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Ah, this is how I've always hoped it would be (heheheh it's really long >.<)::


~The two families were on a joint camping trip and Irie's mother had deviously placed Kotoko and Irie in the same tent, despite the complaints of both. Irie and Kotoko had actually agreed on something: to erect a wall between the two halves of the tent. They were in the process of this~

~Kotoko can't keep a strait face at the thought of sleeping in the same tent as her crush. She knows he doesn't like her, and is frantically hoping she won't say anything embarrassing in her sleep. This is obvious, and Irie smirks.~

Irie: What are you so worked up about?

Kotoko: ~shocked~ What? Who's worked up?!? ~frantically sets her sleeping bag, and keeps her face hidden~

Irie: ~looks at her for a while, then on an impulse he leans a little closer to Kotoko~ ~in a sultry voice~ What's wrong?

Kotoko: ~Her eyes widen for a split second, then she gets angry~ NOTHING!!! ~she turns her back on him and pretends to fluff her pillow, while actually her heart is beating faster and her mind is racing with the memories of all the times he'd teased her like this~

Irie: ~Moves so that he's right behind her, teasing her~ Is that true? ~he envelopes her in a hug from behind, suddenly no longer teasing her. He means it this time~

Kotoko: ~heart pounding, she stiffens~ ~thinking~ He's teasing me again! ~the realization makes her struggle from his grasp, and she sits facing him a few feet away, against the tent wall~

Irie: ~slightly hurt but realizing he shouldn't have expected a great reaction from the girl he'd teased so many times before, thinking of the boy who cried wolf story~ ~moves closer to her~ You think I'm teasing? ~he somehow can't lose the teasing tone, despite his attempts at a sincere sound~

Kotoko: ~Thinks of screaming for her father, remembering just before it leaves her lips that Irie's mother had also conveniently placed their tent rather far from the rest of them. She inwardly screams, irrationally hoping that her father may pick up her waves of distress (this is a romantic comedy after all ^^)~ ~decides on a response instead~ Well, aren't you? ... ~her voice is unsure. Her brain is telling her he's teasing, but her heart wants to believe he's sincere~

Irie: ~gets very close and whispers in her ear~ No. ~reaches for her chin and holds it up to look into her eyes~ Promise me you'll never love anyone but me...

Kotoko: ~shocked and confused, she is still at war with herself. But then she looks in his eyes and sees the sincerity in them~ Irie-kun... ~she is then completely lost in his eyes. She can't resist any longer~

Irie: ~kisses her lightly on the forehead~ I... ~he gathers the emotional strength to finally say what he'd never been able to admit to himself~ I... I love you...

Kotoko: ~suddenly unsure again~ Really? Or are you teasing me again? ~she puts on a stern face~

Irie: ~a slight smile~ Baka... ~kisses her on the lips, letting all of his feelings into it~

Kotoko: ~mind racing, heartbeat even faster, she kisses him back~ ~then she suddenly pulls away~ Are you positive?!

Irie: ~getting annoyed now~ Yes! What do I need to do to prove it to you?

Kotoko: ~thinks, with a devious smile on her face~ You'll let me keep any picture of you that I want. One of the cute ones! ~she is smiling brightly, lost in the images of her crush's childhood cuteness~

Irie: ~hesitates but his shoulder's sag and he sighs~ Alright. If that's really what you want. ~looks at her shocked face~ Do you believe me now?

Kotoko: ~is inwardly frolicking through fields of flowers with happy music playing in the background~ ~She leaps at Irie with a hug~ I love you!

~Later, after talking for a while~

Irie: ~getting ready to sleep, he gets into his sleeping back and turns to Kotoko~

Kotoko: ~she looks over at him and the way he's looking at her makes her freak out~ ~She hastily puts up the barrier between herself and her brand new boyfriend~ What's with that look?! ~is happy but still embarrassed and freaking out~

Irie: You're still putting that up?

Kotoko: Duh! I'm still a girl and you're still a guy!

Irie: ~shrugs. He doesn't see the point~ Whatever.

Kotoko: ~throws her pillow at him~ ~pause~ ~takes her pillow back, puts the barrier up and gets into her own sleeping bag~

Irie: ~smiling despite her actions~ Goodnight, baka.

Kotoko: ~Makes a face for a second, then smiles~ Goodnight.

~from the bushes a few yards off, they hear a wail of agony~ ~the camera focuses on the limp form of Kinnosuke, depressed beyond all imagining. He had been spying the whole time and finally couldn't hold it in any more~

Kinnosuke: KOOOOOTOOOOOOOKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!




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^^ thanks Tiara98Angel!

I had hoped people would like it

^^ and I hope people will keep putting up good ones, because I just love reading them!
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Alliechan wrote:

Hmm, I've always pictured something more angry/dramatic like this:

-they get in a fight because of some happenings at college or the college graduation and Kotoko is sick of being called stupid or being put down by Irie who doesn't deserve her love because he's cold hearted to her-

Kotoko: -yelling- I should have given up on you long ago! But because of that stupid kiss... I couldn't!
-Kotoko crying at memory and how she really loves Irie-

Irie: -smirks- -holds onto her arms gently but firmly and kisses her- -speaking to her gently yet doesn't seem trust worthy because of his half mischievous smile- You mean the kiss like this?

Kotoko: -silent-
-half love struck half enraged because of the repeat offense and him not changing how he acts to her and figures he only did it to have the same effect as last time-
-she slaps Irie hard on the side of his face-
-anger in her voice- How dare you! I've been in love with you all this time, and yet, you've only have been teasing me, this time... I'll hate you for real!
-She starts crying again having new tears fall down her already tear soaked cheeks-

Irie: -shocked from her angry reaction from kissing her and stunned from the slap- -he really meant the kiss this time-
Kotoko, I... don't want... you to hate me. -gathering his wits and trying to make sense- I kissed you last time because I was angry mainly and a bit confused, but this time... this time is different. I... really mean it this time.
-didn't want to tell her that, but since she got angry he had to-

Kotoko: -silent shock, doesn't know if she can believe him, she manages to utter a few words-
Mean what?

Irie: -didn't want to say it outright- -he looks down and mutters it under his breath trying to not feel embarrassed-
I... love you.

Kotoko: -doesn't hear it because of background noise-
Huh?

Irie: -aggravated and embarrassed- -shouts it, since he doesn't want to have to keep repeating it, and partly angry she didn't hear him the first time-
I love you idiot!

Kotoko: -shock and more background noise her tears stop as does the background noise-

Irie: I thought you would've realized it was different from my kiss, though perhaps I was already falling in love with you when I kissed you the first time so you couldn't tell.

Kotoko: -still silent- -never really thought this development was possible-

Irie: -partly from being nervous and partly trying to prove his feelings- -he gently wipes her tears away and runs his hand down her cheek to her chin and slowly moved her lips closer to his making sure she didn't object this time- -they finally kiss first the first time Kotoko knowing Irie's true feelings-

I know it might be a bit far fetched but I was bored and wanted to reply.



Haha, I hope it will turn out like this.
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ember1116 wrote:

Ah, this is how I've always hoped it would be (heheheh it's really long >.<)::


~The two families were on a joint camping trip and Irie's mother had deviously placed Kotoko and Irie in the same tent, despite the complaints of both. Irie and Kotoko had actually agreed on something: to erect a wall between the two halves of the tent. They were in the process of this~

~Kotoko can't keep a strait face at the thought of sleeping in the same tent as her crush. She knows he doesn't like her, and is frantically hoping she won't say anything embarrassing in her sleep. This is obvious, and Irie smirks.~

Irie: What are you so worked up about?

Kotoko: ~shocked~ What? Who's worked up?!? ~frantically sets her sleeping bag, and keeps her face hidden~

Irie: ~looks at her for a while, then on an impulse he leans a little closer to Kotoko~ ~in a sultry voice~ What's wrong?

Kotoko: ~Her eyes widen for a split second, then she gets angry~ NOTHING!!! ~she turns her back on him and pretends to fluff her pillow, while actually her heart is beating faster and her mind is racing with the memories of all the times he'd teased her like this~

Irie: ~Moves so that he's right behind her, teasing her~ Is that true? ~he envelopes her in a hug from behind, suddenly no longer teasing her. He means it this time~

Kotoko: ~heart pounding, she stiffens~ ~thinking~ He's teasing me again! ~the realization makes her struggle from his grasp, and she sits facing him a few feet away, against the tent wall~

Irie: ~slightly hurt but realizing he shouldn't have expected a great reaction from the girl he'd teased so many times before, thinking of the boy who cried wolf story~ ~moves closer to her~ You think I'm teasing? ~he somehow can't lose the teasing tone, despite his attempts at a sincere sound~

Kotoko: ~Thinks of screaming for her father, remembering just before it leaves her lips that Irie's mother had also conveniently placed their tent rather far from the rest of them. She inwardly screams, irrationally hoping that her father may pick up her waves of distress (this is a romantic comedy after all ^^)~ ~decides on a response instead~ Well, aren't you? ... ~her voice is unsure. Her brain is telling her he's teasing, but her heart wants to believe he's sincere~

Irie: ~gets very close and whispers in her ear~ No. ~reaches for her chin and holds it up to look into her eyes~ Promise me you'll never love anyone but me...

Kotoko: ~shocked and confused, she is still at war with herself. But then she looks in his eyes and sees the sincerity in them~ Irie-kun... ~she is then completely lost in his eyes. She can't resist any longer~

Irie: ~kisses her lightly on the forehead~ I... ~he gathers the emotional strength to finally say what he'd never been able to admit to himself~ I... I love you...

Kotoko: ~suddenly unsure again~ Really? Or are you teasing me again? ~she puts on a stern face~

Irie: ~a slight smile~ Baka... ~kisses her on the lips, letting all of his feelings into it~

Kotoko: ~mind racing, heartbeat even faster, she kisses him back~ ~then she suddenly pulls away~ Are you positive?!

Irie: ~getting annoyed now~ Yes! What do I need to do to prove it to you?

Kotoko: ~thinks, with a devious smile on her face~ You'll let me keep any picture of you that I want. One of the cute ones! ~she is smiling brightly, lost in the images of her crush's childhood cuteness~

Irie: ~hesitates but his shoulder's sag and he sighs~ Alright. If that's really what you want. ~looks at her shocked face~ Do you believe me now?

Kotoko: ~is inwardly frolicking through fields of flowers with happy music playing in the background~ ~She leaps at Irie with a hug~ I love you!

~Later, after talking for a while~

Irie: ~getting ready to sleep, he gets into his sleeping back and turns to Kotoko~

Kotoko: ~she looks over at him and the way he's looking at her makes her freak out~ ~She hastily puts up the barrier between herself and her brand new boyfriend~ What's with that look?! ~is happy but still embarrassed and freaking out~

Irie: You're still putting that up?

Kotoko: Duh! I'm still a girl and you're still a guy!

Irie: ~shrugs. He doesn't see the point~ Whatever.

Kotoko: ~throws her pillow at him~ ~pause~ ~takes her pillow back, puts the barrier up and gets into her own sleeping bag~

Irie: ~smiling despite her actions~ Goodnight, baka.

Kotoko: ~Makes a face for a second, then smiles~ Goodnight.

~from the bushes a few yards off, they hear a wail of agony~ ~the camera focuses on the limp form of Kinnosuke, depressed beyond all imagining. He had been spying the whole time and finally couldn't hold it in any more~

Kinnosuke: KOOOOOTOOOOOOOKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!




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=o I agree, that's cute!~ This would totally be GREAT for the ending or something. (other then Kotoko and Irie getting married XD)
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Thanks Adriana13 = )

^^ I liked alll of them ^^
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any one of the above is ok. but she wouldn't be that shock cuz he already kiss her about 2 times
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any one of the above is ok. but she wouldn't be that shock cuz he already kiss her about 2 times


Buuuut doesn't she think the second one was a dream? And she also thinks that Naoki doesn't think a first kiss means much. I say she would be shocked, just because of her personality and the way she always is XD
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orlandolover wrote:

any one of the above is ok. but she wouldn't be that shock cuz he already kiss her about 2 times


Buuuut doesn't she think the second one was a dream? And she also thinks that Naoki doesn't think a first kiss means much. I say she would be shocked, just because of her personality and the way she always is XD


OK...AGREE..HER PERSONALITY WILL BE THE ANSWER FOR THAT
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orlandolover wrote:


ember1116 wrote:


orlandolover wrote:

any one of the above is ok. but she wouldn't be that shock cuz he already kiss her about 2 times


Buuuut doesn't she think the second one was a dream? And she also thinks that Naoki doesn't think a first kiss means much. I say she would be shocked, just because of her personality and the way she always is XD


OK...AGREE..HER PERSONALITY WILL BE THE ANSWER FOR THAT


lol, agreed. AAHHH!! Can't wait for the next episode, we might get to see how Naoki ACTUALLY will confess!!!
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ember1116 wrote:


orlandolover wrote:


ember1116 wrote:


orlandolover wrote:

any one of the above is ok. but she wouldn't be that shock cuz he already kiss her about 2 times


Buuuut doesn't she think the second one was a dream? And she also thinks that Naoki doesn't think a first kiss means much. I say she would be shocked, just because of her personality and the way she always is XD


OK...AGREE..HER PERSONALITY WILL BE THE ANSWER FOR THAT


lol, agreed. AAHHH!! Can't wait for the next episode, we might get to see how Naoki ACTUALLY will confess!!!


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Ok, I just thought this up randomly...

Naoki and Kotoko were fighting like usual, but it was about who marries who (with Kin-chan's and Christine and all that).

Kotoko: You know, I really don't like you now, Kin-chan proposed and asked for my hand in marrige.

Naoki: Really, well Chris is better than you anyway.

Kotoko coulden't take it anymore, she loved Naoki and would never leave him for Kin-chan. She broke out into LOUD sobbing.

Naoki: ?? Could you quiet down...

*Kotoko still crying*

Naoki eventually feels sympathetic and hugs Kotoko. Kotoko blushes like .

Naoki: Well, you know, I've liked you all this time too...

*Stops crying*

Then suddenly, Naoki's mom pops out from behind the corner and takes pictures of them hugging (see, I told you it was
random, but she would totally do that if this event was real in the manga or anime).

Oba-sama: Kotoko-chan, I told you that you and One-chan made the best couple.

Naoki just stands there blushing slightly.

They get married and live happily ever after.

Years later, Kotoko was cleaning her bedroom closet and finds the photo album in which all the pictures of she and Naoki were
together and she finds that exact one and laughs...



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Ok, I just thought this up randomly...

Naoki and Kotoko were fighting like usual, but it was about who marries who (with Kin-chan's and Christine and all that).

Kotoko: You know, I really don't like you now, Kin-chan proposed and asked for my hand in marrige.

Naoki: Really, well Chris is better than you anyway.

Kotoko coulden't take it anymore, she loved Naoki and would never leave him for Kin-chan. She broke out into LOUD sobbing.

Naoki: ?? Could you quiet down...

*Kotoko still crying*

Naoki eventually feels sympathetic and hugs Kotoko. Kotoko blushes like .

Naoki: Well, you know, I've liked you all this time too...

*Stops crying*

Then suddenly, Naoki's mom pops out from behind the corner and takes pictures of them hugging (see, I told you it was
random, but she would totally do that if this event was real in the manga or anime).

Oba-sama: Kotoko-chan, I told you that you and One-chan made the best couple.

Naoki just stands there blushing slightly.

They get married and live happily ever after.

Years later, Kotoko was cleaning her bedroom closet and finds the photo album in which all the pictures of she and Naoki were
together and she finds that exact one and laughs...





^^

I like it!! =D And Oba-sama WOULD do that, wouldn't she? ^^
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irie takes kotoko out to eat ice cream during evening. he buys her a cone and slowly watches her eat. kotoko is very confused but she doesn't mind. they sit down on the bench in an empty park.her clumsy self' she had ice cream all over her lips.

IRIE: err kotoko u have umm ..ice cram all over u
KOTOKO: ah? huh?what? where?
IRIE: right.....*kisses her lips* ...here
KOTOKO: totally confused looks up at him
IRIE: *whispering* i always loved you.........i just never realized... not up until now.
KOTOKO: Irie! oh Irie ....do u REALLY MEAN IT?
IRIE: yes kotoko....this time....i really do
KOTOKO : still looking at him *tears filling her eyes* oh irie!!!!!! I LOVE you! I LOVE YOU SOOO MICH!!!!!
*they hug and he kisses her again they both forget about the ice cream that is already melted, because all that matters now is the two of them together!.*






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kotoko: "irie..kun? What are you doing here?"
irie: "I should ask you the same thing."
kotoko: *head down* "it's none of your business"
irie: "then why are you crying?"
kotoko: "I'm not, it's just the rain. Plus, why would you care anyway. I'm nothing but a bother to you and just a random person who lives in your house"
irie: "oh, is that so?"
kotoko: *tries to control herself from crying outloud* irie kun no baka *runs ahead of irie*
irie: *grabs kotoko by the shoulder*
kotoko: "let me go you idiot!"
irie: *bear hugs her*
kotoko: *stunned* "Let me go you idiot! I hate you!" *cries*
irie: *hugs tighter and is silent*
kotoko: *struggles to get free*
irie: *keeps trying to hold kotoko down and tries to calm but it doesnt work. he places hand on kotoko's cheeck and turn her head to face his*
kotoko: *eyes widen*
irie: "kotoko, don't go with him. kotoko belongs to me" *he kisses her*
kotoko: *eyes widen even more and cries*
irie: *lets go of kotoko*
kotoko: *falls to the ground and cries even harder* "irie kun no baka! always teasing me. I don't get you anymore. I know you're lying"
irie: *hugs kotoko* "no, really. I've always..."
kotoko: *cries but still in confusion* *whispers*"I don't get anything anymore"
irie: *kisses her in the forehead* "let's go home"
kotoko: *crying and still in confusion* "idiot"

and then they both walk home while the rain is still pouring

thats all i got, it randomly came in my head idk y ^^

dadadadaummmmm lol
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DONT ANY OF YOU FEEL SORRY FOR KIN-CHAN XD???????Come on hes loved her for 5 years now xD
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