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man this going really good but i waiting for the perfect time for me to come in and help
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he made me a criminal.......



time to write something and save yourself miss megumi...
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Chibi-Hitokiri wrote:

he made me a criminal.......



No I didn't Megumi, you misunderstood the post. Don't worry, you're not the villain here.





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Chibi-Hitokiri wrote:

he made me a criminal.......


eh? were you talking about me, megumi-san?if you are, im sorry, i didn't meant to! XD i juz meant the contents of the box was dangerous, not you! ^^
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Dark time is not coming to Himura and the rest, it has already come...


"Where is it, where is it?!" a frenzied Megumi keeps saying as she desperately searches for something inside her clinic. "I cannot afford to lose it, Sir Ken's....no, the whole of Japan's future hinges on that..."

"What are you looking for Miss Megumi?!"
"Oh, Dr. Genzai...errr, uhmm...I'm surprised you're still here. Aren't you supposed to be at Miss Kaoru's dojo by now?"
"I was already on my way when I realized I forgot my medical kit, so I came back." Dr. Genzai senses that something is wrong with Megumi. "So, what was it you're looking for again?"
Megumi is reticent.
"Megumi, are you all right?" asked Dr. Genzai. Still no answer. "Megumi!.... Why are you spacing out? Did something happen?"
"No, nothing happened Dr. Genzai. I guess I'm just tired."
"From searching furtively for something, I supposed." quipped Dr. Genzai.
Megumi was dumbfounded.
"Errr...uhm..." Megumi continues to stutter.
"Well, if you don't really want to tell me, I can't help it. I guess I should go now, Miss Kaoru is waiting for me at her dojo."
"Yeah". Megumi manages to give Dr. Genzai a smile as he walks out of the clinic. "I'm sorry Dr. Genzai but I cannot let you be dragged into this." Megumi said to herself as she continues to search her clinic. "The fact that several attacks have happened in the last few days, and the manner those attacks were carried out, could only mean that they have gotten hold of that medicine. I should have disposed them long time ago..."



while megumi continued searching for the 'thing' she's looking for, she suddenly heard someone whispering into her ear... "megumi-dono.. megumi-donooo..." she was so shocked that her heartbeat almost stopped. she turn around & saw kenji behind her.. looking at her with an evil smile on his face.

"KENJI-KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what on earth are you doing here so late?? aren't u supposed to be at home sleeping??" megumi asked.
"ah yes.. i know that. but i can't sleep no matter what i do.. maybe i'm having insomnia.
"did u tell ur parents that u're coming over here??"
"nope... it's not necessary. they're up to something but i don't know what."
"u should've told them kenji. they might get worried about you." said megumi
"ne megumi-dono... u sounded like an old lady. please stop torchering my ears with all those unecessary concerns. they're happy with just the 2 of them around. they won't even notice that i'm gone."
"kenji-kun. u're wrong about them. they really love you, so.." kenji interrupted "ok ok.. enough!!!"

"i'm just bored, so i thought of coming over to your place to play with you.. but i changed my mind. i noticed you were searching for something earlier.. maybe i can help." kenji said with a smile.

touched by kenji's kindness + his cute kenshin-like face.. "awwww that's really sweet of you. but it's ok. i can do that myself. don't worry, it's nothing important anyway." trying to put on a smile over her worried face.
"... u're no fun. i'm really bored right now so let me help you."
"you're very persuasive u know.." said megumi
"fine.. then make me something nice to eat.. i'm hungry." kenji demanded
megumi stared at kenji... she smiled "what do you want me to cook for you ken-chan?"
kenji looked delighted "anything sweet!!"
"ok then.. you wait here. AND DON'T TOUCH ANYTHING!!"
"hait hait.... =_=" kenji said with a sigh.

while megumi's in the kitchen.. kenji suddenly saw something..... "could it be the 'thing' megumi-dono's looking for...??" he picked the little bottle up. he looked at the bottle with eyes full of curiosity. he wanted to open the bottle which contains blueish liquid inside it when suddenly he heard megumi's footsteps. he turned around & saw megumi behind him. "is this what u're looking for??" he asked megumi.
megumi's face grew pale, she rushed towards kenji & grabbed the bottle from him.
"never to touch this thing again!!!" she said.
kenji stared at her, shocked for how she reacted.. very suspicious.. as expected from 'kitsune-onna'.
"whatever megumi-do...." before he could finish his words.. he fell on the ground, unconcious..

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nice kenji-kun...
i cant post in the gb
this has nothing to do with fan fic but just want to say this...
stop the misaoXbaka enishi talk... !!!!!! dame dame dame...
miss shura and others....
what would lord aoshi think of me....

hey .....i come here to see you guys demo.....
where is everybody..?
i miss yahiko and jiro kun... kenji-kun, miss megumi... the roosterhead... Himura , Hiko san... saito san , the former saito-san.... gramps... miss tsubame... and the others...
specially himura...

minna doko ni iru no?

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misao doesn't miss and she might steal kenshin she has enishi and aoshi and now kenshin waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh oh yea how old is yahiko in this ? if he's 16 let's have him propose to tsubame-chan hehe
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misao doesn't miss and she might steal kenshin she has enishi and aoshi and now kenshin waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh oh yea how old is yahiko in this ? if he's 16 let's have him propose to tsubame-chan hehe



waaaaah.... what's this? i'm a flirt now... oh... baka enishi this is all your.... baka baka baka !!!!

miss kaoru, i did not include your coz you just pm me... and himura coz he's the creator.. he has not been here for quite sometime....



ok now these posts has nothing to do with the fan fic...

come on minna... write something...
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"Is he going to be fine?" asked the pensive Kenshin to Megumi.
"Why, of course! After all, Kenji fainted only on hunger. I mean, it's not like he was poisoned or something sir Ken. After feeding him the sukiyaki that I've prepared, I'm sure he'll be back on his feet in no time!" Megumi tried desperately to hide her concern while at the same time feeling proud in the dish she made.
"I see." Kenshin shows sign of relief. "I really appreciate this Miss Megumi, that I do. If it not..."
"Well, if you really do Sir Ken", Megumi cuts Kenshin, "then you should go out on a date with me, hohoho...."
"Oro...." Kenshin almost fell to the ground. "Well, I don't really think that that has a connectio...."
"Then you don't really mean what you've just said!" Kenshin was left staring at Megumi in complete amazement and with his mouth gaping.
"At this rate" Megumi said to herself, "Sir Ken's would be forced to go out with me, hohoho..."


"What the hell is this?!!!!"
"Huh?" Kenshin and Megumi said in chorus. The two run back to the room where the voice came from and found that Kenji was already awake.
"Oh, Kenji, you're already awake. See, Sir Ken, didn't I tell you that Kenji would recover his lost strength quickly on my delicious dish?!” Exclaimed Megumi.
“Eh?!…” was the only word that Kenji could utter.
“Oh, you don’t have to thank me Kenji.” Megumi said, thinking that the former wanted to issue profuse expressions of gratitude. “On second thought, if you really want to thank me, I guess I don’t have any right to keep you from expressing your appreciation, do I? So, don’t hold back Kenji, just say them, hohoho…” Megumi is starting to show signs of excessive self-satisfaction.
“Well, if you insist Miss Megumi. I won’t hold back.” Retorted Kenji.
“That’s right, Kenji, stop being too timid, hohoho…”
“Your dish tastes so awful. It so disgusting I might as well be eating trash, Miss Megumi!” Megumi’s smile quickly turns into grimace.
“What did you just say, Kenji?!” Megumi’s face is turning red.
“I said…” Kenji continues his matter-of-fact manner of speaking. “I am afraid that your sense of taste is really one for the gutter, Miss Megumi. And for the record, I was awakened by your dish’s unspeakable vileness and not on its purported scrumptious taste.”
Megumi’s face is becoming redder and redder, apparently infuriated with what Kenji said on her cooking.
“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING KENJI?!! How dare….””
“I hate to interrupt Miss Megumi, but I think there’s something more important we should be talking about.” Kenshin addressed Megumi who is apparently ready to go berserk.
“What? Are you trying to tell me that my cooking is not an important matter, Sir Ken?!” quipped Megumi.
“No, not at all, Miss Megumi. It is just that there are exigent matters we have to deal with promptly.” Answered Kenshin. “I’m sure you’re well aware of the attacks that took place the days before.”
“Oh, about that…” Megumi is starting to collect herself again.
“I see. I guess you understand what I meant, Miss Megumi.” Kenshin, knowing that Megumi is now ready to have a serious talk with him, addresses Kenji who went on the farthermost corner of the room earlier, apparently trying to avoid Megumi’s wrath. “Kenji why don’t you go outsid….”
Kenshin and Megumi’s eyes grew bigger upon seeing Kenji’s condition.
“Kenji is drooling onto himself!” Exclaimed Megumi.
“Trash, trash, trash….” Kenji keeps mumbling to himself while walking wobblingly.
“Apparently...” said Kenshin, “the vileness of your dish Miss Megumi has taken the best of his being, that it surely does.”
Megumi didn’t say anything but just looks at Kenshin viciously with both of her fangs exposed. Kenshin, getting the message, quickly changed the topic.
“Well, I guess I have to walk Kenji out first Miss Megumi before we can have our talk. I’ll be right back after I have him settled outside.”
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:megumi: i really don't cook that bad...-.-

:chibi: in the anime and also the manga Megumi is really good in cooking
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hahahaha love the fanfic u wrote shishio-san.. i'm drooling eyh.

".....oto-san..?? why are u here??"Kenji said when suddenly he realised Kenshin was beside him. "weren't u supposed to be with oka-san.. by the way, where's she?" continued Kenji.
"oro? too many questions, that it is. which one do you want me to answer first Kenji?" asked Kenshin with a smile.
"just forget about it. why don't you go home to oka-san.. i can walk by myself. don't worry about me." Kenji walks off alone.
Kenshin was speechless. He kept staring at Kenji in a distance while Kenji kept walking. "you should talk to him more often ken-san. It'll bring the gap between you and kenji closer. It'll take time but one can never know the results before he try it." said megumi who was watching the scene between the father and son. "kaoru will be happy if you two are in good terms."she continued.
"i'm trying, that i am. but like you said, it will take some times. I want him to live a peaceful life, to live in a world without conflicts nor war. I don't wish for him to be like me." kenshin replied with a slight expression of sadness on his face. "let's not waste time and lets continue with the.." before Kenshin could finish, he heard a gun shot from the direction where Kenji was walking a minute ago. Panic attacked him as he dashed along the road where kenji had walked before and found a pool of blood on the ground. Megumi arrived a while later and stand behind him with her eyes wide open. "K..Ke... Kenji-kun..??"
There, in front of them.. stood five men armed with a rifle each with faces as pale as a corpse. when suddenly Megumi noticed a small figure standing behind one of the five men, holding a sword covered with blood.



ok.. i'm out of idea... need to sleep now. oyasumi!!
before that... i missed u guys too.. misao-san, megumi-dono, shishio-san, oka-san, hiko-shishou & the rest of the other group members i've always talked to. i'll be away for awhile.. hope to see u guys soon!!!! mata ne!!
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"Tch....I just received a message that elements of the Oniwaban were involved in a skirmish with a group of riflemen that some may have slipped through. It appears that these are the ones." Aoshi said as he walked up behind Megumi and Kenshin with a worried looking Misao nearby. "I apologize deeply for this Himura. I know that you probably did not wish for your son to stain his hands with the blood of men, but you should be proud that he was skilled enough to defend his own life." Kenshin slowly nodded as he looked over at Kenji. "This may not be my place to say so, but I suggest you head over there now and help console and calm him while making sure he realizes what exactly he has done. Unless you are properly prepared the taking of another one's life is a traumatic event....which I am sure you are well aware of Himura." Aoshi said as he started to walk away. Misao hesitated bowing deeply to Kenshin and saying, "I am deeply sorry as well Himura-san. As the leader I should have not allowed this to happen." Kenshin smiled slightly. "It is not your fault, that it isn't. We all should have been more on our guard after hearing Aoshi's message when he arrived yesterday. It is also this one's fault for not having taken more interest in my son's training and not being with him more." Kenshin replied. "But....." Misao started to say before she noticed Aoshi shaking his head no at her. "Come along Misao. This is for Himura to deal with. We need to see how the rest of the Oniwaban is doing." Aoshi said. They both then dashed into the distance leaving Kenshin, Megumi, and Kenji by themselves.

"Wasn't there anything we could have done to help Himura-san?" Misao asked Aoshi. "No...that is something that should be handled between Himura and his son. As I mentioned, Himura has dealt with this before in his past and he is the best one to help his son through the experience so that what happened to him doesn't happen to his son. It is unfortunate, but it is also a great way for Himura to start healing the rift that he allowed to happen between him and his son. He may have hoped to help prevent Kenji from becoming like him by staying distant, but it is that distance which helped allow this event to take place in the way that it did." Aoshi replied. "Oh...I understand." Misao said as she thought about it. "What about those soldiers though? Those rifles that they were equipped with seemed to be better than the ones that our soldiers are usually armed with." Aoshi smiled slightly. "Good job noticing that. You are indeed correct. Those were some very new and state-of-the-art weapons that they somehow required from the West. Three of the rifles are something called Henry Repeating Rifles, which allow you to take thirteen shots without reloading the gun and the other two are called Sharps Rifles. Those are one shot, but unlike most of the rifles our troops are armed with those are armed from the breech and not the muzzle. Which allows for a much faster loading time in addition to being very accurate weapons." Aoshi explained. "Wow.........I guess that is how they were able to breakthrough. Their companions must have been similarly armed and were able to pin down the other Oniwaban.....*gasp*.....Oh no! I hope that nobody was seriously harmed!" Misao shouted as her eyes widened when she got the grasp of the situation. "You are right on.....that is what I figured as well. If they were regular muzzle loaders than that group shouldn't have been able to break through. I don't hear any more gunfire though, so it seems like the situation is under control." Aoshi said as they got near their destination. They soon came into a clearing and saw 10 other riflemen lying on the ground. "Aoshi....Misao!" A voice cried out. "What happened Shiro and what is the status report." Aoshi swiftly said. "As you can see we detected these riflemen and attacked, but they were armed with repeating rifles so they were able to keep us too busy avoiding their bullets to take them out in time. As I am sure you are already aware, five of them managed to slip past before we were able to take care of the situation. We have several people injured, but none of them are too threatening and none of us where killed." Shiro replied. Aoshi and Misao sighed in relief when they heard that. Aoshi looked at Misao. "Good, make sure that all injured members are properly taken care of and make sure that all the enemies are examined for any type of information." Misao said. "Make sure to remain extra vigilant. More attacks may be on the way and they might be similarly armed. So, I suggest that we lay some traps and make some distraction as well as shrapnel bombs. Also, gather their weapons and ammo and hand them to our few members that still know how to use firearms. We may need them later. Make sure that all the info you gather is forwarded to Okina so that he can use his contacts to try to find out where these arms are coming from." Aoshi added. "Right, will do." Shiro said as he ran off. "Hopefully this will discourage them for awhile, but we need to stay on our guard." Aoshi said to Misao. "Right, Aoshi-sama. You look like you are feeling much better by the way." She replied. "Yes, thanks to Megumi I was able to recover much quicker than usual. She must have become used to dealing with people that drink too much like Sanosuke since I am not feeling any ill after-effects from drinking that antidote. Hopefully she will be able to tweak the antidote as well so that it doesn't need alcohol as an ingredient anymore." He said.

Meanwhile..........
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Ahh, its been so long since i have thought up of a part. I have no idea of what a repeating rifle is, so im going make up some of its features and setbacks?

"Kenji, are you hurt any-" "No. I'm fine." came the reply. It was a reply filled with a mixture of shock, fear and.....could it be? What frightened Kenshin the most was that there was cruelty and a hint of pride. His own son was proud to have his hand stained? Was he going to be a Battousai of the new age? A cold blood murderer, and one who takes pride in killing? Kenshin had a look of resolve on his face. It was time to tell Kenji how he resolved to stop killing.
Before he could open his mouth, he heard the sharp click of a gun trigger. He drew out his sword and without a second thought, shielded his son from the 5 bullets. Althought the first one was stopped by the hilt, and another two was blocked, one bullet scored an injury on Kenshin's shoulder and the last one shot Kenji in the ankle. As expected, another four riflemen had slipped through and saw what Kenji had done to their comrade, so they waited for the perfect chance for an ambush.
Kenshin was injuried badly, and knew with that many bullet coming out of one gun at such a fast rate, four of them might be hard to handle. And unfortunately, Misao and the others had gone off to give Kenji and him some privacy, so they could not have heard it, neither could they come back in time. There was no choice. It was going to be him and Kenji. A father and son fight. Kenji also knew that fact. Drawing their swords, both finished off the ones in front of them, turned around to finish off the ones behind each other's backs. The riflemen were useful at a distance, but they forgot that at point zero, their bullet might hit their own ally. It was over in less than 1 minute. The cooperation of father and son, both like the other's mirror image, moving in perfect sync.
"Good job, son. But I'm in no way praising you for killing these men. I'm praising you for your ability and will to defend your own life, as well as mine. Thank you for defending my back. However, it is time for you to hear how your father swore not to kill again"
Kenji grinned. He loved stories of his father, about his battles and past. How ironic, a story about not killing after a joint effort to eliminate 4 men.


I may give another part soon, if i have the time to come on k? ^^
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While Kenshin and the rest were busy fighting, someone else was relaxing, smoking and enjoying life as it was on a couch. Or at least, that is what it looked like he was doing. He was in deep thought, worrying on how to counter any hiccups and what would be his next move. Not only was he thinking, he was on his guard. Anyone in the room might betray him, even the woman beside him. She might be hiding a knife in her dress, and is waiting for him to lower his guard. To counter this, his cigar pipe doubles up as a blowpipe. Not that he needs it though, with a sword beside him, and a original technique that can rival the Hiten Mitsugi Ryuu style.
"The Hiten Mitsugu Ryuu style. Used by the strongest Imperialists, the Battousai huh?" he thought. As the different attacks of the Hiten Mitsugu Ryuu style, along with attacks to counter them formed in his mind, a soldier entered the room. "Master, there is urgent news." "Oh? And what can be so alarming that you have the gore to burst in without knocking?" "Er-rm, well the thing is that our army is trying their best by keeping a low-profile to start our attacks, but it seems a group of people has caught intelligence of our plans, and is killing off our soldiers. They seem to be people not to be messed with, as a kid in their group can finish off a few of ur men with ease. Furthermore, the strongest of them all is a red-haired man who has a cross shaped scar on his left cheek." Speak of the devil indeed. "My, that is something thats is worrying indeed. An obstacle in our plans. I thank you for the information. I will reward you generously" "Thats too kind of you...thank you *mumble, mumble*-sama.....but-" Before the soldier could continue, his head was sent flying, landing just outside the enterance.Shealthing his sword, he said with a cold, pierceing stare:"One, that was for not knocking. Two, that is my reward to you. To send you off before someone else does."
So the worst possible situation has revealed itself. The Battousai has intervened. Now that special package will be harder to get. From the experince and conclusion he gained from watching the saga between him and Shishio, he knew that brute force with not work against the Battousai. It was deceit and intelligence that would kill anyone, even the Battousai. He smiled. Time to attack the Battousai. But he won't be getting him, nor his men to kill the Battousai. It was going to be the person he loves most, and can't bear to kill. Afterall, after many months of obsevation, he knew the boy could do it. He had the skills. All he had to do was to make sure the boy was under his spell. He wasn't close to the Battousai anyway, they relationship is as strained as it is.
The chosen one. His son.
Himura Kenji.

i worte that the soldier mumbled coz i didn't want to giv out the person's name, so you guys can put in the name of a villian from the original manga or anime, or we can form a totally different charcter. as i will not be on until august, this might be my final contribution for now. I will try thinking up of the continuation in the mean time. work hard to form a good story guys! ^^
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