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Posted 6/16/08
A/N: I think the poem is sweet.. don't you think so? >.<


A blank remark was all I heard

Not even a single murmur of word spoken

The eyes full of curiosity

Is drawn through the features of your face

I didn’t reply to your outspoken doubt

And yet you didn’t asked me why

Turning your back and selfishly walked

Shadowed on a mouth with a snicker of a smile

Stupid of me to even call your name

Knowing you won’t try to call back

I gave a whisper of goodbye

Along a speck of tear that flowed

I didn’t feel you turned your back

And caught me by the arm

You gave a sincere look on me

Held my hand and took me close to you

Your hug was so tight

That I heard the beating of your heart

It was so calm yet very nervous

A heart bleeding so hard it seem to stop

I just seized the moment to be with you

And by right time,

You spoke words that nearly surprised me

“I did loved you; right from the very start you gave me your smile”

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Posted 6/16/08
A really sweet poem ^^
great work !
Posted 6/27/08
I love your work ur really good!!! =D
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Posted 7/19/08
thanks to you two for appreciating my work!!
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