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Posted 6/18/08 , edited 7/27/08
Neo-Magister Saga

Chapter 1

And so it Begins




Chapter 2

The Powers of Light and Darkness



Chapter 3

Beginning of the New School Life



Chapter 4

Melting the Heart of Ice



Chapter 5

Omen



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Chapter 6

Tough Break



Chapter 7

The Girl's Dorm



Chapter 8

Trial of the Dragons



Chapter 9

Dawn of Power



Chapter 10

Thunderous Clash



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Posted 6/19/08
hahaha you are the best mate
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Chapter 11

Battle Royale



Chapter 12

Light of Destruction



Chapter 13

The Lone Wolf



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Do you know how much it must suck to be Fang right now? I'd hate to be in his situation, real or not. Girls are scary when they wanna be and I'm bettin' they're gonna want to be. Great chapter and I hope you can get your double post as you hoped
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You always have ta pull out the cliffhangers, huh? Other than my repeatedly stated dislike for cliffhangers, I liked how this chapter turned out, even if I pitied Fang's situation in the girls' dorm a bit . I don't see how putting his chest in Akira's chest is a punishment, though
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Mon937 wrote:

You always have ta pull out the cliffhangers, huh? Other than my repeatedly stated dislike for cliffhangers, I liked how this chapter turned out, even if I pitied Fang's situation in the girls' dorm a bit . I don't see how putting his chest in Akira's chest is a punishment, though


Not Akira...it was Sayuri lol. Also, the cliffhanger was kinda created because I have a limit to how many pages per chapter I write. It is also easier to write after a cliffhanger.
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Mon937 wrote:

You always have ta pull out the cliffhangers, huh? Other than my repeatedly stated dislike for cliffhangers, I liked how this chapter turned out, even if I pitied Fang's situation in the girls' dorm a bit . I don't see how putting his chest in Akira's chest is a punishment, though


Not Akira...it was Sayuri lol. Also, the cliffhanger was kinda created because I have a limit to how many pages per chapter I write. It is also easier to write after a cliffhanger.


Hmm, maybe I should get a limit. Well, I sorta do cause if it gets too long I find a way ta split it into 2 chapter. And I get it now. It'd be much worse ta be tucked into Sayuri's chest .
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I have only one problem with this chapter. Since Ryuga is supposed ta be evil, wouldn't he have yang energy and Seiryuu have the yin energy? That part threw me off. Other than that, great chapter and you've got a thing for original names. But Ryuga tellin' Seiryuu ta tone down the mercilessness? Frickin' priceless!
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Mon937 wrote:

I have only one problem with this chapter. Since Ryuga is supposed ta be evil, wouldn't he have yang energy and Seiryuu have the yin energy? That part threw me off. Other than that, great chapter and you've got a thing for original names. But Ryuga tellin' Seiryuu ta tone down the mercilessness? Frickin' priceless!


You are right. Yin is the good and Yang is the bad...supposedly. But, Yin in Chinese means the darkness and Yang means brightness. Hence the title of Seiryuu, the Holy Light. Ryuga has another title as well and it is the Eternal Darkness.
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Mon937 wrote:

I have only one problem with this chapter. Since Ryuga is supposed ta be evil, wouldn't he have yang energy and Seiryuu have the yin energy? That part threw me off. Other than that, great chapter and you've got a thing for original names. But Ryuga tellin' Seiryuu ta tone down the mercilessness? Frickin' priceless!


You are right. Yin is the good and Yang is the bad...supposedly. But, Yin in Chinese means the darkness and Yang means brightness. Hence the title of Seiryuu, the Holy Light. Ryuga has another title as well and it is the Eternal Darkness.


Well ya learn somethin' new everyday. This is mine. I never knew that. I wonder why Yin is good in today's society.
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Wow, that's gonna be some murder after school! I'm gonna love visualizin' it! Other than some minor errors, the chapter came out good. Must wait for the next one (I never understood why they said "Can't wait for the next one")
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Posted 7/13/08

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seiryuu18 wrote:


Mon937 wrote:

I have only one problem with this chapter. Since Ryuga is supposed ta be evil, wouldn't he have yang energy and Seiryuu have the yin energy? That part threw me off. Other than that, great chapter and you've got a thing for original names. But Ryuga tellin' Seiryuu ta tone down the mercilessness? Frickin' priceless!


You are right. Yin is the good and Yang is the bad...supposedly. But, Yin in Chinese means the darkness and Yang means brightness. Hence the title of Seiryuu, the Holy Light. Ryuga has another title as well and it is the Eternal Darkness.


Well ya learn somethin' new everyday. This is mine. I never knew that. I wonder why Yin is good in today's society.


read it up on wiki ^^

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yin_yang
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Posted 7/24/08
Sorry about taking so long and only coming up with this much. I'm creating the fight scene right now. With my dad back from China and my finals for my summer classes, I don't have a lot of time this week.
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No problem. I loved the chapter and didn't even care about any length issues. Gotta wait for ya ta get done!
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