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Yamada ryosuke, an artist, singer, talented chef and young man. But wait, i'm not going to tell you about his young life, i've imagine him as a father, single parent :)
A 29 year old yamada ryosuke has a 5 year old girl named yamada umi. His wife died 6 months ago caused cancer. Being popular and single dad at the same time is not easy at all, so he paid for half time nany. Only for take care his daughter at day.

One day, ryosuke cooked for dinner, umi study hiraganas and making some pics, she ask ryochan.
''otochan..''
"yes, dear, are you hungry?"
"no.. Etoo... Ok, yes."
"wait for 5 more minute ok, sweaty"
"ok, otoochan, where is okachan?"
Ryosuke stunt, he thinking the right way to answer it.
"otoochan, you don't know?"
"okachan have done the best, she's watching us now, on the heaven"
Umi stop her draw and walk to ryosuke, she grab ryosuke's pants.
"heaven? Where is it?"
"hmmm... I'll show you after we eat ok? Ah! Its done! Here you go*put dinner on the table*"
"waa, tochan's cook smells good, itadakimasu!"
"umi like it?"
"soo much!"

After dinner, ryosuke wash dishes and carry umi to backyard.
"i promised to show kachan place right?" umi nods.
"see the sky, what do you see?"
Umi sees sky and dirrectly answer "stars"
"kachan ne, right now, she's above those stars, watching us. That place called heaven. It's really beatiful there."
Umi hug her dad tightly
"will she comeback?"
Ryosuke look his daughter, smile gently and answer,
"we'll go there someday, so be a nice girl ok?"
"i promise tochan!"
"saa, good girl can't sleep well, let's go to sleep."
Ryosuke carry his daughter to her bed room. He put her soft blanket and turn off her room light.
"tochan, you will come to my parent meeting,right?" ryosuke stunt, he forget
"which one?"
"the one i gave you the letter yesterday."
"ah! That one, i'd never miss it." he said it even without remember which one. He step out from umi's bedroom.
"tuesday.. Tuesday, i feel like i have sth to do that day." he said to himself.
His phone rang, he has no mood to look who's calling, so he just picked it.
"ryochan!"
"yuto ka? Doshite?"
"my kids have this parent meeting on tuesday, what will you do?"
"i'll come?"he confused.
"yappari."yuuto sigh.
"why?"
"you forget about we have dorama shoot."
Ryosuke stun, He really forget. What the hell?
"helloo, ryochan? You still there?"
Ryosuke can't think. Damn it.
"ok, than, happy thinking, jaa ne." and phone closed.
Now only ryosuke, with his full-scheduled-mind alone at his sofa.

Please ppl, don't kill me cause write this fic, just say it if you hate it :lols:
Be honest of what do you think!!
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Posted 6/9/08
omgosh~
so sad that ryosuke's wife pass away
umi's such a cute girl~~
i love it~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Posted 6/10/08
I want to be more focus on father daughter love, hehehe, do you like it?
Thanks, it's my first story
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i love it~~~~~~~~~~
*love love love*!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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*cry happy* you're soo nice! Btw i got the inspiration from you
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Posted 6/10/08
me?
what did i do to inspire you?
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Posted 6/10/08
nice..hahaha....rurusuza_xoxo......are you buxy??? hhaha..what will happen nxt??..haha...i wanna know what he would do....
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24 / F / Outta Dis World!!
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Posted 6/10/08
AW.. its such a sweet and sad fic!! i want to know what happens next please~~!
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Posted 6/10/08
h4ckchan : yeah! cause you said about papa yama thing on Ryu nd shin love forum, so i've been ispired by you, thx sooo much!
tisha : what is buxy? :huh:
pinkanime : my fingers hurt! i made it on my phone, and you know that our phone button sooooo hard! gladly i didn't break any finger
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Posted 6/10/08
ruru-paaaan!! this is soo cute.... really! like it ^_^
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ruru~pan >> oh i see.. wow.. you really made mama yama pass away

pyon pyon >> right right? ruru~pan's so talented ^-^
Posted 6/10/08
omg this is adorable!
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haha, mama yama pass away so you guys don't get jealous or sth... hehehe i'm trying to make the next chapt
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Posted 6/11/08
just let your imagination run wild ^-^
but keep some thoughts for later on as well
unlike what i did -_-ll
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WOAH!!
You have a fic ruru-pan!!
I'm going to read it now!! ^-^

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