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in this chapter i kinda imagining, zelda, magired meets wolzard & tatsulot.


who does this mean? lol



zelda = elf + village, magired meet wolzard = kazaf meets ur kr but refuse to fight. tatsulot = talkative dragon
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djloi wrote:


Aegis85 wrote:

in this chapter i kinda imagining, zelda, magired meets wolzard & tatsulot.


who does this mean? lol



zelda = elf + village, magired meet wolzard = kazaf meets ur kr but refuse to fight. tatsulot = talkative dragon


uhh..i guess magired reffer to super sentai magiranger rite (seriously i din watch super sentai..lol)? n zelda? haha...
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zelda is from the nintendo game
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Episode 8 : Book of Hero

It was 0900 hours. I just woke up from my sleep after enjoying myself in yesterday party. I am still abit tired. I look outside view from my window. I saw a groups of human and elves kids playing around. It was incredible and harmony scenery that I never seen before. I woke up from my bed and grab my blue jacket from hanger. I was still wondering how my clothes change since I came this world. I went out to the living room and saw Mass and Elder getting their breakfast.

Mass : Good morning Shinichi.

Shinichi : Morning Mass. Morning Elder.

Elder : Morning Shinichi! Wow I can’t believe it! Mass is a good cooker! This food was incredible!!

Shinichi : Hehe, I already knew it since the whole week at Elf Mountain I was eat the same breakfast.

Mass : Hey are you complaining now?

Shinichi : Nop…hehe

Mass : Well Elder, if you like it I can cook for you everyday.

Elder : Really!?? That’s fantastic!!! It has been long time since I eat nice food!!

Mass : Shinichi your breakfast was ready. Go get it from kitchen.

Shinichi : Sure. Thanks.

I went to the kitchen I get the breakfast. The breakfast was western breakfast. It contains egg, hotdog and vegetable. I took the plate and sat together with Elder and Mass.

Elder : Shinichi, what do you plan to do later?

Shinichi : I want to go back to Prof Fudo lab. But I afraid I don’t know where is the direction since I came here with Teleport Machine.

Elder : Haha no worry. Nearby our village they were a Teleport Machine as well.

Shinichi : Really?

Elder : Yup. Before Prof Fudo left, he gave me his secret lab coordinate. You’ll need it later.

Shinichi : Thanks a lot Elder.

Mass : So Shinichi, this could be the last chance for me having a breakfast with you…

Shinichi : No worry Mass. I’ll visit you guys when I am free.

Mass : You better do what you promise.

After all of us finish our lunch. I offer myself to help to wash the plate together with Mass.

Mass : Shinichi, how long you have been this world?

Shinichi : I couldn’t remember…I guess is more than a week.

Mass : I would like to know more about your world. How was it?

Shinichi : Hmm well, my world is full with human population. I stay at a country called Tokyo. It was a busy country. The difference between my world and this world is…..

I keep telling Mass about my world while washing the plate. After done the washing, Elder approach to me.

Elder : Shinichi, the Teleport Machine is ready. You can use it anytime.

Shinichi : Thanks Elder. I guess I need to go now.

Mass : Shinichi, wait!

Mass opened his drawer and searching something. After a few second of searching, he took out a book. That book was covered with dust and dirty. Mass hand over the book to me.

Mass : Here Shinichi. I would like you to have this book.

Shinichi : What book is this?

Mass : This is the book I mentioned before, Book of Hero. Baduck manage to take it from castle before the mountain blow out.



Shinichi : Book of Hero??

Elder : OMG! Don’t tell me this is the book that recorded Kamen Rider history and the Forbidden War that happen few thousand years ago???

Mass : You’re right Elder. Shinichi, with this book, I hope this book can help you explore more Hercules power.

Shinichi : Book of Hero huh? Thanks a lot Mass.

Mass : Shinichi, I would like to see you grow stronger and protect our world from Vambie.

Shinichi : I promised!

I went out from Elder house, preparing to my destination. As I went out, everyone was there gathered around.

Villager 1 : Shinichi, we are here to usher you to the Teleport Machine.

Shinichi : Thanks everyone.

Elder : Lets go Shinichi.

Elder together with all villagers lead me to the Teleport Machine location. It was located few kilometers away from Kubik Village. Nearby the Teleport Machine was a waterfall and spring.

Shinichi : Everyone, guess this is farewell.

Kid Elf A : Oni-chan, when I grow up, I want to be warrior like you. I’ll protect this village!

Kid Elf B : Me too!!

Forbin : Don’t worry Shinichi. We’ll protect this village.

Shinichi : Sure. I count on you guys.

Elder : Shinichi, take care.

Mass : Be sure to come visit us, I’ll prepare new breakfast menu for you.

Shinichi : Gotcha!

I enter the Teleport Machine. I key in KQ817 on the control panel as my location. The machine begins to operate.

Everyone : Shinichi, good bye!

Shinichi : Everyone, please take care!

At the instant I was transfer back to Prof Fudo lab. I guess the machine not stable because at the instant I reach Prof Fudo lab my face knocks on the control panel.

Shinichi : Ouch!! That’s hurt…!!

Mana : Who is that!?

Fudo : Owh! It is Shinichi!!

Mana : Shinichi!?

Mana and Prof Fudo run toward to me and both of them hug me tightly.

Shinichi : Hey hey!! I can’t breath!! Ouch my face is hurt…!!!

After a few minute…

Fudo : Shinichi how is your journey to Elf mountain? Are you happen to find the Elf form for Hercules?

Shinichi : No but I got my Wizard Form.

Mana : So it was not Range Form…

Shinichi : Beside Prof Fudo, I brought something back from there.

I show Prof Fudo the Book of Hero. He having the same expression as Elder when he first time see the book.

Fudo : Thi-thisssss!! THIS IS BOOK OF HERO!!!!!

Mana : Ossan, what is this book about?

Fudo : This book was wrote by ancient writer who can read Kamen Rider power and the Forbidden War that happen few thousand ago. This is the only one book in this world!! I can’t believe it I got chance to see this book!!

Mana : That’s cool Ossan! Faster read it!

Prof Fudo opens the book. He turns the book page by page and his face look disappointed. After he flips the book to the last page, he closes the book and sigh.

Shinichi : What happen??

Prof Fudo : This book was written by ancient language. I cant understand it…



“If that’s the case, let me do it.”

Mana : Mac? You can read ancient word?

Mac : Of course I do. In my system was installed all variety kind of language.

Prof Fudo : Really!! Sugoii!! Thanks for the help!!

Prof Fudo happily receive Mac offer. He inserts the book into one of the slot.

Mana : Actually, Mac was built by my ancestor. So we don’t really know her true ability.

Shinichi : I see.

Mac : Alright, I guess I need an hour times to translate.

Fudo : Well, while waiting Mac to done her job, Shinichi would you mind follow me?

Shinichi : Sure.

I followed Prof Fudo to lower floor. We entered into his experiment room. This is first time I been here. His experiment room was messy and full with chemical container and mechanical tools around.





Fudo : Look there,Shinichi.

Prof Fudo pointed a bike at the end of corner of the room. That bike was nicely design and it suite my style.

Shinichi : Wow this bike is cool!

Fudo : I just built it for you. With this bike, you can travel everywhere around the world with lighting speed.

Shinichi : It make me looks like a real Kamen Rider now with Rider Bike! Haha!

Fudo : Here, let me teach you how to use it.

Prof Fudo teaches me the way to control the bike. This bike was computerized and by key in the coordinate, it automatically drives me to there or I can drive it manually if I like it…

Shinichi : Thanks Prof Fudo.

Fudo : Eventhough the Teleport machine is more convenience to use, but unfortunately the machine can be use on limited place only.

“EMERGENCY!! VAMBIE SPOTTED AT LOCATION PO151”

Prof Fudo : It is nearby here, Outskirt Town.

Shinichi : Alright leave it to me!

I sit on the bike. I key in “PO151” on the bike control panel. “LOCATION CONFIRMS”. I press “Auto-Drive” button and the bike begin to move by itself.

Prof Fudo : Ganbateh Shinichi!

Meanwhile at Outskirt Town, it seems a Cow-V rampaging at there. All NPC run away to avoid being victim for Vambie. Unfortunately, a man was being catches by Cow-V and his blood and bone been sucks until left outer skin. At the instant I reach there, I use my bike and knock on Cow-V. He flew few meters away from me.

Shinichi : Eeeww…that corpse was scary…

Cow-V : Hercules!

I took out my rider belt and plate.

HENSHIN!!

A bright light appear together with binary code surround my body. It changes my body into Hercules. I press the right button on my rider belt. Surprisingly, my broken swords fly toward to me. My sword was fix!

Hercules : Oh my lovely sword!! I though you’ll never come back. Who fix you?

I notice some wording was engraved on my sword…

“Fix by Baduck ^^”

Hercules : -,-“…..

Cow-V rushes toward to me and smashes me using his horn. I was pushed back a bit. That cow continues smash me with his horn but his attack had been blocked by me using my sword.

I kick the Cow-V but it doesn’t have much effect on it. Then I try to slashes him for few times but still useless. He grabs my hand to stop me using my sword to hit him. He punch my chest rapidly and finally kick me away.

Hercules : His body was hard…I need other way to fight him.

I press the purple button then middle on my rider plate.

“A_C_T_I_V_A_T_E”

A binary code appears around my body. The giant lizard appear from above my head and it change into armor to equipped into me.

“WIZARD FORM, COMPLETE”

I managed to change to Wizard Form.

I pressed the right button on my rider belt to summon my weapon, Basher Rod.

Hercules : Lord of fire, I need your power. I summon, FIRE PILLAR!!

A fire pillar appeared on the ground and blast on Cow-V. He had been projectile up to the sky. I jump to the sky and hit him with my rod. He received my damage and fell to the ground. I press middle button on my rider plate, charging my Hissatsu. An energy flow from Basher Rod to my right leg.

As Cow-V just recover to his stand. I dash toward to him and perform rider kick on him. Cow-V explodes and destroys completely. I return back to my human form and ride my bike back to Prof Fudo lab.

In the same time, Kazaf was standing on one of the building and monitoring my fight with Cow-V.

Kazaf : Wizard Form eh? Seem like Shinichi started to gather his power piece by piece. If someday he gain Hercules memory, it is hard to eliminate him.

From Kazaf expression, he seems like planning on something to eliminate me…

I reached on Prof Fudo lab after a few minutes ride. I park my bike on the lower ground and use the evaluator to upper floor.

Mana : Shinichi welcome back!

Prof Fudo : Just on time Shinichi! Mac just finish translate the book!

Shinichi : Really? I can’t wait to read the contain!

It is time for me to learn the true power of Kamen Rider Hercules. Mac switches on the monitor and begins to show us the book contains…



To be continued…
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good thing that u have effort to put photos.
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good thing that u have effort to put photos.


hmm..i currently in progress re-draw Hercules..hope can add in here soon
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Aegis85 wrote:

good thing that u have effort to put photos.


hmm..i currently in progress re-draw Hercules..hope can add in here soon


just use the templete i post at my fan-fic. then u design your rider from it. u r a frequent english user or BM? btw, i havent buddy you yet...
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Aegis85 wrote:


djloi wrote:


Aegis85 wrote:

good thing that u have effort to put photos.


hmm..i currently in progress re-draw Hercules..hope can add in here soon


just use the templete i post at my fan-fic. then u design your rider from it. u r a frequent english user or BM? btw, i havent buddy you yet...


hm well,i received malay education since primary..i wun say my eng was good since i know i sucks in grammar =P..
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hm well,i received malay education since primary..i wun say my eng was good since i know i sucks in grammar =P..


iya...that's not the case. i just wanna know which languange to talk to u in comfort.
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djloi wrote:
hm well,i received malay education since primary..i wun say my eng was good since i know i sucks in grammar =P..


iya...that's not the case. i just wanna know which languange to talk to u in comfort.


oh...malay,eng,canto,mandarin..i can speak canto and mand but cant read & write..haha
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Posted 8/11/08
Some extra information about Hercules Henshin device :

Hercus Plate :


Hercules Plate :



Yes,Hercules has two Henshin Device which will be shown in my fanfics later. All his form change to other title (the outfit still same with the old one except all the new form have cape and Rider Kick was available for all form). New device has a Touch Screen to allow Hercules pick his finisher.


Coming up next! Kamen Rider Kazaf Henshin device! (I would include his rider belt as well if i have time)

TQ ^^
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Episode 9 : Riders fight

In previous episode, Mass gave Book of Hero to me. I brought it back to Prof Fudo secret lab and the book was translated by Mac.

Mac : Loading…Please wait…



“I can’t wait to look at the contain!” said Prof Fudo who full with curious and anxious.

Mac : Loading complete. Verifying data…Complete.

At the instant, Mac monitor has change to other screen…A big book was show on the screen. It was Book of Hero.




[ Book of Hero


In the year of 470 BC, Devil monster, Joker invaded our Network. Joker, together with his armies conquered the whole world and cause fear to all creatures. Knowing the situation on Network, Kami (God) had sent Hercules and Kazaf to Network. Later, Joker declares a war between him and Hercules as Forbidden War. Hercules and Kazaf fought with Joker at the final war and finally Joker was defeated. Before he died, Joker announces that he’ll be back. After that, he used his last power and surrounded the whole Network. His power caused pollution on land, water and sky. To purify the curse, Hercules and Kazaf scarified their power and spilt it around the world, leaving 3 devices at behind. We believe Joker will return someday, so we kept the 3 devices on sacred place and wait for their revival. ]


Mana : Impressive…So that’s a war before this between good and evil side…

Shinichi : Wait a moment, Kazaf was Hercules allies? He is not evil rider?

Prof Fudo : The Kazaf you fight now was not the old Kazaf… His true identity was leader of Vambie.

Mac : Shall we continue?

Shinichi : Yes please.

I am showing interest and wanted to know more about the riders. Mac loads new pages.

[

Kamen Rider Hercules

Hercules created by Kami using combination of Insect, Dragon, Elf, Beast and Cyborg. The power that inhabit inside Hercules henshin device allow him to swap into different form when battle. The form was commonly seen during the Forbidden War are Fencer Form; Hercules default form, Warrior Form, Hunter Form, High Wizard Form and Defender Form. During the last battle between Hercules and Joker, he activates his last form. The form was never seen before by anyone and it remains mysterious until now. After Joker was defeated, Hercules sacrifices his soul and power. His energy was spilt around the world. Later, Hercus Plate and rider belt was kept inside Horus Temple.

]




Prof Fudo : That’s the temple where my ancestor found Hercus plate and rider belt!

[

However, a fortune teller predicts in future they are greater power of darkness than Joker will appear at Network. To prevent the history repeat again, a lot people tried to become Hercules. Unfortunately they unable to activate the Hercules power. Hence, we believe Hercules was waiting a suitable owner to unseal his power. According to fortune teller, thousand years later, a savior from other world will be the one who chosen by Hercules to save the world.

]

Shinichi : The chosen one…is me?

Prof Fudo : Of course! You are the one who manage to activate Hercules power.

Shinichi : Prof Fudo, look at this part. The Hercules form written at here was totally difference than the form I had now.

Prof Fudo : Now you mentioned I just realize it…

Mana : Mac, are you sure you translate correctly?

Mac : Yes I do…

Meanwhile, everyone kept quiet and having a doubt on their mind. I spoke with Mac again.

Shinichi : Mac, where do you get from the Hercules data that you show me last time?

Mac : The data was inserted by Prof Fudo ancestor when they analysis Hercues Plate. I read those data from the plate.

Shinichi : Awhh man…I am so confuse…am I really Kamen Rider? Am I the chosen one?

Mana : You’re Kamen Rider. Everyone including Vambie had acknowledged it. Even the partial of Hercules recognizes you as Hercules!

Mana was trying to comfort and giving me confident. But I still have a lot doubt in my mind. I stand up from my seat and leaving the room.

Prof Fudo : Wait Shinichi, where are you going?

Shinichi : I want to go out and have a walk.

I went down to the basement. I reach to my bike and rode it away. I leave the secret lab and drive alone on the land. The land around me was dead and badly destroyed by Vambie. I keep riding my bike until I reached a city after an hour of riding. I stop my bike nearby a ship dock. I walk to the sea direction and I manage to watch the sunset.

Shinichi : I wonder…am I fighting as Hercules? All the characteristic of Hercules explain by Book of Hero was totally different than who I am now…

??? : You want to know the answer badly?

I was shock by the voice that came from behind. But I knew the voice. It was Kazaf.

Shinichi : Kazaf!

Kazaf : Let me tell you the answer. You are not Hercules!

Shinichi : What!?

Kazaf : The rider plate you using now, was not rider plate use by Hercules thousand years ago. Your rider plate had been replicated by those scientists who interested to obtain Hercules power!

I wonder should I believe on Kazaf. I look at him fully suspicious…

Kazaf : Don’t believe me? I know you already obtained Book of Hero and I believe you already read it. Hercules power was totally not same as what you have now, right?

Shinichi : Shut up! I won’t believe you! Don’t try to deceive me!

I took out my rider belt and plate.

HENSHIN!!

A bright light appear together with binary code surround my body. It changes my body into Hercules.

Hercules : If I defeat you here now, this world will be peace! And I’ll able to go back to my world!

Kazaf : So you wanted to go back to your own world badly? Let me tell you the way.

Hercules : Huh?

Kazaf : At the center of Network, they is a gate call Dimension Gate. I believe the gate can bring you back to your world.

Hercules : Dimension…Gate…

Kazaf : Well, it seem like you are hesitating now. I give you one day to think about it. If you accept my offer, meet me at here by tomorrow on morning.

Kazaf walked away from me and disappear from my sight. I took out my rider plate and revert back to my human form.

Shinichi : What should I do…..

Kazaf word and offer causing me be more confuse. With the disappointed feel, I went to get my bike and prepare to go back to Prof Fudo lab. After a half an hour riding I reach back to the dead land. It seems Kazaf was hiding nearby around me, together with a Vambie.

Kazaf : His guard was off now. Don’t disappoint me.

Vambie : Leave it to me, Kazaf-sama.

The Vambie jumped to my direction and kicks me. I was flying away from my bike and fall down. I immediately recover my stance and look at the Vambie. It was a Gorilla look Vambie and his body was burning with flame.

Shinichi : Vambie!

Gorilla-V throws a punch on my stomach and I was send away from him. I stand up again.
I took out my rider belt and plate.

HENSHIN!!

A bright light appear together with binary code surround my body. It changes my body into Hercules. I press the right button on my rider belt and my sword fly toward to me.
I use my sword and slash rapidly on Gorilla-V. In return, he punches on my face and kick my stomach. He grab on my neck with his high temperature hand. I felt my neck burning in heat.

Later he slams me on the ground. His hand still grabbing on my neck tightly and I unable to release myself. He punches on my chest countless time. However, the situation changes when I able to laid a kick on his stomach and repelled him away from me. At the instant, I press the purple button then middle on my rider plate.

A_C_T_I_V_A_T_E

A binary code appears around my body. The giant lizard appear from above my head and it change into armor to equipped into me.

WIZARD FORM, COMPLETE

I managed to change to Wizard Form.

I pressed the right button on my rider belt to summon my weapon, Basher Rod.

Gorilla-V rush toward to me and trying to punch me. I summon Ice Wall to block his attack but the wall was melt due to his heat. His punch accurately hit on my chest. I been push back away few meters.

Hercules : Lord of Ice, I need your power. I summon…

Before I finish casting my magic, Gorilla-V throw a flame from his mouth and hit on my hand. My rod release from my hand.

Hercules : My rod!

Gorilla-V : You’re finish!

Gorilla-V charges toward to me and slams me with his fire body. He pushes me to the back with his body. At last he throws a fire punch on my face. I fall to the ground and reverted back to human form. I fainted at the moment…Gorilla-V take my Hercus plate. After that, Kazaf appear. Gorilla-V give my rider plate to Kazaf.

Kazaf : Well, you play too long.

Gorilla-V : I expect more from him, but seem like no fun at all.

Kazaf : Anyway, your mission done. Well done. I’ll reward you when I return to Dakra Castle.

Gorilla-V : Thank you Kazaf-sama.

As soon as they finished talk, Gorilla-V disappear. Kazaf looking on me.
No matter what…you need to die before your gain Hercules memory”…
That is last word spoken by Kazaf before he disappear…


On the next morning, I woke up. I found out myself at the ship dock. My bike was located not far from me. I tried to remember back what happen last night. Once I get near to my bike, I realize my Hercus Plate wasn’t with me. I become panic and search everywhere. After a few minute searching, Kazaf appear in front of me, holding my Hercus Plate…

Kazaf : Are you looking for this?

Shinichi : Kazaf! Return that to me!

Kazaf : Well, you don’t need this anymore since I will send you back to your world.

Shinichi : No way! I won’t leave my friend behind here! I’ll continue fight!

Kazaf : I am disappoint with your answer. Lucky you have 1 more choice from me…DIE on my power!

Kazaf throw away my Hercus Plate to his back. I run toward to get my Hercus Plate but Kazaf punch on my chest and cause me unable to pick up my plate.

Shinichi : Darn! You cheater!

Kazaf : I must eliminate you. You’re on my way to fulfill my sacred dream.

Shinichi : Sacred dream? You’re causing everyone in this world suffer!!

Kazaf : Don’t hate me. This is our nature as a type of virus. We spread everywhere, every system and destroy the system! Shinichi, you as Hercules, act as anti-virus for this system. So, I must eliminate you!

Shinichi : (Darn, if I don’t henshin, I’ll get kill)…

Kazaf push his left and right switch to UPPER level. A pair of glove and boot appear. He prepare to attack me but I manage to dodge his attack. However his speed was fast. As soon I dodge his punch, he kicks on my back. I am flying to the direction where he throws my Hercus Plate located. I manage to grab on my plate before I land down.

I equip the rider plate to my rider belt.

HENSHIN!!

Kazaf : What!?

A bright light appear together with binary code surround my body. It changes my body into Hercules.

Kazaf : You purposely receive my kick so that you can reach your rider plate. Pretty smart.

Hercules : I’ll defeat you, Kazaf!

Kazaf : You fool. You haven’t realized there are huge gaps between our ability.

I press the right button on my rider belt and my sword fly toward to me. I was preparing to attack him anytime while Kazaf just standing waiting for my attack….

To be continued…
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nice editting. i'll post mine tomorrow. i guess
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ah thx..i hope my eng return to normal state already..XD
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