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Posted 5/26/08 , edited 7/7/08
Since some of you are new in reading these.. this is what pages it will be on ^-^
1st Part : 1st Page
2nd Part : 2nd Page
3rd Part : 3rd Page
4th Part : 5th Page
5th Part : 6th Page
6th Part : 9th Page
7th Part : 18th Page
8th Part : 22nd Page
9th Part : 27th Page
10th Part : 29th Page
11th Part : 36th Page
12th Part : 45th Page
13th Part : 51st Page
14th Part : 53rd Page
15th Part : 53rd Page
16th Part : 57th Page
17th Part : 63rd Page
18th Part : 65th Page
19th Part : 66th Page
20th Part : 72nd Page
21st Part : 75th Page
22nd Part : 89th Page
23rd Part : 101st Page
24th Part : 104th Page
25th Part : 113th Page
26th Part : 123rd Page
*Christmas_Special : 126th Page
27th Part : 133rd Page

*Many thanks for jl_jeanelle who suggested this ^-^

Here i'll use their real names cos it might be hard to remember/memorise them ^-^
Well here's my noobish fanfic =D

*school bell rings*
Ryosuke : ahhh!! school is finally over!! yosh!! time to play more football!!
[NOTE : Ryosuke is a football~holic]
Yuto : your gonna play football again? you've been playing it everyday, every year!! don't you ever get tired of it?
Ryosuke : never!! football's my life!!
Chinen : yea! you even skipped your break time because of that! Now you've become even more thinner! What happened to the chubby Yama~chan we knew last time??
Ryosuke : what chubby Yama~chan??
Yuto : anyways.. aren't you interested in any girls at all?? you do know your the most popular guy in school for now.. so you better make use of it..
Ryosuke : for what? i'm not interested in girls
Chinen : YAMA~CHAN!! HOW COULD YOU???? Poor girls..
Ryosuke : those girls are all ugly and stupid..
[NOTE : Chinen is a kind hearted guy here who cares about girls more than boys]
Chinen : what did you say?!
-Ryosuke runs out of the room and Chinen chases him-
Yuto : oh.. well what do we have here.. Yama~chan's riceball and Chinen's takoyaki.. hmm... *looks around* theres nobody watching~ i'll just say a fly came and ate it..
[NOTE : Yuto loves food more than anything else!]
-Ryosuke and Chinen returns back to class-
Ryosuke : hey.. what happened to my riceball?!
Chinen : wheres my takoyaki?!
Yuto : ish washn't shere when i wash shere [it wasn't there when i was here]
Ryosuke : you liar!!
Chinen : poor octopus.. had to be eaten by mean old Yuto
Yuto : WHO'RE YOU CALLING OLD?!
Ryosuke : whatever.. *throws bag over his shoulder holding it* lets go meet up with Keito and Ryutaro
[Chinen, Ryosuke and Yuto are in Class 9, Keito and Ryutaro are in class 2]

Keito : Hey! did Yuto eat your food again?
Ryutaro : haha!! they did, didn't they?
Ryosuke : oh yea? look in your bags now.. where're your foods?
Ryutaro : what are you talking about?
-their food was missing-
Keito : hey!! my dry soba!! i was looking forward to it!!
Ryutaro : ahh! lucky! i still have my o bento.. eh.. what? theres nothing inside?!
Chinen, Ryutaro, Keito and Ryosuke : YU-TO!!!

-Suddenly... a beautiful elegant girl steps out of an extremely stretched limo-
Mysterious Lady : wheres Yamada Ryosuke
Ryosuke : what da ya want ladeh?!
Mysterious Lady : i have been sent to come for you.. lets go into the limo..
*chinen stares at the lady*
Yuto : what?! who's that?!
Ryosuke : i don't know! who are you?!
-Mysterious Lady takes out her black sunglasses she was wearing-
*Ryosuke stared at her.. and everybody else*

Part1 - End

Next Part - Who is that Mysterious Lady?
What does she want with Yamada Ryosuke?
How will Chinen NOT get angry at Ryosuke for having a pretty girl to himself?

Find out next Part =D
Coming Soon

NOTE : sorry >< i know its kinda draggy and noobish =( but i wanted to try it for fun ><
if it isn't really nice.. mods..feel free to erase and delete this thread =)


Posted 5/26/08
lol i like it... :D
whos the mysterious ladeeehh?
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lol it's not that bad...quite amusing actually...ganbare...i'll be waiting in anticipation for the next part~
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Interesting!!
I want more h4Ck-rin!!

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haha thanks..
^^;;
the place where yama~chan said..'what da ya want ladeh?'
haha i wanted to put it like he's some kind of gangster or something xDD
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yup yup!!
I've noticed that!! ^-^
Posted 5/26/08
yeah lol i cant imagine yamada like that but yet i can...
its totally awesome! keep going!
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WOW!! NICE!! =DD O.O how can a fly eat such a big thing? Anyway,it's still awesome~!! more more!
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Here's Part 2 xD

Here's where we left off..
Ryosuke : You.. You..You're... RICH!!!
Yuto, Chinen, Keito and Ryutaro : sweat drop...
Mysterious Lady : YES!! I AM RICH!! MUAHAHA!!! *ahem* right.. -back to composure-
i have been sent for you..
Ryosuke : by who?
Mysterious Lady : a man..
Ryosuke : is he rich?
Mysterious Lady : yes
Ryosuke : can he buy me the largest football field?
Mysterious Lady : anything you want..
Ryosuke : should i go now?
Mysterious Lady : yes
-Ryosuke looks at his friends like he didn't wanna leave.. but..-
Ryosuke : ja ne!
-All his friends drop down mouth-

Keito : man.. ryosuke is as weird as ever
Yuto : yea.. all he cares is about money..
Chinen : and soccer!
Ryutaro : *sigh* if only he was interested in singing
Chinen : *sigh* if only he was interested in girls
Keito : *sigh* if only he was interested in drawing
Yuto : *sigh* if only he was interested in food..
-Chinen, Keito and Ryutaro turned and looked at Yuto-
Yuto : what?! you guys said what you like best.. i like food!
Chinen : i thought you loved food
Yuto : yea! love!
Ryutaro : but didn't you say you hated...

-while their talking, forgetting about yama~chan xD meanwhile.. in the limo-
-Ryosuke sits in a coffee house style of way-
Ryosuke : cool limo you got here ladeh.. can i have it?
Mysterious Lady : yes.. and people call me Shizoku Minami
Ryosuke : ok ladeh
Mysterious Lady : Shizouku Minami!
Ryosuke : nah! too hard to remember! so wheres my football field?
Mysterious Lady : first we have to meet... the man!
Ryosuke : a'right!

-the limo was driven to a huge mansion-
Ryosuke : WOAH! can i have the house?!
Mysterious Lady : that, you can't
Ryosuke : sucks..
-the door opened-

A man.. with a long beard... wise man.. stepped up..
Mysterious Man : did you come here.. for the man?
Mysterious Lady : yes..
Mysterious Man : pls come with me..
Ryosuke : man.. are all the people in here old?
Mysterious Lady : no.. only 99% of them are old
Ryosuke : who's the young one?
Mysterious Lady : me
Ryosuke : and yet your old.. *sigh*

-out of the dark shadows.. there was a dark figure..-

Who is that man? =D
find out on the next Part ^-^

PS : every part there will be a new person you meet
Posted 5/26/08
hehe yutos awesome!
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haha ^-^
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so funny!! haha!! XDD yama-chan act so childish here but who cares!! that's juz wat make him special!! yuto is so funny!! XDD nxt part! nxt part!
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Posted 5/26/08
have you written the next part already?? ^-^
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haha you 2 waiting so eagerly xD
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xD
It can't be helped!!
we just get too excited!! ^-^
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