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okay ladies i've open a new thread for you.
you dont need to quote each other just write in this thread!


any stories about CE our beloved idol will be appreciated here and we can post also our comments here! okay? Lets keep the other thread in their original topic, okay!

any kind of stories about them will be fun to read and of course its your own original stories.
actually i've already written a fanfic about them but its in other forum called CEFC (Chunella Fanatic Craze)
if i have time i'll post it here......


anyway if you'll update your story just post it here also pls dont quote it!!! or else it will hard to read the previous chapters!


thank you very much!!!

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ooohhh.. a thread. yipeee!
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okay my dears i will start posting some fanfics.

actually this is my second fanfic in CEFC, and i'd like to share it with you, AMAZING LOVE.
my very first fanfic is PERFECT COUPLE, and it has some words and content that is not suitable for children, so i decided to test AMAZING LOVE first here in cr.

reminders: this is a sole fanfiction, if you want to borrow this story somewhere else pls. asked my permission first. thank you verymuch!
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this fanfic is dedicated to all CE fans, and of course Chun and Ella.




AMAZING LOVE
author: JOY

CHAPTER 1

“Mr. Wu,” Ann said, the ever reliable secretary of Chun as she said in a tense voice on the other side of the line. “Your grandfather’s personal nurse called just now,” Chun’s heartbeat quickly accelerated, he had a bad premonition about this. “She says you need to go immediately to the hospital, I think it’s not good.”
“Okay, thank you Ann,” as he quickly cleared up his desk, and as he stands up he rapidly give instructions to his secretary. “And please cancel all my appointments today, and instruct the finance committee that they can proceed in the meeting without me, I’ll just review the minutes before I’ll make any approval.” He put down the phone and grabbed his suite jacket at the back of his leather chair, and quickly walkout in his office.

His grandfather, Wu Que Shan, the founder of Q&S Corp, was bedridden since two years ago, he had a fatal heart attack, and his condition has not improved since then. His grandfather is the only family Chun left, his parent died when he was just four years old, since then his world revolve around his grandfather, what he became now is what his grandfather made him, he cannot afford to loose him now. He loved him. He will do anything just to have another time with him. “Wait for me grandpa, I’m coming, don’t leave be behind” he prayed.

Chun was immune with the scent inside the hospital room. The site that greeted him inside Que Shan’s room filled him with anguish. IV tube was connected on his thin wrist and oxygen mask was cover in his mouth, Chun looked at the pale feature of his beloved grandfather. Suddenly the back of his eyes feels watery, for the first time in his entire life Chun felt helpless, he got everything in the world that he ever could ask for fortune, fame, respectability and women, but in this particular moment he thought that nothing or no one could ever help him.
“Grandpa it’s me,” he whispered softly, as he leaned forward and talked to him, he take his grandfather’s hand to his and hold him tightly as if he never wants to let go. Chun never shows his emotions to other person, only his beloved grandpa knows who Chun’s real personality.
The private nurse that was standing at the corner of the room unnoticed leaves quietly.
Wu Que Shan flicker his eyes in response, then slowly and tiredly open his eyes, it focuses on the young man beside him. “Chun, I-I think is about time….” As he cough in difficulty.
“No, don’t say that, grandpa I’ll do—“
“Son, it’s not that,” he gave away another belching cough, “I have something important to tell you.” He told him weakly. His tone was too low because of the oxygen mask.
“Grandpa don’t push yourself too much, you need to have plenty of rest, OK?”
“No I have to say this before I left this word,” as he open and close his eyes in effort to stay awake. “Chun I-I found someone…I finally found someone that is very important.”
“What are you talking about, grandpa?”
“I found her at last, I’ve been looking for her for about twenty-three years, I hired private investigator the first year that she’s missing, and just this morning my private investigator reported to me, it’s the best news I’ve ever received.”
She, Chun taught, what he is babbling about. “What do you mean she, grandpa? You’re talking nonsense, come on now go back to sleep and get plenty of rest.” Chun urged him.
“No, I need to explain.” He said firmly.
Chun’s attention was caught by the stubbornness of his voice, he know very well his grandfather, and he bet that whatever will he say is something important.
“Ok as you wish grandpa, I’ll listen to you. Now who is she, is she a family? As long as I can remember we don’t any family left.”
“She’s a family…well sort of…she …she….she’s your wife.” He said nervously.
Chun gaped open mouthed to his grandfather, he can’t assimilate what his grandfather was talking about, he was saying that he has a wife? With his memory surely he doesn’t remember getting married, in his twenty-eight years of his life he had no remembrance of being married, this is absurd, he thought. Maybe his grandfather’s mind is now being affected his with his illness, now he totally understands. Chun’s thought was diverted by Que Shan’s hissing breath. He prepares himself in the secret that he has been keeping for twenty-three years. “Chun listen to me carefully okay? What will I tell you now is all true,” as he prepare himself for a long talk.
“Fifty years ago, I met this man, he was the same age as mine, I was a poor fellow back then, I was hiking on the mountain, I was back from an errand that my mother ordered me, while I was walking in the woods, I didn’t notice that there was a big rattlesnake was ahead of me, my mind was filled of thoughts about the food that was waiting for me back home, as you know as a poor person food is a desperate necessity, anyway I didn’t notice it, until a gunshot near my feet exploded and a dead snake laying dead at my feet. That day I met my best friend, Sammy Chen, he was one of the biggest part of my life, I can’t count how many times he helped me. He was with me through thick and thin, until I built our company of course with his aid. Many years has passed we are still loyal to with each other until we are both have our families, we made a pact that we will let our grandchildren marry each other. Luckily for me I got you my only grandson, and as for him a healthy cute granddaughter. With our power and influence, we made you married at the very young age, you were four years old then, and she was only two, the day you got married was the happiest day of our life, we celebrated, finally! our family will become one! But that afternoon, your bride’s father got a job opportunity to work in Canada, and they need to migrate, we really feel disappointed that they need to separate from us, but we promised to keep in touch, and let you both children knows about your real situation. But fate played a cruel trick on us, after a few weeks that they are in Canada, her parents was killed in a car accident, and she was missing, my best friend and I went searching for her but we can’t find her. Sammy was really broken hearted that he died a year after, and I made a promise to him that I will continue to search for her. I hired private investigator to find her but they don’t have any lead where she is, I almost give up on her, everyday I was anxiously waiting for a good news, until it became months, and the months became years, and I told myself that maybe she didn’t survive, that she was already dead. Not until this morning that my private investigator completed their work as they confirmed that they absolutely found her. All this years I torture myself of not being able to help her, knowing that she doesn’t have any family, I imagined that she kept on wandering in the streets, or does she have a new family that that took care of her. But now I’ll be finally release from my misery knowing that you will be there for her, and you can now start to build a new family with her.” Que Shan finished his long story.
Chun simply stare at his grandfather, digesting every tiny tidbits that he heard, he finally recovered from his shock, and finally ask the first question that comes to his mind. “Why didn’t you tell me that I am married?”
“Because I really thought that she was dead, for twenty three year I have no idea whether she’s dead or not.”
“But at least you tell me about the situation, I mean my God!” he muttered under his breath. “I really taught this was all a dream, this was messier than your situation right now.”
“Son please do understand me, the moment Sammy and I made the decision that we will make our grandchildren married, we don’t have any regret, it was the happiest day of our life.” Que Shan suddenly remembers his best friend his black eyes turned teary, then He transfers his gaze to his grandson, his eyes imploring, pleading him to understand…..
“This is my last wish to you son, you need to bring her back, I want to see her before I die in peace…” Que Shan said tiredly, and said in a weak voice, “My lawyer got the full detail about her. Please, I- I want so much to meet her….. ” Then he closed his eyes and go back to sleep.
Chun studied his grandfather, wanting him to take back all his words, the secret that he had revealed is too much for him to take, his emotions are jumbled right now, just this afternoon he was worried to death about him and now he was been told that he was married and he needs to claim his wife. Wife he taught digesting word. Chun was not ready for the word “marriage” especially now that he has to take care of the company. He wants to enjoy his singlehood, now that his grandfather made an absurd announcement, he must find a way how to handle this situation. First he must talk to their family lawyer and confirm all this. He has no time to find his wife.

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wow....i like your story...ahehe....whats next? ahehehe
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first of all i'de like to thank crystalic dear. muakssss!!!
this one is dedicated for you!!!!


AMAZING LOVE
Author: JOY

CHAPTER 2

“Put you hands up in the air” the taller man in group instructed Chun as he follows his order. He can’t believe what’s happening in his life today, just this morning his grandfather told him an unbelievable secret that he kept for twenty-three years. And now he was being held captive by three unknown men, he was driving in this private road to avoid traffic and this is what he got. While driving awhile ago a black car blocked his way and stopped in the middle of the road, three gun men came down the car all wearing mask. Now three of those men are pointing their gun to him, “Is this the end of my life?” he thought. Chun was now quickly thinking of a strategy in order to survive.
“Please, if you want money, I’ll just give it to you. You can also take my car. Just put do—“
“Shut up!” the first man cut him.
“What do you want from me?” Chun asked.
The first man laugh was demonic, that Chun’s hair on the arms stands up, and chill run down his spine.
“Nothing, after we get all your money and the car,” he said in a menace tone “we’re going to blow up your brain” he finished softly.
Chun doesn’t want to panic; he must be calm and think about something else or anything….

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“Damn traffic!” Ella curse as she waited inside her car, she has been sitting there at the same spot for about 30 minutes, caught by the traffic jam. She was wearing plain white t-shirt, jeans and rubber shoes, she just finished her photo shoot session an hour ago. Ella is the photographer in their family oriented magazine. She takes photos about family; father, mother, grandfather, grandmother and children. Today their theme for their next issue is, ‘how to deal “problem child” in family’. Her assistants Candy and Dau, are all sick today so she carried all the heavy equipment and paraphernalia for her cameras, and she only got 3 hrs of sleep last night, because of the other projects that id due within this week, plus the children who are modeling for her are unbearable, they are too much naughty, they run around, play and fight all over the house when they are doing the photo shooting session, but remembering those little devils make Ella’s heart warm.
An orphan like her she longs for a real family, she remembers when she was little kid living at the orphanage, they said that she was found beside the trash bin, in Canada, An old English couple found her crying her heart out, she was just two years old back then. They took her inside their house, and immediately gave her warmth, even they want to keep her for themselves, they still gave up on her because they were too old, knowing that is impossible to take care of her. So the following morning they brought her to the orphanage house, then later on she was listed for waiting list for the adoption. After a year, an American couple happily adopted her but after a few months they gave her up again because she became very sick, they can’t afford to have unhealthy child, knowing that the first child that they had adopted died because of sickness, so they save themselves for another heart ache.
But a Taiwanese couple change her life, when she was five years old they adopted her and brought her with them to Taiwan and gave everything that she needs love, security, education and wealth but it was short lived, her poster parents died in tragic a plane crash. She was fourteen years old then, but they left their family company to her Beautiful Life magazine which they pioneered. At her young age she already took the responsibility in running their big household, only the family trusted and loyal friend Mr. Chang take the responsibility of taking care of their company because Ella was too young. She continues in her studies and discovered her exemplary skill in photography. She enhanced it by taking special lessons and studying abroad.
But even though she’s orphan she already have her two best friends since high school, Selina and Hebe. There were there at her back supporting her, Now Selina who majored in business finance, took over the presidency of the company because Mr. Chang is too old to handle it, she was also a shareholder in the company, because both of their family are long time friends. On the other hand Hebe was assign in Public Relations, with the three of them the Beautiful Life family oriented magazine was a hit.
Last year the birth of Selina and Jiro’s baby gain more supporter of the magazine with Ella’s photos of their twin babies, their competitors was left behind, with all their brains, talent, and strategy Beautiful life make it to success, gaining the number one stop in all the family oriented magazine, not only that, now that they are going globally their fame is still notching up.
Reminiscing at her past and realizing of what she became right now put a smile and warmth on her face, she’s thankful because very soon she’ll build her own family, her fiancé Leehom Wang, whom she met at Hebe’s birthday party, the two became fast friends and they hit off then the rest was history. They planned to get married after four months that’s why Ella was too much busy in her job, she already prepared and planed everything, excluding her work she joined some charity events and volunteering extra curricular activities in their town.

Now sitting on her old conventional car, feeling very exhausted after a long day of work and lack of sleep, she closed her eyes and lead her fore head in the stirring wheel and gave a long deep breath “Please… I want to go home now…” she prayed. When she opened her eyes the cars ahead of her was now moving sighing with breath of gratitude she put on her warning light and cut to the her right, bringing her steering wheel a big turn then checking on the cars on her right and left, and worked through the other side of the lane, she was aiming now on taking a short cut at the dark private road that she saw just now, even she knew that road is a little dangerous because seldom motorist used that road.
Now that the dark road is clear, she stepped on her accelerator and turn on the speed, because she knows that she was alone in that lane, smiling to herself she now imagined hot bubble bath was waiting for her at her house, closing her eyes from exhaustion she turned the steering wheel to her left not minding what she’s doing until didn’t realize the cars blocked at the other lane……
The four men were surprised of what they saw ahead of them, a car was charging in full speed ahead of them, this is what Chun needed, when the man in front of him diverted his attention to the coming car, Chun took the opportunity to lurch over him and tacked him on the ground punching him on the nose, while the other man point the gun to the fast approaching car and fired at it in front.

Ella eyes widen with shock and a scream of terror escape from her throat, as she ducked on the steering wheel in order to escape from the gun shot that was aiming for her, she didn’t notice that her car was driving wildly now, going straight at the other gun man hitting him off the ground, and the car bulge up and down because of the body trapped under it. The side of Ella’s forehead was bleeding now she didn’t notice that she bump her head inside her compartment, until the car hit the side shoulder of the road going though and hitting the post lamp.
While Chun was struggling with the other gun man, the force that hit the car made Ella crawled out of her smoking car, disoriented as she slowly fell on the ground, then she saw a man fighting with the masked man with deadly skills and she saw on her hazy eyes that the other masked man aimed his gun to at the tall man, who is still fighting with the other bad guy, instinctively she get the gun in front of her lying on the ground and closed her eyes in effort and fired aimlessly at the bad masked man….. it hit the bad guy and fell over the ground with a heavy thud, while Chun possessed the gun of the last man surviving and directly pointing at him, the masked man put his hands in the air, surrendering at Chun now.
“Don’t move an inch!” Chun warned in a deadly tone, “Or I’ll blow your sorry brain.” He said sarcastically as he borrowed his words from him awhile ago.
Chun slowly took a stepped backward, still pointing at the masked man, while he checked at his back for the body lying at the ground, the masked man tried to escaped from Chun by running, Chun fired at his leg, intending to wound him, he still need him for the police, the man scream in pain stopped a little bit, but still continue running in a limping manner.
Chun ignored him and focus his attention to his savior, he fainted Chun taught himself as he search for his mobile in his suit jacket and dialed the emergency number and called the ambulance for help. Chun taught Ella was a man because of her short hair and because it was dark, he didn’t notice her very well. He turned her over her back and felt a liquid seeping down her forehead, it was blood. He immediately got his handkerchief and put a pressure on her bleeding forehead. Then he run back at his car and get another spare towel at the back of his compartment then, quickly dressed her wound, then he rapidly checked for broken bones, feeling it he started from her feet going up to her legs still going higher to her thighs and hips to her waist then to her stomach….
Ella is now regaining consciousness, and she can feel that somebody hand are intimately feeling her body, through her foggy brain, she not once before other people has the liberty of touching her not even her fiancé, she slowly opened her eyes and moaned.
“Welcome back, shorty” Chun teased him, he taught he was a teenager, he can’t believe that this short young man saved him from the bad guys.
Ella focuses her sight to the most handsome man she had ever seen of course next to her fiancé she almost caught her breath because of this man, now oblivious of what he was doing to her right now.
“Stay still.” He ordered as he carries on of what he is doing. She was about to say something to him when finally his hands encounter her breast. “Aiyo!” Ella exclaimed as she leaned forward in shocked then crossed her arms around it when his hand touched her breast. Chun immediately took back his hand as if he was burned.
“You’re a girl!” he said in an accusing tone.
“I can’t help it!” she answered back putting her chip up.
Chun finally comprehend their absurd situation, slowly his shoulder began to shake with laughter, and slowly shouted out with laughter, because of this contagious laughter, and the hilarious situation that they in right now Ella began to join him in hilarity.

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wow! nice. haha. "your a girl" lolz. that made me laugh. haha :]] update soon. xxD or is this in CEFC already? xoxox.
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wow! nice. haha. "your a girl" lolz. that made me laugh. haha :]] update soon. xxD or is this in CEFC already? xoxox.


yes i post it in cefc, this story is already finished...i'm currently working on my 3rd fanfic....
bty this one has 22 chapters i think???
i'll update soon okay?
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mixcieaicie wrote:

wow! nice. haha. "your a girl" lolz. that made me laugh. haha :]] update soon. xxD or is this in CEFC already? xoxox.


yes i post it in cefc, this story is already finished...i'm currently working on my 3rd fanfic....
bty this one has 22 chapters i think???
i'll update soon okay?
thanks for reading my dear!!!!
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your welcome. your story is really interesting. haha. your story is really worth my time reading.xxD o.O
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hello here is the next chapter.

this one is dedicated to mixcieaice

AMAZING LOVE
Author: Joy

CHAPTER 3

Ella wiped the tears at the side of her eyes with the back of her palms while still laughing with Chun, her stomach was aching with mirth and shoulders still shaking. Chun never felt like this before in his entire life, he is forever serious, all the things that he does with sobriety, he strongly believes that being happy-go-lucky make you not a true man, now joining her with hilarity feels exceptional and foreign….
Suddenly Ella stop laughing when she glance at the mask man that was died, laying at the ground with a pool of blood, her teary eyes widen with shock that she can’t control, she feel nauseous and sick after seeing the lifeless eyes that staring into space. She covered her mouth using her hands feeling dizzy for the second time and she begins cry, slowly then she began to weep, closing her eyes and her shoulders began to shake again this time with mixed feeling of aguish and grief-stricken, she can’t calm her emotions.
Chun was dumb struck one moment this girl was laughing hysterically and the next thing he know she was weeping her hearts out. Chun awkwardly pat her back in order to console and calm her emotions and said uncertainty “Why, what’s the matter is there something wrong?”
She bite her lower lips to stop it from shaking and said with difficulty, “I-I just killed a person,” she cried, her chest and shoulder’s heaving “I- I didn’t mean to kill him!” Fully covering her face with her hands and continued, “I swear I didn’t. I just want to stop him from hurting you.”
Chun’s chest tightened with unfamiliar emotion and his throat constricted, he can’t take it anymore, he swiftly gathered her in his arms with stunning force, and consoled her.
“Shhhh, don’t cry now, please it’s my entire fault blame it on me….” Rubbing his right hand up and down her back trying to calm her down, she is still shaking with emotion.
“I didn’t intend to hurt him I just wanted to warn him.” She whispered shakily.
“Please stop it!” Chun said in force. Holding her more tightly like squeezing the breath out of her, then he begins to rocked her like calming a scared child at the same time he began to massage the back of her head gently.
“Thank you for saving my life.” He whispered, “if you didn’t come tonight, I’ll probably laying down there right this moment,” he explained “I’ll forever be indebted my life to you.”
After a few minutes his shirt was soaking wet now, Ella now doze in his arms in tiredness, because of this very exhausting event, Ella went straight to sleep. After a while the police and ambulance came to the scene, Chun personally carried her inside the ambulance and went down again outside the vehicle and report to the police what happened. The medium built officer that Chun was conversing with said “Mr. Wu your is presence is highly needed in the police station to get your full statement you must come with us now.”
“But I need to see her to the hospital is she is okay,” referring to Ella. With all the things that had happened he forgot to ask her name. “Damn! I don’t even know the name of the one who saves me.” He thought. “Moron!” he told himself.
“It’ll be alright Mr. Wu, some of my men will take care of her.” The officer interjected, “don’t worry too much about her, we will make sure of her safety.” He promised to Chun.
He hesitated for a while and made a decision. After he will go in the police station he will drop by the hospital to see her, after that we will also see the situation of his grandfather. He just needed to settle this matter first. After giving the ambulance with one last look, he walked down straight in the police car and sit at the back of it.

At the police station Chun gave a detailed picture of what happened in that incident, he told the police officer that was getting his statement that he thinks that it’s not just plain robbery, somebody wants to kill him in purpose, but the officers thinks that the robbers are just plain psycho that why they want to kill him, the other criminals that was killed was identified they are wanted by the authorities in the case of robbery that’s why the police insisted that it was plain robbery.
A man in a suit walked swiftly inside the office where Chun was sitting in front of the officer’s desk. He came near Chun and asked. “What happened to you, I came here as soon as I heard the news.” He brow fur with concern.
Lu Dong Hui, the right hand of his grandfather was as ten years younger than his grandfather, his around 5’4 feet and round robust man, he has been with his grandfather when Chun was still 10 years old. He also acted as the lawyer of the family. His grandfather trusted him, he managed all the important and confidential documents of his grandfather, actually Chun treats him like his second grandfather than a family lawyer.
“Uncle Dong Hui, don’t worry too much for me I’m fine now.” Chun explained to him.
Dong Hui inspected Chun more closely, and saw a swollen bruise at the side of his mouth, “Are you sure that you’re fine, I think you still need to go and see the doctor”
Dong Hui insisted, he has no family also that why he treats Chun’s like his own son.
“No, uncle I’m comple—“ then he remember the girl that saved him, he told himself that he will just stay at the station for just half an hour then he will go to the hospital to go and check her.
“Uncle I think we need to go to the hospital,” he said and standing up in his seat and excused himself at the police officer. “I want you to meet someone special” he whispered his mouth gave a little smile when he thinks about her, his feelings towards her is really amiable.
“Hey why you have a special look on your face, Chun?” dong Hui asked, “It is because you have met your wife?” he teased with a cheeky smile on his face.
The Chun remembered what his grandfather told him this morning, he mentally shake his head and asked himself “why my life is so complicated?”
“I already know that your grandpa told you already, actually he instructed me to see you this evening, he asked me before he told you the whole truth.”
Chun paused at the door and he looked beside Dong. “You knew this all along? Didn’t you.” It was a statement not a question.
“Of course son, I know it long time ago, I just made a promise to your grandpa that I will not tell you unless we found her, and yesterday was a great news to bear.”
“But, you should at least give me a hint that—“
“Ok, stop it already.” Dong cut him and continued “I was just teasing you that you met your wife, and besides you have no idea of what she seem to be like, I’m the only one who knew her beside the private investigators and your grandfather.
“Ok, ok, could we just change the topic please.” Chun begged with a sarcastic tone. “I don’t want to spoil my mood, everything that happens to me today is too much too handle.”
“Why, why, Chun this is the first time I heard you complain, all your life you’ve been serious and anything that you did you just came out to be the winner. You can handle any difficult situation.” Then he remembers “Did you know what is your nickname in the business world…. They called you Mr. Iron Man.” He said with emphasis.
Every one wants a piece of you Mr. Wu Chun, you’re handsome, intelligent, sophisticated and rich! When the moment that you took over your grandfather’s company very women in this country wants you to be their husband, you are the most sought after bachelor in this country, and men envy you, some of them respected you. But you know it’s a good thing that you are already married. So whoever you fancy with just forget about her and let’s start looking for your wife.”

At the emergency room, Ella was lying down at one of the bed with the curtains separates her and the other patients, her wound was now dressed properly, and she can hear voices speaking at the other side of the curtain, at first she can’t understand what they were saying but now the voices seems familiar.
Leehom and Hebe are talking to one of the nurse; they came running at the emergency room.
“Excuse me miss, where is your patient that named Ms. Ella Chen.” Leehom asked the station nurse.
The nurse check the name list and shook her head, “I’m sorry sir but there is no one registered Ella Chen here.”
Before Leehom answered back her, Hebe but in and asked again “Miss I think she was involve in car crash accident and robbery?” Hebe said in a pleading voice.
“Oh, that case actually she was ok now, just resting a bit, she’s in the third bed.”
“Thank you, nurse.” Both of then said at the same time, turning around both of then walked swiftly towards the bed that the nurse instructed, they opened the curtain and saw Ella lying on her side, then Leehom quickly go on her side and hug her.
“What happened to you honey?” he asked in concern, “are you okay now?” inspecting her face holding both side of her shoulders.
“I’m fine now I think.” Ella tried to joked.
“My God! Ella” Hebe interjected, “We thought something happened really dreadful to you.” Giving her friend a hug while Leehom let go of her. “Selina was so worried, she wants to come with us here in the hospital, but one of her twins has a slight fever and we told her to just stay put there and we will just tell her about your condition.”
“I’m really fine now, Hebe.” She assured her, she felt like crying again for all the concern that they are showing to her. “Thank you, for coming here Hebe, and say thank you also for Selina for me,” she said reverently.
“Ok how about me?” Leehom tried to say in a hurt tone.
Ella laughed softly, took his hands and held it. “Of course how can I forget you, your special to me also.” Then she kissed his cheeks and said. “Thank you for being here, I know that you are quite busy in your work.”
“How could I do that, honey? Of course you are my priority, my career is just secondary.”
“No don’t honey, your spoiling me” Ella teased softly.
Hebe was just observing the two in silence, then she looked away pretending to look at the surrounding, but deep inside her something is tugging her heart. It is a little bit painful, she tried to ignore it.
Ever since Leehom and Ella starts dating, she seldom go together with them unlike before when they are still all friends she loves hanging out with them all the time. She remembers the night that they announced that they are a couple, Hebe was shocked and she recovers herself quickly and congratulate them happily giving them an over bright smile. But she knew deep inside that she felt like one part of her life is dying, but because Ella was one of her best friend and she loved her so much like a real sister, and Leehom too.
Hebe was in love with Leehom ever since they were small, she and Leehom, were childhood friends, he was their neighbor, and three years senior to her. They are like buddies, they played together and hang out together, actually when she enters collage she went to the same university with him just to be near him, but Leehom treats her like a little sister and best friend, he never saw her in different aspect. Leehom worked aboard after graduating and left her. He came back again after six years, Hebe was very excited when he came back, in fact it was the happiest moment of her life because he came back on her birthday, and it was the greatest gift of all! She introduced her to Selina and Ella. She was so thrilled to tell the girls about him especially Ella, because Selina was so busy with her newly married life, but she contained herself first because she wanted it to be a surprise. The following day Leehom called on the phone and invited her for lunch the next day. Hebe was so agitated that she tried all her dresses in the closet and spent the day in front of the mirror. She fixed herself carefully just to looked her best, this is what she is waiting for all her life, finally she will date Leehom, not friendly date but a real date, she thought, after all these year he will a see Hebe as a different person. And she ready to do that.
Leehom was waiting at the restaurant when she came, clad in yellow v-neck blouse and three-fourth hugging pants and sexy high heeled shoes, she feels like a young celebrity star, some of the men sitting at the restaurant stopped and stare at her as she passed by them and her nervousness was quickly disappearing and she gained more and more confidence.
Leehom greeted her with a warm smile and a bear hug, and then they sat down on their seats.
“Wow. Hebe! I didn’t recognize you at all; I thought there was a celebrity coming towards me.” He complimented.
Hebe’s cheeks redden with a mixture of embarrassment, shyness and bliss. She can’t believe that he says those words to her, she feels like she was in heaven right now at this very moment.
“Thank you” she said shyly bowing her head and staring at her lap, then she hastily looked at him, and she caught her breath, he looked more handsome than before, dress in casual three-fourths polo shirt and dark pants, she felt like melting on the spot. This instant is like a dream that she doesn’t want to wake up, she want to stay forever like this. They ordered their food and talked cheerfully about their different lives, they catch up stories from the last six years. After dessert, while drinking coffee, Leehom nervously cleared his throat to begin speaking. “Umm, Hebe… I need to tell you something.” He said hesitantly. “This is it!” Hebe thought merrily, but she kept her facial expression neutral so she will not be that obvious. “Yes?”
“Actually, I have other motives why I invited you to lunch today.” Giving his most handsome smile, that made Hebe’s heart accelerated, she bite her lower lips to keep her smile, she was about to burst in happiness. “Well, I think it’s obvious, because you never, invited me for lunch alone, it’s either we go out with some friends. Or you have a very big favor to asked me that’s why you invited me for lunch.” She babble, and laughing at her joke.
“Oh, Hebe, how did you know that?” Leehom said eagerly, grinning from ear to ear
“Know what?” she asked in confusion.
“Know that I’ll ask you a very huge favor.”
“What possibly ‘huge favor’ you are asking me?”
“I just want to ask you, if you could help be to be closer to Ella”
“To Ella?” she asked again, she feels something is not right. “You mean my friend Ella?”
“Yes, Ella Chen, your friend that you introduced me on your birthday party, the ‘well-known’ photographer here in Taiwan.”
“Why?”
“Because, I think I like her.”
From that very second she really wanted to disappeared, to sink on the spot! Her heart is breaking like a million of pieces. It was so painful. But she kept her cool, she kept her cool while he was driving her back to her house she kept her cool while she is waving goodbye at him at her doorstep, but she didn’t kept her cool the moment she closed her door inside her house, she slowly sank down the behind the door and wept….
Hebe was so engross thinking of her pass that she didn’t hear Ella was talking to her.
“What?” she snapped back to reality.
“I’m asking you if you are alright?” Ella inquired in concern. “You really seems to be the one here in the bed, instead of me, you don’t looked so well.”
“No I’m alright.” Not wanting to glance at Leehom because she was near in betraying her emotions. Then suddenly two men materialized beside her, a tall handsome young man and medium robust old man.
“Hi.” The younger man greeted Ella, “I can see now that you are okay”
“Yes, thank you.” Ella said with a smile.
“I was really rude of me to leave you all alone here in the hospital after what you did to me, I apologize.”
“No it’s okay, my fiancé and best friend came here to get me.” Gesturing to Leehom and Hebe. Chun shook the hand of Hebe and then Leehom, he didn’t notice that his uncle Lu Dong Hui’s mouth was gaping open his eyes widen with shock.
“Uncle Dong,” addressing his uncle, not bothering to glance at him because he was too busy looking at Ella. “This the person that I’m talking about my—“
“OH MY GOD!” Uncle Dong exclaimed, “You found her!” his face turning pale, he’s like having a heart attack.
“Yes, I just told you a while ago that we can find her here at the hospital, my—“
“Yes, I know” he cut him, “You have found you’re wife!”
“HIS WHAT?” three persons said in chorus.

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AMAZING LOVE
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CHAPTER 4

“My what?” Chun exclaimed as he turned his full attention to his uncle Dong.
Still not over with his shock, Lu Dong Hui stood on the same spot and gaped open mouthed at Ella, pointing at her.
“Uncle Dong?” Chun called him.
When he didn’t answer, Chun started to wave his right hand in front of his shocked face, and when there is still no reaction, Chun put his both hands on his chubby shoulders and began shaking him. “Uncle Dong, are you alright?” he was starting to worry now.
Watching them, the three people begins to view with amusement of the hilarious scene in front of their eyes, Hebe’s shoulder began to shake as she put her hand in her mouth to control her giggle, while Leehom has a silly grin on his face. Only Ella has not feeling good about this, her intuition was bothering her.
Lu Dong Hui recovered from his state shock and begins to talk rapidly and babble incoherently “Chun, son, it’s her! Your missing wife, the one your grandfather was looking for over the last 23 years. That’s why I intended to see this evening because your grandpa wants you to know the details about her, but suddenly because of this night’s incident, fate finally brought you up together. MY GOD! I can’t believe this, we don’t have to find her and tell everything, she’s here right in front of our eyes! Now we have to tell your grandpa and have a nice celebration and then both of you can have your honeymo—“
“Hold it right there, Uncle Dong!” Chun interrupted him, “Tighten up your reins” then looking at the three spectators, he finally managed a fake smile and excused himself,
“I apologize for that everyone, my uncle is quite old and he doesn’t really know what he is talking about.” Turning to his uncle, he took a grip of his arms intending to drag him out side the room, if he don’t stop chatting. “If you must excuse us, we will be leaving now.” He shot a warning stare at uncle. They started to walk away then he quickly remembered one thing, he stopped and looked back at Ella, “Once again I’m so dim witted! I didn’t even know the name of my “knight in shining armor”” he joked rolling his eyes.
“Damn! He look so adorable.” Ella thought, smiling, Ella introduced herself properly.
“I’m Ella Chen, and as you know awhile ago, this is my best friend Hebe,” introducing her, “and her best friend also, which by the way my fiancé Leehom Wang.” She finished.
Upon hearing this, uncle Dong started to narrate again his story. “See I told you it’s her, she’s Ella Chen, but her real name is Jia Hua she was very fortunate that her family name is the same because her adoptive parent, because they were relatives but not close one, and—“
“What did you just say?” Ella asked immediately leaning forward in a sitting position, her happy expression changed from anxiety, finally it dawn to her what was this old man was saying to her, her curiosity is on high right now, she want to asked some questions and need to get an answer.
“Oh no, sorry I think we have to go now, and you need rest for this exhausting event maybe we can talk some other time perhaps.” Chun stated firmly. But Ella doesn’t want to withdraw, she had a feeling that this old man knew something about her and, she needs answers right now.
“No,” shaking her head in emphasis, “I insist! And I have the right to know what he is talking about, and I mean RIGHT NOW!” she demanded fiercely.
Chun observe her, scrutinizing, his left brows shoot up and put his hand on his chin finger tapping, “Hmmm, does he really needs to tell her the truth? Well he doesn’t want to have another heart attack patient under his care. But based on his observation this lady is courageous she can face up her battle anytime, and beside she has the right to know what is going on, I mean she just saved my life, why not and…” Chun inspected her from her face down her waist, because she is sitting right now on the bed, that’s why he can’t look at her properly. “So this is my wife…. Hmmm not bad. Not bad he amended himself, actually if you stare at her she’s an exceptional beauty, not wearing make up and dressed only with simple clothes, she totally awesome, it’s not that she’s my‘wife’ that why I’m biased…”
“Excuse me, are you done in inspecting me?” Ella asked hauntingly crossing her arms under her chest.
“Yes buddy, I think you’re out of your line. And to refresh your memory, this is my fiancée your’re ogling, and I think you forget that I’m standing beside her.” He shot Chun a dagger look.
A while ago Chun was beginning to like her “fiancé but now that feeling was beginning to disappear.
“Are you sure you want to hear this?” addressing to Ella.
“Yes.” Ella answered weakly.
“Okay,” Chun said making a rash decision “since you’re begging for the truth, I’ll give it to you.” But Chun gave out a condition before he started “ I want everyone to listen to me until the end of the my anecdote, I don’t want anyone interrupting me, and if you have any question, save it till the end, I’ll just allow my uncle to add some information, that I’ll be missing.” He finished.
“But—“ Leehom started to protest.
“Is that clear?” Chun repeated.
Hebe just hold Leehom’s arm in order to silence him, while Ella just nodded obediently.
Seeing that everyone is ready Chun began to narrate his story. “Fifty years ago my grandfather met a man that saved his life…..”
Chun told them everything of how their grandparents met, about their silly wedding, then finally how Ella got lost from them, of how Ella’s life when she was an orphan looking for someone to take care of her……
After finishing the story, Ella digested every word that she hears, she kept it inside her heart, then suddenly her eyes began to water, tears are streaming down her cheeks hastily, then her shoulders started to rock. Wiping her torrent tears, she make a loud sniff, Upon hearing this Leehom glanced at her, feeling very angry at Chun then transfer his irate eyes to Chun, immediately he jump out of his place intending to throw a punch on Chun, but Hebe quickly stopped her releasing a small scream, the force of Leehom’s strength dragged Hebe on her feet. “Stop it!” Hebe pleaded, she also started to cry. While on the other side, Uncle Dong quickly shields himself in front of Chun, his hands gesturing for a fight, his bouncing up and down imitating a professional boxer. “Don’t start it young man, even I’m a respected fellow I’ll do anything to protect Chun.” He warned.
If the situation is not that serious Chun would definitely laugh aloud. But seeing Ella’s distress, he feels somewhat awful.
“Ella,” Leehom said looking back at her, “Don’t believe of anything this crazy man is saying, it’s absurd, and it’s all lies.”
“No, Chun is not a liar; we have the evidence that all he said was the truth.” Defense Uncle Dong.
“I-I believe in him!” Ella whispered fervently.
“What did just say?” Leehom said carefully.
“I said,” taking a deep breath, she repeated again. “I believe in him!” she cried, then continues. “No body knew that was adopted, not one soul knew it! Even Selina and Hebe, nor you Leehom.”
Hebe and Leehom was shock of what they heard from Ella, they went back at her side, intending to comfort her.
“I’m so sorry to keep it from you guys, I just don’t want everyone of you feeling sorry for me the moment you knew that I’m adopted. Hebe and Selina has been there for me ever since my foster parents died, you girls has a done a great job in being with me at all times not leaving me behind, we are closer that real sisters, and I’m grateful for always standing behind me. I don’t want you to have another burden, and I don’t want you to feel weird about me.” She paused for a while collecting more breath, “Then you came Leehom, I wanted to confess to you before we get married but I’m still not yet ready, and I want to forget my pass, and build a new future.” Then she apologized to him, begging him to understand. “I’m really sorry I kept it from you, please understand me, and forgive me.” She said in tears.
Suddenly Chun wants to go beside her and comfort her, he wants to take all the pain away from her, he desires to hold her, and thank her for believing her. The foreign feeling of tenderness is invading his emotions again; he never felt anything like this except from his grandfather. But even though she is his wife, she has a fiancé that she loves, and he doesn’t want to ruin their happiness, he doesn’t want to be the third party. But in legal rights, Ella belongs to him….
“It’s alright honey, we forgive you.” Leehom console her, “Don’t worry too much, honey we are all here now, I’m here.”
Hebe take a look at Chun and for the first time she voice her opinion.
“Now that Ella believes in you, that all you said was true, what will you do?” she asked him. “I mean you legally married right?”
Before Chun could answered her, Leehom butt in “If you are legally married, then they must get a divorce. That’s the only possible solution in this circumstance.”
“I object!” Uncle Dong said in almost shout. “You can’t possibly suggest that young man, Chun has the righ—“
“Uncle please leaved my decision to me.” Chun stopped him, then he give his full attention again to Ella and said, “I’m so sorry for the way I deliver the bad news to you I don’t want any complication in your life right now, but you have the right to know the truth also, because sooner or later, my grandpa wanted to see you so, you will definitely have to know the truth.” He apologizes again. “We’d better to be going right now, it’s getting late, and besides you need to get a rest, I’ll just call you tomorrow.”
“Hey, are you still intending to call her?” Lehoom asked, “I think you better cut the communication with her, unless it’s about divorce, were definitely consulting our lawyer about it, so you won’t disturbed us anymore, you have enough for doing that in one day.” Leehom warn him stonily.
“You have no rights, to tell me what to do Mr. Wang.” Chun answered his sarcastically also giving him a warning look.
Leehom reacted, but Ella stopped him my holding his arms, pleading “Please Leehom, let’s leave it for a while, don’t make any scandal here in the hospital.” She wants to prevent the tension that is building inside this small cubicle.
“You’re really lucky Mr. Wu, Ella just save you again, but don’t forget that I will not give away Ella from you, MARK. MY. WORD.” Pointing his finger on him.

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AMAZING LOVE
author: Joy

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CHAPTER 5

Chun and Ella met at the Starbucks coffee shop the following afternoon, wearing a simple green blouse that hugged her body and white shorts with her favorite Nike shoes, Ella looked like a giddy teenager, she doesn’t look a professional photographer at all, Chun thought. While Chun was still dressed with his office attire, but his neck tie was already loosen and the long sleeves of his shirt was folded until above his elbows, and he really looked handsome. Ella artist mind flooded with imagination, she can picture him wearing a simple casual shirt and pants together with the right accessories, he can be considered as one of the top model in the industry.
Both greeted each other with a nod as Chun gestured Ella to take a seat. When Ella was seated, Chun excused himself as he takes their orders, then immediately when back to his seat. Silence deafen the atmosphere, Chun just observed Ella, wanting her to say something first, but Ella don’t know what to say, because his presence was disturbing her, staring at her hands and observing the design on the table, she fidgeted over the table napkins. For the first time in Ella’s life she lost her confidence.
Ella was confident person, all the things she does, from her profession to her relationship with her clients, colleague, and employees, she deals with them with poise and dignity, but now she suddenly feels….shy……
Biting her lower lips, her traveled her eyes from his chest, slowly going up at his neck….to his lips…..until she collided his dark amusing smiling eyes that was watching her intently, her whole body became warm, and she immediately looked away, pretending to that she doesn’t see his reaction towards her. Then she looked back at him and gave him a shy smile. Damn! What’s with him that I can’t compose myself. She asked herself, she was not like this with Leehom, they were very comfortable with each other, never had an awkward moment, even in their first date.
Chun feeling that Ella was not comfortable, he made the first move to speak. But he notice the plaster at the side of her forehead hiding behind her bangs, it was the result of the injury last night.
“I can’t thank you enough for what you’ve done for me last night.”
“That was nothing,” shaking her head in emphasis. “Anyone could do that.”
“Not anyone, from our society today, it’s very hard to find some one who would risk their life with a total stranger.”
“Okay if you said so… but if you could please dropped the topic because I don’t want to remember that horrid scene last night.” She pleaded.
“Okay,” he agreed, and then asked her. “So can I discuss a new topic with you, hope the topic that we’ll be discussing will be okay with you.”
“Any topic will be fine.” She responded. As the waiter walked at their table bringing their orders and put a steaming mug of cappuccino and blueberry cheese cake, after they thanked the waiter. Ella put her attention back to Chun. “So, what topic do you want to discuss?” as she took a sip of her coffee.
“How about our marriage?” Chun asked.
Ella choked at her coffee; she almost spit it out at Chun’s face. She quickly put down her mug as, wipe her mouth with tissue while still coughing.
“Excuse me? Are you trying to make me laugh?”
“Do you think I’m joking here?” he said in an irritated tone.
“How can that be possible, I’m engage? Remember, and I’ll be married after six months!” she said in a nervous laugh.
“And how can that be possible?” he asked her, his voice changing from irritation to amusement. “You still want to get married but you are still married…..to me.” He reminded her.
“Don’t make me laugh, this is silly!”
“I’m not trying to make you laugh.” He said his expressions turned sober.
Ella cleared her throat when Chun’s expression became serious; she tries to talk their impossible situation.
“Okay,” she said in serious tone, she wants to settle this situation smoothly, “Let’s us digest our present circumstances, and make a solution out of this,” she paused then continued “First of all, I’m really getting married to my fiancé, we have decided it few months ago and we are very much happy, and that will happen in less than six months, and now, you came to my life out of nowhere, I saved your butt from being salvage, then miraculously uncovered my past, and discovered that I’m married long time ago and you’re my legal “husband” that gives a complication on my relationship with my future husband!” she exclaimed breathlessly, then added, “Look, you’re a nice person,” she said benevolently, she doesn’t want to hurt his feelings, after all his been a real gentleman ever since they met. “And I’ve decided to be your friend if not wife” she finished.

For the second time around Chun studied her face, her beauty was quite unique; Chun likes his girls’ long haired, conservative, and reserve type. But with her everything was opposite, she was open minded, not afraid to say on what’s on her mind, plus she’s honest, candid, kind and unselfish, ready to help others who needs help, in his views some girls are pretentious, hypocrite and hollow. She never knew a girl like her. At first glance at her she look very much ordinary, but once you gave you’re time looking at her she is really beautiful, from her brown almond eyes to her smooth fair skin of her face to her body, to her kissable soft pinkish mouth that has no trace of lipstick, nor make up she was a natural beauty and has a nice figure. He just saw her white legs a while ago…. His thoughts are running wild now. He mentally shakes his head. He glanced at her again, he can’t help himself to stare at her, and her features were refreshing. Chun thought, and this lady right in front of him was his… his wife, it’s his for taking. Why not? He asked himself; after all she was his legal wife.
“Is there something on my shoulders?” she asked, snapping Chun back to reality
“Whatever is it,” she joked, “I bet It’ll be dead by now, because the way you stare at it, it’s frightening” she shivered.
“No, I’m sorry my thoughts were flying.” He apologizes. What is happening to me? He asked himself, I can’t be attracted to her! For God sake, she’s getting married! He reminded himself.
“Did you hear what did I said awhile ago?” she asked frowning and pouting her lips.
Gosh he can’t help staring at her lips, she’s so adorable! He thought. To divert his attention he quickly grabbed his coffee with too much force to drink, that its content spilled at his face and shirt. Chun cursed soundly, putting down his coffee. While Ella started to laugh at him, Chun glance at her intending to scold her, but the moment he saw her reaction, he stared to join her in amusement.
Ella still laughing grabbed a tissue and help him wiped the coffee stain at his shirt. “You still have the nerve to laugh at me huh?” Chun said in amused tone, while Ella laugh harder when she saw his mouth filled with coffee cream, automatically she wiped it with her tissue as if they were very familiar with each other. The moment her fingers touch his mouth, Chun stopped laughing and caught his breath and stare at her. Oblivious to what she is doing to him, Ella kept busy by wiping the corner of Chun’s mouth until she notice that something was very wrong…… Ella paused of what she was doing, at the same time stared at him also, she feels like she’s being hypnotized by an unknown force….
She cleared her throat, slowly put down her hand and looked away.
After a few minutes of silence, Ella gathered up all her courage and asks him a question. “Can I ask you a very small favor, if you could?”
“What is that?”
“Since that we are legally married, can I asked for a divorce?” she said carefully, “You see the grounds are valid, we never met before, we never lived together in the same house, and you know we never consummated our wedding.” When she said those few last words she feels like an innocent school girl blushing. Actually she was innocent! She doesn’t believe in premarital sex, she told herself that her greatest gift to his future husband is herself, but of course she doesn’t tell anyone because she was afraid of being teased to death especially her best friends, Selina and Hebe.
“And if we could make it a quite one” she added, “I don’t want anyone to know our real situation, apart from that, one of my friends already knew, remember Hebe? The one from last night, good thing that I can trust her, and I told her to keep it for herself, and not to tell others.” She explains, “Because you see our magazine will be affected if this story will go out of hand.”
She still consider other people than herself, Chun taught she is really one of a kind.
Chun can understand what she is trying to point out, in the first place he came unannounced in her life, she accidentally killed someone for his sake, and then gave her the shocking news that she was married long time before, is this what he’s repaying her? Disturbing her peaceful life, he doesn’t want to do that, he wants her to be happy. But suddenly remember his grandpa; it was all about him that’s why he wanted to see her.
“Okay, I will think about it, but for the time being, I also have a favor to you,” he said suddenly. “A huge one.”
Ella became curious of what he was saying, a while ago, they were conversing about their marriage, and she wants to know right now what does he wants from her, hope it was not bad, she asked herself. She tried to make a joke with him.
“What is it? If that was saving your butt again I’m telling you—“
“Yes, you will save someone again.” He cut her.
Ella’s smile disappeared and immediately asked, “Who is it?”

The 30 minutes drive to the hospital didn’t take that long, while in the car Chun briefly explained what happened to his grandfather, that his final wish before he die is to see Ella, his long lost granddaughter-in-law. Ella was so moved when Chun told her that his grandfather never stop looking for her, even if he’s in death bed he never lose hope in finding her. Ella was so touched that she already like him even though that they haven’t met each other.
Chun opened slowly his grandfather’s room, putting his head inside first he checked if they are some visitors, and when he just saw his private nurse, he walked inside, gesturing Ella to follow him. Ella was very nervous of meeting his grandfather, the old man that spent his entire life searching for her, when she looked at the man laying at the hospital bed, her heart immediately went to her throat. He looked very pale and thin, the oxygen masked was on his mouth, a machine that monitoring his heartbeat was beside him, but his condition’s stable. That gives her a relief.
The private nurse who were dozing off stands from her chair beside his grandfather, the tiredness were very obvious in her eyes, it seems like she doesn’t have enough sleep because of taking care for her patient. Chun instructed her in a whisper that she can take a break. The relieve nurse smile with gratitude and when outside for coffee.
“Grandpa?” Chun called him softly, he put his hand to his arms and hold him, “Grandpa?” he repeated, slowly his grandfather opened his eyes and woke-up, focusing on Chun.
“Hi son, how are you?” his grandfather asked tiredly.
“I suppose I’m the one who’ll ask you that because you’re the one here in the hospital.”
“I’m fine now, thank you.” He said, then his gaze fell on Ella, his brows frown because the young lady beside Chun was silently crying.
“Who is she?” he asked in a curious voice.
“Grandpa,” Chun said with a smile “This is the person that you’ve been looking for a long time. It’s her Jia Hua your best friend’s granddaughter, but her name now is Ella that’s what she is called. Pulling Ella to his right side, so his grandfather could have a better look at her.
Que Shan catches his breath. While his eyes widen, the girl that she is staring was the replica of her mother, and she got most of the feature of his best friend, especially the eyes that was staring right back at him.
“Oh My God!” he exclaimed holding out his trembling hand to her face, his eyes also began to water, he had always a dream like this before, and this day it is happening, he can’t believe it! “Jia Hua, Jia Hua,” he kept on repeating, now fully holding her face “my poor baby, my baby.” He cried loudly.
Ella’s tears was torrent now, she can’t control it while she bend down and put her cheeks on his chest, and cried making his chest wet with tears. Que Shan was holding Ella tightly as if he was never letting her go.
“I’m so sorry, so so much sorry,” he apologized, while his shoulders shake with sorrow, holding her more tightly. “I-I have no right to live, after what happened to you,” he continued crying. “I swear, I tried to look for you, but still I can’t find you, please forgive me, please forgive me. I-I promised Sam that I’ll take care of you, but I let him down.”
Ella wept and said in a shaking voice “Don’t say that grandpa, I’m here, I’m alive.”
“The moment the you came to my life, I treat you like my own” Que Shan said brokenly to Ella, “It was the greatest day of Sammy’s life when you were born, I remember that Me and Sam went outside to celebrate you’re coming into this world, I told him, “Sam, what more we could asked for our family was complete”, then he answered me back, “not yet, when our grandchildren will get married then our family will become one.” He remembered in tears. “Now that you’re here, I can die peacefully.”
“No!” Ella protested moving away from his arms, then looking at him, taking his both hands “Do you hear me grandpa, I will not allow it, I have just found you, my connection to my real family.” She put his old hands to her chest, a sign that she really mean what she says, her eyes was pleading still wet with tears.
Chun watched silently beside Ella, he also has a difficult in breathing, this girl beside her was really kind-hearted and warm, he also wants to take her into his arms to stop her from crying.
Que Shan search his eyes to Chun, then he extended his other hand gesturing Chun to take his offered hand, and when he took it, his grandfather put Chun’s hand to Ella’s hand.
“Promise me Chun that you will take care of her,” his grandpa implored, “Maybe I’ll not be able to do that because my time in this world will be finished.”
“Grandpa, please don’t take nonsense, you’re still healthy as a horse, and you still have the chance to go back to work.”
“Please grandpa, don’t say those words, I still want to be with you, to be with your side, your family” Ella said.

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hi...its not really a story....jst a plot...

where SHE and FLH are together....

i've already posted this in my polls....

so if ever she and fahrenheit would star in a drama together...i made up a plot of my own... what do you think?

jiro and selina: 2 very differnt personalities and class but the best of friends and secretly like eachother though they can't admit it..

calvin, aaron, and hebe: love triangle....calvin and hebe were lovers be4 but broke up but calvin still perseveres..aaron and hebe enemies turned friends and aaron falls for hebe..

chunnie and ella: they hate eachothers guts only to find out they are arranged to be married...no loopholes...

~calvin and jiro are brothers and aaron and chunnie are their bandmates...

~hebe, selina and ella are best friends...

~hebe is chunnie's cousin (idk why i thought of that but i like it anyways...)

4 boys, 3 girls whose lives are entertwined by eachother and eachothers' destiny and fate...



SO GUYS...WHAT DO YOU THINK???

pls tell me your comments...heheheh...
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nikkimeimei wrote:

hi...its not really a story....jst a plot...

where SHE and FLH are together....

i've already posted this in my polls....

so if ever she and fahrenheit would star in a drama together...i made up a plot of my own... what do you think?

jiro and selina: 2 very differnt personalities and class but the best of friends and secretly like eachother though they can't admit it..

calvin, aaron, and hebe: love triangle....calvin and hebe were lovers be4 but broke up but calvin still perseveres..aaron and hebe enemies turned friends and aaron falls for hebe..

chunnie and ella: they hate eachothers guts only to find out they are arranged to be married...no loopholes...

~calvin and jiro are brothers and aaron and chunnie are their bandmates...

~hebe, selina and ella are best friends...

~hebe is chunnie's cousin (idk why i thought of that but i like it anyways...)

4 boys, 3 girls whose lives are entertwined by eachother and eachothers' destiny and fate...



SO GUYS...WHAT DO YOU THINK???

pls tell me your comments...heheheh...



nice! your going to create one? o.O
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Posted 6/15/08

mixcieaicie wrote:


nikkimeimei wrote:





nice! your going to create one? o.O



mmmm....its just a plot...but i can make a few details and make one....though i really have to think this one thrgugh...i'll try and make the first chapter and if most likes it or many have viewd it then mybe i can go on with the story....

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