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Posted 5/27/08
tell me what u think about it, especially the bad parts so i can fix it to ur liking ^^
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Posted 5/28/08
hehe it was funny and it keep the readers linked to it and wants to find out more!well thats how i feel now[just finished reading part 5]
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Posted 5/28/08 , edited 5/28/08
Ya I liked!!just how u begined u mighty want to add somthin like 'Amu stared and then blushed and then' blah blah blah lol so then it gets to the point taht she went to bed or somthin n//n BUT I LOVED!! plz continue today!!or SOON cause I littrely check every day that I am on CR to see if its done ^-^
Next she needs her father or her sister (Ami-chan) to come in and start talkin about somtin personal in her life so Ikuto overhears lol or either have some compitition the day after he leaves
lol sry its not up to me u chose what u want to do n//n
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Posted 6/4/08
i love it write morre lolz i just come for that
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21 / F / At home.
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Posted 6/9/08

xx__angelz__xx wrote:

tell me what u think about it, especially the bad parts so i can fix it to ur liking ^^


KEEP! WRITING! lol
are u ever gunna make them kiss?
cauze u made them interrupted by ami...NOT to say its a bad part! it makes me linked to the story...
are u gunnna make them date?that would be awesome!
Posted 10/30/08
you are doing soooo freaking ood, please, please, please continue writing ASAP!! You are doing so so soooo good, your awesome!
Posted 10/30/08
Oh, and please keep the drama coming! Like, it wouldnt be very good if they just sorta got together rigth away. A bunch of crazy, (flirty) things have to happen, and that will make it so awesome. I was expecting you to do this, but I'm just making sure you dont make it boring or anything in the future, ya know? Anyway, PLEASE continue write like.... RIGHT NOW.

Thanks!!
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