Post Reply ALERT: For those who support the nakatsu X mizuki pairing
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Posted 5/26/08
i've made a fanfiction for mizuki and nakatsu! so if u wanna try reading it, here's the link

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4226124/1/Being_with_You

try it! and please comment if it needs any improvements! arigatou~
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Posted 5/26/08
i've read the first chapter,,,,,so far so good .... i will read the rest of the chapter during my free time...
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Posted 5/27/08 , edited 5/27/08
I've read the first chapter as well.
I like it!
There were a bit of spelling mistakes though.
Like "you're" to "your" or "gomen nasai" to "gomenasai" and "sou ka" to "suka"!
Besides that, it's very good. I like the fact that Nakatsu and Mizuki can be together. I hated Sano lol. (no offense to Sano/Shun fans)
Anyways, I'll keep reading it. :D


EDIT:
I've read everything. Your grammar isn't so bad for a 13 year old, you know. I think you'll make a good writer in the near future.
After reading all 5 chapters, I feel very excited. Seriously, I can't wait for the next chapter! Looking forward on reading it~
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Posted 5/27/08

hey!
congratulations girl!
you did a good job!
i like it!
mizuki and nakatsu being together is so....
i cant find the right word!lol!

your grammar isn't too bad. and besides there is always a room for improvements:)

GOOD JOB!
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Posted 5/27/08
hiyee! i just read ur fan fic! and i loved it! hehehe..
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Posted 5/28/08
i just finished reading it.. and i love it!!
i want to see nakatsu winning the nationals.. :D
i dont know the right word to say.. but
GOOD JOB!!
i hope you'll make another chapters..
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Posted 11/21/08
OMG! i wanna read it!
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