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(Behold, I put up part 2 because I felt like it... )

-part 2-
"Okay," The female teacher stood in front of homeroom.
Her long black hair was tied in plaids that hung over her shoulder, her small, loli-like appearance made her a popular teacher...but it was mostly because of... "Today is a very special day........New video games are released today, so right after class I have to sneak out." Which explains the ninja equipment, "instead of teaching you whatever the heck I normally teach, I will teach you of video games...which is way more awesome." ...Best...teacher ever...

Sion opened appeared in the door, "Sorry, I'm late, Kana-sensei." Sion apologized.
"Oh dear," Kana said, placing her hand on her cheek. "What should I do?" She thought about it...but than smiled and raised her index finger. "Absolutely nothing, everyone's late...besides this is homeroom, actual class doesn't start yet."
Sion sighed in relief, he would not be punished. He walked over to his seat, in the back, next to the window.
Kana-sensei reached into her bag, planning her escape.

"Sion," A male voice said next to him. "Dude, you okay?" As the typical side character, he wasn't cooler looking than Sion. His build was about the same as Sion's though.
Short blonde hair, and brown eyes. Nothing special because he was merely a side character.
"Yah, I'm fine, why?" Sion asked.
"BECAUSE I'M GONNA KICK YOUR ASS!!!" D< "YOU MADE CONTACT WITH THE LONER, AOI, YOU MUST DIE!!!" He was about to attack.
Sion had to think quickly, "Look, Haru, porn, over there!" Sion pointed over.
"Porn?!" He looked over his shoulder, but all he saw was Yurika. "...Are you porn?" He pointed directly at Yurika.
"....." Yurika cracked her knuckles. "My, my, you must want an early funeral." She pulled back her fist and than...
A rapid display of punches at Haru, lifting him into the air. Than, while he was in the air, a roundhouse kick to the gut.
Haru was kicked out the window! "WHY?!" .....He may be upgraded to a secondary character for comedy reason...

-end of part 2-
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but too much violence iz scary... >.<



In real life, sure.

Than again, this isn't Higurashi...
X__x;;
That scared the crap out of me...Nothing has scared me as much since.
People would say to me while watching a horror movie, "Aren't you scared?!"
Me: "I've seen scarier."


wow... higurashi = no touching it :]



Indeed.
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(Though if anyone's interested, I could put a horror story later. )

-part 3-

"What happened outside?" Yurika sat on the desk in front of Sion.
"I'd kinda like to know too," Haru was magically back...and completely Okay...bandaged...but Okay...What? Not everything has to make perfect sense!
"Lemme guess, Aoi has a secret crush on you, and she's been wanting to tell you for a while but has never had the courage. But now, a flag was raised when she saved you. So, if you don't act on it than you'll completely miss the 'Loner-girl ending.' and than leading to the H-scene!" Haru explained...neither Yurika or Sion were really paying much attention to him.
"A potted plant fell on my head, she kinda came out of nowhere and tackled me."
"Luck favors you."
"HEY, DON'T IGNORE ME!"
Yurika kicked him in the face, "Be silent." She obviously didn't like him.....or thought of him as a good friend, we'll never know.

Sion's eyes were drawn to Yurika for some reason. He than remembered...Yurika kissed him yesterday!!!
Yurika could feel Sion's gaze, "Do you want to do it again?" She asked.
Sion's cheeks turned red, he averted his eyes.
Yurika smiled at him.

"Oh, what's this?" Haru once again came out of nowhere. "Did something happen between you two?"
"...." Sion remained silent. But, if Yurika was alive...that meant everyone else was Okay...right? He sure hoped so.
"Hey, check it out. Snow!" Haru pointed outside the window.
It was snowing outside. "That's...weird..." Sion didn't remember anything about snow today...

-end of part 3-
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yays!! snow!! me wuv snow X3 wa...me want a teacher lyke kana-sensei...^-^
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(For the record. The snow has something to do with Aoi.
Guess what kind of being she is?

A) Polar Bear Demon
B) Demi-god of the Ice element
C) Some sort of Angel
D) A Spirit of Winter

It's a tough question...

Same here. Too bad real teachers can't be like that! )


-part 4-


The orbs of Shirayuki and Beriai floated around the room where the potted plant fell. "Hey, wolf girl, can you sense it?"
As Shirayuki floated around the room, she reverted to her human form. "Yah..." She reached out into the air, feeling the air in this room, "I feel...the intent to do harm." She sniffed the air, "And the stench from residents of hell are all over this room."
Beriai's human form appeared, she leaned against the wall. "Well don't look at me, all the Residents I gathered were killed by the Kuroushi Guardians." Beriai wasn't involved in this in any way.
"It is strange though, why are their Residents of Hell in this school? Someone should've sensed their presence long ago?" Shirayuki didn't entirely understand it. "Unless, they were put here recently...or their power is extremely low...which means..."
"But for a Resident of Hell to ascend to a demon class, they have to eat something from the side of heaven right?" Beriai asked, she wanted to make sure she was right.
"Yah..." Shirayuki sniffed the air again, "They were here recently, but they left." Shirayuki paced around the room, trying to catch their scent. "It's no use. Too many beings are here, their scents are clashing."
Beriai shrugged, "It's simple, wolf, eventually they'll have to eat something. So when they make a move, we'll be there and take them out."
"We should inform, Sion." Shirayuki made her way towards the door, but was stopped by Beriai.
"Wait, why should we bother master with enemies who aren't even worth his time. I think we can do this on our own! Come on, wolf girl!" She grabbed Shirayuki's hands, "Fight on! Dragon and Wolf working together, we'll make master so proud."
"...." Shirayuki was silent, she had a lack of energy to try and talk her out of this...and she didn't see anything wrong with it. "Okay." She simply agreed...

-Time: Lunch...the best time of a school day, everything else sucks...except dismissal-

As Sion wandered about the halls, he wondered to himself, 'Where are those two?'
He passed by the art room, "Hmmm, ah, finally done." A female voice said from inside.
"?" Sion could hear the voice...he pressed his ear against the door.
"But...it feels like I'm missing something?" The female voice said to herself. "Oh dear, how long was I painting?" The sound of footsteps...
Creeee...
Sion heard a creaking sound... 'Creaking?'

THE DOOR FELL OFF IT'S HINGES!
A gasp from the female voice!
These doors weren't meant to be leaned against.
"Ow." Sion was in pain once more. He started to get up, seeing the girl in front of him...It was Aoi.

Aoi's cheeks were flushed bright red, "K-K-Kuroushi-senpai!" She stuttered, hastily rushing to her painting and than draping it with a green cloth to keep whatever it was hidden.
"You're...Aoi-chan?"
Aoi blushed at the 'chan' honorific at the end of her name...it caused a little happiness inside her...
Sion was now back on his feet, he dusted off his pants and shirt. "Sorry about burst in here like that?" He rubbed the back of his head and laughed nervously, "You see, my curiosity got the better of me and-" Sion was momentarily distracted by the covered up painting. "What'd you paint there?" He asked, curiously.
Aoi twitched at the question. "N-Nothing!" She stuttered, shaking her head rapidly. "It's...It's...It's nothing at all...!" She raised her hands out in front of her, ironically, she had forgotten that the drape was still in her hand and she ended up revealing the painting.......of Sion...anime styled...
And now...an awkward moment of silence...

When Sion said nothing, tears grew at the corner of Aoi's eyes. "S-S-Sorry!" She ran right past him, out of the classroom.
"Hey, Aoi-chan!" Sion called after her, he was about to chase after her, but he realized the painting was still there. "...." He stared at it for a little while. It wasn't known if he liked or hated it...

-end of part 4-
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hmm...i dont dink itz B or C...maybe not D too...so i'll go with A!!^-^
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Yeah thats kinda how I fell most of the time when i read your fricken awesome work


My work is good?
I always wonder if it's flowing right. Than I think back and go; "I wish I could've made this better."


Honestly you're too modest I love your awesome work I told you
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roxanne4567 wrote:


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Yeah thats kinda how I fell most of the time when i read your fricken awesome work


My work is good?
I always wonder if it's flowing right. Than I think back and go; "I wish I could've made this better."


Honestly you're too modest I love your awesome work I told you


Sorry, it's just something that always bothers me. Wondering if I'm actually doing a good job...
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*Types.*
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I'll be getting to the next part later today.
X__x;;

I got two projects to get done. And than I have another personal objective to get done.
And than I have to get some drawings done within the next week. X__x;
Honestly, for a single person whose not used to the speed of weekly manga artists, it's near impossible.
I hope I meet the deadline. PS, my deadline is in 5 days.
It's not something I plan on submitting, but when I say deadline, it means that after those 5 days I won't have access to a scanner anymore!

And now I have GTA 4. So that'll keep me busy for a bit...such a busy week for me.
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-part 5-

She sat on the rooftop now, hugging her knees and crying heavily. She didn't care that the snow was hitting her head, all she wanted was to be alone. "He must hate me now." She picked her head up, peeking out into the snowy sky. "What was I thinking when I painted that?" She lowered her head again, more tears flowing. "I guess...I wanted him to notice me." She felt something pat her head. "?" She looked up...

Sion waved to her, "Well, I'm noticing you now." Sion laughed his usual nice guy laugh.

"Eh, eh, eh...?" She needed to wait for a little while...even her brain needed a little while before it woke up. She gasped and than jumped back, "Kuroushi-senpai! Wh-wha-wh-what are you doing here?!" She was surprised to see him here, especially after what happened a little while ago.

"It's cold out here." Sion answered honestly, "I know it's the winter uniform, but I don't think they're prepared to deal with this kind of winter. Besides, I thought you might like some company." He took a seat next to her. "So, about that painting..." He had it under his arm.

"I-I'm really sorry about it." She bowed in apology. "If you don't like it, I won't do it anymore."

"No, no, nothing like that. I actually like it..." Sion scratched the back of his head and looked away, "I was...surprised though."

'This is it.' This was the moment, she had to ask... "W-Well..." She twiddled her fingers, her cheeks turned a light shade of red. "I-I-I...for a while...I've..." She couldn't find the right words to say it. "I've...I...I've...Um...I've..." She took a deep breathe, "I've always wanted you to make a contract with me!!!" She said it all very loudly and very quickly, afterwards her cheeks were such a deep shade of red steam was coming out of her ears...

"...Eh...?" Sion was kinda expecting something else. "Oh, well..." It was basically the same thing though. But...Sion was already in a contract with Shirayuki. "Well, the thing is..." Unless Aoi was a chain-type than Sion would have to decline and hurt Aoi's feelings. But, asking Aoi if she was a chain may have made Sion seem like a scumbag.
'Geez...what should I do?'
He was stuck...
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(Not much motivation here.
Hooray for drama...? )

-part 6-

"Well, you see...the thing is..." Sion had a hard time trying to tell her.
It was in that moment, in the back of his mind, his senses, honed after 17 years of intense training was starting to activate.
He grabbed onto Aoi's hand, and than held her close.

Aoi's cheeks turned bright red, because she thought that Sion was progressing really fast.

But instead, Sion had back-flipped with Aoi as something came soaring under them.
When Sion landed, he looked to what it was: It seemed like someone with a school uniform, but the problem was that in place of arms were bat wings, their skin was a dark grayish color and their eyes were bright red, devilish horns and a thin tail.
"A resident of hell?" Sion remembered this being was a low-level Hell Being. Sion let go of Aoi, "I got this." Honestly, this thing had so little power...Sion could've handled this on his own....only... "Crap, I have no weapons!" O.O ...He wasn't his elder brother who could rip it apart with his bare hands! "Well, this'll be tough." Sion took a Hand-to-hand combat stance. All he had to do was stall it till Shirayuki or Beriai came around.

It flapped it's wings and sped towards Sion with the intent of ramming him with the horns on it's head.

"...." honestly, these things were just...really pathetic...
Sion side-stepped ahead of time, raising his leg in the air he slammed his foot on the enemies back. Grounding them completely. "Wow...this is easier than I thought." Maybe he COULD rip it apart with his bare hands. It wrenched out of his foot press and tripped him with it's tail. Than it took flight again...

Sion caught himself, and flipped back to his feet. 'It's probably after Aoi, I'm just the guy in the way.' Sion figured that much. "Well, at least there aren't anymore."
Suddenly, 3 more appeared...making 4 flying enemies.

"...." Sion was having crappy luck. "Okay...at least there aren't any more..."

Twice as many appeared. Making 8...

"......" Sion thought it best to just stay quiet. "Well, I shouldn't say anything or my luck will get worse."

And than there were 24.

"WHAT?! I DIDN'T EVEN SAY ANYTHING THAT TIME!!!"

A smaller one appeared, making a total of 25...technically...24 and 1/2.

"....." Sion did an Anime style faint. "This...sucks..."

"Sion," Shirayuki's voice appeared.
"Sion-sama!" Beriai's voice came.
The two orbs floated to Sion's side.
"Hey, guys." Sion greeted casually, though he was thankful to be alive really. Maybe his luck was turning up? "Alright, lets go Beriai and..." Sion paused, "and..." Could it be.....he'd forgotten her name?! "Well...you know what I mean!"

"Right..." It wasn't seen because Shirayuki was in orb form...but...she was really hurt right now. Sion had remembered Beriai's name...but not hers...?

The two orbs went through Sion...but...something felt off. The transformation was different this time, maybe it was Beriai was in there too? But, nothing was happening...Sion felt...a little different but...

"Sion-sama,"
Beriai telepathically communicated, it sounded urgent. "Something's wrong with the wolf girl!"

"What's wrong?" Sion asked.

"She's closed herself off, there's a barrier around her...I can't get through. Looks like it's just you and me here...but...without her as a base channeling the power, I can only go about 50%."
Beriai explained.

"It's okay, we'll figure something out." Sion responded, "Do it anyways, we've got enemies in front of us." Sion realized it's better to have 50% of power than none at all.

"R-Right." Beriai seemed conflicted too...

Black and red gloves started materializing on Sion's hands, they went up to his forearms.
They had a ornate engraving of the symbol for flame on them.

"Okay, lets see what I can do with these." The gloves started to light up in flames. So...now his hands were on fire. Sion was ready to fight...

(*Sigh*
I've been writing these stories alone, but, it feels different than before. *sulks.*)
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Aw cant wait for wats next and um

I dont mean to pry but wat do you mean it feels different?
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I don't know?
In the past, before I started writing here, I had a partner working by my side.
I didn't have to do all the writing alone.

We had a falling out recently...so...I'm a solo worker now. So, it feels different.
If we hadn't had that falling out, I could've asked them at any time to help me out so I don't feel all...for lack of a better word, alone.
*sigh*
I think my writing skills have suffered because of it... They don't seem to have that...kind of impact they would've had if I had the feeling of not being on my own. Of course, as a creator, I think anything I create could be improved in so many ways...so...I can't tell if their good or not anymore.

My Creative Drive isn't working properly, and my Idea Generator is operating at low capacity...
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itz okie kouta-kun!!^-^ ur story iz still flowing^-^ just relax nd reread ur story again 2 c if u can dink of wat u might lack^-^ btw, ur story iz starting 2 sound lyke da anime pretear except she can only have one person inside her body XP
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itz okie kouta-kun!!^-^ ur story iz still flowing^-^ just relax nd reread ur story again 2 c if u can dink of wat u might lack^-^ btw, ur story iz starting 2 sound lyke da anime pretear except she can only have one person inside her body XP


Ironically, I've never watched Pretear.
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