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Posted 6/8/08
If anyone is wondering about the reason I wrote this poem, well its's because I felt kinda lonely and I had to write it all down so this was all what came to my head and sorry if its not of great level but I put alot of thinking into it and a very close friend of mine cheered me all the way and made me put it on crunchyroll. Therefore, I hope U like this poem that I wrote and its the first poem I'm putting on Crunchyroll..feel free to comment!

Forever now and always all along

When my eyes can see only you
Tell me how can I dream without you?
If it’s not anyone just as you
Would I be the worst lover around?

If I can break-free from my fears
Of loving you more than, (what) my heart can take
Would you at least come back to me?
And rub away, away my tears,
Forever, now, always and all along
So,see only me as I see only you through my eyes

And like no one else has ever done before
I’m always gonna wait for you no matter how far you are
And I’m gonna give you all of me
So make me, the angel of your dreams,
And make me the angel of your life...
As I see it all through your endless thoughts,
And timeless dreams...
So, see only me as I see only you
Forever now and always all along
In my very lonely mind

But Until then, my heart might turn into a frozen rose
Waiting for its sunshine to come along...
Waiting for the bright light to shine it days...
And come by to sing its wishful songs..
Washing away all its worries...
Healing away all the pain...
And giving it all the endless warmth it needs
Forever, now and always all along
In my eternal eyes and thoughts you'll always remain
And in my heart you'll always be kept...
For the deep trace you left...
Let me rise again, like I never did before....
So, see only me as I see only you, my love
...forever, now and always all along

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Posted 6/10/08
very cool, nice flow, great feeling
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Posted 6/10/08
The poem has its moments, its been well written. which the last stanza had the best lines which described the scenario very nicely. The message of the poem is very straightforward
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Posted 6/11/08

psyopslayerx wrote:

The poem has its moments, its been well written. which the last stanza had the best lines which described the scenario very nicely. The message of the poem is very straightforward


thank you so much for the reply..about the last stanza it did actualy take more time to adjust it to the whole poem ^-^
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Takumoto wrote:

very cool, nice flow, great feeling


thanx i did read soe of ur poems though but i realy kant remeber which was the one i liked the most since u have alot..hehe keep writing i do enjoy reading your poems btw ^-^
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