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Posted 7/18/08

twilightcucco wrote:


Tsuyaki wrote:


twilightcucco wrote:


Tsuyaki wrote:

Hey Twilightcucco and Fruitjuice16, hehehe im here to give you guys some constructive criticism about your group...it has to be said if you want your group to improve (its ok the way it is now but you could be bigger and better ^_^).

Ok, so your text on the page...the spelling needs to be looked over and fixed, face it, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes. For example: Reprisent and Charicter....they are actually spelt...Represent and Character...so make sure you fix that, because if it were me and if I didn't know you guys, this group wouldn't exactly appeal to me if the home page has mistakes...also it would be better if you added a little more background information about LOZ as well as add a forum for strategies in completing LOZ and/or cheats....just a few thoughts for the noobs ^_^

Hopefully you don't take my criticism as being too mean but in my opinion, I'm only help you guys ^_^

Other than that, good luck



Ok first off i dont go too school so i have an excuse for the spelling mistakes (i thank you for telling me how too spell them)
and iv never done this before so if your intrested would you like to become a moderater for this group (i have no time too edit and i cant spell for toffie)

ps: you dont have too if you dont want too .....we just would appreciate the help......



Sorry for the long delay in getting this message...I hadn't noticed it before so sorry yet again Twilightcucco. Yea, I wouldn't mind becoming a mod for your group since your asking


sorry for the even longer delay in the reply lo cool ill make you a mod


hehehe its ok ^_^ but like i said i may not be able to be online as much until like another week, i have a lot of catching up to do with homework >.< but i will do my best XD

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I feel the groups page is a bit sloppy, the fourms seem rather speratic in there topics with no real consistancy, and you should make up a play list for the group instead of just the one feild theme from TP.
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