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Posted 6/28/08

Mon937 wrote:

it's a good thing you said not finished yet or I'd be really confused since it goes from talking about a maze forest to the curse breakin'. You woulda lost me on that part. The writing's good, but I can't wait for you to go back and fill in the details so I'll stop havin' a headache every time I try to make sense of it.


You know I that on purpose just for you to have the headache.
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Posted 6/28/08

hongyinyu wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

it's a good thing you said not finished yet or I'd be really confused since it goes from talking about a maze forest to the curse breakin'. You woulda lost me on that part. The writing's good, but I can't wait for you to go back and fill in the details so I'll stop havin' a headache every time I try to make sense of it.


You know I that on purpose just for you to have the headache.


It's just pick on Mon day, isn't it? Everyone's required to give me a headache today
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Posted 6/30/08

Mon937 wrote:


hongyinyu wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

it's a good thing you said not finished yet or I'd be really confused since it goes from talking about a maze forest to the curse breakin'. You woulda lost me on that part. The writing's good, but I can't wait for you to go back and fill in the details so I'll stop havin' a headache every time I try to make sense of it.


You know I that on purpose just for you to have the headache.


It's just pick on Mon day, isn't it? Everyone's required to give me a headache today


i wun pick on u mon i like u <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
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Posted 6/30/08

vaneli wrote:


Mon937 wrote:


hongyinyu wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

it's a good thing you said not finished yet or I'd be really confused since it goes from talking about a maze forest to the curse breakin'. You woulda lost me on that part. The writing's good, but I can't wait for you to go back and fill in the details so I'll stop havin' a headache every time I try to make sense of it.


You know I that on purpose just for you to have the headache.


It's just pick on Mon day, isn't it? Everyone's required to give me a headache today


i wun pick on u mon i like u <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3


That's always good to know.
Posted 7/1/08

Mon937 wrote:

That's always good to know.


Until you have to rid her.
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Posted 7/1/08

hongyinyu wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

That's always good to know.


Until you have to rid her.


I honestly doubt it will come to that. At least I hope not 'cause then I've got zodidj-senei to worry about
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Posted 7/24/08
COOL! CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! X D
Posted 7/24/08 , edited 7/24/08

kodieloiler wrote:

COOL! CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! X D


Only wished I didn't feel stuck after ending it like that. Oh I do have new bedtime stories for you, kids. The days I didn't have internet while moving to a different house, I wrote stories for this group. Thought since there weren't many people active in all of the kingdoms, maybe it was a good idea to make stories up to build up each characters' personality and characteristics whether there is a person already being that title or not.
Posted 7/24/08

hongyinyu wrote:


kodieloiler wrote:

COOL! CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! X D


Only wished I didn't feel stuck after ending it like that. Oh I do have new bedtime stories for you, kids. The days I didn't have internet while moving to a different house, I wrote stories for this group. Thought since there weren't many people active in all of the kingdoms, maybe it was a good idea to make stories up to build up each characters' personality and characteristics whether there is a person already being that title or not.



YEP! X D.........and maybe you can have someone visit the kingdom for teh next chapter...if so..can it be the Prince of dreams adn princess's (prince of dreams flirtie with girls......and with teh darkness princess to *sigh* how she wants to kick his ass X D)
Posted 7/24/08

kodieloiler wrote:

YEP! X D.........and maybe you can have someone visit the kingdom for teh next chapter...if so..can it be the Prince of dreams adn princess's (prince of dreams flirtie with girls......and with teh darkness princess to *sigh* how she wants to kick his ass X D)


No, you have better ideas on that subject than I do.
Posted 7/24/08

hongyinyu wrote:


kodieloiler wrote:

YEP! X D.........and maybe you can have someone visit the kingdom for teh next chapter...if so..can it be the Prince of dreams adn princess's (prince of dreams flirtie with girls......and with teh darkness princess to *sigh* how she wants to kick his ass X D)


No, you have better ideas on that subject than I do.


???? anyway please get the next chapter done soon X )
Posted 7/24/08 , edited 7/24/08


I omitted a lot of details from this tale but maybe I should add them back in. Can't decide whether they are necessary or not.
Posted 7/24/08

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???? anyway please get the next chapter done soon X )


I'm not really into flirtatious-- well no, I shouldn't say that because I would be contradicting myself. I don't write flirtatious dialogues and you seem to have better ideas on that subject than I do when it comes to writing.
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Posted 7/24/08

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I omitted a lot of details from this tale but maybe I should add them back in. Can't decide whether they are necessary or not.


Very good, but a very disturbin end. I'm guessin' this is one of the "Bedtime stories" ya was talkin' about?
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