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Kotoko Killing time...
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woah...niiice imaginations ppl, keep up yr works i wanna read them ^.~
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Ah, this is how I've always hoped it would be (heheheh it's really long >.<)::


~The two families were on a joint camping trip and Irie's mother had deviously placed Kotoko and Irie in the same tent, despite the complaints of both. Irie and Kotoko had actually agreed on something: to erect a wall between the two halves of the tent. They were in the process of this~

~Kotoko can't keep a strait face at the thought of sleeping in the same tent as her crush. She knows he doesn't like her, and is frantically hoping she won't say anything embarrassing in her sleep. This is obvious, and Irie smirks.~

Irie: What are you so worked up about?

Kotoko: ~shocked~ What? Who's worked up?!? ~frantically sets her sleeping bag, and keeps her face hidden~

Irie: ~looks at her for a while, then on an impulse he leans a little closer to Kotoko~ ~in a sultry voice~ What's wrong?

Kotoko: ~Her eyes widen for a split second, then she gets angry~ NOTHING!!! ~she turns her back on him and pretends to fluff her pillow, while actually her heart is beating faster and her mind is racing with the memories of all the times he'd teased her like this~

Irie: ~Moves so that he's right behind her, teasing her~ Is that true? ~he envelopes her in a hug from behind, suddenly no longer teasing her. He means it this time~

Kotoko: ~heart pounding, she stiffens~ ~thinking~ He's teasing me again! ~the realization makes her struggle from his grasp, and she sits facing him a few feet away, against the tent wall~

Irie: ~slightly hurt but realizing he shouldn't have expected a great reaction from the girl he'd teased so many times before, thinking of the boy who cried wolf story~ ~moves closer to her~ You think I'm teasing? ~he somehow can't lose the teasing tone, despite his attempts at a sincere sound~

Kotoko: ~Thinks of screaming for her father, remembering just before it leaves her lips that Irie's mother had also conveniently placed their tent rather far from the rest of them. She inwardly screams, irrationally hoping that her father may pick up her waves of distress (this is a romantic comedy after all ^^)~ ~decides on a response instead~ Well, aren't you? ... ~her voice is unsure. Her brain is telling her he's teasing, but her heart wants to believe he's sincere~

Irie: ~gets very close and whispers in her ear~ No. ~reaches for her chin and holds it up to look into her eyes~ Promise me you'll never love anyone but me...

Kotoko: ~shocked and confused, she is still at war with herself. But then she looks in his eyes and sees the sincerity in them~ Irie-kun... ~she is then completely lost in his eyes. She can't resist any longer~

Irie: ~kisses her lightly on the forehead~ I... ~he gathers the emotional strength to finally say what he'd never been able to admit to himself~ I... I love you...

Kotoko: ~suddenly unsure again~ Really? Or are you teasing me again? ~she puts on a stern face~

Irie: ~a slight smile~ Baka... ~kisses her on the lips, letting all of his feelings into it~

Kotoko: ~mind racing, heartbeat even faster, she kisses him back~ ~then she suddenly pulls away~ Are you positive?!

Irie: ~getting annoyed now~ Yes! What do I need to do to prove it to you?

Kotoko: ~thinks, with a devious smile on her face~ You'll let me keep any picture of you that I want. One of the cute ones! ~she is smiling brightly, lost in the images of her crush's childhood cuteness~

Irie: ~hesitates but his shoulder's sag and he sighs~ Alright. If that's really what you want. ~looks at her shocked face~ Do you believe me now?

Kotoko: ~is inwardly frolicking through fields of flowers with happy music playing in the background~ ~She leaps at Irie with a hug~ I love you!

~Later, after talking for a while~

Irie: ~getting ready to sleep, he gets into his sleeping back and turns to Kotoko~

Kotoko: ~she looks over at him and the way he's looking at her makes her freak out~ ~She hastily puts up the barrier between herself and her brand new boyfriend~ What's with that look?! ~is happy but still embarrassed and freaking out~

Irie: You're still putting that up?

Kotoko: Duh! I'm still a girl and you're still a guy!

Irie: ~shrugs. He doesn't see the point~ Whatever.

Kotoko: ~throws her pillow at him~ ~pause~ ~takes her pillow back, puts the barrier up and gets into her own sleeping bag~

Irie: ~smiling despite her actions~ Goodnight, baka.

Kotoko: ~Makes a face for a second, then smiles~ Goodnight.

~from the bushes a few yards off, they hear a wail of agony~ ~the camera focuses on the limp form of Kinnosuke, depressed beyond all imagining. He had been spying the whole time and finally couldn't hold it in any more~

Kinnosuke: KOOOOOTOOOOOOOKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!


this is so good. seriously. hehe. kin-chan...=.="
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irie takes kotoko out to eat ice cream during evening. he buys her a cone and slowly watches her eat. kotoko is very confused but she doesn't mind. they sit down on the bench in an empty park.her clumsy self' she had ice cream all over her lips.

IRIE: err kotoko u have umm ..ice cram all over u
KOTOKO: ah? huh?what? where?
IRIE: right.....*kisses her lips* ...here
KOTOKO: totally confused looks up at him
IRIE: *whispering* i always loved you.........i just never realized... not up until now.
KOTOKO: Irie! oh Irie ....do u REALLY MEAN IT?
IRIE: yes kotoko....this time....i really do
KOTOKO : still looking at him *tears filling her eyes* oh irie!!!!!! I LOVE you! I LOVE YOU SOOO MICH!!!!!
*they hug and he kisses her again they both forget about the ice cream that is already melted, because all that matters now is the two of them together!.*





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^.^ LOVE IT!! Short, sweet and to the point. Love the whole Ice cream part *squeals*
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wow some people have really awesome imagination especially Alliechan .........
i enjoyed them all
thanks guys!!!..........
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wow i liked ember116's confession part too.......its great....... ....
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haha. everyone is so good in imagination . but, i find it hard to create one since i already read the manga, i know how irie-kun confessed to her, its really romantic! ! ! kinda emotional though, i mean kotoko, ;p
-As Kotoko walked home in the rain she thinks to herself that she will probably not marry anyone else and that even when she dies, she will still love Naoki.
-Naoki is waiting for her in the rain. She asks him why he is here and he tells her that he is waiting for her. As Kotoko is puzzling over his behaviour, he asks if she has seen him (ie Kinnosuke). He asks about Kinnosuke's proposal and she replies that at least someone wants her. He then asks her about her answer. She tells him that what her answer is is none of his business. He looks upset and answer that's right. She tells him that she will be moving out and he can get married and that she will be marrying Kinnosuke. She tells him likes this he doesn't have to worry about her bothering him. He asks her if she likes Kinnosuke. She tells him of course because Kinnosuke has always liked her since junior high school. He asks if she has to like someone just because he likes her. She asks him what's wrong with that. She tells him it's better than her who wasted 6 years liking Naoki only to have him marry Sasuiko etc. Naoki slaps her to calm her down but Kotoko becomes more angry. She tells him that what she does has nothing do with Naoki but Naoki tells her that the one she likes it's him. He tells her that she cannot like other people. She angrily tells him that it's true she likes him but she cannot do anything since Naoki doesn't like her at all. As she says this, she is in tears and to her surprise Naoki kissed her. Naoki tells her not to like any other people and hugs her. She tells him it's the second time but Naoki tells him it's the 3rd time (ie kiss). As she sputters in confusion, he kissed her cheek and tells her to be quiet and hugs her again. He then tells her let's go home. Kotoko is confused as to why he wants to go home quickly.


this is my version of irie's confession.. XD

they are in a fight

irie: i thought you said you hate me

kotoko: i do hate you!

irie: and then why are you crying ?

kotoko didn't realise she was crying and quickly shouts

kotoko: irie-kun you baka! YOU are the one who hates me actually!

irie seems shocked '' i never said i hate you, kotoko . . .'' he said soflty

kotoko turn around and sobbed '' then why do you never even took notice of me??'' and started to walk away

irie quickly grab her hand and kissed her.


I think that's what it happens in the drama. It's called "It started with a kiss".
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I think I would be like this!
IRIE: Kotoko, Aishiteru. <Kotoko I love you>
KOTOKO: Hontoni? <Is that true?>
IRIE: Honto <It's true...>
KOTOKO: (feeling dizzy) Hontoni, Honto? <Is what you say truly true?>
IRIE: Hotoni honto <It's truly true>
KOTOKO: Hontoni Hontoni Honto? <Truly Truly True?>
Irie did answer a couple of times after leaving Kotoko who is still repeating the whole thing.

Just like the main post!
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these stories r really good too bad i cudn't make up my own at the time
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lil_mizz_phat wrote:

omg iv jus red thru every1 elses ! hahaha they all sound awesome! hope da real endings as good as the ones peoplez have made up!


It is.. it is so wonderful.. something that I wouldn't have expected right away from Irie.. *heart eyes.. but it was so great..

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lil_mizz_phat wrote:

omg iv jus red thru every1 elses ! hahaha they all sound awesome! hope da real endings as good as the ones peoplez have made up!


It is.. it is so wonderful.. something that I wouldn't have expected right away from Irie.. *heart eyes.. but it was so great..



lol omg yeeee aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh cnt b leev der finally 2gedaaaaaa !! Irie's soooo sweeeeet!! (but on the other hand im feelin sorry for kin-chan..bless him lolz)
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lil_mizz_phat wrote:


code1412 wrote:


lil_mizz_phat wrote:

omg iv jus red thru every1 elses ! hahaha they all sound awesome! hope da real endings as good as the ones peoplez have made up!


It is.. it is so wonderful.. something that I wouldn't have expected right away from Irie.. *heart eyes.. but it was so great..



lol omg yeeee aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh cnt b leev der finally 2gedaaaaaa !! Irie's soooo sweeeeet!! (but on the other hand im feelin sorry for kin-chan..bless him lolz)


well, yeah, poor Kin-chan but he'll have christine atleast from the point of her view, dunno yet how's it gonna be from his point of view.. :P
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ember1116 wrote:


angelzbabii wrote:

irie takes kotoko out to eat ice cream during evening. he buys her a cone and slowly watches her eat. kotoko is very confused but she doesn't mind. they sit down on the bench in an empty park.her clumsy self' she had ice cream all over her lips.

IRIE: err kotoko u have umm ..ice cram all over u
KOTOKO: ah? huh?what? where?
IRIE: right.....*kisses her lips* ...here
KOTOKO: totally confused looks up at him
IRIE: *whispering* i always loved you.........i just never realized... not up until now.
KOTOKO: Irie! oh Irie ....do u REALLY MEAN IT?
IRIE: yes kotoko....this time....i really do
KOTOKO : still looking at him *tears filling her eyes* oh irie!!!!!! I LOVE you! I LOVE YOU SOOO MICH!!!!!
*they hug and he kisses her again they both forget about the ice cream that is already melted, because all that matters now is the two of them together!.*





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^.^ LOVE IT!! Short, sweet and to the point. Love the whole Ice cream part *squeals*


hehe thnxxx XDDD
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wow, this somehow turned into a fanfiction thread. Well, that was supposed to be from the start (or was it?) Thanks guys for posting. I really love reading your stuffs.
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XINAxJaejoong wrote:

I think this is how it would go...

Irie: Kotoko.. Why are you so Stupid?? You should be able to tell my feeling towards you by now..
Kotoko: What do you mean feelings?
Irie: You idiot! I.. I Love you..
Kotoko: ... Really??
Irie: Yeah..
Kotoko: Really?? Your not Joking?
Irie: Yeah..
Kotoko: Really?
Irie: If you keep asking Im going to take it back..

And then they live happily ever after!
<3

wow your a story writter thats good



Thankyou!
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ur story is good its nice
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