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Woahhh ! ~ this is such a good fanfic, im in fanfic mode
this happened to you? :O awweee. did you get to see the person again?
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Thanks, minna-san, for reading this~

@anime_4evaz: Well, I only made that part up~ Most of the stuff in Parts 1-2 are made up. The things that really happened to me are gonna take place in the middle of the story...^^
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waaa~
is it happy or sad thing? D=
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I dunno..>.< Just wait and see...^.^ And I can't believe myself for doing all those things. D:
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Darn. My brain isn't working properly. I'm soooo sleepy. >.< Anyway, here's part 3. >.< This one's very short.

Ryosuke was late for school due to over sleeping. He rode his bike in coming to school and tried to think of the shortest roads going there. As he was about to turn to the street where the school was located, he suddenly crashed to a girl from the same school.

"OUCH!", screamed the girl while holding her knee.

Ryosuke stood up and went over to her. "Gomenasai! Are you okay?", asked Ryosuke as he tried to look at the girls bleeding knee.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Anyway, I better go. I'm already late for school!", said the girl while struggling to stand up.

Ryosuke looked at her face to see who she was. Images flashed through his mind: Two children chasing each other, two children sharing the same umbrella and two children being pulled apart. It can't be...

"M-M-Ma-Maki?", Ryosuke asked, afraid of what the answer might be.

The girl directed her attention towards Ryosuke. "Yes?"

She's still as beautiful as she used to be. Thought Ryosuke.

Maki's eyes suddenly became as huge as plates. "Ryosuke?!"

"It's been a long time, ne? So you study in this school already?"

"Yeah. I belong to 3C.", she said with a smile.

3C? Could it be...? No, it can't...It's impossible.

The school bell suddenly rang.

"Oh, damn. We're late! C'mon, I'll give you a lift.", he said while getting ready to ride his bike.

They rode the bike together and arrived late together in school. They ran through the corridors and zoomed through the stair cases.

In 3B's class room, Kawasaki-sensei was checking the class' attendance.

"Tanaka?"

"Hai."

"Uchi?"

"Hai."

"Yamada?"

The class was quiet.

"Yamada-kun? Are you here?"

Ryosuke was just in time. He appeared in the doorway of their classroom. "Here!", he said while trying to catch his breath.

"Why are you late?", Kawasaki-sensei looked at Ryosuke with a questioning look.

It took a while before Ryosuke could answer. "Sorry, sensei. I kinda over slept."

"Ah, I see. Well then, please take your seat."

Ryosuke took his seat beside the window. He wrote a short note in a piece of paper and passed it to Yuto who was just in front of him.

The girl you love is named Maki from 3C, right?

Yuto wrote a simple answer and two questions then passed it to Ryosuke again.

Yes. Why did you ask? Do you know her?

Oh, no. It can't be...There are many Maki's anyway. She might be different to the Maki that I know. But, Yuto said it very clearly. He said the girl was named Uchiyama Maki. It was the same name as my first love in Fukuoka. He thought: Yeah, I actually do. She's the woman I have loved when I still lived in Fukuoka. I was forced to come here in Tokyo so I never got to see her again. But I still love her 'till now. But, he didn't write that. He simply wrote: Yeah, she's an old friend of mine. And passed the paper again to Yuto.

Yuto was surprised. Really?! Yama-chan! Can you please introduce me to her? Please? I promise I'll give you a whole box of strawberries! He passed the note back.

I can't do that. Sorry. But, if you want, I can give you her number. I need to ask her permission first, though. Ryosuke waited for the teacher to turn his back to them before he passed the paper to Yuto again.

Yuto opened the paper eagerly and read the note Ryosuke wrote. He wrote back a short one. Deal.

Maybe I'll post Part 4 tomorrow. >"< See what happens next. ^^
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love it
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OMG...this is so great......
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Thanks~ :3
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haha.. nice.
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lol seems like many people are in the fanfic mood recently...many fanfics have been posted up~ great fanfic, btw. ganbare~
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OMGosh!!
young love!! ^-^
is there going to be a love triangle between Yamada and Yuto??

I want to read more!! xDDDD
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Sankyuu minna~

Lol. ^o^ Just wait and see...I don't think you can predict the series of events that will happen next. Lol. ^o^
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LOL.. I can't wait for the next!
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Yeah..
I was just guessing!!
LoL
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Lol. I dunno how to start part 4 again! >.<
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