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Posted 8/1/08
I got other female charcter done. Sorry I'm just as slow asyou. lol j/k But here's one of them. Tell me if there's anything else you want. Her likes and dislieks were hard to pin down.
Name: Celleste
Age:24
Height:5'9
Weight:160
Build: athletic
Eye Color: hazel
Hair Color: blonde
Hair Style: short
Job: Knight
Weapons: sword and shield
Attire/items: white chain mail skirt, white armor, green cotton shirt and skirt (under the armor), Grandmother's pendent.
Allegiance: rebels
Personality: Strong willed, stubborn, steadfast, loyal,
Past: Peasant turned knight by Amos, she chooses to follow him when he leaves.* Her father owed more than he could pay to the king. Amos paid their share, Celleste in turn joined Amos as a companion.
Likes: books, swords, smart people,
Dislikes: Fools, the king, debts,
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its funny how our minds work the same. u have her down to the letter, and not even half of it was done. in any regard, I would like to thank you very much. and the next upcoming installment WILL be posted today. I have been having troubles in my speech class, and have been trying to work that out, but now that its settled it should flow once more. look for the update before supper.
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Character Chronicles-

Magnus-

Nobility-"Duty Vs. Honor"

Age-36
Height-6'2"
Weight-250
hair style-long straight
hair color- white
attire-Royal tunic/royal chainmail his closet is vast as his wallet is deep, he prefers the colors red and white to the kings will of unity with blue and black
class-Noble
weapons- sceper sheeths his rapier
Other-He is constantly fighting with himself, rather doing the right thing or doing what his position warrants him to do. He is a noble who does not want to condemn his lineage, but is torn to help the rebels.
Allegiance- rebels/king

The king finally learns of the traitor among his men, it is none other than 1 of the kings counselors Magnus. Magnus' family used to be king, the kings best friend was Nero, and left him the crown when he died. Magnus was born soon after his father died, a late birth, and he served as the kings advisor and harold all his days.
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Magnus

In a very intricate web of sorts, on one hand if he betrays the king not only is it works of treason, but he would be betraying his fathers name. On the other hand, he is filled with compassion for Amos and their conquest and see's the kings fallies, Magnus is indirectly involved in the conflict, he offers support, and aid in the forms of troops and santuary in times of great need, He often sends his most trusted of knights to assist in his conquest. Magnus is neither villain nor friend yet both at the same time. At times when he his accused of treason he sends militia to attack the rebels, he must do what he can to remain in power, but also to remain loyal to his friends.
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Magnus

In a very intricate web of sorts, on one hand if he betrays the king not only is it works of treason, but he would be betraying his fathers name. On the other hand, he is filled with compassion for Amos and their conquest and see's the kings fallies, Magnus is indirectly involved in the conflict, he offers support, and aid in the forms of troops and santuary in times of great need, He often sends his most trusted of knights to assist in his conquest. Magnus is neither villain nor friend yet both at the same time. At times when he his accused of treason he sends militia to attack the rebels, he must do what he can to remain in power, but also to remain loyal to his friends.


Hmm this one is going to be a hard one to keep interesting and fresh. But, if done right is a very good char. Hmm I good find my mind set slipping into this char.
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Fist let me re-invite everyone to participate, even if all you can do is come up with a character that is yourself that would be enough diversity in the characters. We all come different backgrounds, and we all have our opinions on what we like and dislike. So with that said, RATMAN YOU get to work on a creepy character, and Rukia I am going to need a character from you as well, you volunteered to help I am going to put u to work! lol j/k but come on guys, it will be fun.

Upon going over my list of potential characters I forgot about one character that I had in mind sine I first started the blacksmith turned warrior. Better known as Angrim. Angrim the blacksmith of Amos, I have alot of A names don't I?, Angrim is big in stature, 260-270 pounds easy, but being as he prides himself on his work, the quality of the equipment he makes is that of legend. Every strike more powerful than the next, Angrim is sought after by Amos, in attempt to sway him to join as an armorer. Insulted, Angrim offers up his services for free, in exchange for the privilege to fight alongside him instead. Angrim is thought of as a beast and a quick tempered soul. However, nothing could be further from the truth, he prides himself on his loyalty to his customers and his friends. And as fierce as he is with axe or claymore in hand he is an even fiercer friend. Angrim is the craftsman who custom tunes the party's gear to better suit their style or need. Better known as just Grim, he is the epitomes of mans potential. He is one of the hardest working members of the party, being the only armorer, and weaponsmith they have on hand he is often busy, but he wouldnt have it any other way, or as he would say "What would I do with my time? Learn how to knit? cause thats something a girl does..."
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Name: Angrim "Grim"
Age:26
Height:6'3"
Weight:260
Build: Massive
Eye Color: black
Hair Color: black
Hair Style: short, or shaved
Job: Blacksmith
Weapons: Claymore and Broadaxe
Attire/items: Leather with plate to cover vitals.
Allegiance: rebels
Personality: Strong fierce fighter, an even fiercer ally. He is a man of his word, and is put off by those who don't understand him or his friends and their cause. Short-tempered? more like ready to fight if you try his patience.
Past: Was a lowly blacksmith visited by few, quality work, but on hard times, he becomes amos armorer and gets back on his feet. Upon Amos' jettison, he offers him his services as well as an extra blade on the front lines.
Likes: metal, leather, hard work, and loyalty.
Dislikes: Dishonesty, judgements, inferior work.
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Posted 8/7/08 , edited 8/7/08
Blind Knight-(I have got to name him some time)
Age:50
Height:5'10
Weight:270
Build: Muscular-old
Eye Color: faded green (he's blind)
Hair Color: white
Hair Style: long and straight w/knots
Attire: Green tunic, with silver platemail
Attire Color: Silver and Green
Weapon Specs: Custom sword, it has grooves for his fingers, so as to know which way the blade is facing.
Allegience:King/Rebels
Accesories:Walking stick
Past: As the king's mentor and advisor, he is knick-named the Blind Knight, having lost his vision in service to the king. He then is thought to be of no further use and "fired" or rather forced to retire from the "King's Guard". He sets out to find his student Amos, to put himself to any use he can for such a just cause. Finds the sword most sensible, however is masterful in most of the different arms. He now acts as tactician and teacher to the rebels.
End: He is left behind at camp during a mission, and he is ambushed by the king's guards. He manages to take one before he is finally rushed by 2 guards and speared through the chest.
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cryolyger wrote:

Blind Knight-(I have got to name him some time)
Age:50
Height:5'10
Weight:270
Build: Muscular-old
Eye Color: faded green (he's blind)
Hair Color: white
Hair Style: long and straight w/knots
Attire: Green tunic, with silver platemail
Attire Color: Silver and Green
Weapon Specs: Custom sword, it has grooves for his fingers, so as to know which way the blade is facing.
Allegience:King/Rebels
Accesories:Walking stick
Past: As the king's mentor and advisor, he is knick-named the Blind Knight, having lost his vision in service to the king. He then is thought to be of no further use and "fired" or rather forced to retire from the "King's Guard". He sets out to find his student Amos, to put himself to any use he can for such a just cause. Finds the sword most sensible, however is masterful in most of the different arms. He now acts as tactician and teacher to the rebels.
End: He is left behind at camp during a mission, and he is ambushed by the king's guards. He manages to take one before he is finally rushed by 2 guards and speared through the chest.


HMM he need somthing besides a name. Hmm a longer life in the storie (meaning lost of life late in the story and taking out a major player on the kings side while protecting some one else. Name Sir Granit (after the stone) Fox.
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HAHA, ratman your a wise man. Sounds good. He isn't to die at the beginning, but towards the middle. What better way to have the audience feel for the characters than to be able to kill off a beloved blind old friend/mentor. I wanted a couple tear jerking scenes and this was one of them. A short lived life, wouldn't suffice if we want the audience to bawl at his death.

For clarification Granit, is that the name of the blind knight or the guy that offs him? a more intimate setting would better befit his death, also, to be killed by someone he loved or trusted, would make the scene alot more involved and the plot thicker. Perhaps another former trainee comes to visits him and as they remenis he sticks a dagger in him. OR a traitor among the rebels, one that secretly works for the king. hmmm.. so many options to go with here. And another clarification issue, is Fox another character or is it Sir Granit Fox?
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Your wizard could off him? perhaps. and discuss with me your character, I might be leniant on my own rules, because I like the way this is going with your character. I see him less creepy, and more sadistic and vengeful. elaborations.
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Hey! there is this book that could help!! it's called The Little Pilgrim's Progress. It might help. I'll pray for God's help in making it!
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Posted 8/19/08
Thank you ever so much angelmew. I will look it up. Ratman you need to get on your character and rukia, im looking at you 2...and rose.... u bought some more time but u need to get on it aswell.
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um what do i need to do??? fill you in? characters? what plot/story line do you have so far?
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haha, i thought i explained it. Im horrible at being a director. everything of the story can be found either on my pages on my profile, or in this thread, I dont have anymore typed up other than that. You don't have to do anything, but if you would like i need characters to be finalized, if you could go through them and tell me what doesnt or does work with them.
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