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The second he was out the window I felt as if some part of me had me ripped off, cut in thousands of pieces and left to rot. But I knew he would come back but exactly when? That was my question. What was I supposed to do till then? Wait doing nothing? Not likely! The phone rang interrupting my train off thoughts on how to pass time. I walked sluggishly to the phone not wanting to answer. “Hello.” I said trying to suppress the boredom in my voice. “Ava, could you prepare diner tonight but just for you. I…uh…I have to work really, really late tonight so…uh yeah I’ll be home late. So see you soon.”

I didn’t have time to protest or say anything that my dad had already hanged up the phone. Yeah right, “working late”, I said to myself, pretty lame excuse to go out with another woman! Ever since mom died, dad had been dating other women, much younger women. My dad is called Petter Sarchip, but behind his back me and my little sister call him cheater, suits him better!
My little sister Kaylee loved mom more then anything. I feel so sorry for her when mom died because Kaylee was 4 and couldn’t understand everything that was going on. So she couldn’t cry moms’ death till last year when she turned 6. I on the other hand had cried for days refusing to get out of my room. My dad had to bring a tray full of food to my room! I was 12 and I wished I could’ve been there more for her; help her clean without arguing, keep my room clean, you know little stuff like that, that matter. I wish I hadn’t been such a bourdon all the time.

As I was thinking about the past I realized my stomach was growling for me to eat something. I turn my head and look at the clock; 6 PM. Times flies by when you you’re with the one you love. I slowly walk up the stairs and go to the kitchen to see if there would be anything decent to eat for once. Because I’m kinda sick of ordering pizza. Tonight I feel like having a big diner: Spaghetti, meatballs, and maybe garlic bread. Or I could just do macaroni and cheese, it’d be so much faster.
So I run down the stairs to our storage room to take a box of Kraft diner and run back up the stairs again to boil some water. While the water was boiling I was wondering why he would come only tomorrow and not tonight. Does he not like me anymore? My mind was going all over the place looking at every scenario that would make him not stay tonight; maybe he has a girlfriend and I’m just like a pastime till he can run to his “girl”.

I stopped when my foot got wet from the boiling water overflowing from the pot. I hurry up and move the pot. How can I be so distracted by I guy I just met. Even though I love him and I know that we just met I don’t want to invest too much emotion in one person. I did that with mom and that kinda ended up badly. But it’s so weird my heart pounds when he’s near and I can barely breathe when I touch him. So why is it that I don’t want to fall in love with him more then that?

All of a sudden I wasn’t hungry anymore. I just wanted to be alone and think about how much emotions I wanted to invest in Kevin. I walk slowly to my room and let myself fall on the bed. I take my CD player and press play not paying any attention to what CD is in it. To be honest I wasn’t paying attention to the music I just wanted to be distracted. So I put the volume at the max so I can’t hear anything at all. I breath in and out not concentrating on the pain the loud music the is causing my ears.

I was walking in a ally, it was really dark. A rorring song comes closer to me. Then a blinding light appears before my eyes. I couldn’t move I was petrified. What was going on where was I? I thought I was in my room! Then something bashes into my side but it wasn’t a car. I bash into garbage bags and hit my head on the ground. Pain suddenly struck me, it was my nose. “Are you okay?” a male voice said.

I was back in my head. Was had happened? That’s when I had a flash, that was my dream! I think. But why did I remember it now? So many questions were running through my head at the same time.



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O_O that was like sudden but cool.
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I through the earphones on the floor, bringing my CD player smashing on the floor too. I was breathless, that “visions” had drained every ounce of my energy. I rested my head on my pillow not wanting to sleep.
“Okay.” I said to myself. “So Kevin I guess I’m going to have to wait for Kevin to come back to ask him anything. Because I’m sure he’s with and other girl. I need to know where he lives! But I can’t search for his address on the internet if I don’t know his last name…”

I fall asleep not able to finish my sentence. I was falling off a cliff. Falling miles and hour not able to stop. Then I fall back into my body sweating and fully dressed in my bed. I breath heavily try to catch my breath and come back to reality. I get up and change into my pyjamas, jump back in bed and look at the clock; three in the morning and restless. I decide just lay there and think of Kevin hoping he could just jump in my room and kiss me like I’m the only girl on earth.
What am I talking about? I’m just a replacement till he can run up to his real girlfriend. Well I think, I hope not, because I never felt this way with a guy before. I never felt so good and I don’t know just perfect for a guy. At school I’m just pretty much the “bookworm”. Because I always have a book in hands and I’m always reading it when I can. Even though the guys don’t look at me I’m not unhappy, I’m not the kind of girl that goes crazy when I guy looks at me and that cries when he doesn’t call me back or anything.

I have friends. There’s Sarah who’s just like me; always a book in hands. There’s Amilia who loves to read but is not obsessive compulsive on books like Sarah. There is also Melanie who loves to read and talk about magic and crazy stuff like that. I have many more friends, I talk to them but they are not my best friends they are my friends. So with Sarah, Amilia, Melanie and me we are the coolest people in school because we don’t care what other people think of us. And we all share a common point; all of us never had a boyfriend and wish we could have to boys that are in books, so fictional characters.

So I have so much to tell them tomorrow and brag how I’m the first one in the group to have a boyfriend. But I don’t know if I should tell them. They can such loudmouths sometimes, but I can’ keep this to myself. It’s impossible, it’s just to incredible for one person to contain so much joy and confusion. I had to tell them. After that I fall asleep, sleeping dreamlessly.

The next day I wake up and do my normal chores. But today feels different. For the first time in years I wear I mini-skirt and leggings that I didn’t even know still fit me. I put a bit of make-up on. Today I feel like a real girl. Well I think that any girl who would have been kissed like that would feel girly and proud of it. I walk to the bus stop proud of what I was wearing. I was not hiding my face in my hood or blasting my music so wouldn’t hear anyone I was walking smiling. The bus ride was quiet. I would watch the scenery flash by out my window and occasionally talked to some people. But when I got to school I dashed to my friends jumping up and down excited for Amilia to stop talking so I could scream my joy to have a boyfriend to them. As soon as they knew they squealed with me. They couldn’t believe it either; the guy I had seen in my dream was true. The dream was true.

I was happy no more then happy I was overflowing with joy. During the whole day I hyper-ventilated I soon as thought of Kevin. But turned red in rage when I thought he could have another girlfriend. But even so I just couldn’t wait to see him again. As the third period was passing a guy in my class tossed a note at my foot. I picked it up trying not grad attention to myself but failed. As I reached for the note under my desk I bend too far and fell forward which made to whole class burst in laughter. I told the teacher I had dropped my pencil he seemed to believe me but still seemed curious to the ral reason I had fell under my desk. Before I could even read the first one he tossed me an other one, this time beside my chair, I picked it up easily. I read the first note first:

I need to talk to you after class, (its important) Meet me at the bottom of the staircase, I’ll be waiting.

Ok then I smiling at him telling him I’ll be there. Then shove to first note in my desk and read the other one over my science book.

HAHA! Nice fall I didn’t think you could fall forward UNDER your desk!


I glare at him half laughing at his comment.



end of part 4^^ part 5 in progress :D
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well heres part 5^^ its not very long^^ but still^^ and before I write for nothing who WANTS me to write part 6?

The science class seemed never-ending. I often looked at the clock hoping time had flied by and it was the end of the class but between each glare at the clock the arrows had barely moved. But sometimes from the corner of my eye I could see the guy who was passing me notes staring at me. His name was Christopher but he hated his whole name so everyone just called him Chris. He was one of my only guy friend. He is really nice. He’s the kind of guy you want as friend, because he cares and helps you no matter what. But we talk a lot so why would he need to talk to me “privately”. This was weird. I wonder what he wants to talk about. He’s such a good friend that I don’t care where or what we talk about as long as we talk.

When the class finally ended I go put my science book in my locker take my math book and head for the staircase. In some school there is like 4 maybe 5 staircases but here there is only one event though we are a two story building. I guess its just that no one uses the first story except for the gym classes. I half run not wanting to be late for class after I talk to Chris so he better hurry up! When I get there he’s waiting for me eagerly. What does he have to say. I run down the rest of the stairs and jump in-front of him. He doesn’t even flinch or smile.
“You wanted to see me? But do it quickly my next class starts in a couple of minutes.” I tell him.

He takes a deep breath. “Okay. While I’m talking just listen okay? Don’t talk.” I nod worried of what he is going to tell me. “W…Will you g…go out with m…m…me?” He stutters his sentence liberated afterwards to have been able to say it completely. Then he walks forward pushing me through the wall putting his arms on either side of me letting no way to escape. He leans forward and presses his soft lips to mine. My lips burn, I was heating up. Not able to control my hand, I knot it in his hair not wanting him to let go. What was I doing? Just this morning I was bragging about having a boyfriend now he asks me out and kisses me. But his kiss was so gentle in felt like the wings of an angel on my skin. His right hand was going up and down my arm while his left hand was still me pinning me to the wall. I was stuck I was liking it! Just at that moment footsteps seem louder in the hallway. He gently releases his lips from mine and smiles. I was in shock. My lips were still burning from his touch and my arm was sizzling where he press his skin to mine. As he was walking up the stairs a teacher was turning the corner coming towards us. I quickly shuffle to he ground taking my math book that I had dropped when he had pinned me to the wall.

“Mister Christopher and misses Ava shouldn’t you be in class?” The principle hisses.
“We were going but Ava here had dropped her math book outside this morning and we were out retrieving it for her next period. We are terribly sorry if it took to much time. But we will be on our way before we miss the whole class.” Christopher says sounding completely natural. He walks back down the stairs taking my hand we start walking up the stairs slowly. The teacher doesn’t say anything just stares at up walking up the stairs to our class.

As we were walking up the stairs Christopher talks silently it’s almost a whisper. “You still didn’t answer my question.” By the time he was finished his sentence we were at the door of our class.
“I have to think about it.” I tell him opening the door and walking the class that had already started. I we walked in the class went silent staring at our every move till we sat down and opened our books as the same page as everyone else. I wasn’t listening at all my mind was filled with questions about had just happened. My head was still spinning from the kiss, my lips still burning. While I looked distracted Christoper on the other hand was completely as ease answering questions like nothing had happened. But something did happen and I didn’t think he would let it down till I answered his question. Did I want to go out with him?


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well heres part 5^^ its not very long^^ but still^^ and before I write for nothing who WANTS me to write part 6?

The science class seemed never-ending. I often looked at the clock hoping time had flied by and it was the end of the class but between each glare at the clock the arrows had barely moved. But sometimes from the corner of my eye I could see the guy who was passing me notes staring at me. His name was Christopher but he hated his whole name so everyone just called him Chris. He was one of my only guy friend. He is really nice. He’s the kind of guy you want as friend, because he cares and helps you no matter what. But we talk a lot so why would he need to talk to me “privately”. This was weird. I wonder what he wants to talk about. He’s such a good friend that I don’t care where or what we talk about as long as we talk.

When the class finally ended I go put my science book in my locker take my math book and head for the staircase. In some school there is like 4 maybe 5 staircases but here there is only one event though we are a two story building. I guess its just that no one uses the first story except for the gym classes. I half run not wanting to be late for class after I talk to Chris so he better hurry up! When I get there he’s waiting for me eagerly. What does he have to say. I run down the rest of the stairs and jump in-front of him. He doesn’t even flinch or smile.
“You wanted to see me? But do it quickly my next class starts in a couple of minutes.” I tell him.

He takes a deep breath. “Okay. While I’m talking just listen okay? Don’t talk.” I nod worried of what he is going to tell me. “W…Will you g…go out with m…m…me?” He stutters his sentence liberated afterwards to have been able to say it completely. Then he walks forward pushing me through the wall putting his arms on either side of me letting no way to escape. He leans forward and presses his soft lips to mine. My lips burn, I was heating up. Not able to control my hand, I knot it in his hair not wanting him to let go. What was I doing? Just this morning I was bragging about having a boyfriend now he asks me out and kisses me. But his kiss was so gentle in felt like the wings of an angel on my skin. His right hand was going up and down my arm while his left hand was still me pinning me to the wall. I was stuck I was liking it! Just at that moment footsteps seem louder in the hallway. He gently releases his lips from mine and smiles. I was in shock. My lips were still burning from his touch and my arm was sizzling where he press his skin to mine. As he was walking up the stairs a teacher was turning the corner coming towards us. I quickly shuffle to he ground taking my math book that I had dropped when he had pinned me to the wall.

“Mister Christopher and misses Ava shouldn’t you be in class?” The principle hisses.
“We were going but Ava here had dropped her math book outside this morning and we were out retrieving it for her next period. We are terribly sorry if it took to much time. But we will be on our way before we miss the whole class.” Christopher says sounding completely natural. He walks back down the stairs taking my hand we start walking up the stairs slowly. The teacher doesn’t say anything just stares at up walking up the stairs to our class.

As we were walking up the stairs Christopher talks silently it’s almost a whisper. “You still didn’t answer my question.” By the time he was finished his sentence we were at the door of our class.
“I have to think about it.” I tell him opening the door and walking the class that had already started. I we walked in the class went silent staring at our every move till we sat down and opened our books as the same page as everyone else. I wasn’t listening at all my mind was filled with questions about had just happened. My head was still spinning from the kiss, my lips still burning. While I looked distracted Christoper on the other hand was completely as ease answering questions like nothing had happened. But something did happen and I didn’t think he would let it down till I answered his question. Did I want to go out with him?


so if you want part 6 add me and tell me if you want me to write part 6^^


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here goes part 4^^ hope you all like it^^

I through the earphones on the floor, bringing my CD player smashing on the floor too. I was breathless, that “visions” had drained every ounce of my energy. I rested my head on my pillow not wanting to sleep.
“Okay.” I said to myself. “So Kevin I guess I’m going to have to wait for Kevin to come back to ask him anything. Because I’m sure he’s with and other girl. I need to know where he lives! But I can’t search for his address on the internet if I don’t know his last name…”

I fall asleep not able to finish my sentence. I was falling off a cliff. Falling miles and hour not able to stop. Then I fall back into my body sweating and fully dressed in my bed. I breath heavily try to catch my breath and come back to reality. I get up and change into my pyjamas, jump back in bed and look at the clock; three in the morning and restless. I decide just lay there and think of Kevin hoping he could just jump in my room and kiss me like I’m the only girl on earth.
What am I talking about? I’m just a replacement till he can run up to his real girlfriend. Well I think, I hope not, because I never felt this way with a guy before. I never felt so good and I don’t know just perfect for a guy. At school I’m just pretty much the “bookworm”. Because I always have a book in hands and I’m always reading it when I can. Even though the guys don’t look at me I’m not unhappy, I’m not the kind of girl that goes crazy when I guy looks at me and that cries when he doesn’t call me back or anything.

I have friends. There’s Sarah who’s just like me; always a book in hands. There’s Amilia who loves to read but is not obsessive compulsive on books like Sarah. There is also Melanie who loves to read and talk about magic and crazy stuff like that. I have many more friends, I talk to them but they are not my best friends they are my friends. So with Sarah, Amilia, Melanie and me we are the coolest people in school because we don’t care what other people think of us. And we all share a common point; all of us never had a boyfriend and wish we could have to boys that are in books, so fictional characters.

So I have so much to tell them tomorrow and brag how I’m the first one in the group to have a boyfriend. But I don’t know if I should tell them. They can such loudmouths sometimes, but I can’ keep this to myself. It’s impossible, it’s just to incredible for one person to contain so much joy and confusion. I had to tell them. After that I fall asleep, sleeping dreamlessly.

The next day I wake up and do my normal chores. But today feels different. For the first time in years I wear I mini-skirt and leggings that I didn’t even know still fit me. I put a bit of make-up on. Today I feel like a real girl. Well I think that any girl who would have been kissed like that would feel girly and proud of it. I walk to the bus stop proud of what I was wearing. I was not hiding my face in my hood or blasting my music so wouldn’t hear anyone I was walking smiling. The bus ride was quiet. I would watch the scenery flash by out my window and occasionally talked to some people. But when I got to school I dashed to my friends jumping up and down excited for Amilia to stop talking so I could scream my joy to have a boyfriend to them. As soon as they knew they squealed with me. They couldn’t believe it either; the guy I had seen in my dream was true. The dream was true.

I was happy no more then happy I was overflowing with joy. During the whole day I hyper-ventilated I soon as thought of Kevin. But turned red in rage when I thought he could have another girlfriend. But even so I just couldn’t wait to see him again. As the third period was passing a guy in my class tossed a note at my foot. I picked it up trying not grad attention to myself but failed. As I reached for the note under my desk I bend too far and fell forward which made to whole class burst in laughter. I told the teacher I had dropped my pencil he seemed to believe me but still seemed curious to the ral reason I had fell under my desk. Before I could even read the first one he tossed me an other one, this time beside my chair, I picked it up easily. I read the first note first:

I need to talk to you after class, (its important) Meet me at the bottom of the staircase, I’ll be waiting.

Ok then I smiling at him telling him I’ll be there. Then shove to first note in my desk and read the other one over my science book.

HAHA! Nice fall I didn’t think you could fall forward UNDER your desk!


I glare at him half laughing at his comment.



end of part 4^^ part 5 in progress :D
What ever is in blue is the notes the guy was passing


HOW DARE YOU USE ME AS AN EXAMPLE FOR SARAH!? HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM NOT OBSESSIVE COMPULSIVE OVER BOOKS!!!!!!!!!! YOU MEAN EVIL BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM NOT! I AM NOT! I AM NOT! EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON. I LIKE BOOKS BUT I'M NOT OBSESSIVE!
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T______________T part 6 the thing with Chris has to be more slow or at least make it more, intense.
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yays i finally caught up!!^-^ me want part 6 too!!^-^
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