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"heheheheh" Enishi snickers silently as the pebble he threw hits misao on her head..ever since the battle with kenshin was done..enishi had originally planned to do his own wandering to find peace within himself...but had decided to hang around and see what types of goings on can be seen in this territory for the time being... plus..."I can see what these folks do fer fun around here" he says to himself as he noiselessly remains hidden from view and looks on....
Posted 6/2/08
>.< this story is turning my character in a rather awkard situation

At the river side, Yahiko and Tsubame watch the fireflies. They are beautiful, like a hundred spots of light, quivering ever so slighty, as they seem to float about in the night sky. Yahiko, for some reason, was feeling uneasy and decided to keep up his guard, in case anything happens, neither Kenshin nor Kaoru would be there to help him. "Still, I'm sure I don't need them, I'm a man, and a samurai's son at that. I am capable enough to protect Tsubame"

Suddenly, out of the corner of his eye, he spots two figures chasing each other amongst the bushes. A slick slice of the sword was heard and one of the shadows fell to the ground silently. It did not get back up again. The sword-welding figure come towards their direction. Yahiko quickly stands in front of Tsubame to shield her and takes out his shinai with practised ease. The light from the fireflies shine on the figure. "Oh its just you, Yahiko" The source of the voice came from..............
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sugoi... yahiko you're doing great...
are, enishi is teasing me again? ....that pebble hurts.. .

um... i'll think of what to add... it is becoming rather challenging...
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gotta agree w/ misao (omg!) yahiko...thats some good writing...
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...hiko.

iono XD;;;

"hey there. calm down now put that shinai away or you'll hurt yourself." hiko said with a sarcastic tone. "oh? your out with your little lady are you. sorry to disturb your night" hiko turns away from yahiko and tsubame and as he walks slowly away he wipes the blood off his sword. Yahiko senses that something was wrong with what just happened a moment ago and stops hiko. "HEY YO--" Yahiko is then interupted. "Kid, its best to stay out of things that don't concern you..." Yahiko hears something in the bushes and looks. He sees nothing but then notices that hiko suddenly disappeared.
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A gust of wind blows up some dust from the road and Yahiko gets in front of Tsubame to shield her from the dust. Yahiko sensed that someone else was there and looked around shielding his eyes with his arm, but he could not see a thing. Then he heard an oddly familiar voice. "If you value your life then I suggest you stay away from those children and focus on me." Said the mysterious person. "My, my.......what is the famous Okashira...ahem....I mean former Okashira of the Oniwabanshu doing out here, I wonder. And showing such concern for these children......how curious." Said a sinister sounding voice. "Well, I would love to investigate this further, but my master is interested in the return of this lump." There was a clang of metal and then he heard the voice cackle as he said, "Now, now I am sure that we will be able to play later, but I really must be on my way. I shall leave you one last parting gift though." The voice started cackling again and faded away as Yahiko heard the sound of some objects whistling through the air towards him and Tsubame. He grabbed Tsubame and turned his back intending to block the object with his body when he was suddenly knocked over. He noticed a shadowy figure go by and heard another clang as at least one object was blocked.

The wind then died down almost as suddenly as it had appeared and as the dust started to settle down Yahiko saw a figure standing nearby clutching his arm. The fireflies re-appeared and illuminated the figure. "Aoshi! It is you!" Yahiko exclaimed as he saw the familiar coat and figure of Aoshi Shinomori. "Aoshi?" Tsubame asked Yahiko while still sitting on the ground. "Ah...s..s..sorry, Tsubame let me help you up." Yahiko stammered as he helped her up. "Aoshi was one of Kenshin's rivals, but they are friends now." He explained. "Yahiko, you should take Tsubame back to her place. The rest of the Oniwanshu should have the place covered, but as you can tell it still isn't safe to be out at night" Aoshi said as he grimaced slightly. "But what about your wound Aoshi-san?" Tsubame nervously asked. "Don't worry about me. I'll be fine........I have experience with these kinds of things." Aoshi said. They watched as he pulled out a small bottle and drank its contents. "What was that?" Yahiko asked. "I thought that you didn't drink." "I don't. That was an antidote since bolt had poison on it. Unfortunately, the antidote does contain alcohol in it." Aoshi said as he sat down. "I'll be fine enough to make way back to Himura's place though. So don't worry about me." "Oh....ok, well see you back at the dojo." Yahiko said as he and Tsubame left.

Aoshi thought to himself that the person must have known that he would protect Yahiko and Tsubame so he purposely used a poison that required alcohol as part of the antidote. But only a small amount of people knew that and they would have formally been a part of the Oniwanshu. Unfortunately, that was the most that Aoshi was able to think before his mind started to get hazy from the effects of the alcohol. "Aoshi-sama?!?!?" A voice cried out as Aoshi fell over. Aoshi opened his eye to see two green-blue eyes looking back at him. "Misao?" Aoshi asked before his consciousness faded away.
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jeetkundo wrote:
gotta agree w/ misao (omg!) yahiko...thats some good writing...

mizu13hi wrote:
sugoi... yahiko you're doing great...
are, enishi is teasing me again? ....that pebble hurts.. .

um... i'll think of what to add... it is becoming rather challenging...


aaww thanks guys i really appreciate the compliments. the rest are really great too! ^^ anyways,back to the story.

Back at the dojo, Kenshin and Kaoru are turning in for the night.Kaoru is feeling satisfied(from the fact that she now knows why Yahiko is missing lessons), but there is still other mixed feelings. Uneasiness and......jealously? She saw Yahiko as a brother (i hope thats true) and was feeling a slight tinge thinking how much he had grown and matured. But why this uneasiness? Kaoru convinced herself that she was being paranoid worrying about Yahiko.
Suddenly, a loud and persistent banging was heard. Upon arriving at the door, she could hear Misao's voice. The panic in her voice was worrying. "What the matter Misao-chan, did you left something impor-" Kaoru stopped short upon seeing Misao supporting someone. He seemed to have passed out. "Thats a rather big something there." Kenshin quickly helped Misao and Kaoru followed behind, realizing that it was Aoshi. This was bad. If Aoshi had come, and had been attacked, what about Yahiko? "The brat should know how to defend himself, I have taught him some basic moves. But with Tsubame, and this darkness.........." maybe she had a reason to worry after all. Kaoru, in all her worries, had made a big mistake: she forgot to close the door.
A stooped shadow entered the premises, laughing silently at the fools who had left the door open. He watched as they brought his target, Aoshi, to the room. It was time to finish his target off. He took out his bolts. This time, he would aim for the heart. No more missing.
"Hey! Who are you?" The figure froze. Upon turning around, he saw a spikey-haired boy. It was that brat that Aoshi protected. The girl was not beside him this time. "He probably sent her home, well then, this is another small fry to finish off" The figure thought as he sprinted toward the brat, determined to finish him off before any alarms were raised.
Yahiko took out his shinai. He was ready. Anytime now, the plan was going to be put into action. If it did not work, at least he could defend himself. "Any moment now........."


Frankly, I have no clue as to what the plan is. XD
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Suddenly the man paused in his attack as he noticed several other figures converging on his position. "Heh, you got lucky for now kid. But you won't be as lucky next time." He said as he threw down a smoke bomb and disappeared in the smoke and noise. As the group of people got closer Yahiko noticed that it was the rest of the Oniwabanshu. "Well hello there Yahiko. We just got here after receiving an alert from Aoshi that there was some trouble in Tokyo. It looks like we managed to get here in time." Okina said as he and Okon, Omasu, Kuro, and Shiro got closer. "Boy am I glad that you guys came. Although, I could have easily handled him you know." Yahiko said with a grin. "So, where is Aoshi? I'm surprised that he wasn't here as well." Okina asked. "Oh! Well, he should be inside. But he might still be suffering from the effects a poison that hit him when he protected me earlier." Yahiko said looking downcast. "I should have been able to stop it myself....but it seems that I am still too weak." "Now you know that is not true. You are indeed strong and getting stronger each time I see you. However, for there to be a ninja of the caliber to harm Aoshi like that is quite bothersome, I must say." Okina mused. "Well, lets not dawdle out here. Okina, why don't you go inside and the rest of us will set up a perimeter around the dojo for the time being." Omasu suggested. "Yes, I agree. Come along Yahiko and lets check on Aoshi and see how he is doing." Okina said as he headed into the dojo.

Inside they saw Aoshi lying down with his head on Misao's lap as she refreshed the wet towel on Aoshi's forehead. Misao turned as she heard them enter. "Gramps!" She exclaimed happily. "Well, Misao I see that you have taken advantage of a drunk man. I thought that I had taught you better than that." Okina teased her as he recognized the state that Aoshi was in. "Grrr.....if Aoshi wasn't in this state I would beat you up for that, old man!" She shouted. But she looked relieved at hearing that Aoshi was not in as much danger as she thought he was. "Hmm....I see that Aoshi has changed the antidote some to change the way it affected him. I remember the first time he used it that. Why you would not have recognized him. He was....errr....." Okina mused before he was interupted by Aoshi glaring at him. "Thank you for you help Misao." Aoshi said as he got up slowly gripping his head. "Okina. I need you to look into something for me with your intelligence network. It appears that we have a rogue former Oniwabanshu member on the loose and one that at least has knowledge of my weakness to alcohol. So, he had to have been fairly close to us or his boss was and who knows what other inside information he is aware of. So, I need you to figure out who he may be as well as searching for clues as to who he is working for. I had received rumours of trouble starting up in Tokyo, but I have not yet been able to find out very many clues about their objective and why they are doing this." Aoshi said. "I understand. You get some rest and I shall get started on this right away." Okina said. "Well, Yahiko I am sure that we will meet up again. Take care of Aoshi for me Misao and try not to take too much advantage of him." He said as he dodged several kunai that were thrown at him by Misao. "Grrr.....that old man." Misao said as she glowered at the door. "So, I trust that the young lady you were with was taken back safely." Aoshi inquered. "Oh.....yes.....Tsubame is safe back at home." Yahiko said nervously as he looked at the reaction on Misao's face. "Well, it is nice to see that you are doing better Aoshi...but I think that it is time for me to go to bed." Yahiko then quickly walked out of the room before Misao could tease him. "Oh, Misao?" Aoshi said. "Yes, lord Aoshi. What do you need?" Misao replied cheerfully. "You should probably let Himura know that I am doing fine, since he is doubtlessly worried. Oh, and let him know that I would like to speak with him tomorrow as well." Aoshi told her. "Of course, lord Aoshi." She replied. "Well, oyasumi nasai." "Oyasumi." Aoshi said as she left the room. He then closed his eyes and slowly drifted off to sleep.
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all those moments with lord Aoshi....

sugoi minna... honto ni .... yokatta... !!!
you're really having fun doing this eh... lord aoshi and yahiko's imaginations is really all out...
really now this is getting interesting...


ok got to call the other writers... *runs away*

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hehehe i really want to post something but somehow i can't find my muse!! T.T (my muse= my imagination) gomen ne Misao-chan
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no worries miss megumi..
What has happened so far…
Enishi and miss tomoe are lurking around the dojo.
Kenshin and kaoru went to the akabeko with yahiko.
Sano and misao are eating in the dojo.
While yahiko and tsubame are on the river side ( they’re dating now) hiko was there and killed someone. Moments after hiko left, two other figures appeared – Lord Aoshi and an opponent. Aoshi was poisoned.
Presently… at the dojo.. misao tends to lord aoshi. himura, kaoru and yahiko are about to rest for the night. the oniwaban members are on guard. Okina is on information hunt, as requested by Aoshi.

Sano, kenshin, yahiko and Kaoru are still talking about what happened.
“it’s better that I stay here tonight kenshin, if the lady wouldn’t mind” Sano said.
“ no worries sano”said Kauro as she leaves the group to prepare an extra futton.

As kauro walks to the other room, she passed by Misao who was spacing out… just watching the stars. Her eyes speaks of sadness or rather of disappointment
“misao, what’s wrong?” miss kaoru inquired.
Misao didn’t hear her.

“don’t move” omasu shouted at the figure hiding behind the bushes. Her shurikens are ready to be thrown at slightest provocation.

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Dark time is not coming to Himura and the rest, it has already come...


"Where is it, where is it?!" a frenzied Megumi keeps saying as she desperately searches for something inside her clinic. "I cannot afford to lose it, Sir Ken's....no, the whole of Japan's future hinges on that..."

"What are you looking for Miss Megumi?!"
"Oh, Dr. Genzai...errr, uhmm...I'm surprised you're still here. Aren't you supposed to be at Miss Kaoru's dojo by now?"
"I was already on my way when I realized I forgot my medical kit, so I came back." Dr. Genzai senses that something is wrong with Megumi. "So, what was it you're looking for again?"
Megumi is reticent.
"Megumi, are you all right?" asked Dr. Genzai. Still no answer. "Megumi!.... Why are you spacing out? Did something happen?"
"No, nothing happened Dr. Genzai. I guess I'm just tired."
"From searching furtively for something, I supposed." quipped Dr. Genzai.
Megumi was dumbfounded.
"Errr...uhm..." Megumi continues to stutter.
"Well, if you don't really want to tell me, I can't help it. I guess I should go now, Miss Kaoru is waiting for me at her dojo."
"Yeah". Megumi manages to give Dr. Genzai a smile as he walks out of the clinic. "I'm sorry Dr. Genzai but I cannot let you be dragged into this." Megumi said to herself as she continues to search her clinic. "The fact that several attacks have happened in the last few days, and the manner those attacks were carried out, could only mean that they have gotten hold of that medicine. I should have disposed them long time ago..."



















Posted 6/9/08
wow, the story is getting harder to think up. hhmmm lets giv a try shall we..........

The man behind the bush knew he was a disadvantage now. Darn, just when the medicine was finally obtained. If he dropped the package, he might have a free hand to defend himself. However, if he dared to drop the medicine and run, the boss would come for him. So, it has come to this. The shurikens, or the boss.His best bet would be either they thought that his figure was always there, just their imagination (which was highly unlikely). Or, wait for them to come closer to see who he is, and attack one of them, using them as a human shield. True enough, a figure was walking towards him. Seems like a girl. "Good, she might be easier to attack" Or so he thought. The moment he lunged at her, three objects came sailing in his direction. Two shurikens wizzed past him, the second scoring a cut on his chest. But what really defeated him, was a heavy medicine box. Looks like the doctor came in time indeed.
"I could have handled it!" whined Misao. She was a bit dissapointed from the fact that she did not do any fighting,rather, she had to be protected. "Sure, with your mind constantly worrying about Aoshi, you wouldn't noticed even if he was holding a torchlight to his face" came the sarcarstic reply. "Well yea? I wil-" "Enough, is Aoshi more important or your arguement? And what are you going to do about this intruder?" It was unanimously decided that he was to be taken to the house for questioning. But he would have to be treated first, even if he was an enemy, that medicine box would be fatal if Dr.Genzai had used a little more force. As they were dragging him, Omasu spotted a parcel lying on the ground. She decided that she would bring it with them, but tell the rest later for she thought it was not as important as the matter at hand. If only she knew the danger in the box, they might have left the man there and attend to the box's contents first.........
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shishio made a criminal???
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he made me a criminal.......
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