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I'm by no means short on ideas, but there could always be better ideas! If you think of an individual character, or better yet, a group of characters that form a clan, then I would love to hear it. Keep in mind some of the aspects of Urdumkeit:

None of them can be good guys. They don't have to be entirely unlikable, but they are brutal and unidealistic. Throughout the island's long history, the number of times that an enemy has been shown mercy could be counted on one's fingers. Characters can be pleasant, but they must also be absolutely ruthless.

If you are designing a clan, keep in mind that teamwork is the most powerful weapon on the island. Any clan worth a damn will have elaborate and well-planned tactics that incorporate the various skills of the group members.

The most powerful aspect of a clan is usually its weaponry. Facing a clan with a pistol is dangerous; facing a clan with a shoulder-mounted grenade launcher is a living nightmare.

Don't design specific characters that do not have a clan. Being without a clan and surviving is nigh impossible, which is why I have already designed a single character that does that; I don't need any more.

Every single person on the island (with the exception of Eve, of course) can do the following: jump at least twice their height, smell blood from half a mile away, hear a fly buzzing from across a football field (if there were any on the island,) and lift at least twice their weight. Keep in mind the amazing natural talents of the island's inhabitants.


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Konowichi Clan (dont ask about the name, cuz iv no clue, change it if you like)
Theyre not really against anyone
they're of course the bad guys but they just dont get in anyones way
(they could turn for some unknown reason)
Everyone wants their alliance
because theyre one of the stronger Clans
But no-one dares attack them
and they really have no reason too
except perhaps they have one of the few guns around and a lot of ammunision! not many know that and those that do have heard what heppened to previous clans that have attempted to steal it! a whole clan wiped out in less than a night by a clan that less tahn half their size.

Its a small clan like the heaven one
just not as small
7 members and a secret 8th
they have a wolf dog cinders
in order of importance
Secret 8th
Shiko- Leader of the clan Hes one of the youngest leaders on the island but very powerful
Marko- The elder member of the clan in his early 50's He's not fat but plump should I say and has a good eye and memory hes their tactics guy
cammii- Looks sweet and innocent and not very powerful at all but shes actually one of their deadliest assasins, the fact that she looks the way she does and get get any guy drooling only adds to her power of deception.
Fury- A hot head but one powerful one at that he's the main warrior of the group since Shiko became leader
Lola-The strong man of the group accept a woman she focuses on hand to hand combat while Fury focuses on weapons
Terri aka taz- The baby of the group but shes the one that's good with a pistol and has great aim which gained her a place in the clan.
Jack-Markos only surving child, he's following in his fathers footsteps in tactics but is also the main negotitor for the group, although he is little needed for that.

hmm well yeh that wasted a bit of time if u decide to use the idea il pm u bout the 8th secret member so as not to ruin the suprise for everyone else! I really wont be upset if u dont use it I seriously did this cuz I was bord lol
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Konowichi Clan (dont ask about the name, cuz iv no clue, change it if you like)
Theyre not really against anyone
they're of course the bad guys but they just dont get in anyones way
(they could turn for some unknown reason)
Everyone wants their alliance
because theyre one of the stronger Clans
But no-one dares attack them
and they really have no reason too
except perhaps they have one of the few guns around and a lot of ammunision! not many know that and those that do have heard what heppened to previous clans that have attempted to steal it! a whole clan wiped out in less than a night by a clan that less tahn half their size.

Its a small clan like the heaven one
just not as small
7 members and a secret 8th
they have a wolf dog cinders
in order of importance
Secret 8th
Shiko- Leader of the clan Hes one of the youngest leaders on the island but very powerful
Marko- The elder member of the clan in his early 50's He's not fat but plump should I say and has a good eye and memory hes their tactics guy
cammii- Looks sweet and innocent and not very powerful at all but shes actually one of their deadliest assasins, the fact that she looks the way she does and get get any guy drooling only adds to her power of deception.
Fury- A hot head but one powerful one at that he's the main warrior of the group since Shiko became leader
Lola-The strong man of the group accept a woman she focuses on hand to hand combat while Fury focuses on weapons
Terri aka taz- The baby of the group but shes the one that's good with a pistol and has great aim which gained her a place in the clan.
Jack-Markos only surving child, he's following in his fathers footsteps in tactics but is also the main negotitor for the group, although he is little needed for that.

hmm well yeh that wasted a bit of time if u decide to use the idea il pm u bout the 8th secret member so as not to ruin the suprise for everyone else! I really wont be upset if u dont use it I seriously did this cuz I was bord lol


I'm interested. Please, PM me.
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Laevetein Clan

A clan that has refused any pacts or alliances with other clans. not much is known about them, save for the five soldiers that they send to the frontlines in times of war. they have never lost a battle; they also seem to possess unknown weaponry, and thus it is largely speculated that they are somehow creating - or replicating - their own guns. this could also explain their impressive win-to-loss ratio.

Balkan - rumored to be the best spearman of the clan. his audacity and intelligence is translated perfectly into his combat capabilities, able to twist his spear around to block attacks from all directions. he takes great pride into his combative skill, as he usually carves out his name on his fallen enemies' bodies (and thus his is the only name which is known). he also sports some scars on his otherwise handsome features.

"Boom" - real name unknown. he is reported to be muscular but agile. he fights with what seems like a hollow log that shoots rocks, like a crude, noisy gun. he is said to be aggressive, often blowing up enemy clans' shelters with little thought. he uses his loglike weapon as one would a club should any enemy come near him.

"Stabber" - real name unknown. another spearman of the clan, though he fights in a considerably different manner, most notably his use of two spears and his tendency to hurl them at foes. he always argues with stone for one reason or another.

"Stone" - real name unknown.a young, teenage girl of ephemeral beauty who wields a boulder with a strap attached to it, and uses it like a flail. she is for the most part meek, but whenever her comrades are in danger she is more than willing to draw blood. she is also reported to have been stopping "Stabber" from raping subdued females, apparently having been raped before, and thus is one of the most common reasons why they are not on good terms.

"Flit" - real name unknown. she is made out to be a skinny girl of around ten years old, and is their main watchdog, due to her excellent eyesight. she is also very quick, usually able to stab an enemy's blind spot before they could even blink in realization.
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atelier7 wrote:

Laevetein Clan

A clan that has refused any pacts or alliances with other clans. not much is known about them, save for the five soldiers that they send to the frontlines in times of war. they have never lost a battle; they also seem to possess unknown weaponry, and thus it is largely speculated that they are somehow creating - or replicating - their own guns. this could also explain their impressive win-to-loss ratio.

Balkan - rumored to be the best spearman of the clan. his audacity and intelligence is translated perfectly into his combat capabilities, able to twist his spear around to block attacks from all directions. he takes great pride into his combative skill, as he usually carves out his name on his fallen enemies' bodies (and thus his is the only name which is known). he also sports some scars on his otherwise handsome features.

"Boom" - real name unknown. he is reported to be muscular but agile. he fights with what seems like a hollow log that shoots rocks, like a crude, noisy gun. he is said to be aggressive, often blowing up enemy clans' shelters with little thought. he uses his loglike weapon as one would a club should any enemy come near him.

"Stabber" - real name unknown. another spearman of the clan, though he fights in a considerably different manner, most notably his use of two spears and his tendency to hurl them at foes. he always argues with stone for one reason or another.

"Stone" - real name unknown.a young, teenage girl of ephemeral beauty who wields a boulder with a strap attached to it, and uses it like a flail. she is for the most part meek, but whenever her comrades are in danger she is more than willing to draw blood. she is also reported to have been stopping "Stabber" from raping subdued females, apparently having been raped before, and thus is one of the most common reasons why they are not on good terms.

"Flit" - real name unknown. she is made out to be a skinny girl of around ten years old, and is their main watchdog, due to her excellent eyesight. she is also very quick, usually able to stab an enemy's blind spot before they could even blink in realization.


They're in. No doubt about it. Thank you. I may add a few more details here and there, but this is basically ready for me to use.
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The_8th_Sin wrote:


atelier7 wrote:

Laevetein Clan

A clan that has refused any pacts or alliances with other clans. not much is known about them, save for the five soldiers that they send to the frontlines in times of war. they have never lost a battle; they also seem to possess unknown weaponry, and thus it is largely speculated that they are somehow creating - or replicating - their own guns. this could also explain their impressive win-to-loss ratio.

Balkan - rumored to be the best spearman of the clan. his audacity and intelligence is translated perfectly into his combat capabilities, able to twist his spear around to block attacks from all directions. he takes great pride into his combative skill, as he usually carves out his name on his fallen enemies' bodies (and thus his is the only name which is known). he also sports some scars on his otherwise handsome features.

"Boom" - real name unknown. he is reported to be muscular but agile. he fights with what seems like a hollow log that shoots rocks, like a crude, noisy gun. he is said to be aggressive, often blowing up enemy clans' shelters with little thought. he uses his loglike weapon as one would a club should any enemy come near him.

"Stabber" - real name unknown. another spearman of the clan, though he fights in a considerably different manner, most notably his use of two spears and his tendency to hurl them at foes. he always argues with stone for one reason or another.

"Stone" - real name unknown.a young, teenage girl of ephemeral beauty who wields a boulder with a strap attached to it, and uses it like a flail. she is for the most part meek, but whenever her comrades are in danger she is more than willing to draw blood. she is also reported to have been stopping "Stabber" from raping subdued females, apparently having been raped before, and thus is one of the most common reasons why they are not on good terms.

"Flit" - real name unknown. she is made out to be a skinny girl of around ten years old, and is their main watchdog, due to her excellent eyesight. she is also very quick, usually able to stab an enemy's blind spot before they could even blink in realization.


They're in. No doubt about it. Thank you. I may add a few more details here and there, but this is basically ready for me to use.


n_n glad to hear~

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