet and I looked trough the piles of clothes that was all over the floor. When I finally found mu hideous school uniform, I put it on and I hurried down the stairs. But before getting out of the room I took one last glance at my mirror realizing I haven’t brushed my hair.
I scanned my room to see if my brush was anywhere near. When I found it I rushed towards it and quickly passed it through my hair undoing all the terrible knots.

So then I looked at my alarm clock realizing I had 5 minutes before I had to go. So hurried to the bathroom and brushed my teeth and ran down the stairs. As I arrived to the kitchen my mom was waiting for me at the table. Ran to the pantry to get some pop-tarts while she was talking to me.
“What were you doing Alexandria? Your eggs were cold I had to through them out!”
“MOM! I tolled you not to call me by my full name. Please do like everybody else and call me Alex. And anyways I have to go or I’ll be late. See you tonight.” I said waving already out the door.

My friend Mia was already waiting for me at my door. I joined her and we started running because we both know we were going to be late for school. “Gosh you’re late for the first day! I’ve been waiting for like 15 minutes!” she exclaimed.
“Sorry, I was dreaming and I didn’t want to wake up…” I apologized. The rest of the run we didn’t talk.

Once we got to the big metal gates of the school we hurried in and realized everybody was probably already inside getting their books, lockers numbers and locks. We ran in and we were right so we found the end of the unbelievably long line for our books.
Once we got our books we booked to the line for the lockers and the locks. As we got closer to the table a guy bumped my shoulder. I looked around to see who had just hit me. And there he was, the guy from my dream, standing right in-front of me! He was gorgeous and god-like, with his reddish brown hair and his beautiful piercing black eyes starring right at me. He was gorgeous but he looked very confused.

“Do you need help?” I asked trying not to show I was hyperventilating. “Umm…well kind of… where am I supposed to go? I’m new here. I just moved from Ireland, I’m Charles.” He said with an unbelievably gorgeous accent! “I’m Alex. Well, did you go in that line first; to get all your books? Then you come here to get your locker number and your lock.” I responded. Yet I answered all his questions he still looked a bit confused but he headed towards the book line and waited. I turned to Mia who was in-front of me.
“Do you know who that is?” I asked. She looked at me like I was crazy but still answered.
“No. Why do you ask?”
“Well that’s the guy from my dream, the exact same guy!” I yelled. Jumping in the air and squealing for no reason.
“And why should I care it’s your dream! And stop jumping like that!” she said putting her hands on my shoulders so I wouldn’t jump. “So tell me once again what is going on, but this time relax and talk slowly and don’t yell so everybody hears you!” She hissed.
So I took a deep breath and started telling her about my dream and my conversation with Charles. I pictured him in my head and I almost fainted! He is just so perfect!








well thats it for now^^ tell me if I should continiue
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Posted 5/21/08
Not a catchy ending. Needs to more hangman-ish. And plus you didn't describe anyone other than Charles pretty much. And the story still moves TOO fast. Sorry A. That's what a BFF is for.
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Its good but it really is moving way too fast. I like it and you should continue
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lol I know it goes to fast and no its NOT the ending of the story but thanks for the tips I'll make it go slower
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wow!! i cant believe it but dat day u set da story in was my fwends b-day!!^-^ okie i no dat didnt have anything 2 do with da story >.< but itz pwetty good how u started out with dat dream lolz^-^ i agree with da others dat u were fast nd yeah u should describe others too but so far so good so keep writing!!^-^
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Posted 5/25/08 , edited 5/25/08
heres a completely different story^^ enjoy!

I had drifted away in my dreams lost under the blanket of unconsciousness last night. But now I was awake sleepless trying to go back asleep to find my dream once again. To find the young man that had saved my life and that protected me from the dangers of my dream.
But my dream does not come back. So I sit there on my bed still imagining him with his hands around me like he was really there holding me. I feel his body heat, his soft breath on my hair and his muscles tight around me. But when I turn around to look at his gorgeous face, look at his piercing brown eyes and pass my hand through his dark brown hair, he’s not there.
I turn my head slowly to look at the alarm clock. Even though I don’t want to know what time it is. 6 AM on a Monday morning. Feeling sleepless I get up and get dressed with the first pair of jeans and a random shirt I find. I eat breakfast, brush my teeth and make my sandwich. Now its 7:45 and I’m waiting anxiously on my bed thinking about my dream. I just can’t forget when he told me his name. I think it’s the part of my dream that I remember he most.

I was so confused he had bought me so much clothes cause we had spent the night at his house talking and he didn’t want me to go home with the same clothe I had before. “But…” he talked before I could finish my sentence. “You know you don’t need to call me ‘the guy who saved your life’ you can call me Kevin. “Kevin.” I repeat a bit breathless.

I look at the clock again 7: 58. I hurry to the door put my shoes on and race to the bus stop. As I got there I see the bus turning the corner. I get on the bus with a big sigh, another of school starting.
At school I hang out with my friends. Yet I talk and do my work my mind is wandering off thinking of Kevin. I know my dream was just a dream but it all seemed just so real. The periods pass by like a blur.
Its French, Language arts, Social studies, Math then it was gym. I feel so tired all day like I didn’t sleep at all. I yawn all day long. Every minutes I can I imagine Kevin’s arms around me.

When the day finally ends I rush to the bus and I sleep. Well I try to sleep I end up dreaming of gorgeous Kevin kissing me. Our lips moving together slowly, but when our tongs made contact I waked up. My friend beside me was nudging me to wake up because we were already at my house. I take my bag and slowly walk out of the bus. I make my way to the sidewalk to my house, unlock the door and go straight to my room. I through my bag on the floor on drop myself on the bed. After a couples minutes or hours I don’t know how much time I’ve been laying there, I hear my window opening and a silent “thump” on the ground.
I get up and go close my window. I turn around to face the mirror and see that I was crying. I get closer to the mirror to wipe them with a Kleenex.

Through the mirror I see a form behind me. I turn around quickly. Tears were running down my face again. Was I dreaming? Or hallucinating? “Why are you crying?” he asked, “Aren’t you glad to see me?”
I’m a statue. I can’t move. I can’t speak. I can’t even think. Why can’t I do anything?
I just stand there. My lips move and without me controlling anything. I whisper silently. “Kevin? I thought you were a dream.” I am so confused and lost.

He comes closer to me and towers over me. “Wanna bet I’m just a dream?” He leans over and stokes my cheek drying my tears. His breath smells like honey. He comes closer to breaking the distance between us. When our lips meet my world spins. Nothing around me is there, nothing matters no more.


I'm continuing the story so this is not the end^^
btw when its i yellow its part of her dream
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good so far^-^ except i dink her day was kinda passing by very fast lyke not really detailed nd specific enough^-^' but ii dink ur storyline iz going good so far^-^
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yeah I know it passes by fast cause it felt like a blur to her it passed by fast to her too^^

So who wants part two?
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I think , . . . it's awesome. Way better than the last one you posted. Sure it goes fast, but to me it's normal. The way you describe it, is extremely awesome. It sounds like a romantic tragedy. You should make more of that. You could be awesome one day. But, . . . the honey scented breath thing is sorta resembling to my Michel. ;P But it awesome. It's like a polite Shakespeare in a way. Like Shakespeare reciting this but without so many words of the old. It's really really really. And my fans call me an author. Yours was great. Can't wait for part 2.
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thanks^^ and yeah I know the honey thing is like Michel but couldn't find anything thing else that was a sweet and normal^^ anything else I could use instead of honey?
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dattebayo_kawaii wrote:

thanks^^ and yeah I know the honey thing is like Michel but couldn't find anything thing else that was a sweet and normal^^ anything else I could use instead of honey?


hmm, . . . O_O strawberry chocolate
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how about just strawberries?
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part 2!


When he moved back and sat on the bed his expression was unreadable he seemed glad but he looked confused of some sort. “What’s wrong?” I ask him.

“Do you remember last night? Like do you remember all of it in details?” he asked sharply. “Actually I don’t remember everything. I remember certain parts like when you told me your name and well that’s it.” I paused wondering why I don’t remember everything now. When I woke up this morning everything was so vivid and clear now everything is fading. “Why can’t I remember everything? And if it really happened why does it seem like a dream?” I whisper anxious to know the answer. “I don’t know. Though I remember everything so clearly why does it feel like a dream to you?” He stops talking. I come closer and sit by him on the bed. “Well the important part is that you’re here now and that we are together. And I’ll tell you now; now that I have you I’m never letting go.”

He looks at me, “I love you Ava. And no matter what happens I’ll always be there to protect you.” He looks at me so deeply. It looks like he’s searching my soul. “I love every part of you. Your long brown hair, your beautiful hazel eyes, your heart shaped face. The way that when you laugh you blush a bit, or when your happy and you smile you warm everybody’s heart around you. And I can go on and on about the things that I love about you.”

I felt my cheeks turning red. “Even though we met last night, you know so much about me and it feels that I know nothing about you. Only your name and that I love you. Describe yourself, so age, your childhood and all that stuff.” I say excited to know more about the man that I love. “Well, I am 16 two years older then you. My mom passed away when I was 6. I live with my dad but he’s always at work. I love to walk on beaches, talking, and making the one I love happy.” I smile contented by the explanation he gave me.
“Anyways how did you find out so much stuff on me?” I ask curious once again. “To be honest I’ve been watching you for a while. So when you fell down from that bridge I had to save you from the water and buy some dry clothes.” I thought of it for a while. But I came to the conclusion that his story made sense. “Okay one more question. How did you get in here?”
“How do you think I got here?” He asks with his right brow moving up into a perfect arch over his eye. “C’mon just tell me! Well I think you came in by the window but it was lost so just tell me. The maybe we can go for a walk or we could stay here in private…” I wanted him to get my message by private but I don’t think it worked. “Lets go for a walk, but before I’ll tell you to make you happy.” I smile glad to watch him sympathize. “I came in by the window but I kinda forced through it.” He said rubbing the back of his head a bit embarrassed.

“Okay. What is all of that on your night table?” he gets up and walks a cross the room to take a closer look at the pile on my night table. I try to look a away. “You’re reading 1, 2, 3… 5 books!?” he exclaimed surprised.

“Nope. I’m re-reading five books.” I corrected him. “ Why would you want to re-read a book?”
“Hey! Those were really good books!” I muttered. “Okay what do we have here?” Kevin picks every book one by one and read the titles. “Twilight?” he asks. “Awesome book!” I almost yell.
Killing Britney? Britney Spears?” He raises his brow. “Hey! Don’t make fun of that book! It’s a really good book and no its not `Britney Spears`”
“Well I really don’t care what you read to be honest. All I want is you.” He comes closer and puts his hand on my back, bending me over, just like when you’re dancing. Then he kissed me. While he was kissing me I felt my body going limp.
Sooner then he wanted he moved back from me. “Are you okay? It feels like I’m kissing a rag doll.”
“That kiss was dizzy-making!” I whispered. “`Dizzy-making`? Where did you get that word from?” He asks sitting me on the bed. “Extras.” I say curtly. “Which is a book?” he questions me. “Yes. Extras by Scott Westerfeld. That’s a really good book too.”

After a couple minutes Kevin breaks the silence. “Maybe I should go.”
“No! Well can you come back tonight? I’ll leave the window open or at least unlocked.” I plead him. “Okay I’ll come back.” So he kisses my cheeks and crawls out of the window leaving no traces that he was here. The only thing he left behind was te smell of his cologne. I breath in and out heavily to bring the most cologne in my lungs as they can contain. I was eagerly waiting for his return.




Okay so everything in red (books named in story) are real books
Twilight-Stephanie Meyer
Killing Britney-Sean Olin
Extras-Scott Westerfeld


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OMG OMG OMG OMG KYOOTNESS~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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