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itz okie kouta-kun!!^-^ ur story iz still flowing^-^ just relax nd reread ur story again 2 c if u can dink of wat u might lack^-^ btw, ur story iz starting 2 sound lyke da anime pretear except she can only have one person inside her body XP


Ironically, I've never watched Pretear.


dat should be normal 2 boys since itz mostly a girl anime^-^ u can go read da summary if u lyke^-^

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Hm, I wonder if I should work on the next part of the story...
Actually do the remaining school work?
Or...Draw like crazy to finish character appearances?
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itz okie kouta-kun!!^-^ ur story iz still flowing^-^ just relax nd reread ur story again 2 c if u can dink of wat u might lack^-^ btw, ur story iz starting 2 sound lyke da anime pretear except she can only have one person inside her body XP


Ironically, I've never watched Pretear.


dat should be normal 2 boys since itz mostly a girl anime^-^ u can go read da summary if u lyke^-^



Okay. *Gives a pet rock.*
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Kouta_XIII wrote:


lilpurplepanda wrote:


Kouta_XIII wrote:


lilpurplepanda wrote:

itz okie kouta-kun!!^-^ ur story iz still flowing^-^ just relax nd reread ur story again 2 c if u can dink of wat u might lack^-^ btw, ur story iz starting 2 sound lyke da anime pretear except she can only have one person inside her body XP


Ironically, I've never watched Pretear.


dat should be normal 2 boys since itz mostly a girl anime^-^ u can go read da summary if u lyke^-^



Okay. *Gives a pet rock.*


*takes it* thanx!! i shall call u kouta da 2nd!!^-^

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(Screw it, multi-tasking powers, activate!!!

BTW, I drew Chizuru and Sion today...a couple problems though...
Chizuru came out looking like a loli.
And I dislike the way I drew Sion.
I'm currently trying to draw Shirayuki. )

-part 7-


Inside Sion's body...
'Why...did he remember her name...but...not mine?' Shirayuki sat holding her knees, the wave of sadness flowing through her. 'Even though...' She remembered an image of that young boy who she had grown fond of a long time ago, she hid her face.

Meanwhile, Beriai was trying to make her words get through to Shirayuki, while at the same time supporting Sion. She was having a hard time doing both at once. Even as a demon, this was still difficult for her.

Also, on the outside, Sion was fighting the flying Residents of Hell. He was having a much harder time than before...probably because there were a lot of them, but also...
'Why do I feel...weaker than before?' It was because without Shirayuki acting as the base, Sion was basically a human whose hands were on fire and hardly anything else.

3 of them came from 3 different directions, left, north, and above.
Sion continued running to the one in front of him.
When it used a claw strike.
Sion palmed it at the top of it's head, using it as leverage he gained altitude to take down the one coming from above.
Obviously, because it was basically heading down at him like a missile, it didn't have time to get out of the way. Sion grabbed it by it's wing joints, the gloves burned a deeper fire, engulfing the Resident in it's roaring flame.
Now it was a flaming cannon ball, and Sion knew exactly what to do with it.

He grabbed it by one of it's wings while still mid-air, and another one coming directly up at him.
Sion first, spun full 360, hitting the enemy with it's own ally on fire, and than he repeated it, once, twice, three times!
He did one last strong hit, hurtling the enemy down to its standing ally on the ground.
Sion, gathered his strength for two more things, "Here goes..." He knew it wasn't a good idea to test an unused skill in the middle of a battle, but this was a special circumstance.
He tossed the enemy directly at the two enemies, now they were in a pile.
He smashed his fists together, the fire from one fist focused on the other fist. Giving Sion one whole flaming arm...
"And now, the Coup De Grace!" Sion had no idea what he just said...he just wanted to sound cool.
He than meteored down to the piled up enemies. His fist ready to strike...

BOOM!!!


The impact of the Flaming Meteor-like Fist Strike caused dust clouds to pick up. The 3 enemies were no more. It happened so fast, the enemies probably didn't even know they had been killed.
"Alright than," Sion cleared the dust with a burst of power, he could see the enemies once more. "I'll finish this than." He moved his hands around, as if forming a small, hand sized orb...a spark started to ignight...
Next, a ball of flames would appear...you'd think the enemies would've attacked him by now? I mean seriously...he's like...distracted right now...
.....
Why is it, every enemy has to wait for their opponent to finish preparing their attack before trying to attack, only to get vaporized moments later?

The flaming orb was now ready, it started changing it's fire color from orangish to more of a blue and red color, "Here goes." Sion held it in one hand, positioning himself to throw it. "Hah!" He was just about to throw it at the enemies, when suddenly!
"Sion-sama, you mustn't!" Beriai's voice had distracted him, but it was too late anyways.
Sion felt a great strain on his body, causing the fire ball to weaken a bit before it went airborne.

Because these guys were stupid enough to stand there, obviously they would get burned by it. However, some of them were smart enough to get away...but not a lot of them however. The resulting explosion thinned their numbers by about half.
So...lets see...
There were about 25. 3 died. Sion just took out half of them.
So, 23 divided by 2....
......
11.5?
Rounded out...that's like...
12 left...

The strain on Sion's body was becoming greater, "What?" He said to himself, his legs giving way under him. He fell on one knee. The flames on his gloves burning out... "What's...happening?" He asked through strained teeth, symbolizing pain. The gloves on his arms, which were light as a feather before, now felt like giant weights on his hands.
"Sion-sama, without Shirayuki acting as the base to my power it'll deplete 10 times quicker than normal when you use that much of our power. That's why you feel so weak." Beriai had forgotten to tell him this. "I'm sorry, Sion-sama." It was because of her blunder that Sion was fighting about 12 Residents of Hell now. He felt like he did back in his training days.

But, Sion smiled. "Don't worry about it, Beriai." Even though he was looking death in the face, he didn't feel like it was Beriai's fault.
"But, Sion-sama...if I had-"
"No!" Sion bursted out, "I was the one...who used the power without thinking ahead." He tried to stand up, "I got myself into this...so I'll fight my way out." Sion took his stance, but he could fall at any second.

The enemies swooped down, jetting at Sion like missiles. Those horns would definitely pierce through him.

"This is it."
"A real man...doesn't give in till he's dead." A man's voice called, a swish of a black coat was all Sion could see in front of him, he could recognize the black and red jacket in an instant however. "Aniki?" Sion was surprised to see him here.

"Lucy, Shana...watch the kids for a moment. I got these." The mysterious man jumped directly into the center of the Residents of Hell, "These guys...ARE NOTHING TO ME!!!" He started beating them down with his bare hands.

Sion was relieved...with his Aniki here...he had nothing to worry about. But than he realized... "Lucy-san...tell me...Aniki was here all this time wasn't he?"

The silver orb floating next to Sion made a laughing sound, "Uh, well..."

The black orb, obviously Shana, suddenly said, "I told him it was a stupid idea."

Sion twitched...he said that cool thing just now, for nothing! And he was prepared to fight to the death and look really cool! Sion was now pissed now... "Damnit...why does he always have to show off?!"
Sion knew his Aniki liked to show off...especially if it meant one-upping Sion in the process...!!!

Sion picked up his head, "Aoi-chan!" He had completely forgotten her, too absorbed in fighting.
Aoi was just standing there, she had a sad look on her face.

."Aoi-chan?" Sion's focus was completely on her, otherwise he would've noticed.

However, Aoi noticed it. "Kuroushi-senpai, behind you!"

Even if Sion had noticed it, there was nothing he could do. Nobody could've done anything, because no one had seen it coming.
From the pile of burnt corpses Sion had created a little while ago, the one at the very bottom had crawled out and rushed towards Sion. Piercing him through the chest with the horn on it's head.

"Sion!" The mysterious man dashed towards the Resident who caused the damage.
At once, he jumped on it's chest, springing off it.
Landing on the ground, he than rammed the weight of his body into it. Forcing it on the ground.
It raised it's wing to attack, but he had grabbed it, twisted it back, snapping the entire bone.
Next he face palmed the enemy with his free hand...and that was the end of it...it's...too disgusting to describe what happened to it's face.

Sion was bleeding now, his vision was blurring.
'So in the end...I get injured anyways?' The last thing Sion saw, was Aoi-chan, staring with horror in her eyes. And than...holding the side of her head, a loud scream and than an ice-tornado surrounding Aoi-chan...

(Okay, there's the end of this part...back to drawing. )
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good part^-^ lolz i agree with u, sometimes enemies in animes r really dumb...they wait until da other completely transforms nd then they start fighting^-^ hee hee! Chizuru looks lyke a loli? XD but im sure i'll draw her more funny looking than u^-^'
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Okay, good news everyone.
I drew Sion, though he looks younger than he actually is. Still, I like the way it turned out.
I drew Chizuru...at last... X__x But her chest size........ *cries.*
Shirayuki is proving difficult to draw. X__x;
I tried drawing Ikumi next to Sleiphnir...Sleiphnir came out...alright...but...I don't like the way I drew Ikumi... X__x
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lolz!! keep trying!! gl!!^-^
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Oh That was so cool cant wait 4 da drawing
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Pray that I'm able to scan them.
This is why I need an artist. I'll keep redoing the drawing over and over again and than still not be happy with the result.
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(Wow, I haven't updated here in a while. )

-part 8-


Before we begin, lets start off with a conveniently placed plot device.
What was left of the Residents were rotting on the ground somewhere.
A girl with blonde twin tail hair-style walked past them. Her dark green eyes looking around to see if they had all be decimated.
And it was true, not one was alive...actually, there was one that was alive...barely. She stood over it, realizing that it would be an adequate host.
She knew her goal.
A black 6-point star-seal formed below her..
"Vos quisnam have obduco ex is universitas. Vestri somes , quod rots hic mos servo meus to order. Iam consurgo scum illorum quisnam have obduco."
(Translation may be off:
"You who have passed from this world. Your corpse, which rots here will serve my commands. Now rise up, scum of those who have passed.")
The one left alive started twitching...
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Sion opened bloodshot eyes, into fluorescent white.
It was snowing heavily.
"Why is it snowing?" There was something heavy on his chest. He looked down, and saw Beriai resting her head on his chest. Her dragon wings extending to the sky, they were on fire.
"Beriai?" Putting the pieces together, Beriai must've been trying to keep Sion warm with her fire. But in such cold weather it must've been difficult.

"Sion-sama..." Beriai brought him into a hug. A hug that any guy would be jealous of.
"I'm so sorry! Sion-sama!" Beriai cried, "If my flame had been stronger, you wouldn't have gotten in this condition! If only I had told you ahead of time!" She felt like it was entirely her fault.

Sion pat her head, "It's alright...I'm alive aren't I?" He gave a thumbs up.
"But I won't be for long, if you keep squeezing me like this." In the current position, Sion was sort of suffocating.

"Oh!" She let go the instant he said that.
She laughed nervously and knocked her own head with her hand. "Sorry, Sion-sama, I'm such an idiot."
They both shared a laugh right after that.
Than things serioused up again.

"Wait a minute." Sion said to himself, with a serious face. "What with this weird mood I'm feeling?"
Sion could've sworn he could faintly hear music in the distance somewhere.
Little did he know, it was I, the god of THIS story, who was making it so for comedy purposes!!!

Sion-sama..." She leaned in towards him.
"Do you want, more of my power? There's a quick way to do it..." She was referring to 'that' method.

Beriai's lips were coming closer.
"Wait, Beriai, I'm not mentally prepared for that kind of thing?!" The line of a typical loser character in Anime. Despite the fact that this guy will probably have multiple females around him, and yet never responds to their feelings.
Just like 90% of Harem animes I've ever seen.

"Hey, love birds." The male voice from earlier called.

"Seo!" Sion could recognize the voice. But than he got hit over the head.

"Is that the way you address your older brother who just saved your life?!" Seo was weird about these sort of things, he hit Sion again.

"S-Sorry, Aniki." The proper title for their Yakuza-like family.

"That's better." He took a step back and crossed his arms. "You're 1,000 years too early to think you can call me by my first name." He smirked in a cool way.
He wore a battered black and red hooded-jacket that reached down to his knees. The hood was yellow by the way.
The sleeves had been torn off, purposely most likely.
A flame pattern on the bottom of his jacket. And a wing-like sigil on the back of his jacket.
The shirt he wore was a dark blue, short-sleeve, V-Cut with a white long-sleeve shirt underneath it. Hence why he had sleeves.
The pants he wore was completely black.
Oh he also wore boots.
His face was like a cooler version of Sion's,
and his hair was even spikier and a darker shade.

The accessories he had included a silver armband on both arms and silver ankle bands over his pants.
1 large Chain around his neck, with a strange symbol inside a circle that hung on the chain.
You couldn't see it, and probably never will, but he had a twin dragon tattoo that covered his entire back. Similar to the wolf tattoo that Sion had on his back. But cooler...it was a rite of passage for the men in that family.

Standing by Seo's side were his contract partners.
Lucy and Shana.
They both wore opposite colored one-piece dresses. (White and black)
Shana was the one wearing the black dress, her hair was long and colored baby blue. It was tied at the bottom into splitting tails.
Her eyes were vermillion.

Lucy was the one wearing the white dress, her hair was just as long but colored Dark violet. It was tied at the bottom.
Her eyes were sapphire colored.
Man, that was a lot of character descriptions. Now for the story...
Sion noticed, something was amiss. "Where's Shirayuki...and Aoi-chan?" He asked.
Suddenly, the mood turned tense, the thing that happened to Shirayuki and Aoi was about to be known......

(Your waiting stance: )

right after this commercial break!
(You reaction: )

To leave you guys in suspense and have something to look forward to...!
(Insert booing noise)
-__-
Okay, fine...here ya go!

Lucy took a step forward, "After you passed out, that Aoi girl created this snow storm it's covered the entire city, Shirayuki went out to look for her."
Shana quickly added, "But something was up with Shirayuki, you better go talk to her, it's your duty as her contractor."
Now the planning stage, Seo took over... "Alright, now that the explanation is over...Sion, you and your partner go search in the school, me and mine will searched the city."
"If anyone runs into trouble, send up a flare so we can get to your current position." Lucy added.
Afterwards, Seo, Lucy, and Shana vanished in a whirlwind of snow...their doing obviously.

Beriai grabbed Sion's hand, "Come on, Sion-sama, we have to find Shirayuki first."

(Your reactions:)

There, now enjoy the commercial break with nothing to look forward to...
(-__-)
I'll be on the internet.
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yays!!^-^ a new part plus a bonus of piccys!!^-^ but i got confused on dis part of da story...
"Shana was the one wearing the black dress, her hair was long and colored baby blue. It was tied at the bottom into splitting tails.
Her eyes were vermillion.

Shana was the one wearing the white dress, her hair was just as long but colored Dark violet. It wasn't tied.
Her eyes were sapphire colored."

they both have da name shana but none describing lucy :[
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yays!!^-^ a new part plus a bonus of piccys!!^-^ but i got confused on dis part of da story...
"Shana was the one wearing the black dress, her hair was long and colored baby blue. It was tied at the bottom into splitting tails.
Her eyes were vermillion.

Shana was the one wearing the white dress, her hair was just as long but colored Dark violet. It wasn't tied.
Her eyes were sapphire colored."

they both have da name shana but none describing lucy :[


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Sorry, that was my mistake. I'm gonna go fix it now.
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YAy for da story cant wait 4 more getting excited
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yays!!^-^ a new part plus a bonus of piccys!!^-^ but i got confused on dis part of da story...
"Shana was the one wearing the black dress, her hair was long and colored baby blue. It was tied at the bottom into splitting tails.
Her eyes were vermillion.

Shana was the one wearing the white dress, her hair was just as long but colored Dark violet. It wasn't tied.
Her eyes were sapphire colored."

they both have da name shana but none describing lucy :[


Oops.
Sorry, that was my mistake. I'm gonna go fix it now.


itz okies^-^ kays!!^-^

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