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Posted 6/7/08, edited 6/7/08
Can i always be si fear?

Can i sometimes tell you how i felt?

Can i begin to understand

Can i tell you my real name?

No

because if i tell you my true worries

you are not gonna enjoy my stories

and before i´ll close my eyes

you´d walk away together with my hearth

Yes

if it´s for littlness

if it´s something you want to know

then it´s all right if i say so?

And if i´ll dry off your tears

Will you say:¸¸Don´t enter my peace?"

I don´t know

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Posted 7/19/08
hmmm... not bad... kinda deep, too... but it's missing 2 stanzas...
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