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xDD haha alright i'll try to make one up right now on the spot..
all of mine are made up on the spot haha
so their abit lame ^-^
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hahaha!!
on the spot!!
that's cool!! ^-^
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here's where we left off
the old man.. remember? ^-^

Ryosuke : OMGosh!!!
Lady : don't worry.. its just another guy of the staff
Ryosuke : oh! phew! does he have money?
Lady : no, he's poor
Ryosuke : ok.. i don't need to meet him

-they soon saw this big door in front of them which looked incredibly heavy and couldn't be budged-
Ryosuke : step aside lady! i'll show you who's the man!
Lady : i wouldn't do that if i were you
-Ryosuke punched the door and...-
Ryosuke : OUCH!! OMG!!! AHHHH!! ARGH!!! OWWWWWHHHHH!!!
Lady : told you so
Ryosuke : oh yea?!
-takes out a football and he does... a bicycle kick!!
Ryosuke : HAYAH!!
-there was a hole in the middle of the door-
Ryosuke : ok! now to hit it a couple more times to make a whole there! YOSH!
Lady : wait!
Ryosuke : w-wha?! *ryosuke fell down face flat* WHAT?! DON'T DISTURB ME!
Lady : watch my magic as i open this door..
-the lady turned the knob.. and... it opened*
Ryosuke : pfft! i knew that! i just.. wanted to try out my new move..
Lady : *whispered to herself* yea right..

-inside.. a young boy.. who wore a tie, coat, and his hair was bleached like an english person, was sitting in a big armchair-
Ryosuke : is that the rich guy?!
Lady : yes he is
Ryosuke : i thought you said he was a 'man'
Lady : oh did i say that? *ahem* *cough cough* right..
Ryosuke : hey!
Lady : shut up! your about to earn your football field!
-Ryosuke quickly shut up-
Boy : is this the boy?
Lady : yes, sir
-Ryosuke started giggling-
Lady : whats the matter?es
Ryosuke : you.. you.. *giggle* called him sir!!! wahahaha!! what? is he some kind of prince or what?!
Lady : actually he is
Boy : *cough*
Ryosuke : hey! are you 2 sick? you seem to be coughing alot..
Lady : ah! excuse us awhile

Boy : are you sure he is.. 'the one'?
Lady : yes! i'm perfectly sure!
Boy : alright.. but if he's not 'the one', i'm taking 10,000 pounds off your check
Lady : yes, sir

-they walked back to Ryosuke-
Boy : alright.. do you like to work?
-Ryosuke had ear plugs in his ears and the song he was listening to, he was singing as well-
[NOTE : when he say something and i put a ~ at the end.. means he's singing it out, and the Boy and Lady doesn't know he has earplugs]
Ryosuke : yes baby~
Boy : *cough* how many years do you have of experience?
Ryosuke : oh boy! i have done this since i was 1! oh yea!~
Boy : right... how do you feel about working as a referee for football?
Ryosuke : oh baby! no! i don't like that beautiful job! what i want is you!~
Boy : WHAT?!
Ryosuke : oh! baby baby! you're so sweet~~~~
-just so happens this Boy is GAY!-
Boy : can't.. stand.. it...
Ryosuke : oh baby! i can stand it! watch me flaunt my stuff!~~
-boy runs away-
-when Ryosuke finished listening to his song... he saw that the Boy was gone-
Ryosuke : huh? Where'd he go?
Lady : he'll be back in 3.... 2.... 1...
*door opens*
Boy : hi honey~ lets make out~!
Ryosuke : what the hell?! eww gross no way!!
Boy : oh baby! i got you now!
Ryosuke : HELP!!!

What will happen to Ryosuke?
Find out on the next Part ^-^
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nice h4Ck-rin!!!! i didn´'t read anything yet but it's kewly!!!!
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LOL!! how you know its kewl when you didn't read anything?! xDD
and.. OMGosh!! its being read by master!! *o*
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are you sure that's on the spot??
xD
it's really exciting!! ^-^
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i read a bit of it.. but don't have the time for everything.. sorry!!! but what i read was wonderful *pats on the head oh h4Ck-rin*
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that was AWESOME!!!!
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lols thanks you guys ^-^
yea it was made up on the spot.. @@
still thinking what to do next ^o^
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do your best!! ^-^
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hehe can't wait!!!
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LOLOL!!! I love the part when he sings!! XDD i laugh like mad!! XDD -.- my bro came in my room and said : Mommy! Annie tin jor! cuz he heard me laugh out loud ==
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hahas thanks ^-^
maybe when i'm free i'll write it all out @@
since i miss out what you guys are talking about when i'm typing it D=
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LOLOL!!! I love the part when he sings!! XDD i laugh like mad!! XDD -.- my bro came in my room and said : Mommy! Annie tin jor! cuz he heard me laugh out loud ==


LOL!!! i wanna hear him say that!! xDD
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h4CkSigN wrote:


ZeroFillLove wrote:

LOLOL!!! I love the part when he sings!! XDD i laugh like mad!! XDD -.- my bro came in my room and said : Mommy! Annie tin jor! cuz he heard me laugh out loud ==


LOL!!! i wanna hear him say that!! xDD


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