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Posted 6/15/08
here are some of my Haikus
if u don't know how to write a haiku then: it is about nature


Line one - 5 syllables
Line two - 7 syllables
Line three - 5 syllable


Flowers bloom beauty
Throughout the world they are seen
Love, peace, war, beauty, death


Rain, tapping the ground
Silently smiting humans
Lightning has came in time



A Tanka is :

Line one - 5 syllables
Line 2 - 7 syllables
Line three - 5 syllable
Line four - 7 syllables
Line five - 7 syllables

mine are

Stars shine the dark night
Lonely, beautiful, bright
Gives hope, light, and dreams
Amazing, attractive, hot
Stars are an appealing sight


Essence of sparkle
The diamond shines forever
In the light of sun
And in the darkest of night
The diamond always sparkles


can u please reply these
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Posted 6/16/08
this is awesome bro. i love haikus but i normally have way to much to write to fit on such few lines.
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i have a haiku!

cept it wasn't mine. i saw it on a tshirt. mmk:

haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
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Posted 6/16/08

potatoesandpie wrote:

i have a haiku!

cept it wasn't mine. i saw it on a tshirt. mmk:

haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
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whoever came up with that is brilliant
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rolldaball wrote:


potatoesandpie wrote:

i have a haiku!

cept it wasn't mine. i saw it on a tshirt. mmk:

haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
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whoever came up with that is brilliant


haha yaaay randum talent! x]

but uff corse, beautiful talent much like yurself is much respected too ^^
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Posted 6/16/08

potatoesandpie wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


potatoesandpie wrote:

i have a haiku!

cept it wasn't mine. i saw it on a tshirt. mmk:

haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerator


whoever came up with that is brilliant


haha yaaay randum talent! x]

but uff corse, beautiful talent much like yurself is much respected too ^^


thank u, come again
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desired by all
with your beauty and kindness
please, give me a chance
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young but yet precious
may you be lovely and loved
please grow to be wise
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desired by all
with your beauty and kindness
please, give me a chance
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young but yet precious
may you be lovely and loved
please grow to be wise


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ounsam_nang wrote:

desired by all
with your beauty and kindness
please, give me a chance
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young but yet precious
may you be lovely and loved
please grow to be wise


that was awesome (my last one messed up)
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Posted 7/22/08
i love the winter
it is full of pretty snow
But how would I know
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Just randomly guessed it here and oh its a haiku
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