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Post Reply [FanFic] My "Kinpachi-Sensei" Fanfic
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same here!!
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OMG GIRLZ!!! i'm sooo happy that you liked it.... thanccies for the comments!!! waah *is totally touched*
ah here's the 2nd part:

Chapter 2:

“Ruka...” began Takeshi, but Mizushima-Sensei came into the room and he went back to his seat.
“So I'll be your teacher for maths also for this last year” he said
“Eh...... “ was the reaction of the students.
“What was that eh?”
“We wanna have a woman.... a hot one” some of the guys said.
“Or at least a GOOD looking man!” the girlz said.
“You want to tell me I'm not good looking?” he said with a smile on his face [as I took Mizushima-Sensei from Mizushima Hiro I think he's pretty good looking ^_~]
Ruka liked Mizushima-Sensei. He was miserable in maths but thanks to Mizushima-Sensei, he got pretty good marks last year.
“SHIZUKANI!!” shouted Mizushima-Sensei and began with the lesson.
Although Ruka really liked maths now, he kind of couldn't concentrate today. He had too many things in his head... he just couldn't concentrate...He thought about the new year coming, and nothing really changed...
There the bell rung and Ruka tried to forget his dark thoughts and took out his O-bento.
“Hey! Did Kai-san make you O-bento today?” Takeshi asked looking at the O-bento.
“Ya.. Aniki had time today so he made me one...” replied Ruka....
“Doesn't he have to go to work early?” asked Takeshi while pulling out his purse.
“Not today... you're buying again?” said Ruka with the mouth full of rice.
“Yap.... Oyaji gave me money today... what wonder...” replied Takeshi and went to buy some Onigiris.
“That poor kid” Ruka thought while eating his Tamagoyaki,”well... others would think I'm poor too if they would know...”
There Takeshi came back with sandwiches and coffee-milk.
“So what I wanted to tell you is that, as you sheem a bit dizzy, letsh go to Shibuya after schhol ok?” said Takeshi while biting off his sandwich.
“But is it ok with your Arubaito?” Ruka asked surprised.
“Yap, Oyaji said it's ok...even if he had some beer that time but well...” said Takeshi with a undefinable face. He had to work at the toy-shop of his dad almost everyday after school.
“We don't have homework yet right?” asked Takeshi
“No no we haven't.. and I mean in chemistry we won't get some either... I mean it's first day...”
“HOUJOU-SENPAI!” That was Tanaka Satoru standing at the door.
“Oh! Tanaka! come in don't worry!” Ruka shouted back. Tanaka was a Kouhai and admired Ruka somehow, even if Ruka had no clue why...
“Heysh Tanshaka!” said Takeshi with his mouth full of rice he stole from Ruka.
“Hello Okura-Senpai!” replied Tanaka and bowed.
“Ah! Takeshi! you took my rice!”
“It'sh ok ishn't it?” Takeshi said with a grin..
“Whatever” said Ruka and shook his head and sat down. “What do you want Tanaka?”
“I... eh... I wanted to ask if.. well I'm not that good in maths and.. you were good last year so..... I wanted to ask if you could be my tutor please!” he said and bowed.
“Of course I can if you're ok with me!” Ruka said surprised.
“Really?” Tanaka stood up and smiled towards Ruka. “Thank you very much Houjou-Senpai!”
“No problem...” And Tanaka returned to his class.
“You? A tutor?”said Takeshi
“Why not?... and you ate my rice!” Ruka said.
“I was still hungry and Oyaji didn't give me enough money...not that we have that...”
“Ok, ok.... hey I think we have to go to Chemistry now... C'mon let's go!” said Ruka packing his things...
After Chemistry school was over and the two set off to Shibuya. But they didn't get far..just when they went through the gate of the school Masato stood in front of them.
“I have to talk to you both, now” he said. Ruka hated that guy... his eyes were the eyes of devil, clever devil.
“So...” said Masato while he lead them away from the school “I hope you enjoyed the first day at school... Sakamoto-Sensei was very pleased about the present...” Masato had a complacent smile on his face.. “I so wanna punch him in the face...” Ruka thought but he knew it wouldn't be wise...
“What do ya want Suzuki?” asked Takeshi with an angry voice
“Takeshi!” warned Ruka
“You know it don't you, Ruka-kun, you better not mess with me...” and he was right. Masato's father was the big-boss of a huge company and Masato was his successor.
“What do you want from us Masato?” Ruka asked politely.
Masato smiled. It was that kind of smile for which Ruka hated this guy...It was the smile of trouble.

muha i love to make chinen a bad guy ^_^
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I have to be the first one to comment on this!!
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hehe so comment ^_^
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YAY!!
I've read it!!
you're really TALENTED!!
great translator
photo editor
in drawing
writer!!
GREAT EVERYTHING!!

more more more!! please!!

btw..
I should start memorizing their names here!!

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waaaaaaa
i need more!!!!!
[2nd person to comment xD hsj9392 beat me haha]
your soooo dam talented gurl!!

awesome translater and writer and drawing and fun and...
*keeps on talking on and on*

i should try to memorise their names as well D=
i have to scroll up and down to see ><;;
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hehe THANCCIES GIRLZ!! *almost cries...

sorry that the names make it so complicated .... xD

and because you made such nice comments here is PART 3!!!

Chapter 3:

“Ruka-kun... You know... I have an interesting thing for you... You're being bullied right? Of course I know who it is...”
“Of course you do!” Ruka thought...”You!” but he didn't say it...
“You know...if you would do some work for me I could make them stop... it's really an easy job...”
Ruka thought... and Takeshi was standing there, looking from Ruka to Masato and back...
“Masato, that's a nice offer but... I'll pass... I can live with it...” Ruka said with a smile on his face...
Masato wasn't smiling anymore... you could see the anger in his face... and then, without warning, he jumped to Ruka and grabbed his neck tie with a scary face...
“You do what I say!” Masato said.
“Forget it!”replied Ruka starring in Masato's eyes...
“Get off him!” Takeshi shouted and pulled Masato away from Ruka. Ruka made his tie correct.
“What are you doing?” asked Takeshi Masato”What's the matter with you?”
“You'll see Ruka-kun... you'll see” said Masato with his regained normal “polite” voice... and went..
“Hey, you're ok Ruka?” Takeshi asked
“Ya... ya I'm ok... gosh.. what was that?” asked Ruka
“I really don't know but.. you should be careful now... “
“Ya... c'mon let's go to Shibuya...” said Ruka
“Seriously? ok...” said Takeshi a bit surprised”Let's go!!”
In Shibuya they bought some clothes (Takeshi a new jeans and Ruka a wonderful new check-shirt [*_*]) and then they went to eat some crêpes. After that they said Goodbye and went home.
While going home, Ruka thought about what happened today at school or better after school.
“That's the first time Masato really did sth like that...” he thought ”I wonder what will happen now he's that mad at me...” but then, his cell rang (song: Garasu no Shounen by KinkiKids[I had to do that ^_^]). He looked at the display, it said “Aniki”
“Yo Aniki!” he said.
“Hey! Ruka are you on the way back home?”
“Ya... why?”
“Could you go to the next Conbini and by sth for us for dinner?”
“Sure... what would you like?”
“Oh, just grab sth out of the Cup-noodle section...”
“When are you coming home?”
“I'll try to come home as soon as possible ok? Don't worry, it won't get late...”
“Ok, bye then”
“Bye”
Ruka shut the phone... “He's still at work” he thought...”but I'm happy he finally got a job.”. Ruka's big brother finally got a job in a bank. He couldn't go to College because he had to somehow earn money, so that the two could live. Ruka's parents died 6 years ago...Since then Kai had to get them through. “They got killed...” he thought “Don't worry Mom, Dad I'll find that culprit and I swear I'll take revenge...”

hehe who will be the first to comment?
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MEEEEE!!! I'M FIRST!!
am i am i???
is someone else typing this before i am and i didnt load the page yet??
better type quickly!!

woo!! another amazing job by chika_pyon!!
*keeps on reading*
i'm reading your whole story again and again and saving them in microsoft word!!
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yes you are congrats!!!

and thx for the nice comment.... waah

i kinda wanted to make that "revenge"-thingy... muha makes ruka bad ^_^
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haha!!
but it makes it more interesting!! =D
keep up on the excellent job master!!
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me ! me ! lolz omg his parents got MUREDRED~ is yama chan gonna play detective again that would rock!!! XD
keep going chika-pyon there r loads of readers behind ... *points
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i will!!
muha another student
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blaue_lucifer wrote:

me ! me ! lolz omg his parents got MUREDRED~ is yama chan gonna play detective again that would rock!!! XD
keep going chika-pyon there r loads of readers behind ... *points


thanccies....
mayb he willbe a detective....
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awww! i wans't first...
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haha ^^;;
beat you~~~
i read fast~~ hahas
sorry though
make yama~chan a detective!!
i love him being a detective!!
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