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Post Reply [FanFic] My "Kinpachi-Sensei" Fanfic
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OMGosh!!
chika-pyon's an ANGEL!!
she's making everyone nice!!



you're exagerating hsj-chan!

and zero-yan... i don't know when i will complete it... kinpachi-sensei is supposed to be one year when it's a dorama so it'll be a long story... ^_^
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girl who lied*
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chika-pyon wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
chika-pyon's an ANGEL!!
she's making everyone nice!!



you're exagerating hsj-chan!

and zero-yan... i don't know when i will complete it... kinpachi-sensei is supposed to be one year when it's a dorama so it'll be a long story... ^_^


its all right!!
we'll wait one year for the whole thing!!!
my microsoft word will be big enough for all of it!! =DD
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hahaha!!

am I too much??
I think you deserve it!!

It'll be a long story??
cOoLness!!
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yaya!!
long story are kewl!!
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i hope i can have that much ideas.....^_^;;; well as i have to go now and i don't have the time to come on tomorrow i'll post the next part already....... have fun and i'll come back same time on tuesday oky? enjoy~

Chapter 4:

Luckily, next to their appartement there was a Conbini so Ruka bought coup-noodle for his brother and for himself some sandwiches and Nikuman. “We still have rice at home so I can eat that too”he thought.
When he arrived at home he started eating his Nikuman while he made himself some rice. When Ruka made himself ready to sleep Kai finally arrived.
“Aniki! Okaeri!”
“Tadaima Ruka...” said Kai tired.[note: Okaeri and Tadaima are things you say when you come home...it's like I'm home and welcome back!]
“Shall I make you the coup noodles and some rice?” Ruka asked while Kai hang his coat into the closet.
“That would be nice but didn't you want to go to bed?`” he asked
“No I'll make you sth to eat... are you ok?” asked Ruka because Kai seemed really tired...
“Yeah... I just need some sleep... it was a pretty hard day...but how was your first day at school?”
“Oh..It was ok...” Ruka replied... he didn't want Kai to be worried about him... he has enough to do anyway...
“You got any new teachers?”
“Ya.. a new head teacher... here you go Aniki...” said Ruka while handing over the cup-noodles to Kai.
“Oh thank you... and how is that teacher?”
“Like all the others too... nothing special...”
“Really?”
“Don't act like a parent Aniki...” said Ruka a bit annoyed cause of Kai's way of speaking..
“Sorry.. I must have been too long with adults today so I forgot how to speak with a kid...” Kai grinned and yawned at the same time.
“C'mon let's go to sleep... “said Kai and they both went to bed.
The next morning, they both got up at the same time, and as it was Ruka's turn today to make breakfast he made a simple western breakfast. After they finished eating, they both went to work/school.
In school Ruka first noticed that his shoes weren't there.”Not again...” he thought and searched a bit around and found them in another shelf. “What do they think is so funny about this...” he asked himself and walked to the classroom. Takeshi was there but it seemed like he was sleeping...
“Takeshi! TAKESHI!” and Takeshi finally woke up
“What? What's wrong?” he looked around like he was scared of sth.
“You're in school dude get hold of yourself” said Ruka with a smile on his face
“You're so not nice Ruka” Takeshi yawned”I was dreaming... I had a huge bowl of ice cream in front of me” and Takeshi got dreamy
“Wake up!” Ruka said and pat him on the head”Ah.. there he comes... our new 'head teacher'” and so Ruka went to his seat.
“Ohaiyo minna-san!” Kinpachi-Sensei said. “ So seems like everyone is here, I'll start with the class...”
but Ruka didn't listen. He looked around and noticed that Masato wasn't here... but Masato was never late... that was strange...seemed like he was ill and couldn't come or sth... “Poor Sakamoto-Sensei” Ruka thought “he has no idea that the half of the class doesn't listen...” Ruka watched the girlz all staring at Miyabi. And Takeshi? He was asleep again.”What did he do that he is so tired?” asked Ruka himself “I mean by just going to Shibuya you can't get that tired... or did he have to still help his father after the shop was even closed? That would be possible” he thought, as long he knew Takeshi's dad, he was an alcoholic. Or at least he was a weird person...hmm more then weird... “What did he do to Takeshi again?”Ruka was so absent-mindedly that he didn't notice that Kinpachi-Sensei called him for reading the page.
“Houjou”Houjou! HOUJOU RUKA!!!”
“Yes!!” Ruka was shocked... “What is it?”
“Would you pls continue reading?”
“Which page Sir?”
“That's what you should know by yourself”Kinpachi-Sensei said.
“I'm terribly sorry but I can not continue reading” Ruka said coldly. He didn't like this teacher... Not that he liked teachers that much...
“Now that's a pity... well then sit down. Okura, what about you?”
Takeshi was awake and kind of tried to ask the others which page they were.
Ruka was so relieved when the lesson was over. He stretched and went over to Takeshi who seemed to be ok now.
“So what were you thinking when Sakamoto called you?” Takeshi asked with a face as he would think Ruka was thinking about a girl “Who is it?” Takeshi kept asking.
“It was nothing special” Ruka said “and never a girl... Why are you so sleepy?” he asked.
“Nya, Oyaji made me work again... you know how Oyaji is... he drunk to many Sake yesterday...”
“Isn't that the normal thing?” Ruka asked
“Hmm yeah..” and then Ms. Verniac[don't ask me why I took this name...] entered and the English lesson began. The rest of the day nothing special happened and Ruka went back home. He made his homework and kind of tried to cook sth but as it didn't work, he ended up buying Udon at a stand at the other side of the street. Then Ruka's phone rang.
“Moshimoshi?” said Ruka.
“Is that Houjou Ruka-san?”said a woman's voice.
“Yes, that's me, why?” replied Ruka
“I'm Nakashi from Hadano-Clinic. You're brother was just brought in.”
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congrats!
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noooooooooo hsj9392 beat me!!
ehhh i wonder if zero~yan is typing right now!!!
faster comment!!!

omgosh!!! i love it!!
*adds to microsoft word*!!!

DONE!!
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thanccies!!!!
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yay!! this time 2nd!!
i hope i'm not 3rd next!! D=
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me last sobs!! T^T
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nice story!!
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thanccies.... hehe don't be sad zero-yan...
waah ahve to go... damm...
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zero~yan! your not last!!
we 3 are the top finalist forever!!!!
T_T bye pyon pyon *sobs*
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