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let's create a good story together ne.. what ever happens... happens.. just continue the narration wherever you want to take it..
i'll start .. the story's in green.... oh... alright whatever color you want , just to distinguish it from the comments and other messages..
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Misao traveled alone... such urgency. This information... she must tell Himura herself.
Only few blocks away from the dojo, her pace is picking up speed... faster... she started to run... unable to contain her excitement anymore.





( jitsu wa, i just want to see everybody at the dojo.. the cute little girls and dr. gensai, miss kauro, Himura and the beautiful miss megumi. i hate to admit it but i even miss the brat and the roosterhead.
ooh crap... now i have to think of what to tell Himura )
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As Misao arrived to the front of the Kamiya dojo she could clearly hear Yahiko and Kaoru arguing and poor Kenshin trying to handle the situation. With a heavy sigh she thought, 'some things never change'. Misao was just about to open the door when a masculine voice behind her made her stop. "Yo! Weasel girl, what the hell are you doing here?"


HAHAHA hope this is a good continuation
Posted 5/30/08
As Misao turned around, she saw the freeloader, Sanosuke behind her. She gave him a cool look and said"I'm here to visit Kaoru and Kenshin, got a problem, rooster head?" from the distance, a spirit watched as the whole scenerio was happening , the spirit smiled and said, quietly laughing to herself "May peace and tranquility be with all of them...but danger soon awaits..." As soon as the spirit appeared, she quickly dissappeared
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Inside the dojo,
"You Brat, Yahiko! You have to do your training!" yelled Kaoru
"Shut up ugly! I have to go somewhere" said Yahiko.
"DIDN'T I TELL YOU NOT TO CALL ME UGLY!!!"
Kaoru about to attck and Yahiko is getting ready to defend and they are about to fight when Kenshin walks between them.
"Kaoru-dono, please calm down Yahiko must have a reson for missing his training." said Kenshin
"But Kenshin, what is more important than his training?"
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Kenshin stared off into another direction for a few seconds,
Kaoru looking slightly worrried and expecting an answer called to kenshin
"Well kenshin what could be more importaint?"

Kenshin smiled and looked innocently at Kaoru and said
"maby Tsubaume-chan"

After hearing those words leave Kenhsin's mouth Yahiko immediately jumped forward knocking Kaoru almost completely over
"Kenshin there is not way that I would miss practice for that."

Kaoru looked at him with an evil gleam in her eye
"Well then maby we should ask Tsubaume-chan, good job kenshin i think we may have our answer"





*this is my first fanfic of any type so tell me if im doin it wrong*. -Shadowkeeper AKA Kenshin-
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kenshin u spelled maybe wrong
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shouldnt "Tsubaume" be spelled Tsubame instead?
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Back outside the dojo.

"Ah whatever, anyway are you gonna stand here all day? Cuz I'm hungry and I know Kaoru didn't cook today." Said the man called Sanosuke as he made his way into the dojo.

"Hey wait up rooster hea--." Something made Misao stop in half sentence.
"Hm? what's wrong weasel girl?."
"Sano, didn't you feel that?"
"Nope." Was the hungry man short reply.

"Oh never mind I think I'm hungry too." And so they both entered the dojo.
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ahh i forgot the color sorry T.T hahaha it was suppose to be in green T.T
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At the akabeko.

Tsubame is hard at work, when she hears an argument between two familiar voices. Upon looking up, she sees Yahiko, Kaoru(both screaming their heads off) and Kenshin walking towards to the store. When they caught sight of her, Kaoru, with an evil gleam in her eyes, rushes foward, with Yahiko in hot pursuit.

"Tsubame.........." Kaoru had that look in her eyes that gave Tsubame a chill down her spine
"Ye-Yes?" She forced a smile.


This is my first time at this fanfic thingy, so im not very good at it, srry!
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" Are you and Yahiko going somewhere together?" asked Kaoru.
"Yes, we are? Yahiko-chan didn't tell you?" said a confused Tsubame.
"OI don't cal me chan!" yelled Yahiko.
" Gomen nasai Yahiko-ch... i mean Yahiko"
"Don;t yell at Tsubame-chan you brat!!!" screamed Karou and hits Yahiko on the head and accidently hits kenshin in the head also. " Gomen Kenshin."
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twinkleprincess wrote:

kenshin u spelled maybe wrong


srry i always have trouble with that word, and usually i am a great spelling and grammar person -_-
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Kenshin smiled blankly as Kaoru glared at Yahiko for a short as kenshin and karou turned to Tsubame and inquired
"So where are you and Yahiko going together again Tsubame-chan?"

Tsubame looked at Yahiko almost like she was asking what to say then exhaled slowly and told kaoru
"Yahiko promised me that we could go to the river tonight and watch the fireflies for a while"

"Oh really!" Kaoru interjected as she turned to Yahiko " You better be on your best behavior when you go Yahiko or I wont forgive you"

"Yeah yeah ugly" Yahiko foolishly let slip
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"Wat did you say you, little brat?!" asked Kaoru sinisterly
" aaaah Kaoru-san he said thank you and bye. Bye Kaoru-san," said Tsubame nervouslya nd grabs Yahiko's hand and runs.
"What a good kid?" smiled Kaoru, " Kenshin, Let's go back home?"
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at the dojo... Sano is feasting on the meal that Kenshin and Kauro left when they chased Yahiko going to the Akabeko.

"hey weasel, aren't you gonna eat anything?" says Sano
"shut up rooster head" replied Misao, still feeling uneasy. chill runs on the back of her neck.... there's a ghostly presence around.

*could it be Miss Tomoe?* Misao asked herself. *but why so creepy? is there danger coming ?*

then, all of the sudden, something hits her head.......



*alright guys recap... kauro and kenshin are going home from the akabeko... i wonder why our yahiko put them there when they're just having discusion at home... ha ha ha... anyway, just as said anything goes, tsubame and yahiko are off on a date.. and me and the Roosterhead are at the dojo and miss tomoe is lurking around...
so far so good ne minna... ano... have you seen my lord Aoshi?
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