A Journal of a Stranger

I wrote this poem after reading one of ai_kaminari poem....



The fluorescent light,
a yellow lit light that shimmers a adolescent tone,
filtering the dark strip entrance,
slowly dying, slowly flying,
breaking a tender barrier,
while soliciting the brown coat ground,
giving off a lonely tone,
slowly slipping, slowly seeking,
tearing through the darkness,
while shivering from embarrassment,
since the heart had wash away,
leaving a vulnarable point,
where the souls bleeds,
and weeps from the uncertainty,
like a mans heart is his weakness point,
where,
his trigger,
his courage,
His strength,
resides to keep the soul pumping,
Through the tides of time,
a picture drifts into the middle of the fluorescent light,
showing a image of a child smiling,
postured with arms out, ready to be hug,
and ready to prowl on the camera holder
As a dark figure stands in front of the memory,
Since thats when time stopped on the him.

Very awesome! Seriously, i felt like i was there with him.

i gove it a 9.5. =)

wow pretty good