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love it ruru-pan!! it's gr8!!!!!
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it is? thanks pyonchan
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it is it is!!!! continue ne~~ i actually am thinking of anotherfanfic.. more unrealistic.. well with a bit of magic ne~~ what do ya think of it?
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maybe you can mix kinpachi sensei and your new fic! it'll be sth new and fresh! i bet!!
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hmm but i wanted to make kinpachi sense a dark story without romance....
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than make it... AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
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yes!!! let's dicuss in my crazy world ne~
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mine too....sometimes it can't open runchy...
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yeah! that was happening! and after half time, suddenly, it's good again
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guys, i made the parent-meeting day! yeah! x) here they are!

CHAPTER 3 :

So, today is Tuesday, so this day is parent meeting day. Umi already waiting on her school. Wondering if her dad going to come or not. It’s rainy day. She looks her paper many times, sometime with smiling, sometimes with thinking face and even sometimes giggles. She keeps it under her desk so no one can see it. She’s watching her friends, stand up and tell what they got. She feels her heart beat, very fast when her teacher calling a name and very slow to know her dad is still not there. She’s thinking,
“If tochan not here, than he must be work for me. I can’t complain. I can show him later.” That’s what she said to pull her self. With thinking that way, she won’t get so disappoint. People applauding her classmate. Her teacher look the absent.
“Let see, Umichan, please tell us yours.”

Umi stand up, he looks around. Still no sign form her dad. Mothers start to whisper one to other, “Is she Yamada Ryosuke’s daughter? I’m big fans of him.”
“But he’s not here, I guess only same family name.”
“But she was there when Ryosuke’s wife funeral.”
“So I guess, his dad too busy than.”
Teacher speak, “Please be quiet.” And those mothers shut their mouth. “Umichan, you can start.” Umi take a deep breath and checking for her daddy sign between another parents. To be honest she’s a lil bit disappoint. She takes a deep breath. And..
“Sorry I’m late, I have some works to finish.” Ryosuke came to the class with half breath like after running.
“It’s ok, Mr. Yamada, your daughter just wants to start before you came.”
“So, I don’t miss it. That’s a relieved.” He take his place and smile to Umi while whispering “Ganbatte ne!” and stand between office-employee daddies.

Umi feel really great, now she can tell whatever she wants. She shows a drawing book. She open the first page.
“So, I drew this picture last night. I want to tell you about my father.”
She turn the page.
“He is a great toochan I’ve ever had! His cooks are yummy. He never misses my good-morning and good-night kiss. He covered as kachan, tochan, chef, and actor!” She stop and turn the next page.
“When I feel sad cause kachan is not here anymore, he told me, if I am a good girl than I’ll meet kaachan on a beautiful place called heaven. He told me that kaachan watching us above those stars.”
The next page, there’s picture of a man, with papers, and cameras.
“This is.. My toochan’s job. He sings, he shots, and he talks. And he gets the money. Even if toochan this busy, he always have time for me. He never return late, so I always see him everyday. He always comes with gifts and usually, they are foods. I don’t know how my tochan spent it, but, when I want to eat it, they’re gone, or there are only half of it.”
Ryosuke giggles, and concentrating to her daughter again who now holding a page with soccer ball and a man.
“He loves soccer. He never missed any match. Even if he must wake up really early. But often, he slept on half time, and he must be asking me on the morning about the score, but how do I know if I’m not even watching it. So he just turn the newspaper page straight to soccer part.”
“I love toochan sooo much, only one thing I don’t like about him.”
Ryosuke stop smiling. He never thought that his daughter hate him on something. Oh, no! he need to repair it. He must be a perfect father!
“and that is…..” Umi turns her page.
“Strawberries! I hate strawberries. But my toochan love it so much. I can’t get it.”
Ryosuke’s mouth half open, he stunt for moments. He never realized it.
“Strawberries good for you sweetheart.” Says teacher.
“No, it has something strange on it taste, I hate it. But I love strawberry milk. Because it’s sweet, like chocolate or vanilla one.”
Umi said with innocent-intonation and smile while Ryosuke shocked with his daughter statement.

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omgosh!! waaaa!!!
sugoi!!!!!!!!!!

at first.. i was like.. aww~ good Umi.. be happy.. don't be sad..

then i saw the goodnight kisses and good morning kisses and i hated her again..

then i saw she hated strawberries and i began laughing

hahaha!! all 3 weird emotions in just 1 part of a fanfic

its really great!! continue it!!
i want more!!!!!
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huahahahaha, did you surprised by my surprise?
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yess!! very!!
VERY SURPRISED!!
how can Umi hate strawberries?!?!?!
she's in-human!!
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hahaha, i wanted to put iton chap 4, but, i guess chap 3 not bad too right?
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