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Oh wait, lets change the rules..
instead of 3 words, just put one whole sentence..and let others connect it. you cannot put another sentence consecutively, let others first input their thoughts then thats the time u can put ur sentence to make a great story..haha! lets see how far this would go!! weee!

One summer night


ive summarized our words and it comes like this:


One summer night at the seashore near the forest, a little girl was walking aimlessly looking for her lost volley ball. Then suddenly, a big man came out of nowhere and he kidnapped her and she screamed and yelled waiting for help. Silence answered her as she moved, the man said "Don't Shout! I have Something for you is this your lost Volleyball?" She nodded slowly. "Im so sorry that i had scared you..but you were moving towards a deep cliff and i was afraid that you might fall" The Big Man said. "thanks mister" said the little girl, "oh by the way, my name is Elizabeth, but u can call me Lizzie in short..uhm, thanks for saving my life, and u are?" "I'm....Derek," he answered. "Now go home to Maria. Your mom must be very worried." "How did you know my mom's name?" she asked. Derek stared at the little child and said "it is not yet the time to know..but u will one day." Confused by his words, Lizzie wanted to ask on but was stopped by Derek. Reluctantly, Lizzie started walking, headed back to her house, with her mind set to ask her mother about Derek. " Mother!! are u in here? where are you?" shouted Lizzie. Lizzie stood fixed, and called for her Mother again, but there was no reply. "Mother!" She called again, getting more anxious each time she called her mom. As she shouted, Lizze ran towards her mothers room, desperate for an answer. but when she reached her room, her mother was gone and there was a note on the always clean bed. Lizze picked the note and began to read its contents.
"Dear Lizzie, it began, and it continued, by the time you read this, I'll be on a boat bound for the other island, the one I told you never to go to. Perhaps you are wondering why i didn't bring you with me..well, i cant answer that for now..please take care of yourself, i love you so much sweetie..il come back for you..i promise."
Lizzie stared at the page, her mind blank. 'Mom....why did you leave me, anyway??' She sat down on the floor and started weeping. When Lizzie came to, she realized it was night and she had cried herself to sleep. Unnoticed in the dark, a shadow lurked in the darkness..watching her in sleep. Lizzie slowly got up, then she saw the shadow's movement in the corner of her eye. "Who's there?? I know someone's there!!" she shouted nervously. No one answered, and Lizzie shook her head. "I must have imagined it..." Derek stood behind the trees, watching Lizzie go back in her sleep. "i must not let her see me, but rather watch over her," Derek thought. "she'll understand soon enough, so i shall simply stay here and watch over her."On the next day, Lizzie woke up with a smile on her face, determination set and whispered to herself, "Im going for you mom..dont worry about me..il be fine." Lizzie began to think about what she would need on this journey, and most importantly, how she would get there. As she packed, she began to hesitate, "should i rlly go through with this?" she sighed, "maybe i shouldn't." she said looking up, seeing the picture of her and her mother at the carnival last year, she was so happy, it was so much fun, a tear began to form in her eye, and she began to make a fist at her side in an attempt to get control of herself, "no," she thought looking up and gazing at the nothingness before her, "i'll do this," her stare became more intense and the tear that was forming in her eye began to fall, "for mom!", wiping her eye with the fist she was clenching, and finally had a lighter, but determined shine in her stare. While Lizzie was busy packing her things, Derek was waiting for her in front of the house. Finishing up her packing, Lizzie thought about how she would time her trip, unfortunately for her, she was to consumed in thought to realize that Derek was standing there. "what are you doing here?? why are you here?" Lizzie asked. "Why of course i came to go with you on your journey," Derek raised an eyebrow, "you didn't think i would let you go alone, did you?" Lizzie became nervous, "why on earth would he be here?" she thought, Derek, seeing the confusion on her face, patted her on the back and said "All will be explained in good time" He looked up at the sun, deciphering what the weather would be later in the day, "all in good time." "Okay, but what did u bring for our journey? Surely u didn't expect me to provide u with everything right?" She asked nervously. Derek shook his head disapprovingly and showed her a fairly large backpack. "Woah!! thats plenty!! are u planning to bring ur whole house??" exclaimed Lizzie. Derek chuckled and patted on her head. Lizzie frowned and shook his hand off. "So do you know where my mother is?" "Kiddo, u ask too many questions! ul find the answers on the right time.." Derek answered exasperatedly.



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Okies i will continue it^^
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was walking aimlessly
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lost volley ball
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big man came
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out of nowhere
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and he kidnapped her....
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Zerlina wrote:

and he kidnapped her....


pls write and he kidnapped our number of words is only 3
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o.0 sorry

and he kidnapped
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Zerlina wrote:

o.0 sorry

and he kidnapped


thats okay me too last time ihave only 2 words ehehehhe
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Zerlina wrote:

thankies xD will someone help me with avatars design? msg me pls


ohh no pls dont write here i will help u but pls delete this this is a choo choo train forum
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