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Posted 6/14/08 , edited 6/14/08
How would it be
to fly
like a bird up to the
sky
and feel the wind
stroke
your wings
and feel the freedom

how would it be
to destroy
the big rock
around
my heart
and make it beat
whit love agein

How would it be
if all those
wrong and bad
words
never left
our lips
and let us smile
in happines

How would it be
if the lust
for power
never exited
and we all
could live peacfull
as a happy
familly

How would it be
if everyone
found the one
they where
meant to be
and no tears
of broken had would
fall

How would it be
if pepole stoped
to look away
and
care for others
insted
and make all happy
agein

How would it be
if we all
undearstood
how life
really was
and that we no longer
should seek
after the path

And
How would it be
if I could
answear all those
and
make them happen
how would my heart
feel
when all the
burden
of them
diseapered
from this world..

I have trough of this much...hope you guys like it ^^
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Posted 6/14/08
Wow...emm, How would it be?...please answer!!!...and then we'll find how!!!...hahahaha good Poem Yami!!!...very good, it's nice and great!!!...continue with it!!!
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Posted 6/14/08

david_k_belanova wrote:

Wow...emm, How would it be?...please answer!!!...and then we'll find how!!!...hahahaha good Poem Yami!!!...very good, it's nice and great!!!...continue with it!!!


Thank you very much david =D
but sadly I cant answear thsoe questions TT.TT
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Posted 6/15/08
the poem's good.. you got me askin myself with those questions.. ^-^
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Posted 6/15/08

farfalla_12 wrote:

the poem's good.. you got me askin myself with those questions.. ^-^


Thank you soo much ^^ but it is quit interesting to find out the answear to the questions <.<
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Posted 6/16/08

++ yami, where you get the idea of doin' that one? hmm inspiration or something??
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Posted 6/16/08

dianajuliet_cau wrote:


++ yami, where you get the idea of doin' that one? hmm inspiration or something??


I dont really know myself but there was one person that I know on the nett who just asked somthing that hit here : "When did we stop caring" or somthing like that and there it was stuck in my head and here is teh result *loughs nervously *
Posted 6/27/08
great poem very deep, really wonder inspiring X3
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Posted 6/27/08

kagura4 wrote:

great poem very deep, really wonder inspiring X3


Thank you very much =3
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Posted 6/29/08
that's the big question, that everybody want to know...
good poem imouto~chan
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Posted 6/29/08

LeSLy77 wrote:

that's the big question, that everybody want to know...
good poem imouto~chan


yes I know ^^ thank you very much =D *hugs*
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