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I think a midevil-fantsy setting was what Kenshin was aiming for as for plot maybe it would be a good idea to establish a good side bad side idea. Like the most farthest island to the east can be were the enemies or evil creatures reside and they constantly bombard the main island were the good guys and people live. Focusing around one character seems like a bad idea to me since its a community story but establishing a kingdom setting sounds good because you can be anything from a soldier to the one king or queen
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Okay only just joined up and read through this and i have to say i am lost. Everyone has a different idea which is great until they start saying i agree and then go on to contradict the agreement. So we want a human race and a midevil-fantasy world that has has various different kinds of beings that are so unsure of each other that they cannot trust each other and therefore they either enslave another kind of being or kill them out of fear??? I am getting the right idea?
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hahahha..everyone calm down....i propose we ditch the teenagers
Lets creat a world like this
its a world with seven races. the humans and 6 others,( i was thinking of five major races with a country and all and 1 race that is made of minorities, sorta like the underworld, if you have a superunique charcter he/she will belong to the underworld)
We have the humans at the highest stage of technological development, and rest being either magical or very dumb at lower levels or no levels of technology.
The world coexists, but the races are uneasy with each other, humans particularly(military), thinking of themselves as superior to the rest of the world aim for dominance under the cloud of alliances.
The military of the humans has a shadow brach the strykers(poachers) that hunt other races for profit.

okay if every one agrees with this then lets take this story further, or else we will be stuck with a too complicated story line.
I personally think this story can be developed from all angles and can be a good starting point. =D
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I am confused...T-T...it seems like i'm living in the different side of the world from you guys! How come there's so much posts here now?!! And i strongly believe my brain level is the lowest among the writers here..i don't seem to understand anything! You guys are saying the human race are of the evil side? And there are other races like fairies and gnomes? Fairies and gnomes as in 'fairies and gnomes'? As in Fairies=pretty, with wings, small-sized and gnomes= short, with beard, scary? Or are they the different kind of fairies and gnomes? How do they look like? Do the humans have the same form as 'human'? (i mean us, the members here, but forgive me if there's a martian here as well...) How many races are there exactly? The Rat race, i understand they would look like rats, but do they stand on two feet and can they talk? I don't feel like adding anything up because i think we already have the ideas, but we need it to b more arranged. And midevil,do you guys mean medieval? Or is it really midevil as in the period where we're in the middle ages and there's a lot of evil??? You guys are scary!! Who's the good guy by the way? Sorry...i never played games before so i really don't know...there's other questions but i can't remember..
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I am confused...T-T...it seems like i'm living in the different side of the world from you guys! How come there's so much posts here now?!! And i strongly believe my brain level is the lowest among the writers here..i don't seem to understand anything! You guys are saying the human race are of the evil side? And there are other races like fairies and gnomes? Fairies and gnomes as in 'fairies and gnomes'? As in Fairies=pretty, with wings, small-sized and gnomes= short, with beard, scary? Or are they the different kind of fairies and gnomes? How do they look like? Do the humans have the same form as 'human'? (i mean us, the members here, but forgive me if there's a martian here as well...) How many races are there exactly? The Rat race, i understand they would look like rats, but do they stand on two feet and can they talk? I don't feel like adding anything up because i think we already have the ideas, but we need it to b more arranged. And midevil,do you guys mean medieval? Or is it really midevil as in the period where we're in the middle ages and there's a lot of evil??? You guys are scary!! Who's the good guy by the way? Sorry...i never played games before so i really don't know...there's other questions but i can't remember..


We havent decided anything yet, ^__^ so its all cool if you dont get anything. The humans arent evil more like the military and some sections of the gonvernment that is funding the military is evil!
What the other 6 races will be , what species and what location has to be carefully considered because then we need to develope a country customs traditions and all such for them.
So you see we do need your ideas..=)
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aichmophobian wrote:

I am confused...T-T...it seems like i'm living in the different side of the world from you guys! How come there's so much posts here now?!! And i strongly believe my brain level is the lowest among the writers here..i don't seem to understand anything! You guys are saying the human race are of the evil side? And there are other races like fairies and gnomes? Fairies and gnomes as in 'fairies and gnomes'? As in Fairies=pretty, with wings, small-sized and gnomes= short, with beard, scary? Or are they the different kind of fairies and gnomes? How do they look like? Do the humans have the same form as 'human'? (i mean us, the members here, but forgive me if there's a martian here as well...) How many races are there exactly? The Rat race, i understand they would look like rats, but do they stand on two feet and can they talk? I don't feel like adding anything up because i think we already have the ideas, but we need it to b more arranged. And midevil,do you guys mean medieval? Or is it really midevil as in the period where we're in the middle ages and there's a lot of evil??? You guys are scary!! Who's the good guy by the way? Sorry...i never played games before so i really don't know...there's other questions but i can't remember..


We havent decided anything yet, ^__^ so its all cool if you dont get anything. The humans arent evil more like the military and some sections of the gonvernment that is funding the military is evil!
What the other 6 races will be , what species and what location has to be carefully considered because then we need to develope a country customs traditions and all such for them.
So you see we do need your ideas..=)


The more i think the more complicated it gets...Okay, let's see, there are 6 races, correct? Human, fairies, gnomes, the Rats, the underworld race which is 'different', and another one is...? Then the poachers and the strykers, which race are they? Should we make them as the 6th race? Or maybe there are strykers in every race? Are they vicious and ugly? Say we divide the kind of specialities the races have, like humans have high tech weapon, and the fairies use magic, correct? The gnomes have amazing strength because they are great builders, the Rats, lirg should think about their abilities and i think there's a vampire character, so he's in the underworld category? In every country, how is it like? Do they have deities? What kind of gov they have? Okay...did i just make it sounded worse?
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aichmophobian wrote:

I am confused...T-T...it seems like i'm living in the different side of the world from you guys! How come there's so much posts here now?!! And i strongly believe my brain level is the lowest among the writers here..i don't seem to understand anything! You guys are saying the human race are of the evil side? And there are other races like fairies and gnomes? Fairies and gnomes as in 'fairies and gnomes'? As in Fairies=pretty, with wings, small-sized and gnomes= short, with beard, scary? Or are they the different kind of fairies and gnomes? How do they look like? Do the humans have the same form as 'human'? (i mean us, the members here, but forgive me if there's a martian here as well...) How many races are there exactly? The Rat race, i understand they would look like rats, but do they stand on two feet and can they talk? I don't feel like adding anything up because i think we already have the ideas, but we need it to b more arranged. And midevil,do you guys mean medieval? Or is it really midevil as in the period where we're in the middle ages and there's a lot of evil??? You guys are scary!! Who's the good guy by the way? Sorry...i never played games before so i really don't know...there's other questions but i can't remember..


We havent decided anything yet, ^__^ so its all cool if you dont get anything. The humans arent evil more like the military and some sections of the gonvernment that is funding the military is evil!
What the other 6 races will be , what species and what location has to be carefully considered because then we need to develope a country customs traditions and all such for them.
So you see we do need your ideas..=)


The more i think the more complicated it gets...Okay, let's see, there are 6 races, correct? Human, fairies, gnomes, the Rats, the underworld race which is 'different', and another one is...? Then the poachers and the strykers, which race are they? Should we make them as the 6th race? Or maybe there are strykers in every race? Are they vicious and ugly? Say we divide the kind of specialities the races have, like humans have high tech weapon, and the fairies use magic, correct? The gnomes have amazing strength because they are great builders, the Rats, lirg should think about their abilities and i think there's a vampire character, so he's in the underworld category? In every country, how is it like? Do they have deities? What kind of gov they have? Okay...did i just make it sounded worse?


WOAH....hahahaha....no wonder you are confused....=D
okay there is the human race with a military( army, soldiers, weapons) , the military has a shadow group( an operation in the shadows, that means the normal humans arent aware of it ) known as the strykers. They are in real poachers, they hunt other races for profit.
We havent decided on the other races as of yet..........the fairies and gnomes? Perhalps they can be clumped together and form one of the races!
I think it would be wise to have the troll as one of the offciial races!
So if we follow this we have 4 official races, the humans, the fairiesngnomes, the trolls and also the underworld
That means we have to decide on the three remaining races.
I was thinking the Rat creature could be a part of underworld but if anyone wants to make it an official race, alls cool with me!

The underworld is the place where all unique strange or/and few remnants of various races could have settled down. Its a harsh place with no rules. Survival of the fittest ensues!

However this is all my ramblings.....if anyone wants to creat something else of a story then please go ahead..=)
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can we do like put the approved characters up here so we could see the races that are already been created? Though it's an open story but i think Ken should decide which ones are the official race. This way, rather than setting up new races and complicating things more we can build our chara based on the existed race...don't you guys think so?
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lol i think we shud just make up them racial names. Just take certain attributes from the races you want then mix em together, makes it a bit more original kinda.. lawl.
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aichmophobian wrote:


syphl wrote:


aichmophobian wrote:

I am confused...T-T...it seems like i'm living in the different side of the world from you guys! How come there's so much posts here now?!! And i strongly believe my brain level is the lowest among the writers here..i don't seem to understand anything! You guys are saying the human race are of the evil side? And there are other races like fairies and gnomes? Fairies and gnomes as in 'fairies and gnomes'? As in Fairies=pretty, with wings, small-sized and gnomes= short, with beard, scary? Or are they the different kind of fairies and gnomes? How do they look like? Do the humans have the same form as 'human'? (i mean us, the members here, but forgive me if there's a martian here as well...) How many races are there exactly? The Rat race, i understand they would look like rats, but do they stand on two feet and can they talk? I don't feel like adding anything up because i think we already have the ideas, but we need it to b more arranged. And midevil,do you guys mean medieval? Or is it really midevil as in the period where we're in the middle ages and there's a lot of evil??? You guys are scary!! Who's the good guy by the way? Sorry...i never played games before so i really don't know...there's other questions but i can't remember..


We havent decided anything yet, ^__^ so its all cool if you dont get anything. The humans arent evil more like the military and some sections of the gonvernment that is funding the military is evil!
What the other 6 races will be , what species and what location has to be carefully considered because then we need to develope a country customs traditions and all such for them.
So you see we do need your ideas..=)


The more i think the more complicated it gets...Okay, let's see, there are 6 races, correct? Human, fairies, gnomes, the Rats, the underworld race which is 'different', and another one is...? Then the poachers and the strykers, which race are they? Should we make them as the 6th race? Or maybe there are strykers in every race? Are they vicious and ugly? Say we divide the kind of specialities the races have, like humans have high tech weapon, and the fairies use magic, correct? The gnomes have amazing strength because they are great builders, the Rats, lirg should think about their abilities and i think there's a vampire character, so he's in the underworld category? In every country, how is it like? Do they have deities? What kind of gov they have? Okay...did i just make it sounded worse?


WOAH....hahahaha....no wonder you are confused....=D
okay there is the human race with a military( army, soldiers, weapons) , the military has a shadow group( an operation in the shadows, that means the normal humans arent aware of it ) known as the strykers. They are in real poachers, they hunt other races for profit.
We havent decided on the other races as of yet..........the fairies and gnomes? Perhalps they can be clumped together and form one of the races!
I think it would be wise to have the troll as one of the offciial races!
So if we follow this we have 4 official races, the humans, the fairiesngnomes, the trolls and also the underworld
That means we have to decide on the three remaining races.
I was thinking the Rat creature could be a part of underworld but if anyone wants to make it an official race, alls cool with me!

The underworld is the place where all unique strange or/and few remnants of various races could have settled down. Its a harsh place with no rules. Survival of the fittest ensues!

However this is all my ramblings.....if anyone wants to creat something else of a story then please go ahead..=)






racial wise, RAT, there is one, i forget the name i will post it here later when i wake up. the best place to find all mythological races is dungeons and dragons, even wikkipedia says so lawl. but yea the troll i made, like the background history for it i made that shit up trolls are supposed to be undead elves, or rather corrupted elves, the kind that got into dark magic trying to get immortality then died, somhow turnin undead gaining regenerative skills, u cut his arm the arm becomes antoher troll n what not, its kinda cheap so yea. If anyone needs info on any mythological creature I pretty much got those down pat, i can tell u history n shit n what not how they came to be even how people started writing about them lmao its pretty funny. and BTW, gnomes and trolls, theres more than 3 types, same with fairies, elves, man even orcs. but yea i think makin up our own races would be better. saves time and research. all we gota do is makeup a history how they came to be then how they became civilized. wether thru conquering land like US vs indians, or they multiplied by raiding human villages and raping their women. some races were breed of two things n what not so yea... haha
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lol i think we shud just make up them racial names. Just take certain attributes from the races you want then mix em together, makes it a bit more original kinda.. lawl.


yeah, i know...what i'm saying is we should not make up too much race, it will b confusing. I'm already confused now, i'm waiting for an answer from Ken..
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cycrone wrote:

lol i think we shud just make up them racial names. Just take certain attributes from the races you want then mix em together, makes it a bit more original kinda.. lawl.


yeah, i know...what i'm saying is we should not make up too much race, it will b confusing. I'm already confused now, i'm waiting for an answer from Ken..


well if u think about it no matter how much races we call out, we never have to show them lol. Unless som1 is world cruising goin to every damn town then yea that would be a huge hastle comin up with how the town would look and the way they dress, how they act, hostile or now. I'm thinkin kingdoms both in the sky and underground, but yea. As long as we dont go in too deep with that 1 race, and just use the character it should'nt be much trouble. Cuz i think the only good thing if it's a certain race is the racial ability and knowledge, other than that they might as well be humans lol.
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aichmophobian wrote:


cycrone wrote:

lol i think we shud just make up them racial names. Just take certain attributes from the races you want then mix em together, makes it a bit more original kinda.. lawl.


yeah, i know...what i'm saying is we should not make up too much race, it will b confusing. I'm already confused now, i'm waiting for an answer from Ken..


well if u think about it no matter how much races we call out, we never have to show them lol. Unless som1 is world cruising goin to every damn town then yea that would be a huge hastle comin up with how the town would look and the way they dress, how they act, hostile or now. I'm thinkin kingdoms both in the sky and underground, but yea. As long as we dont go in too deep with that 1 race, and just use the character it should'nt be much trouble. Cuz i think the only good thing if it's a certain race is the racial ability and knowledge, other than that they might as well be humans lol.


Those bearing the poacher character will have the trouble *grin*...anyway, i'm going to wait before creating my character. I'm really slow, please be patient with me, or just ignore me if you can't.. i might even wait until the story started and look into other people's story first..
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yes i realise that.......lol...
lets see what the others decide.....all i have to do now is wait for the story to begin.....
Good luck everyone
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ok... for now i can't decide what exatly will be the main story. because we (I and mod) first must sort things out and then make a decision. and there is one other thing we must do. we must put up strict rules... otherwise we have a chaos. but I promis we can start the story soon.
one other thing: this world will have diffrent places... so we will have diffrent stories. It's a world with ONE background and with some rules. within this world are some scenes and there are happen some things. u can travel around this world and change places.
I know... this is a really complex thing... it isn't easy to relise it. but we're on the way^^
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