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Writers COMPETITION of the MONTH~june~
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Posted 6/10/08 , edited 6/19/08
Okay, this will be our first main competition in writing..=) you guys will have 2 sections to choose to participate. the Poem competition and the Short Story competition. each of u will choose either u want to join both or choose between one of them.

for the Poem competition:
=anything you want, no restrictions, have fun^^

for the Short Story competition:
=anything you want, no restrictions to..haha

deadline is on June 28, so we could prepare the voting booth =)
goodluck minna~^^

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Posted 6/10/08
Username: lacusxkira
Type: Short Story
Title: Rose Thoughts



PS: I hope you will all like it!!! This is about friendship that blooms!!! I just made it short so that you will not bore in reading this!!!
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Posted 6/11/08
Username:maristellyrub
Type (:short story
Title:regret




i wish you took his feelings to your heart.isn't it hard for someone you love to die because of you?i wish you liked it too!
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Posted 6/11/08
awwww!! both of u are really good!! touching story...both really relate to reality..keep it up u guys!^^ i love it!! =)
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Posted 6/17/08 , edited 6/17/08
Here's mine!

Username: BlueVelvetRose
Type: Poem
Title: Slowly Dying

Posted 6/17/08
well i gave it a try!

Username: starburst343
Type: Poem
Title: Inner self

The moonlight illuminates
And casts shadows in the room.
See the trees and mountains
Darkly and maliciously loom.
Your life is yours. You are alive.

Start regaining your senses
And allow your dim eyes to see.
Go past that black barrier
And let your wings fly free
Release the sorrow within your heart.

Take one step, maybe two
Perhaps maybe three or four.
Does your fear prevent you
From entering the dark door?
Careful! Don’t show your inner self.

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Posted 6/18/08 , edited 6/18/08
hey starburst! thats pretty cool!! like it XD gambatte nee~^^
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Posted 6/19/08
um.. here's mine !!

Username : Clumsy_x_22
Type : Poem
Title : You're With Me ( idk.. it's kinda lame.. haha, I didn't know what to call it >.< )

The world is not always kind.
Though it may be calm and sweet,
Things can still get cold
And Right is never kept in mind.

We're thrust into the dangers
Of this messed up place,
So I look for you among the strangers
To keep on feeling safe.

We can comfort each other
When we see the unknown.
It just takes time to realize
That we are never alone.

Look deep into your heart,
Or call out my name.
And don't forget my smile,
Don't let your heart be tamed.

So if and when we part,
Still I hope we never do,
Inside we'll always know
That we will still be true.
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Posted 6/19/08
wow kaori..im speechless..haha! thats really good! goodluck in the competition XD
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Posted 6/22/08 , edited 6/22/08
username:haruhidaijo
type:story line/poem
title:A Story of An Innocent Child!


i remember...
...that small, gloomy place lit by sun from the west.
It's my earliest memory.
It's a hot, humid day.
...just staring blankly up as the room around me is dyed red by the sunset.
After getting beaten up by my mom, I'm stretched out, limp, on the floor...
(Midget)
"What are you looking at?! there's none for you silly child"
"Mommy, I want one too, Mommy!"(wild)
"You're getting on my nerves! You should thank me just for raising you!"(my child)
"Mommy, I'm sorry, Mommy!"(HIDE!)
.................................................................
She would lock the door, and close the windows...
and even though it was the middle of summer, she would close them...murmur...
and, that's when...
...she would seriously beat me.(I'm sorry)
I was 3 years old. (Blurry)
I didnt know how to protect myself in the room of cold.(Blankly)
I didnt even know that what was happening to me wasnt normal....
(Mortal)

...to a child... the house is his WORLD... and his parents are GOD... anything...
so "I" endured it.
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Posted 6/22/08
wow..thats really awesome!! i love it!! its so good..hope u win! goodluck =)
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Posted 6/23/08
Username : animeprincess94
Type : Short Story
Title : Something I should do earlier


When I was about 5 years old, my mom always wanted me to learn musical instruments. That time, I had no interest in these stuffs.I thought learning musical instruments was hard. I kept on saying 'no' to my mom. Eventhough, most of my friends learn musical intruments, I won't get jealous or mad.

As I walking by the shoplots, I saw a shop that sells musical instruments. Then, I heard people playing musical instruments... It was a beautiful melody. It truly calmed be down. I was enjoying myself and it ends quickly as my friends pull me away.
Later on, my friends who plays musical instruments planned to gather at one of their house for pratice. Since, their exams are coming. They asked me to come along. That time, I think a while, Should I go? I have nothing to do with musical instruments. Eventhough I go, I have nothing to do there. But one of my friends convinced me to come, so I went.
As I listened to their practice, once again I felt the power of the melody. It was beautiful. Then, I realized that playing these instruments aren't hard at all. The point is that whether you enjoy it or not. My friends were putting their effort to it. They really enjoyed it. Then, I really wish I could turn back to time and said 'yes' rather than 'no'. This is something I wanted to do earlier. Much more earlier.


P.S. True story?
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wow..haha! nice story! its like la corda inst it?? XD
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Posted 6/24/08

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wow..haha! nice story! its like la corda inst it?? XD


ya--kinda--haha..
but i dun hav a magic violin or playing a violin now--
haha--someday i'll...
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Posted 6/24/08

animeprincess94 wrote:


chulit08 wrote:



wow..haha! nice story! its like la corda inst it?? XD


ya--kinda--haha..
but i dun hav a magic violin or playing a violin now--
haha--someday i'll...


haha! cool! anyway, its a nice story..gambatte!! =)

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