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Posted 5/26/08
it's really funny..
hope you post the other parts soon..
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Posted 5/26/08
haha yea! me too! ^-^
i hope my brain doesn't over work haha
arashi369~ post yours as well!!
i love reading fanfics!!
and i love 'love triangles'!!
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here's the part something hahas~!
where we left off : yama~chan fell in the lake ^w^

-Suddenly, a bit of straw popped out of the lake-
-As soon as the fan girls was gone.. Ryosuke came out of the water-
[don't ask me how he got a straw lols..]
Ryosuke : i'm such in a bad luck today *wrings out the water out of his clothes*
Ryosuke : back to school i guess
-When Ryosuke returned.. YUTO WAS STILL BOASTING!!!-
-Chinen, Keito and Ryutaro was half asleep-
Yuto : RYOSUKE!! YOU"RE HERE!!! DID YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAID ABOUT ME?!
Ryosuke : what?
Yuto : they said i'm cute and handsome.. bla bla bla [<< talking non-stop]
Ryosuke : == today really is my bad luck day.. oh well.. can't be worse..
Chinen : hey! whats that huge stretched mercedes benz?!
Ryosuke : huh?! where?!
Keito : oh look.. its a boy coming out of it!
Ryutaro : wow! looks rich!
Ryosuke : w-w-what?!
Boy : RYOSUKE DARLING! I'VE BEEN LOOKING ALL OVER FOR YOU!!!
Ryosuke : gaaaahhhhhhh!!!!
-Ryosuke runs away and the Boy chases him-
Keito : i didn't know Yama~chan was gay
Ryutaro : maybe he's actually a girl
Chinen : wow! then i wanna date him!
Ryutaro : but didn't Yuto said that he'd wanna date him last time?
Chinen : pfft! i'll throw an onigiri and let him chase it far away
Keito : so right.. hey you guys wana come to my house and play video games?
Ryutaro : why not.. lets go..
Chinen : should we leave Yuto?
-All look at Yuto-
Ryutaro : lets go..
Chinen : alright..
-And thus.. Yuto was boasting about himself to no one!! :w00t:]
-Back to Ryosuke-
Ryosuke : argh!! i'm not gay!!
Boy : aww~ don't be shy loverboy!!
Ryosuke : wait!! i'm a girl!! see?!
Boy : nah! you look like a boy!
Ryosuke : oh! i'm just.. erm.. disguising!
Boy : what? give me proof!
Ryosuke : ok! wait here!
-After 30 mins-
Ryosuke : i'm coming out..
-here's what Ryosuke looked like ^-^ -

Boy : OMgosh!!!
Ryosuke : see~ i'm a girl~!
Boy : i love cross dressers more than boys!!! my lucky day!!
Ryosuke : waaaaa!! mommmeeeeeeeeee!!!
-Ryosuke runs home-
Ryosuke : mom! hide me! don't let anybody in!
Pyon Pyon : what? what happen?
hsj~chan : he's probably being chased by a girl again..
Ryosuke : NO! ITS A GUY!!!
-A pause for awhile.. then...-
Pyon Pyon : ahaha!! Ryosuke dear! you make the funniest jokes in the world!
hsj~chan : haha yea!!
Ryosuke : i'm serious! his hair is bleached and he wears an england style clothes! don't let him in
hsj~chan : rich boy?
Ryosuke : yea!
Pyon Pyon : Ryosuke! how many times have i told you not to chase people who are rich!
Ryosuke : i can't help it! i love the scent of money
hsj~chan : what about football?
Ryosuke : i love that more!!
hsj~chan : so date David Beckham.. why did you bring this guy?
Ryosuke : not my fault!!!
-Knock Knock-
Ryosuke : mom! help!
Pyon Pyon : alright alright..
Ryosuke : thanks! i'll be in my room!
-but before he could go up.. the door was kicked open-
Boy : my lovely Ryosuke~ where can you be?!
Ryosuke : argh! *running up to his room*
Boy : i'm coming loverboy!!!
hsj~chan : they make a nice couple
Pyon Pyon : yea.. they do.. don't they?
-upstairs-
-Ryosuke jumped on his bed.. and guess what? xD i think you guys all know~ -
-The young boy jumped on him!! -

but what will happen next? =D
find out~ ^-^
NOTE : special guest stars : Chika-Pyon/Pyon Pyon as Ryosuke's mom
hsj9392/hsj~chan as Ryosuke's older sister
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LOLS!! This is really funny!! a mermaid costume!! haha! XDD Date David Beckham XDD
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PS : if anybody would like to play in any of the roles i'll put your name and make you any family member you want to be ^-^
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Posted 5/27/08

arashi369 wrote:

Wow, I love this story. >.<

Btw, would you guys mind if I post my fanfic too? But, I think it won't satisfy your expectations since it isn't really funny or such. It's more of a love triangle. :3


i want to see ur fanfic:P
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h4CkSigN wrote:

PS : if anybody would like to play in any of the roles i'll put your name and make you any family member you want to be ^-^


i want to be in it please:P....LOLZ
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Posted 5/27/08
haha np ^-^ what part do you wanna play =D
since i make it on the spot i can make you anything =3
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ooo~! me! me! i wanna be...um...err...can i be...his...cousin?
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h4CkSigN wrote:

haha np ^-^ what part do you wanna play =D
since i make it on the spot i can make you anything =3


a childhood friend will do:P

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Posted 5/27/08
=D alrighty~
so you'll be chinen, ryutaro, yuto, keito and yama~chan's childhood friend
hehez ^-^
you'll make an appearance on the next part i do =3
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Posted 5/27/08
thank you very much:P

muwah h:P
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h4CkSigN wrote:

=D alrighty~
so you'll be chinen, ryutaro, yuto, keito and yama~chan's childhood friend
hehez ^-^
you'll make an appearance on the next part i do =3


ow...thankz:P
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Posted 5/27/08
ill be looking forward to it
;;;;;;my name is jian:P
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