Post Reply ~chapter 1~
Posted 5/29/08 , edited 6/9/08
I'm a vampire?! ~~~~~ ( what is in between ( ) are there thoughts)

Ohayo, my name is Anaka Miyako and today is my 15th birthday. I'm soo happy!!! Me and my best friends are at my house celebrating my birthday. Me with sakura, satskia and kayumi.
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(note: they are at Anaka's house, in her bedroom)

Satskia, Kayumi, Sakura: Happy 15th birthday Anaka-chan.

*all 4 of them raise their glasses in the air*

Anaka: Thanks you guys *smiles happily*

Kayumi: Ok Anaka, time to open your presents. *she gives Anaka a purple bag with black stripes* mine first!!

Anaka: Ok, ok *takes bag* I wonder what it is...?? *she sticks her hand in the bag and pulls out a bracelet with black and red gems* Kayumi-chan I love it!! *hugs Kayumi* arigato

Kayumi: *hugs back* your welcome

Satskia: Petty bracellet.

Sakura: Yeah really cool.

Satskia: Ok mine next. I'm sure you'll like it *gives Anaka an envelope*

Anaka: yeah *laughs* well your right.*opens the envelope* Nice, very nice.

Sakura: And now the best, for last *giggles*

Anaka: *opens bag* A photo album??

Sakura: Open it up

Anaka: Ok *looks thru album**sees different pictures of all 4 of them* I love it. Thank you Sakura^^

Satskia & Kayumi: It is the best for last T~T

Anaka: Don't worry you guys your presents are cool too.*smiles*

Satskia & Kayumi: Arigato

Sakura: Time for cake.. *stands up*

Kayumi: Hai *she stands up and goes downstairs with Sakura and Satskia* Anaka you coming??

Anaka: I'll be there in a sec. I'm gonna put my presents away.

Kayumi: Ok

Anaka: *puts her present away**sees something move pass by her bedroom window in the corner of her eye* What was that?? Must have been my imagenation.


[downstairs]

Satskia: Finally birthday girl is here.

Anaka: Yeah, sorry I took a while

Sakura: *cutting the cake in pieces* One BIG piece of cake 4 the birthday girl *puts the big piece of cake on a plate and hands it to Anaka* Here you go

Anaka: Arigato^^

Sakura: *accidently cuts her finger with the knife* aaauuuuwww T~T

Anaka: *sees the blood dripping from Sakura's finger* (why do i feel like licking her blood?? Whats wrong with me?!) *turns away*

Kayumi: Anaka are you ok??

Anaka: Yeah I'm fine *smiles nervously*

Kayumi: hmm...... ok if you say so *looks at Anaka suspiciously*


[next day at school]

*bell rings*

Sakura: Finally school is over. It was feeling like forever!

Satskia: Yup, now we are FREEE!!!!!

Kayumi: Satskia?!! keep your voice down.

Anaka: *listens to them and laughs*

Kai: *walks by and looks at Anaka*

Sakura: OMG Kai is sooo dreamy!!

Kayumi & Satskia: Hai~

Anaka: He's ok *starts wakling away*

Satskia: You know Anaka, thats what I don't get about you. Kai is like the hottest guy at our school. What don't you like about him??

Anaka: Maybe cause he's a 16 yeard old thats a snob, stuck up and obnocious.

Sakura: But those are the rumors. Aren't you the one who said to not judge a book by it's cover??

Anaka: But I think thats why he doesn't talk to anyone. Cause he thinks he's better. Besides Kai isn't a book. Or is he??

Sakura: You know what I mean.

Anaka: Yeah, yeah whatever.

Satskia: So we going to the mall??

Anaka: Not me. I have to do something for my aunt.

Kayumi: Groceries??

Anaka: Yup. Well I'll be going now bye guys. *walks away waving*

Satskia & Sakura: bye

Kayumi: See ya


[outside supermarket]

Anaka: Waw that took a lot of time. *looks at clock on wall*-starts walking on sidewalk-*passes by an alley*-stops infront of it-*hears a voice*

voice in alley: *whispers* anaka~...

Anaka: *gulps* Is anyone there?? *walks slowly into the alley*-sees a guy appear from the darkness-

guy: Hello Anaka. I've been waiting for you..

Anaka: *takes a step back* Wh-... who are you??

guy: *walks out of shadow*

Anaka: (KAI!!!) Oh it's you Kai *relieved* What are you doing here?? And why are you waiting for me??

Kai: 'Cause your a vampire and I am your teacher.

Anaka: WHAT??!!!! I'm a vamp-....vampire?!


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that was really good!
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anime1022 wrote:

that was really good!


thx^^ I actually have volume 1 done and I am working on volume 2
I'm just 2 lazy 2 type XD
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this is gd and fun 2 read 2
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anime1022 wrote:

that was really good!


thx^^ I actually have volume 1 done and I am working on volume 2
I'm just 2 lazy 2 type XD


yeah, i know how you feel!
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OMG THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!!! can't wait to read the next one ^ ^ good JOB!~
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ahlor wrote:

OMG THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!!! can't wait to read the next one ^ ^ good JOB!~


thx^^ idk y but I can write the stories easily o.o
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cool
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wow! sound exciting!
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wow! sound exciting!


thx
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great story..it seems to be interesting
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