Post Reply Doll House! Chapter One
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Posted 6/13/08

Doll House Chapter One

"Shooting Star!"



Brother: GET UP LITTLE BAKA!!!!!!!!!!

Rena: Aaaaaa!

Brother: Ha hahaha! Stupid!!

Rena: You little peice of-

Mom: You better not use that kind of language in this house!

Brother: Stupid! Ha hahahaha

Rena: Get out off my room!!!!!

Brother: Too late! I'm already out!

Rena: I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!

Brother: Ha hahhahahaha (evil smerk)

-Ring
-Ring

Rena: Hello! This is Rena-Chan speaking, if you want to talk to my brother and are calling me by mistake I kill you!!!

Yuki: What a weird thing to say, lots of your brother's fangirls calling you but mistake lately ?

Rena: Yess... they're so annoying....

Yuki: Can you hurry and come down here to the ball-jointed doll store? I have to tell you something inportant.

Rena: Ok! I will bye!
Opens her door and stands right next to her mom.

Rena: HEY MOM! CAN I GO OUTSIDE AND PLAY WITH YUKI!?!?!?!?!?!

Mom: Aaaaaaa! Ok just stop yelling!!!!!

Rena: Ok! (Heh heh I knew if I yelled she would say anything to stop me from breaking her ear drums~)

[At The Doll Store]

Rena walks to the doll store and sees Yuki staring with a very sad expression on his face. Then says: I hope she comes....

Rena: HELLO YUKI!

Yuki: AAAAaaaaaaa!

Rena: Ha ahahaah

Yuki: Well at least you happy...

Rena: Oh I'm sorry (giggle) I didn't mean to scare you (giggle, giggle) I have just been screaming all morning and it's hard to stop (giggle, giggle).

Yuki: Umm... well I wanted to tell you something remember?

Sales Guy: Brand new doll releases right now! Half off!

Rena: Are you serious! How lucky we are! Right Yuki!?

Yuki: Ya.. Well, I might as well get it for you, seeing I always have more money with me.

Rena: Really!

[After They Buy The Doll And Are Heading Home]

Rena: Wow, the sunset is just so pretty today.

Yuki: Umm... Rena...I ......well.....umm...

Rena: Look a shooting star! Make a wish!

Yuki: I wish.......

Rena: (I Wish I was in a magical world, with Yuki-Kun of course, and it was filled with...........BALL-JOINTED DOLLS!!!!)

-Ding
-Your wish has been granted, let the fun begin....

Rena:Yuki! Did you hear that?!?!?
A big hole like thing appeared behind Yuki and Rena and sucked them in.

Rena: Aaaaa!

Yuki: Wha- what's happening!
Posted 6/13/08
good.. i want to know what will happen next... coz' i really really like stories..!!
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Posted 6/15/08

janine217 wrote:

good.. i want to know what will happen next... coz' i really really like stories..!!


Well I just posted the next chapter so.. have fun reading it! (Please can you invite some of your friends! It's lonely here!!!)
Posted 6/15/08

kyahikaru wrote:


janine217 wrote:

good.. i want to know what will happen next... coz' i really really like stories..!!


Well I just posted the next chapter so.. have fun reading it! (Please can you invite some of your friends! It's lonely here!!!)


ok i try..
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Posted 7/7/08
Interesting and funny too! Off to Chapter 2...!!!!!
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