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Kotoko Killing time...
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kotoko: irie.............. what are you doing here
irie: i am waiting for you( he was waiting for her in the rain)
kotoko: why
irie: have you answered kin-chan
kotoko: that's none of you business
irie: let's go home
kotoko: why
irie: i want to talk something about you
after the went home
irie: i want to mery kotoko
all of them shock
kotoko: irieee.......
and the story contine like this may be and they got married and irie become doctor and kotoko became nurse.
thanks for reading it


i think this is just like the taiwan's confession but i really like how it ended ^^

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It starts out as kotoko and Irie fighting. They get mad at each other for weeks. kotoko starts to see other guys. And really ignoring irie. She starts having a great time with Kinnosuke. Irie starts to get jealous but of course he says nothing. Kinnosuke and kotoko date for two months, irie gets even more mad so there is more fights at home between Irie and Kotoko. Kinnosuke then propose to kotoko in front of her her dad, irie and Irie's parents.

Setting:: Irie's house front door.

Kinnosuke: i know you still might have some feelings for Irie but i love you for 7 years now. I know you can learn to love me it just take time, i have love for the both of us.
(everyone is shocked)

Kotoko: i don't know what to say or do (starts to cry)

Kinnosuke: you don't have to do anything just say yes and i will take you away from here

Kotoko:...........(before she could say anything Irie takes her away)

Kinnosuke: stupid dumb ass... bring Kotoko back she does not want to be with you. You bring too much pain. come back here KOOOOOTOOOOKOOOOO! (runs after Irie but Irie turns)

Irie: Is that so, then why does she not get with you sooner. Kotoko will only love me, get use to it. (Kinnosuke is in shock and does not move, Irie's family were happy so and was Kotoko's dad)
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Kotoko: what are you doing, i was going to answer him i was going to say........
(Irie kisses kotoko, and Kotoko was so lost)

Irie: i don't want to hear another word out your mouth about the proposal with that dumb ass Kinnosuke
(turns away embarrassed)

Kotoko: i don't understand....ugh why i thought you don't like me. Im not as smart as an adverage person, i can't cook, don't understand anything, can't play sports, i'm,,,i'm usless (crys) you are right i can't do anything and i finally find out i'm not the one for you i know it but, i just don't want to believe it that's all.... I..(Irie turns around and hugs her and Kotoko want to get away) I don't need you, i don't deseve this....( another kiss in the lips)

Irie: No don't move, you know i say too damn much. when i'm with you i'm not myself i... no let me finish i can't see clearly. You mess up my words and i know you can't do anything but i doesn't matter. You say you don't deserve me but its the other way around.... I don't deserve you, you're so honest and you help me so much in ways i can't imagine. I started to have feeling for you i guess when i kissed you the first time. But i was so nervous. (looks down at Kotoko with emotion in his eyes) i really love you

Kotoko: i don't believe this has to be a joke. it's not funny Irie

Irie: will this prove you wrong... (Kotoko struggles to get away but Irie pulls her and kiss her this time with all the love he had)

(behind the trees...spying)

Kinnosuke: i can't believe it don't get to kiss her like that (leaves)

Mean while:

Irie: we better go back (not embarrassed, holds Kotoko's hands)

Kotoko: Ugh...unmmm... i think you should go first i need to think.... (runss)

Irie: I don't think so... now that you know i like you it's going to be fun hahahahaha (catch up with Kotoko and picks her up, then whispered in her ear) I love you

Kotoko: (blushes and whisphered back ) I love you too (she then puts her arms around Irie's neck)

(THEY THEN WALK HOME INTO THE SUNSET TOGETHER WHO KNOW WHAT MIGHT BE IN STORE FOR THEM IN THE FUTURE..... BUT WHAT'S CLEAR IS, THEIR LOVE IS BLOOMING)

MY VERSION OF THE CONFESSION , BUT OF COURSE THIS WOULD NOT HAPPEN I THINK...LOL
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this is why irie confessed to her:


so i dont really wanna wait and predict how the confesion will go. i wanna wait until the episode comes out !! =]
by the way, in the spoiler...it was from the drama(my friend told me what happenned and spoiled it for me) :p
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Alliechan wrote:

Hmm, I've always pictured something more angry/dramatic like this:

-they get in a fight because of some happenings at college or the college graduation and Kotoko is sick of being called stupid or being put down by Irie who doesn't deserve her love because he's cold hearted to her-

Kotoko: -yelling- I should have given up on you long ago! But because of that stupid kiss... I couldn't!
-Kotoko crying at memory and how she really loves Irie-

Irie: -smirks- -holds onto her arms gently but firmly and kisses her- -speaking to her gently yet doesn't seem trust worthy because of his half mischievous smile- You mean the kiss like this?

Kotoko: -silent-
-half love struck half enraged because of the repeat offense and him not changing how he acts to her and figures he only did it to have the same effect as last time-
-she slaps Irie hard on the side of his face-
-anger in her voice- How dare you! I've been in love with you all this time, and yet, you've only have been teasing me, this time... I'll hate you for real!
-She starts crying again having new tears fall down her already tear soaked cheeks-

Irie: -shocked from her angry reaction from kissing her and stunned from the slap- -he really meant the kiss this time-
Kotoko, I... don't want... you to hate me. -gathering his wits and trying to make sense- I kissed you last time because I was angry mainly and a bit confused, but this time... this time is different. I... really mean it this time.
-didn't want to tell her that, but since she got angry he had to-

Kotoko: -silent shock, doesn't know if she can believe him, she manages to utter a few words-
Mean what?

Irie: -didn't want to say it outright- -he looks down and mutters it under his breath trying to not feel embarrassed-
I... love you.

Kotoko: -doesn't hear it because of background noise-
Huh?

Irie: -aggravated and embarrassed- -shouts it, since he doesn't want to have to keep repeating it, and partly angry she didn't hear him the first time-
I love you idiot!

Kotoko: -shock and more background noise her tears stop as does the background noise-

Irie: I thought you would've realized it was different from my kiss, though perhaps I was already falling in love with you when I kissed you the first time so you couldn't tell.

Kotoko: -still silent- -never really thought this development was possible-

Irie: -partly from being nervous and partly trying to prove his feelings- -he gently wipes her tears away and runs his hand down her cheek to her chin and slowly moved her lips closer to his making sure she didn't object this time- -they finally kiss first the first time Kotoko knowing Irie's true feelings-

I know it might be a bit far fetched but I was bored and wanted to reply.


i like this confession. it is more like irie's style.
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It starts out as kotoko and Irie fighting. They get mad at each other for weeks. kotoko starts to see other guys. And really ignoring irie. She starts having a great time with Kinnosuke. Irie starts to get jealous but of course he says nothing. Kinnosuke and kotoko date for two months, irie gets even more mad so there is more fights at home between Irie and Kotoko. Kinnosuke then propose to kotoko in front of her her dad, irie and Irie's parents.

Setting:: Irie's house front door.

Kinnosuke: i know you still might have some feelings for Irie but i love you for 7 years now. I know you can learn to love me it just take time, i have love for the both of us.
(everyone is shocked)

Kotoko: i don't know what to say or do (starts to cry)

Kinnosuke: you don't have to do anything just say yes and i will take you away from here

Kotoko:...........(before she could say anything Irie takes her away)

Kinnosuke: stupid dumb ass... bring Kotoko back she does not want to be with you. You bring too much pain. come back here KOOOOOTOOOOKOOOOO! (runs after Irie but Irie turns)

Irie: Is that so, then why does she not get with you sooner. Kotoko will only love me, get use to it. (Kinnosuke is in shock and does not move, Irie's family were happy so and was Kotoko's dad)
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Kotoko: what are you doing, i was going to answer him i was going to say........
(Irie kisses kotoko, and Kotoko was so lost)

Irie: i don't want to hear another word out your mouth about the proposal with that dumb ass Kinnosuke
(turns away embarrassed)

Kotoko: i don't understand....ugh why i thought you don't like me. Im not as smart as an adverage person, i can't cook, don't understand anything, can't play sports, i'm,,,i'm usless (crys) you are right i can't do anything and i finally find out i'm not the one for you i know it but, i just don't want to believe it that's all.... I..(Irie turns around and hugs her and Kotoko want to get away) I don't need you, i don't deseve this....( another kiss in the lips)

Irie: No don't move, you know i say too damn much. when i'm with you i'm not myself i... no let me finish i can't see clearly. You mess up my words and i know you can't do anything but i doesn't matter. You say you don't deserve me but its the other way around.... I don't deserve you, you're so honest and you help me so much in ways i can't imagine. I started to have feeling for you i guess when i kissed you the first time. But i was so nervous. (looks down at Kotoko with emotion in his eyes) i really love you

Kotoko: i don't believe this has to be a joke. it's not funny Irie

Irie: will this prove you wrong... (Kotoko struggles to get away but Irie pulls her and kiss her this time with all the love he had)

(behind the trees...spying)

Kinnosuke: i can't believe it don't get to kiss her like that (leaves)

Mean while:

Irie: we better go back (not embarrassed, holds Kotoko's hands)

Kotoko: Ugh...unmmm... i think you should go first i need to think.... (runss)

Irie: I don't think so... now that you know i like you it's going to be fun hahahahaha (catch up with Kotoko and picks her up, then whispered in her ear) I love you

Kotoko: (blushes and whisphered back ) I love you too (she then puts her arms around Irie's neck)

(THEY THEN WALK HOME INTO THE SUNSET TOGETHER WHO KNOW WHAT MIGHT BE IN STORE FOR THEM IN THE FUTURE..... BUT WHAT'S CLEAR IS, THEIR LOVE IS BLOOMING)

MY VERSION OF THE CONFESSION , BUT OF COURSE THIS WOULD NOT HAPPEN I THINK...LOL





this the best.. hope u can make more.. ( :
Posted 6/23/08
My version:
They are fighting

Kotoko:Irie you dummy stop saying I am stupid!!!(shouting)

Irie:We'll if u stop being stupid I won't call you stupid(slightly shouting)

Kotoko:(tears running down face) you baka baka BAKA (stats hitting Irie)

Irie: i am sorry I have been treating you so meanly(calm voice)

Kotoko:Huh???

Irie; Kotoko I...Love...you(quietly whispers)

Kotoko:

Irie; I really like you!!!(embarresed)

Kotoko:REALLY

Irie:Yes

Then Irie goes over to Kotoko to wipe away her tears.
After she stops crying, Irie kisses her.
Kotoko still shocked just smiles at him after they
stop kissing.

kotoko: I LOVE YOU!!!
Irie: I love you too.
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wow u guys have nice stories i think u shudmake and at least 1 of dem has to be the real cofession lol
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wow! some pretty good confession going on here!
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I think this is how it would go...

Irie: ...Kotoko.. Why are you so Stupid?? You should be able to tell my feeling towards you by now...
Kotoko: What do you mean feelings?
Irie: You idiot! I... I...Love you..
Kotoko: ... Really??
Irie: ...Yea...
Kotoko: Really?? Your not Joking?
Irie: ...Yeah..
Kotoko: Really?
Irie: ...If you keep asking Im going to take it back...

And then they live happily ever after!
<3


great story and it matches with iries stubborn attitude lol
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Ah, this is how I've always hoped it would be (heheheh it's really long >.<)::


~The two families were on a joint camping trip and Irie's mother had deviously placed Kotoko and Irie in the same tent, despite the complaints of both. Irie and Kotoko had actually agreed on something: to erect a wall between the two halves of the tent. They were in the process of this~

~Kotoko can't keep a strait face at the thought of sleeping in the same tent as her crush. She knows he doesn't like her, and is frantically hoping she won't say anything embarrassing in her sleep. This is obvious, and Irie smirks.~

Irie: What are you so worked up about?

Kotoko: ~shocked~ What? Who's worked up?!? ~frantically sets her sleeping bag, and keeps her face hidden~

Irie: ~looks at her for a while, then on an impulse he leans a little closer to Kotoko~ ~in a sultry voice~ What's wrong?

Kotoko: ~Her eyes widen for a split second, then she gets angry~ NOTHING!!! ~she turns her back on him and pretends to fluff her pillow, while actually her heart is beating faster and her mind is racing with the memories of all the times he'd teased her like this~

Irie: ~Moves so that he's right behind her, teasing her~ Is that true? ~he envelopes her in a hug from behind, suddenly no longer teasing her. He means it this time~

Kotoko: ~heart pounding, she stiffens~ ~thinking~ He's teasing me again! ~the realization makes her struggle from his grasp, and she sits facing him a few feet away, against the tent wall~

Irie: ~slightly hurt but realizing he shouldn't have expected a great reaction from the girl he'd teased so many times before, thinking of the boy who cried wolf story~ ~moves closer to her~ You think I'm teasing? ~he somehow can't lose the teasing tone, despite his attempts at a sincere sound~

Kotoko: ~Thinks of screaming for her father, remembering just before it leaves her lips that Irie's mother had also conveniently placed their tent rather far from the rest of them. She inwardly screams, irrationally hoping that her father may pick up her waves of distress (this is a romantic comedy after all ^^)~ ~decides on a response instead~ Well, aren't you? ... ~her voice is unsure. Her brain is telling her he's teasing, but her heart wants to believe he's sincere~

Irie: ~gets very close and whispers in her ear~ No. ~reaches for her chin and holds it up to look into her eyes~ Promise me you'll never love anyone but me...

Kotoko: ~shocked and confused, she is still at war with herself. But then she looks in his eyes and sees the sincerity in them~ Irie-kun... ~she is then completely lost in his eyes. She can't resist any longer~

Irie: ~kisses her lightly on the forehead~ I... ~he gathers the emotional strength to finally say what he'd never been able to admit to himself~ I... I love you...

Kotoko: ~suddenly unsure again~ Really? Or are you teasing me again? ~she puts on a stern face~

Irie: ~a slight smile~ Baka... ~kisses her on the lips, letting all of his feelings into it~

Kotoko: ~mind racing, heartbeat even faster, she kisses him back~ ~then she suddenly pulls away~ Are you positive?!

Irie: ~getting annoyed now~ Yes! What do I need to do to prove it to you?

Kotoko: ~thinks, with a devious smile on her face~ You'll let me keep any picture of you that I want. One of the cute ones! ~she is smiling brightly, lost in the images of her crush's childhood cuteness~

Irie: ~hesitates but his shoulder's sag and he sighs~ Alright. If that's really what you want. ~looks at her shocked face~ Do you believe me now?

Kotoko: ~is inwardly frolicking through fields of flowers with happy music playing in the background~ ~She leaps at Irie with a hug~ I love you!

~Later, after talking for a while~

Irie: ~getting ready to sleep, he gets into his sleeping back and turns to Kotoko~

Kotoko: ~she looks over at him and the way he's looking at her makes her freak out~ ~She hastily puts up the barrier between herself and her brand new boyfriend~ What's with that look?! ~is happy but still embarrassed and freaking out~

Irie: You're still putting that up?

Kotoko: Duh! I'm still a girl and you're still a guy!

Irie: ~shrugs. He doesn't see the point~ Whatever.

Kotoko: ~throws her pillow at him~ ~pause~ ~takes her pillow back, puts the barrier up and gets into her own sleeping bag~

Irie: ~smiling despite her actions~ Goodnight, baka.

Kotoko: ~Makes a face for a second, then smiles~ Goodnight.

~from the bushes a few yards off, they hear a wail of agony~ ~the camera focuses on the limp form of Kinnosuke, depressed beyond all imagining. He had been spying the whole time and finally couldn't hold it in any more~

Kinnosuke: KOOOOOTOOOOOOOKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

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"Irie: ...Kotoko.. Why are you so Stupid?? You should be able to tell my feeling towards you by now...
Kotoko: What do you mean feelings?
Irie: You idiot! I... I...Love you..
Kotoko: ... Really??
Irie: ...Yea...
Kotoko: Really?? Your not Joking?
Irie: ...Yeah..
Kotoko: Really?
Irie: ...If you keep asking Im going to take it back..."

lol, I like this one a lot XD lol take it back XD
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^^ I liked reading all of them = )
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ember1116 wrote:

Ah, this is how I've always hoped it would be (heheheh it's really long >.<)::


~The two families were on a joint camping trip and Irie's mother had deviously placed Kotoko and Irie in the same tent, despite the complaints of both. Irie and Kotoko had actually agreed on something: to erect a wall between the two halves of the tent. They were in the process of this~

~Kotoko can't keep a strait face at the thought of sleeping in the same tent as her crush. She knows he doesn't like her, and is frantically hoping she won't say anything embarrassing in her sleep. This is obvious, and Irie smirks.~

Irie: What are you so worked up about?

Kotoko: ~shocked~ What? Who's worked up?!? ~frantically sets her sleeping bag, and keeps her face hidden~

Irie: ~looks at her for a while, then on an impulse he leans a little closer to Kotoko~ ~in a sultry voice~ What's wrong?

Kotoko: ~Her eyes widen for a split second, then she gets angry~ NOTHING!!! ~she turns her back on him and pretends to fluff her pillow, while actually her heart is beating faster and her mind is racing with the memories of all the times he'd teased her like this~

Irie: ~Moves so that he's right behind her, teasing her~ Is that true? ~he envelopes her in a hug from behind, suddenly no longer teasing her. He means it this time~

Kotoko: ~heart pounding, she stiffens~ ~thinking~ He's teasing me again! ~the realization makes her struggle from his grasp, and she sits facing him a few feet away, against the tent wall~

Irie: ~slightly hurt but realizing he shouldn't have expected a great reaction from the girl he'd teased so many times before, thinking of the boy who cried wolf story~ ~moves closer to her~ You think I'm teasing? ~he somehow can't lose the teasing tone, despite his attempts at a sincere sound~

Kotoko: ~Thinks of screaming for her father, remembering just before it leaves her lips that Irie's mother had also conveniently placed their tent rather far from the rest of them. She inwardly screams, irrationally hoping that her father may pick up her waves of distress (this is a romantic comedy after all ^^)~ ~decides on a response instead~ Well, aren't you? ... ~her voice is unsure. Her brain is telling her he's teasing, but her heart wants to believe he's sincere~

Irie: ~gets very close and whispers in her ear~ No. ~reaches for her chin and holds it up to look into her eyes~ Promise me you'll never love anyone but me...

Kotoko: ~shocked and confused, she is still at war with herself. But then she looks in his eyes and sees the sincerity in them~ Irie-kun... ~she is then completely lost in his eyes. She can't resist any longer~

Irie: ~kisses her lightly on the forehead~ I... ~he gathers the emotional strength to finally say what he'd never been able to admit to himself~ I... I love you...

Kotoko: ~suddenly unsure again~ Really? Or are you teasing me again? ~she puts on a stern face~

Irie: ~a slight smile~ Baka... ~kisses her on the lips, letting all of his feelings into it~

Kotoko: ~mind racing, heartbeat even faster, she kisses him back~ ~then she suddenly pulls away~ Are you positive?!

Irie: ~getting annoyed now~ Yes! What do I need to do to prove it to you?

Kotoko: ~thinks, with a devious smile on her face~ You'll let me keep any picture of you that I want. One of the cute ones! ~she is smiling brightly, lost in the images of her crush's childhood cuteness~

Irie: ~hesitates but his shoulder's sag and he sighs~ Alright. If that's really what you want. ~looks at her shocked face~ Do you believe me now?

Kotoko: ~is inwardly frolicking through fields of flowers with happy music playing in the background~ ~She leaps at Irie with a hug~ I love you!

~Later, after talking for a while~

Irie: ~getting ready to sleep, he gets into his sleeping back and turns to Kotoko~

Kotoko: ~she looks over at him and the way he's looking at her makes her freak out~ ~She hastily puts up the barrier between herself and her brand new boyfriend~ What's with that look?! ~is happy but still embarrassed and freaking out~

Irie: You're still putting that up?

Kotoko: Duh! I'm still a girl and you're still a guy!

Irie: ~shrugs. He doesn't see the point~ Whatever.

Kotoko: ~throws her pillow at him~ ~pause~ ~takes her pillow back, puts the barrier up and gets into her own sleeping bag~

Irie: ~smiling despite her actions~ Goodnight, baka.

Kotoko: ~Makes a face for a second, then smiles~ Goodnight.

~from the bushes a few yards off, they hear a wail of agony~ ~the camera focuses on the limp form of Kinnosuke, depressed beyond all imagining. He had been spying the whole time and finally couldn't hold it in any more~

Kinnosuke: KOOOOOTOOOOOOOKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!



yours is enjoyable too! and poor kin-chan!

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^^ thanks annafeera!

I've actually written a few stories before. I've finished two and am working on two more ^^' They're all slightly romantic.

lol, and yeah, poor kin-chan XD
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mine would be like this

irie: kotoko.
kotoko: what?
irie: muahahahahhaha! [my comment: sry i just like typing muahahha instead of haha]
kotoko: *joins him but then looks confused, then thinks :why is he laughing*
irie: sorry, your face always cracks me up *tears in eyes*
kotoko: *angry* aaa, stop teasing me!
irie: ok.
kotoko: huh?
irie: i said ok.
kotoko: oh.
irie: u want to know why?
kotoko: yes *eyes sparkling*
irie: *sings the song : hate how much i love you by rihanna*
kotoko: *sings the song : face down by red jumpsuit apparatus.* stop bullying women
irie: ok *depressed and went to sleep*
[credits.....]

OMG, dont we all hate cliffhangers. want a season 2? lol. joking, i was bored so i typed this.
sry no ideas, i accidentally read the spoilers, thinking that it was actually one of the 'suggested endings'
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