Post Reply Life. Death.
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Posted 6/11/08 , edited 6/24/08
Life. Death.

When 1 life dies, another lives.
When Winter's breath draws close, everyone runs in fear.
When the shadows engulf, the light grows dimmer by the minute.
No one can stop this, it's just the cruel truth.
When the God of Death shatters the stained glass of life, you just sit there and watch the shards fall.
Everyone in front of you dies, you can't do anything about it.
Death...
This word does not bring me fear anymore.
Life...
This word has no meaning.

Posted 6/11/08
cool poem ^^ never knew you write poems good
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Posted 6/12/08
A fantastic poem ^^ great work!
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Posted 6/15/08
loved how you connected the other lines.. for me this poem has a deeper meaning to it. :]
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Posted 6/24/08
Thank you everyone
Posted 6/27/08
great poem I especially love the last 4 lines! XP
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