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Setting of This Story
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76 / United State/Cali...
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Posted 6/12/08
hahahahahahaaha that's what we're figuring right now. we must know what's happening in the story before we find out the fate of these kids.
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So what did I miss? Sorry had a very important 3 hour meeting to go to at which they told me just as they walked in.... :)
So anyone want to explain the concept to little me?
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76 / United State/Cali...
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Hahaha No. We are now descuing what are we going to do with the kids that's stuck their.
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26 / F / Burtucky
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Posted 6/12/08
Huh? Completely confused now...
My brain is fried from the meeting....
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76 / United State/Cali...
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Posted 6/12/08
Just take your time reading the post
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26 / F / Burtucky
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Posted 6/12/08
oh..... opps.... kinda... yeah.... sorry...
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22 / F / In your brain
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How advanced exactly would the humans be? I'd think like colonial times right, like those types of guns, or a little bit further on?
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26 / F / Burtucky
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Posted 6/12/08
Not very advanced.... I mean many manufacturing companies are really quite dumb... I should know since I work for one.
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76 / United State/Cali...
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hahahahahaha what kind of companies is it?
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26 / F / Burtucky
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Posted 6/12/08
Delphi...
I mean they're trying to recover from bankruptcy in some divisions so they decided to take the co-op students to Cedar Point, That makes perfect F****** sense to me.
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76 / United State/Cali...
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Posted 6/12/08
That suck
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26 / F / Burtucky
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Posted 6/12/08
Yeah so anyways...
The teens right? We were talking about them?
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76 / United State/Cali...
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Posted 6/12/08
yes, what's going to happen after they landed on the plant
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26 / F / Burtucky
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Landed on the Planet?
I don't know... I didn't come up with this one... I only had an idea for the kids to go onto human land accidentally get their attention and then it began.
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116 / M / Graduria
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Posted 6/12/08 , edited 6/12/08
lol the whole goin into another world has been way too over done, but if it's what everyone wants to do i'l flow with the tide. tru the whole race wars has been over done as well as everything else in the world. ken was right tho it's better off bein simple, so we have more levereage, and usually stories keep it simple and build up with ramdomness that make it sick later on, some start with an explosion of excitement then disapoint u in the end or even half way. but yea, gunz could give levearage if there is magic, and it's cheap if the world has none. all i'm sayin is if we gon do somthing, try somthin that hasnt been done too much. I'm not much of a writer but I am a penciler, and people make me draw the same kind of thing like they dont even try to be original with clothing. but yea the ideas are great but, most, just like stuff i put out, are over done, just a thought lol.
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